PAGE1PAGE2姓名：___________班級：___________考號：___________專題09書面表達（單元主題寫作，滿分范文15篇）（解析版）一、書面表達1．（22-23八年級下·上海金山·期中）Writingapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Mymostexcitingday”.(以“最令我激動的一天”為題，寫一篇至少60個詞的短文，要求意思明確，內(nèi)容連貫，標點符號不占格)(注意：文中不得出現(xiàn)任何姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分)Suggestedquestions(以下問題僅供參考)(1)Whenwasyourmostexcitingday?(2)Whatdidyoudoonthatday?(3)Whywasitthemostexcitingday?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：IcanstillrememberthedaywhenIfirstwenttothezoo.That’sthemostexcitingdayI’veneverhad.Itwasafineday.WhenIgottothezoo,Ijustcouldn’twaittoseetheanimals.Thereweresomanyanimalsinit,suchasmonkeys,tigers,lions,bears,elephants,pandasandsoon.Allofthemwereinthecages.Themonkeyswerenaughty.Tigersandlionsmademescared.Andthepandasweresolovely.IwassoexcitedthatdaybecauseIwasclosetoanimals.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意圍繞“信息提示”介紹最興奮的一天是什么時候，講述那天做了什么，談?wù)劄槭裁茨翘焓亲罴尤诵牡囊惶臁寫作步驟]第一步，介紹最興奮的一天是什么時候；第二步，講述那天做了什么；第三步，談?wù)劄槭裁茨翘焓亲罴尤诵牡囊惶臁亮點詞匯]①getto到達②can’twaittodosth迫不及待做某事③suchas例如[高分句型]①IwassoexcitedthatdaybecauseIwasclosetoanimals.（使用because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句）②WhenIgottothezoo,Ijustcouldn’twaittoseetheanimals.（使用when引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句）2．（22春八年級下·上海嘉定·期中）Writeatleast60wordsonthegiventopic(根據(jù)以下話題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。)Therearealotofusefulresourcesinourlife.Pleasechooseoneandwriteatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Theimportanceof____________”(我們的生活中有許多有用的資源，請選取一種以“____________的重要性”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文。標點符號不占格。)Suggestedquestions:Whyisthethingimportant?Whatcanwedowithit?Whatcanwedotoprotectit?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文TheimportanceofsavingwaterItiswidelyacceptedthattheroleofwatercannotbereplacedbyanyotherthinginourdailylife,butfewpeopleareawarethatthefreshwaterisreducingsharply.So,whatshouldwedo?AsfarasIamconcerned,weshouldusewatertwiceormore.Forexample,wecanusewateraftercleaningthericetowatertheplants.Furthermore,turnoffthetapwheneverwestopusingit.Lastbutnotleast,pollutedwatershouldbedealtwithintimetokeeptherivercleanbecausewecannotlivewithoutwater.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,weshouldpaycloseattentiontodailywater.Let’sactnowtosavewater.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說明文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作時需要圍繞題干提出的問題展開，并可適當發(fā)揮，突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，開篇點題，并引出要保護的資源；第二步，詳細介紹采取的措施；第三步，最后進行總結(jié)。[亮點詞匯]①asfarasIamconcerned就我而言②turnoff關(guān)閉③lastbutnotleast最后[高分句型]①Itiswidelyacceptedthattheroleofwatercannotbereplacedbyanyotherthinginourdailylife,butfewpeopleareawarethatthefreshwaterisreducingsharply.（it作形式主語）②Furthermore,turnoffthetapwheneverwestopusingit.（whenever引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句）3．（22春八年級下·上海長寧·期中）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Useelectricitysafely”.（你發(fā)現(xiàn)你身邊的親朋好友經(jīng)常有不安全用電的行為，有很大的危險隱患。請以“安全用電”為題寫一篇60—120詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）Usethefollowingpointsasaguide:（寫作必須包含以下內(nèi)容）1.Howdosomepeopleuseelectricity?2.Whyshouldweuseelectricitysafely?3.What’syoursuggestiononusingelectricitysafely?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文

Useelectricitysafely

Usingelectricitysafelyisaveryimportanttopicinourdailylives.

