PresentationUnit6

I'mgoingtostudycomputerscience.SectionB(3a-Selfcheck)教-學-評一致性寫作課示范課新人教新目標版八年級(上冊)PresentationLearningObjectives1.通過觀看視頻和圖片，能夠通過翻譯短語來回答問題，能夠說出視頻里和他人的新年決心。2.

通過完成3a短文填空和閱讀3a，能夠正確地回答問題，能夠說出寫新年決心的文章的文章結構以及包括的內容要素；能夠借住3a,完成3b和3c能夠借助3b筆記，寫一篇談論自己新年決心的英語文章。3.通過再寫一篇新年決心的文章，能夠學會根據評價標準自查和互查，能夠學會修改自己的文章；通過寫作，能夠樹立自己的健康積極的生活目標，制定相應的學習計劃。同時，拓寬視野，通過嘗試勾畫出心目中理想城市的藍圖，增進對自己所居住城市的了解，弘揚家國情懷。PresentationActivity1Leadtoobjective1testitLookandfill評價標準：觀看視頻，根據漢語回答問題，完成填空，注意速記技巧，填正確1個空格得1分，共7分。此活動共7分。我得（）分。Let'senjoyavideoandanswerthequestion.Whatresolutionsdoesthisvideotalkabout?_________________少喝酒_______________健康飲食_______________定期鍛煉_____________學習新東西＿＿_______________減肥

＿＿＿＿＿_________省錢__________＿＿＿＿______花更多時間和家人在一起anewyear'sresolutiondrinklesseathealthyexerciseregularlylearnsth.newloseweightsavemoneyspendmoretimewithfamilyPresentationActivity2Leadtoobjective1testitLookandfill評價標準：根據2b所學和圖片，回答問題，正確說出1個類型得1分，最多得6分。此活動共6分。我得（）分。Howmanykindsofresolutionsdoyouknow?Whatarethey?Resolution1.ownphysicalhealthdrinklesseathealthyfoodexerciseregularlyloseweight2.ownpersonalimprovementlearnsomethingnew3.dobetteratschool4.dobetterathome5.improvetherelationshipswithfamilyandfriends.6.makemoremoneyspendmoretimewithfamilysavemoneyDoyouknowhowtowriteapassageaboutyournewyear'sresolutions?PresentationActivity3Leadtoobjective1testitLookandfill評價標準：根據圖片和漢語意思，完成句子填空，填正確1個空格得1分，共7分。加上下2頁，此活動共16分。我得（）分。Let'sreadLucy'snewyear'sresolutionsandfillintheblanks.Lucy’sfirstresolutionisabout________________.herphysicalhealthSheisgoingto_______________.getmoreexerciseRunningis_____________(一項很棒的活動).Sosheisgoingto____________________________(每天早晨跑半個小時).Shethinksitcanhelpherto______________(變得更健康).runforhalfanhoureverymorningbecomehealthieragreatactivityAndsheisgoingto________________________.eatmorefruitandvegetablesThey___________(對...有好處)herbody.aregoodforI’mgoingto___________.Ithink_________.PresentationActivity3Leadtoobjective1testitLookandfill評價標準：根據圖片和漢語意思，完成句子填空，填正確1個空格得1分，共4分。加上上1頁和下1頁，此活動共16分。我得（）分。Let'sreadLucy'snewyear'sresolutionsandfillintheblanks.Hersecondresolutionhastodowithherownpersonalimprovement.Nextyear,sheisgoingto_________________(開始一個新的愛好).Shethinkscookingisaveryusefulskillsosheisgoingto____________.Sheexpectsto____________________forherfamily.Shethinksitwill___________________(展示她對家人的愛).cooksomedeliciousfoodlearntocookshowherloveforthemtakeupanewhobbyI’mgoingtotakeupanewhobby.Ithink...PresentationActivity3Leadtoobjective1testitLookandfill評價標準：根據圖片和漢語意思，完成句子填空，填正確1個空格得1分，共5分。加上上2頁，此活動共16分。我得（）分。Herthirdresolutionisabouthowtodobetteratschool.Nextyear,sheisgoingto_______________________________(上課認真聽講).Thatisgoingto_____________________(幫助她取得好成績).listentotheteachercarefullyinclasshelphergetgoodgradesHerlastresolutionhastodowithherrelationshipwithfamily.Sheisgoingto__________________________(花更多的時間和家人在一起).Maybesheisgoingto_____________________________________(每天飯后和他們一起散步).Itis________forthem.spendmoretimewithherfamilytakeawalkwiththemafterdinnereverydayrelaxingI’mgoingto___________.Ithink_________.PresentationActivity4Leadtoobjective2testitReadandfill評價標準：根據語境，用所給的單詞適當形式填空，填正確1個空格得1分，共7分。此活動共7分。我得（）分。3aCompletethefirsttwoparagraphsaboutresolutionswiththewordsinthebox.

