應用文之圖表類作文高三英語一輪復習第三部分

寫作（共兩節,滿分40分）第一節

（滿分15分）

假定你是李華,你班新來的外教Glen委托你調查同學們在英語學習中遇到的困難。請你根據調查結果,給他寫一封郵件,內容包括：

1.簡述調查結果；

2.表達期待。1.ask--require--request(followyourrequest;atyourrequest)2.conduct/carryoutasurveyabout/of...--surveysbabout...3.facechallengein...;havedifficulty/ahardtimedoing

finditchallenging/tough/tricky;struggleindoing/todo4.chartshows/suggests/indicates/illustratesthat...;accordingtothechart5.findings/conclusions/results;Below/Hereare...;...areasfollows6.can’twaittodo/lookforwardto;hopefully,getonwellwith,getalongwith,beongoodtermswithwithyouhelpingus=underyourguidance;makeprogressin;assist/aidusinovercomingbarriers/obstacles;(be)keen/eagertolearnfrom;expertiseandguidance;facilitate/improve/boost...

文體:應用文-圖表分析題結構分三段：Para1表達歡迎+調查背景：調查人+參與者+調查目的Para2

調查發現（數據分析）+點評觀點（解決辦法+課程建議)para3再次歡迎+表達期待熱烈歡迎您來我們班！Warm

welcome

to

our

class!

按照您的要求，我已經調查了我全班同學關于他們在學英語中面對的挑戰。Following

your

request,

I’ve

surveyed

our

classmatesabout

the

challenges

they

face

in

learning

English.Following

your

request,

I’ve

surveyed參與者about調查目的/conductedasurveyabout調查目的

Para1過渡句一：以下便是我的發現和結論Below/Herearemyfindingsandconclusions.過渡句二：如圖表所顯示的那樣,

學生遇到的挑戰主要分為四個類別：分別為發音，詞匯，聽說以及讀寫。Asthechartillustrates/indicates/suggests/shows,thechallengesstudentsencountermainlyfallintofourcategories,repectively/namelypronunciation,vocabulary,listeningandspeakingplusreadingandwriting.

Para2如何描繪圖表信息素材一“如圖所示...”

四種表達1)Asthechart/indicates/illustrates/suggests/shows….

2）Accordingtothechart,…根據圖表3）Asisshowninthechart,…

如圖表所顯示的那樣

，

4）Ascanbeseenfromthechart,…如圖表看到的那樣，

Dear

Glen,

Warm

welcome

to

our

class!Yours

sincerely,Li

Hua按什么順序來描述這些數據呢？用什么句子寫呢？finding1finding2finding2finding3

調查發現1.(指出最明顯數據）很明顯/毫無疑問聽說是最顯著的挑戰，因為有80%學生發現它困難。It’s

clear/Thereisnodoubt

that

listening

and

speaking

are

the

most

significant

challenges,

with

80%

of

students

finding

it

difficult.

Para2

調查發現2.(運用數據對比)65%的學生寫作和閱讀有困難而55%的學生發現發音很難。65%

are

struggling

in

reading

and

writing

while

55%

find

pronunciation

tough.

65%

are

struggling

in

reading

and

writing,asopposedto55%

who

find

pronunciation

tough.

Para2

調查發現3.詞匯是另外一個讓人擔心的區域，影響了40%的學生。Vocabulary

is

another

area

of

concern,

affecting

40%

of

us.Para21）Accordingtothechart,…percentofthestudents…,followedby…,whichaccountsfor….2）Studentswhochoose...are…percent

and/whilestudentswhochoose…are…percentrespectively.如何描繪圖表信息素材二描述結果

其他兩種句式

點評觀點

(基于三個數據發現分析背后原因和給出課程建議)考慮到這些挑戰，我們希望將更多的互動活動融入我們的課程，比如角色扮演和辯論，這對聽說技能格外有益。Considering

these

challenges,

we

hope

more

interactive

activities

will

be

integrated

into

our

lessons,

such

as

role-plays

and

debates,

which

could

be

particularly

beneficial

for

listening

and

speaking

skills.Para2評論現象：數字背后反映的現象（一分為二：positive+negative）分析原因：造成現象的原因個人評價：你的觀點+原因1）Itisarewardingsighttoseethat…2）However,theimportanceof....can’tbeignoredsince(因為)....1）Thereasonwhy...isthat2）Thechangein/tendencyto...largelyresultfromthefactthat...1）Frommypointofview,I…2）AsfarasI'mconcerned,itwouldbewise...如何描繪圖表信息素材三點評觀點

其他句式

再次歡迎+表達期待再次歡迎。渴望從你的專業知識和指導中學習。Welcome

again.

Keen

to

learn

from

your

expertise

and

guidance.Para3One

possible

version:Dear

Glen,

Warm

welcome

to

our

class!

Following

your

request,

I’ve

surveyed

our

classmates

about

the

challenges

they

face

in

learning

English.

It’s

clear

that

listening

and

speaking

are

the

most

significant

challenges,

with

80%

of

students

finding

it

difficult.

65%

are

struggling

in

reading

and

writing

while

55%

find

pronunciation

tough.

Vocabulary

is

another

area

of

concern,

affecting

40%

of

us.

Considering

these

challenges,

we

hope

more

interactive

activities

will

be

integrated

into

our

lessons,

such

as

role-plays

and

debates,

which

could

be

particularly

beneficial

for

listening

and

speaking

skills.

Welcome

again.

Keen

to

learn

from

your

expertise

and

guidance.Yours

sincerely,Li

HuaFollowing

your

request,

I’ve

surveyed

our

classmatesabout

the

challenges

they

face

in

learning

English.Below/Herearemyfindingsandconclusions.Asthechartindicates/Asisshowninthechart,thechallengesstudentsencountermainlyfallintofourcategories,repectively/namelypronunciation,vocabulary,listeningandspeakingplusreadingandwriting.It’s

clear/Thereisnodoubt

that

listening

and

speaking

are

the

most

significant

challenges,

with

80%

of

students

finding

it

difficult.

Accordingtothechart,65%ofthestudentsare

struggling

in

reading

and

writing,followedbythosewhoarestrugglinginreadingandwriting,whichaccountsfor55%.65%

are

struggling

in

reading

and

writing

while

55%

find

pronunciation

tough.AsfarasI'mconcerned,thechangein/tendencytoreadinglargelyresultfromthefactthatEnglishisnotourmothertongue.

作業運用課堂所學完成全國卷圖表作文學校英文報正在開展以LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroom為題的討論。請使用圖表中的調查結果寫一篇短文投稿。內容包括：1.學習活動狀況描述；2.簡單評論；3.你的建議。注意：1.詞數100左右；2.短文的題目和首句已為你寫好。

LearningEnglishBeyondtheClassroomNowadays,withthegrowingpopularityofsmartphonesandcomputers,anincreasingnumberofstudentsarechoosingtolearnEnglishbeyondtheclassroominvariousways.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Nowadays,withthegrowingpopularityofsmartphonesandcomputers,anincreasingnumberofstudentsarechoosingtolearnEnglishbeyondtheclassroominvariousways.

Asurveyaboutstudents’variousEnglishlearningmethodsoffcampushasbeenconducted.(調查的背景信息)Beloware

thefindings.Asisshowninthechart,theapproachesstudentsadoptmainlyfallintofourcategories,namely

readingEnglishbooks,listeningtoEnglishsongs,watchingEnglishfilmsandvisitingEnglishwebsites.Accordingtothechart,thereisnodoubt

that

listeningtoEnglishsongsisdominant,

with

65%

of

students

choosing

it,

followedby

thosewhotendto

watch