First,ensureanyelectricalitemsareapprovedstandardwhenpurchasingandkeepthemcorrectlymaintained.Second,unplugelectricalitemsthatarenotinregularuseandensurethatyouunplugandswitchoffelectricalitemswhenyouareawayfromthehouseforanylengthoftime.Third,don’tuseanyelectricalitemsinthebathroomunlessspecificallydesignedforusethere,suchasshaversandelectrictoothbrushes.Butwhenyouusethem,makesurenottogetthemwetandavoidpluggingandunpluggingwithwethands.Thelast,alwaysturntheelectricsoffatthemainsifcarryingoutanyelectricalrepairsandonlyattemptrepairsifyouknowwhatyouaredoing.

Weshoulduseelectricitycarefullybecauseitemsleftpluggedincanbeafireriskandwasteenergyifleftonstandby.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說明文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“提示信息”中“應(yīng)該如何用電；安全用電的原因以及安全用電的建議”，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。借用“安全用電是我們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪蟹浅Ｖ匾脑掝}。”來引出重點介紹的內(nèi)容；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“如何安全用電以及安全用電的建議”重點介紹安全用電的具體情況；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。表達“我們應(yīng)該謹慎用電，因為插上電源的物品如果處于待機狀態(tài)，則可能會引發(fā)火災(zāi)，并浪費能源。”[亮點詞匯]①switchoff關(guān)上②makesurenottodosth確保不做某事[高分句型]①Third,don’tuseanyelectricalitemsinthebathroomunlessspecificallydesignedforusethere,suchasshaversandelectrictoothbrushes.（don’t...祈使句的否定形式，表勸告）②Weshoulduseelectricitycarefullybecauseitemsleftpluggedincanbeafireriskandwasteenergyifleftonstandby.（because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句，if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）4．（22春八年級下·上海浦東新·期中）TheEarthDayiscomingonApril22nd.WhatdoyouthinkoftheenvironmentonourEarth?Pleasewriteatleast60wordsonthetopic“HowtoprotectourMotherEarth”.（以“如何保護我們的地球母親”為題，根據(jù)英文提示寫一篇不少于60個單詞的短文）Suggestedquestions:1.WhatdoyouthinkoftheenvironmentonourEarth?2.WhatcanyoudotoprotectourMotherEarth?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文HowtoprotectourMotherEarthInthelastfewyears,wehavebeenfacedwithseriousenvironmentalproblems,suchasglobalwarming,airpollutionandenergyshortage.IthinkitistimeforustotakeactiontoprotectourMotherEarth.Firstofall,weshouldformthehabitofsavingfoodfromnowon.Besides,we’dbettertravelbybusorbybiketoprotecttheenvironment.What’smore,itisagoodideatorecyclewaste.Itcanhelpusmakebetteruseofthelimitedresource.WeonlyhaveoneEarth.Let’tdosomethinghelpfulbeforeitistoolate!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生注意不要遺漏“要點”中你能做什么來保護我們的地球，注意要點要齊全。[寫作步驟]第一步，開篇點題。介紹我們的地球面臨著嚴重的環(huán)境問題；第二步，具體闡述我們能做什么來保護我們的地球；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。呼吁大家現(xiàn)在就行動起來。[亮點詞匯]①befacedwith面臨，面對②suchas比如③firstofall首先④fromnowon從現(xiàn)在起⑤what’smore除此之外還⑥makeuseof利用[高分句型]①IthinkitistimeforustotakeactiontoprotectourMotherEarth.（省略that的賓語從句）②Let’tdosomethinghelpfulbeforeitistoolate!（祈使句；before引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句）5．（22-23八年級下·上海青浦·期中）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation.（根據(jù)以下情境寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格）假如你是李華，最近你發(fā)現(xiàn)學校里存在浪費和破壞各類資源的情況，例如：有的學生在水龍頭邊打水仗等。請你選取一個方面，給同學們寫一篇倡議書，說說你的看法，并提出解決問題的具體行動。（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生真實的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Recently,Ihavefoundthattherearesituationsofwasteanddestructionofvariousresourcesinschools.Forexample,insomeclassrooms,thelightsareonwithoutanyone.Althoughthenationallivingstandardshaveimproved,electricityasanenergysourceisstillnotsufficient.Soweneedtosaveelectricity.Firstly,whenweleavetheclassroom,wemustturnoffthepowersupply.Secondly,ifwecanseeclearly,donotturnonthelights.