Writingguide首先，掌握方框中單詞的含義；并閱讀短文，整體把握短文大意。其次，分析有空格的每個句子，根據上下文意及固定搭配來確定空格處的意思，從而確定空格處所用的單詞。最后，再通讀一遍短文，檢查是否正確。arehelpmakelearntakeislisten復數固定用法固定搭配動名詞作主語Whatareresolutions?Whatarethefunctions(作用)?PresentationActivity5Leadtoobjective2testitReadandanswer評價標準：認真讀3a，回答問題，回答正確1個問題得1分，共5分。此活動共5分。我得（）分。Read3aagainandanswerthefollowingquestions.arehelpmaketakeislistenlearn1.Whatareresolutions?2.Whyareresolutionssoimportant?3.Whatismyresolution?5.WhyamIgoingtodothat?4.HowamIgoingtodothat?Resolutionsarepromisestoyourself.Resolutionshelptomakeyouabetterpersonandtomakeyourlifeeasier.Nextyear,ormaybesooner,Iamgoingtotakeupanewhobby.IthinksingingisagreatactivitysoIamgoingtolearntosing.Ithinkthiswillalsomakemyfamilyhappybecausetheylovetolistentomusicandsingtogether.PresentationLeadtoobjective2LookandsayWhatisthestructureofthepassage?aremaketakeislearnlistenhelpBeginningBodyTopicsentencePlanReasonsBody:What+Why(I’mgoingto...Ithink...)Beginning:What+WhyPresentationActivity6Leadtoobjective2testitBeforewriting評價標準：根據話題，寫出相應的決心，每個話題寫出1條得0.5分，每個話題最多寫4條。此活動共6分。我得（）分。3bWriteyourresolutionsunderthefollowingheadings.1.Ideasforimprovingmyphysicalhealth__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.Ideasforimprovingmyrelationshipswithmyfamilyandfriends__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.Ideasfordoingbetteratschool__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________getmoreexercisegotobedearlyeatmorefruitandvegetableseverydaysingdancespendmoretimewithherfamilyhelphermomwithhousework

talkwithmyfriendsrespectthemremembertheirbirthdaysstudyhardatmyschoolworkgetonwellwithmyclassmatesfollowtheschoolrulesbeagoodstudentsendthemspecialgiftsPresentationActivity7Leadtoobjective2testitWhilewriting評價標準：根據3b,模仿3a，完成3a剩余部分其它3個段落的寫作，注意使用begoingto結構。此活動共15分。我得（）分。Writing寫自己新年決心。用一般將來時態，用

begoingto結構。根據3b中的要點提示，模仿3a中的寫作方式。寫完后通讀一遍自己的短文，看是否通順和正確。PresentationActivity7Leadtoobjective2testitWhilewriting評價標準：根據3b,模仿3a，完成3a剩余部分其它3個段落的寫作，注意使用begoingto結構。此活動共15分。我得（）分。3cUseyournotestowritethreemoreparagraphsaboutyourresolutions.Ineachparagraph,writewhatyouaregoingtodoandwhy.togetmoreexerciselikerunninganddancingandeatmorefruitandvegetableseveryday.TheywillhelpmetobecomehealthierandIwillnotbeillsooften.Also,I’mgoingtogotobedearly,sothatIcanhaveenoughsleep.I’mgoinggoingtodomorehouseworktomakemyparentshappy.Thisyear,Iplantotalkwithmyfriendsandrespectthem.I’mgoingtoremembertheirbirthdays,too.I’llsendthemspecialgiftsandgivethema

surpriseontheirbirthdays.I’mgoingtospendmoretimewithmyfamily.I'mhardatmyschoolworkandgetonwellwithmyclassmates.What’smore,I’mgoingtofollowtheschoolrules.Beingagoodstudentismydream..I’mgoingtostudyPresentationActivity7Leadtoobjective2testitWhilewritingMyNewYear’sResolutions