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點，并適當添加細節(jié)，突出重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，針對存在浪費和破壞各類資源的情況介紹你的看法；第二步，提出解決問題的具體行動。[亮點詞匯]①sufficient足夠的②turnoff關(guān)掉[高分句型]①Althoughthenationallivingstandardshaveimproved,electricityasanenergysourceisstillnotsufficient.（although引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句）②Secondly,ifwecanseeclearly,donotturnonthelights.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）6．（22-23八年級下·上海奉賢·期中）Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Theimportanceof________”(我們的生活中有很多重要的東西，你認為什么對于你或者人們很重要，談?wù)勀愕南敕ú㈥U述理由，鑒于它的重要性，我們應(yīng)當怎么做？請以“__________的重要性”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，要求意思明確、內(nèi)容連貫，標點符號不計字數(shù)。)Suggestedquestions:1.Whatdoyouthinkisimportant?2.Whydoyouthinkitisimportant?3.Whatshouldwedotoprotectit?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Whensomethingconfusesus,wewillnaturallytofindsomeonetotalkaboutit.Thefirstchoiceisafriend.Friendsaresoimportantinourlives.Welivetogetherandweshareourhappinessorsadnesswiththem.Friendsarepartsofourlives.Whatwillhappenifsomeonehasnofriends?Wehearthatthecriminalsareisolatedbyothersbecausemostofthemhavenofriends.Withoutfriends,peoplecannotexpresstheiremotionsandtheywillbecomelonelyandindifferenteasily.Wecan’tlivewithoutfriends.Weshouldlearntocaremoreaboutothersandhelpothers.Inthisway,wewillmakemorefriendsandourfriendshipwilllastlongeraswell.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時及一般將來時；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生注意不要遺漏，適當增加細節(jié)，表述完整。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖，直入主題表述我認為生活中朋友是重要的；第二步，表述為什么認為朋友很重要；第三步，表述我們?nèi)绾巫霾拍芫S持友誼。[亮點詞匯]①talkabout討論②careabout關(guān)心③Inthisway用這種方式[高分句型]①Whensomethingconfusesus,wewillnaturallytofindsomeonetotalkaboutit.（when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句）②Whatwillhappenifsomeonehasnofriends?（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）7．（23-24八年級·上海奉賢·期中）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“AhelpinghandIgave”（以“我伸出的一次援助之手”為題，寫一篇不少于60個單詞的短文，標點符號不占格）幫助別人自己也會快樂，即使一件微不足道的小事也會令自己感到快樂。你在生活中一定也有向需要幫助的人伸出援助之手的經(jīng)歷。請你選取其中一件，談一談你是如何提供幫助的及你的感受。（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)姓名、校名等個人信息，否則不予評分。）___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文AhelpinghandIgaveHelpingothersbringsmehappinessandmakesmylifemeaningful.Igrowupalotbyhelpingothers.IamgoodatEnglishandcanalwaysgetgoodgradesinEnglishexams.Thenoneday,mybestfriendTinaaskedmetohelpherwithherEnglish.SoIsharedsomeusefulwaystolearnEnglish.Eachtimeshehastroublewithherhomework,I’lltrymybesttoexplainasclearlyaspossible.I’mgladthatTinahasmadegreatprogressinEnglish.Ifeelastrongfeelingofsatisfactionwhenhelpingothers.Itmakesmerealizethatthemoreyougive,thehappieryouwillbe.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏相關(guān)要點，可適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作要點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖，幫助別人能夠帶給我快樂，讓我的生活更有意義；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容，詳細說明如何提供幫助；第三步，書寫結(jié)語，幫助別人能夠給我?guī)頋M足感。[亮點詞匯]①getgoodgradesinEnglishexams英語考試取得好成績②tryone’sbesttodo盡最大努力去……[高分句型]Itmakesmerealizethatthemoreyougive,thehappieryouwillbe.(賓語從句)8．（23-24八年級·上海浦東新·期中）Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“An/A__________(unusual,interesting,special...)experienceinmylife”(以《一次……的經(jīng)歷》為題寫一篇不少于60詞的短文。要求內(nèi)容貼切，意思連貫，不少于60個詞，標點符號不占格。)

Usethefollowingpointsasareference.（以下問題僅供參考）1.

Whenandwheredidithappen?2.

Whathappened?3.

Howdidyoufeelaboutit?4.

Whydidyouthinkso?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：AsuccessfulexperienceinmylifeInmymemory,therearefullofsuccessfulexperiences.Themostunforgettableonehappenedatschoollastterm.IwasnotgoodatsubjectsatschoolandIcouldn’tgetgoodmarksinexams.IfeltworriedaboutmystudysoIdecidedtoworkmuchharder.Ilistenedtotheteachersmorecarefullyinclassanddidmoreexercisesafterclass.What’smore,Ioftenaskedmyteachersforhelp.AlthoughImetalotofdifficulties,Ididn’tgiveup.NowIhavedonebetterinmystudy.IbelievethatnothingistoodifficultifIputmyheartintoit.IfImeetwithdifficultiesinmylife,Ishouldtrymybesttoovercomethem.Inaword,onlythepersonwhoovercomesdifficultieswillbesuccessful.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；描述經(jīng)歷用“一般過去時”③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏信息提示的內(nèi)容，適當增加細節(jié)，并且突出寫作的要點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。直接說明要描述什么樣的經(jīng)歷及發(fā)生的時間和地點；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。重點介紹了這次經(jīng)歷的過程；第三步，描述自己的感受和啟發(fā)。[亮點詞匯]①arefullof充滿②themostunforgettableone最難以忘懷的③difficulty困難④overcome克服[高分句型]①Ilistenedtotheteachersmorecarefullyinclassanddidmoreexercisesafterclass.（比較級）②AlthoughImetalotofdifficulties,Ididn’tgiveup.（讓步狀語從句）9．（22-23八年級·上海奉賢·期中）Everyonehassomechallengesinhislife.Howcanyoudealwithchallengeswhenyoufacethem?Thinkaboutoneofthechallengesyouhavefacedandwriteatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“facingchallenges”.（每個人的生活中會遇到各種挑戰(zhàn)，想一想當你面對挑戰(zhàn)時，你是如何應(yīng)對的。聯(lián)系一次你的相關(guān)經(jīng)歷，以“面對挑戰(zhàn)”為題，寫一篇不少于60字的短文。以下問題可供參考。）1.Whatwasyourchallenge?2.Howdidyoufeelwhenyoufacedthechallenge?3.Howdidyoudealwiththechallenge?4.Whatdidyoulearnfromtheexperience?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例：FacingchallengesLifeisfilledwithchallenges.Inmystudy,Ialwaysmeetwithnewchallenges.WhenIwasingradeeight,Iusedtofailmyfinalmathexams.Thiswasaseriousproblembecausemathisaveryimportantsubject.However,Ididnotquit.Ilistenedtotheteachercarefullyinclass.IalsodidasmanyexercisesasIcould.Besides,Iturnedtomyteacherandclassmatesforhelp.Intheend,afterseveralmonths’hardwork,Ipassedthefinalexam.Lookingbackonthis,IrealizethatwhateverchallengesIamfacedwith,ifIcansparenoeffortsandnevergiveup,Iwillgetthemover.What’smore,thosechallengesmakemewhoIam.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點以問題的方式給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏；適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作要點。[寫作步驟]第一步，點明寫作主題“生活充滿挑戰(zhàn)”；第二步，闡述具體寫作內(nèi)容。從挑戰(zhàn)的內(nèi)容、面對挑戰(zhàn)的感受、解決措施三方面闡述面對挑戰(zhàn)的具體情況；第三步，書寫結(jié)語，總結(jié)面對挑戰(zhàn)學習到的經(jīng)驗。[亮點詞匯]①befilledwith充滿②as…assb.could盡可能……③turntosb.forhelp向某人求助④sparenoefforts不遺余力[高分句型]①WhenIwasingradeeight,Iusedtofailmyfinalmathexams.