Resolutionsarepromisestoyourself.Theymayhelptomakeyouabetterpersonandtomakeyourlifeeasier.Iamgoingtomakefourresolutions.Thefirstresolutionhastodowithmyownpersonalimprovement.Nextyear,ormaybesooner,Iamgoingtotakeupanewhobby.IthinksingingisagreatactivitysoIamgoingtolearntosing.Ithinkthiswillalsomakemyfamilyhappybecausetheylovetolistentomusicandsingtogether.Thesecondresolutionisaboutimprovingmyphysicalhealth.I’mgoingtotogetmoreexerciselikerunninganddancingandeatmorefruitandvegetableseveryday.TheywillhelpmetobecomehealthierandIwillnotbeillsooften.Also,I’mgoingtogotobedearly,sothatIcanhaveenoughsleep.Thethirdresolutionisaboutimprovingmyrelationshipswithmyfamilyandfriends.I’mgoingtospendmoretimewithmyfamily.I'mgoingtodomorehouseworktomakemyparentshappy.Thisyear,Iplantotalkwithmyfriendsandrespectthem.I’mgoingtoremembertheirbirthdays,too.I’llsendthemspecialgiftsandgivethema

surpriseontheirbirthdays.

Thelastresolutionisabouthowtodobetteratschool.I’mgoingtostudyhardatmyschoolworkandgetonwellwithmyclassmates.What’smore,I’mgoingtofollowtheschoolrules.Beingagoodstudentismydream.IbelievethatIcankeepmyresolutionsandachievethem.beginning:引出出話題BodyMyfourresolutions!WHAT?WHY?Ending表明決心評分原則本題總分15分，按各檔次給分。評分時先根據文章的內容、語言質量初步確定檔次，然后以檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調整檔次，最后給分；評分時應考慮：內容要點是否完整；時態，語態及人稱是否正確；詞匯和句式的多樣性以及語言的準確性；上下文的連貫性；如書寫較差，影響表達，應視其影響程度，降低一到兩個檔次；英美兩種拼法及詞匯用法都可接受；內容要點可用不同方式表達，應緊扣主題，可適當發揮。Presentation評價標準：根據寫作任務和要求，寫一篇文章MyNewYear'sResolution。此活動共15分。我得（）分。Activity8Leadtoobjective3testitWhilewriting【寫作目標】【寫作任務】【寫作要求】用英語談論未來的打算。新的一年就要來臨了,你準備好了嗎?請你以“MyNewYear’sResolutions”為題寫一篇文章，內容包括:1.條理清晰，語句通順，語法正確2.書寫規范，80詞左右。3.文中不得出現涉及真實的人名、地名或校名等。

1.你的新年決心是什么?

2.你打算如何去實現它們?

3.你對來年的愿景。Presentation評價標準：根據寫作任務和要求，寫一篇文章MyNewYear'sResolution。此活動共15分。我得（）分。Activity8Leadtoobjective3testitWhilewriting審文體：審人稱：審布局：記敘文第一人稱I一般將來時/一般現在時審時態：三段BeginningBodyEnding引出話題具體介紹表明決心1.自我提升2.身體健康3.親友關系4.學業提升what↓whyLet’smakeanoutline（列提綱）Presentation評價標準：根據寫作任務和要求，寫一篇文章MyNewYear'sResolution。此活動共15分。我得（）分。Activity8Leadtoobjective3testitWhilewritingBeginningBodyEndingNew

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HerearemyplansforthecomingNewYear.Allinall,IhopeIcanachievemyNewYear'sresolutions.引出話題具體介紹表明決心1.自我提升2.身體健康3.親友關系4.學業提升Atfirst,I'mgoingtostudyhardertogetbettergrades.Finally,

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jointhedanceclub,soI’mgoingtopracticedancingtwiceeveryweek.ThenIalsowanttokeephealthy,soIamgoingtoeathealthierfoodandgetlotsofexercise.improvemyrelationshipswithmyfamily.Presentation評價標準：根據寫作任務和要求，寫一篇文章MyNewYear'sResolution。此活動共15分。我得（）分。Activity8Leadtoobjective3testitWhilewritingOnepossibleversionMyNewYear’sResolutionsNew