(usedto)②Lookingbackonthis,IrealizethatwhateverchallengesIamfacedwith,ifIcansparenoeffortsandnevergiveup,Iwillgetthemover.(動名詞作主語；if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句)10．（22-23八年級下·河北邢臺·期中）假設(shè)你是李華，學校英語俱樂部要開展以“KeepSafe,StartwithMe”為主題的英語征文活動。請根據(jù)下列提示，寫一篇英語短文投稿。要求：（1）結(jié)構(gòu)完整、條理清晰、語言通暢。（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的地名、校名和人名。（3）詞數(shù)80個左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。KeepSafe,StartwithMeDoyouknowhowtokeepsafeinourdailylife?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：KeepSafe,StartwithMeDoyouknowhowtokeepsafeinourdailylife?TodayI’dliketotellyousomewaystokeepsafe.First,alwaysplayinasafeplace.Wemustn’tplayonthestreet.Aparkisasafeplacebecausetherearenocarsorbusesinit.Second,followthetrafficrules.Beforecrossingaroad,stopandlookbothways.Neverputyourheadoutofarunningcar.Manypeoplegethurtbydoingso.Third,don’ttalktoastrangerorgowithhimorher.Fourth,wehadbetterknowhowtogivefirstaidincaseofanaccident.That’swhatIwanttosay.Startwithmenow,let’skeepsafeinourdailylife.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖內(nèi)容進行描述并適當拓展。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出主題，介紹保持安全的方法；第二步，具體介紹保持安全的方法；第三步，倡導(dǎo)大家從自己做起，在日常生活中保證自己的安全。[亮點詞匯]①tellsb.sth.告訴某人某事②followthetrafficrules遵守交通規(guī)則③givefirstaid進行急救[高分句型]①First,alwaysplayinasafeplace.（祈使句的肯定形式）②Aparkisasafeplacebecausetherearenocarsorbusesinit.（because引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句；therebe句型）11．（22-23八年級·上海普陀·期中）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Theheroinmyheart”(以“我心中的英雄”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格)提示：每個人在成長的過程中總會遇見一些對你產(chǎn)生深遠影響的人，他/她是“你心中的英雄”。請你用一件具體事例來講述你心中的英雄激勵你的故事。（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：TheHeroinMyHeartYuanLongpingisaheroinmyheart.Hewasbornin1930anddiedattheageof91.Mr.Yuanspentnearly60yearsdoingresearchonbetterriceinordertomakepeopleintheworldhaveenoughfood.Andhewassuccessful!HewashonoredasFatherofHybridRice.IthinkMr.Yuanwasagreatman.Hewassoselflessandhard-workingthatIrespecthimverymuch.Iwillneverforgethim.Asastudent,Ihavedecidednottowasteanyfoodfromnowon.Also,I’llstudyharderthanbeforesothatIcanmastermoreknowledgeandskills.WhenIgrowup,I’llworkhardforourcountrylikehim.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般過去時”；③提示：本文話題已給出，介紹心目中的英雄，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，直入主題引出自己心目中的英雄；第二步，詳細介紹其基本情況并介紹他都做了什么事；第三步，寫你為什么崇拜他；第四步，寫你從他身上學到了什么。[亮點詞匯]①attheageof在……歲②inorderto為了③behonoredas被授予④studyharder更努力地學習[高分句型]①IthinkMr.Yuanwasagreatman.（賓語從句）②Hewassoselflessandhard-workingthatIrespecthimverymuch.（so...that引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句）③I’llstudyharderthanbeforesothatIcanmastermoreknowledgeandskills.（sothat引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句）12．（22-23八年級下·上海寶山·期中）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Makeourcitybetter”（以“使我們的城市更美好”為題，寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，標點符號不占格）作為上海的公民，建設(shè)美麗的綠色城市是我們每個人的責任。生活中，有些人積極做到低碳出行，有些人嚴格進行垃圾分類，有的人注意節(jié)約能源，還有的參與綠化城市……請你談?wù)勀愦蛩阍鯓幼觯㈥U明理由。（注意：作文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的中文姓名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MakeourcitybetterWeshouldmakeourcityabetterplacetolivein.Inourdailylife,wecandolotsofthings.Forexample,whenwegoshopping,wecantakeclothbagsinsteadofusingplasticbags.Recyclingglasses,cansandwastepaperisalsoagoodideatoprotecttheenvironment.Second,wemustobeythetrafficrules.Breakingrulesisverydangerousanditmaycausebigaccidents.Ifweobeythetrafficrules,we’llhaveabetterandsaferlife.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時；③提示：寫作題目已給出，考生注意不要偏題，并適當添加細節(jié)，突出重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出主題，使城市更好；第二步，細節(jié)介紹做法。[亮點詞匯]①insteadof而不是②Recycling回收利用[高分句型]①Ifweobeythetrafficrules,we’llhaveabetterandsaferlife.（條件狀語從句）②Forexample,whenwegoshopping,wecantakeclothbagsinsteadofusingplasticbags.（when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句）13．（22春八年級下·上海·期中）Writeapassageofatleast60wordsabout“Electricityinourdailylife”.（以“電和我們的日常生活”為題寫一篇不少于60詞的短文）Usethefollowingpointsasareference.（以下內(nèi)容僅供參考）1.Whatrolesdoeselectricityplayinourdailylife?2.Whatshouldwedotouseelectricityproperly?Electricityinourdailylife____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文ElectricityinourdailylifeElectricityisamajorkindofpowerweusealotinourdailylife.Athomeweuseitforthelights,TVs,airconditioningandsoon.Andinfactories,electricitymakesthelargemachinesworksothattherearesomanydifferentsortsofproductsinthemarket.Therefore,electricitygivesusamorecolorfullifeandhelpsthesocietydevelop.Ifthereisnoelectricity,wecan’twatchTV,playcomputergamesorusemobilephones.So,weshouldsaveelectricity.Weshouldturnoffthelightswhenweleavetheroom.Inaword,everyoneshouldplayapartinsavingelectricity.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：考生應(yīng)注意按照所給問題的提示作答，不要遺漏要點；可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，點明電力與人類的關(guān)系，并具體闡述電力在生活中的作用；第二步，書寫結(jié)語，提醒大家節(jié)約用電。[亮點詞匯]①akindof一種②turnoff關(guān)掉，關(guān)閉③playapartin在……中起作用[高分句型]①Electricityisamajorkindofpowerweusealotinourdailylife.（省略引導(dǎo)詞的定語從句）②Ifthereisnoelectricity,wecan’twatchTV,playcomputergamesorusemobilephones.（if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句）14．（22-23八年級下·上海靜安·期中）Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaccordingtothetopic“Electricity”.以“電”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文。標點符號不占格。.Suggestedquestions：1.Whatiselectricity?2.Wheredoeselectricitycomefrom?3.Whyiselectricityimportant?_____