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HerearemyplansforthecomingNewYear.Atfirst,I'mgoingtostudyhardertogetbettergrades.AndI'mgoingtomakemorefriendsandimprovemyrelationshipswithmyfamily.ThenIalsowanttokeephealthy,soIamgoingtoeathealthierfoodandgetlotsofexercise.Iplantorunandplaytenniseverymorning.Finally,

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Allinall,IhopeIcanachievemyNewYear'sresolutions.Presentation評價標準：根據寫作任務和要求，寫一篇文章MyNewYear'sResolution。此活動共15分。我得（）分。Activity8Leadtoobjective3testitWhilewritingChecklistCheckyourarticleaccordingtothechecklistbyyourselves.(根據標準清單自查和互查。)內容結構完整2`內容全面2`層次清晰2`句型多樣2`時態一般將來時/一般現在時2`拼寫無拼寫錯誤1`字數80詞左右2`書寫字跡工整2`Presentation評價標準：根據要求，寫出讓城市更干凈更綠色的計劃，寫出1條得1分。此活動共4分。我得（）分。Activity9Leadtoobjective3testitAfterwriting4Imagineyouworkforyourcity.Thinkofplantomakeitcleanerandgreener.1.We’regoingtomakesubwaybetter.Thenpeopledon’thavetodrivetowork.2.__________________________________________3.__________________________________________4.____________________________________________________________________________________5.____________________________________________________________________________________We’regoingtobuildanewhighway.We’regoingtobuildmorebuildings.We’regoingtoplantmoretreesandflowersaroundthecity.We’regoingtohelpcleanthestreetsandparksontheweekendsPresentation評價標準：根據要求，把職業和學校學科匹配，匹配正確1個得1分。此活動共5分。我得（）分。Activity10Leadtoobjective3testitAfterwritingSelfCheck1Matchthejobswiththeschoolsubjects.1.computerprogrammermedicine2.engineercomputerscience3.doctormath4.basketballplayerscience5.scientistP.E.Presentation評價標準：根據語境，完成對話，每空1詞，填寫正確1個空格得0.5分。此活動共5分。我得（）分。Activity11Leadtoobjective3testitAfterwritingA:Whatdoyou________tobewhenyougrowup?B:Iwant________ascientist.A:Wow!Thatsoundscool.Butit’sdifficult.____areyou______todothat?B:AfterIfinishhighschool,I’m____togotouniversity.A:________areyou____tostudy?B:InHefei.I’m______tostudythereforfouryears.A:IthinkIwant_____ateacher.I’m____toteachinWuhan.2Fillintheblanksintheconversation.wanttobeHowgoinggoingWheregoinggoingtobegoingSelfCheckPresentation評價標準：根據要求，寫出自己的計劃，寫出1個得1分。此活動共4分。我得（）分。Activity12Leadtoobjective3testitAfterwriting3Writeaboutyourplans.Tomorrow,I’mgoingto_____________________

Nextweek,______________________________Nextmonth,______________________________

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haveanEnglishlesson.IamgoingtotraveltoDalian.Iamgoingtovisitmyfriend.Iamgoingtomovetoanothercity.SelfCheckPresentationSummaryLeadtoobjective3AfterwritingPresentationLookandsayLeadtoobjective3AfterwritinggoalresolutionresolutionresolutionactionactionactionkeepdoingPresentationLookandsayLeadtoobjective3AfterwritingHoldontoyourdreams.Theywillcometrueoneday!堅持你的夢想，總有一天夢想會成真。

Weshouldmakecontributions(做出貢獻)toChineseDream.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者事竟成！PresentationLanguagepoints1.Theymayhelptomakeyouabetterpersonandtomakeyour…make在本句中出現兩次，均用作使役動詞，意為“使；讓”。其結構分別為：Makeyourenemyyourfriend.Hiswordsmademehappy.makesb./sth.+n.讓某人/某物成為……makesb./sth.+adj.讓某人/某物……2.Thefirstresolutionisaboutmyownpersonalimprovement.3）own還可作代詞用，意為“自己的東西；獨自”，常用在以下短語中：Hehasamindofhisown.ofone’sown屬于某人自己的onone’sown獨立地；獨自1）own在本句中作形容