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讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Jasonhadalwaysbeenpassionateaboutrunning.Fromthemomenthecouldremember,thethrillofthewindagainsthisfaceandtherhythmofhisfeethittingthegroundfilledhimwithasenseofpurposeandjoy.Eversincehewasachild,hedreamtofparticipatinginthecitymarathonandwinningit.Inhighschool,heenthusiasticallyjoinedthetrackteam.Hewasfullofhopeanddetermination,buthisfirstracewasadisaster.Hetrippedoverhisownfeetandfellnearthefinishline,thesoundoflaughterringinginhisears.Theshamewasintense,butratherthanletitbreakhim,itfueledhisdeterminationtoprovehimself.Hetrainedhardeveryday,wakingupbeforedawntorunseveralmiles.Theearlymorningairwascoldandbiting,buthepushedthrough.However,duringacrucialpracticesession,hepulledamuscleandhadtotakeabreakforweeks.Hewasfrustratedashewatchedhisteammatesprogress.Hisconfidencetookahugehit,anddoubtbegantoboost.Whenherecoveredandwentbacktotraining,hefounditdifficulttoregainhispreviousform.Eachrunfeltlikeastruggle,andheconstantlyquestionedifhehadlosthisedge.Justashewasstartingtomakeprogressandregainhisspeed,anewsetbackappeared.Hegotsickwithaseverefluthatkepthimonthebedforamonth.Thelossoffitnessandstrengthwasdisheartening,andthefearofhavingtostartalloveragainappeared.Whenhefinallyreturnedtotraining,hefoundthathehadlostmuchofhisenduranceandhadtoworktwiceashardtocatchup.However,Jasonrefusedtogivein.Hetrainedevenharder,pushinghislimitseveryday.Longrunsunderthesun,tiringspeedworkouts,andintensestrengthtrainingbecamehisroutine.Thepainandexhaustionwereconstantcompanions,butheneverletthemstophim.Hebelievedthatallhisstrugglesandperseverancewouldfinallypayoff.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。Finally,thedayofmarathonarrived,thestartinggunfired,andtheracebegan.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Fromthatdayon,Jasoncontinuedtopursuehispassionforrunning.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Jason跑步故事的續(xù)寫續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)第一段:細(xì)致描述馬拉松比賽開始后Jason的起跑狀態(tài),著重刻畫他面對(duì)舊傷疼痛時(shí)的反應(yīng),如面部表情、肢體動(dòng)作。隨著比賽推進(jìn),展現(xiàn)他與疲勞對(duì)抗的心理變化,包括自我鼓勵(lì)的內(nèi)心獨(dú)白。詳細(xì)描寫他超越自我、沖向終點(diǎn)的過(guò)程,可添加周圍觀眾的反應(yīng)來(lái)烘托氛圍。第二段:強(qiáng)調(diào)馬拉松賽后Jason對(duì)跑步的新認(rèn)知,明確他為自己設(shè)定的新目標(biāo),如參加更高級(jí)別的賽事、提升個(gè)人記錄等。詳細(xì)闡述他分享故事的方式,比如舉辦講座、在社交媒體發(fā)布經(jīng)驗(yàn)等。突出他在后續(xù)比賽中面對(duì)不同挑戰(zhàn)時(shí)的堅(jiān)定表現(xiàn),以及從這些經(jīng)歷中對(duì)勝利的深刻理解。情感線(150字)馬拉松比賽開始,Jason滿懷興奮與堅(jiān)定決心起跑,舊傷疼痛襲來(lái)時(shí),他從短暫的慌亂迅速轉(zhuǎn)為頑強(qiáng)堅(jiān)持。比賽中,疲勞和被超越的失落感出現(xiàn),但過(guò)往訓(xùn)練的艱辛讓他重拾斗志,最終沖過(guò)終點(diǎn)時(shí),他收獲了巨大的成就感。賽后,Jason對(duì)跑步的熱愛進(jìn)一步升華,從單純追求比賽勝利轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)樽非笞晕页砷L(zhǎng)和激勵(lì)他人,在面對(duì)新挑戰(zhàn)時(shí),始終保持積極樂(lè)觀與堅(jiān)定不移的信念。故事線(6條)馬拉松比賽開始,Jason全力起跑,舊傷引發(fā)疼痛。比賽過(guò)程中,Jason遭遇疲勞,其他選手超越他,但他憑借回憶訓(xùn)練艱辛堅(jiān)持。Jason在比賽后半程,挖掘潛力,加速追趕,逐漸找回狀態(tài)。Jason沖過(guò)終點(diǎn),贏得比賽,獲得成就感。賽后,Jason設(shè)定新目標(biāo),更加嚴(yán)格訓(xùn)練,準(zhǔn)備迎接新挑戰(zhàn)。Jason向年輕跑者分享自己的故事,激勵(lì)他們堅(jiān)持夢(mèng)想,在后續(xù)比賽中保持堅(jiān)定信念。主旨升華句(英文)Jason'sjourneyvividlyillustratesthatthepathtosuccessispavednotwitheasebutwiththecouragetofacesetbackshead-onandtheperseverancetokeepmovingforward.Hisstoryservesasapowerfulreminderthattruepassionisnotextinguishedbydifficultiesbutisinsteadkindledintoabrighterflamethroughthetrialsandtribulationsofthejourney.ThroughJason'sexperiences,welearnthatthevalueofapursuitliesnotsolelyinthedestinationbutinthelessonslearnedandthegrowthachievedalongtheway.Jason'sunwaveringspiritinthefaceofrepeatedsetbacksshowsthatthehumanwillisanindomitableforcethatcanovercomeeventhemostformidableobstacles.ThisnarrativeaboutJason'srunningjourneyteachesusthateverychallengeisanopportunityfortransformation,anditisinourresponsetoadversitythatwetrulydefineourselves.寫作示范一Finally,thedayofmarathonarrived,thestartinggunfired,andtheracebegan.Jasonboltedout,hiseyesfixedfirmlyahead.Soon,asharppainshotthroughhispreviouslyinjuredmuscle.Hisfacecontorted,buthedidn'tslowdown.Asthemilestickedby,hislegsfeltlikelead,andhisbreathgrewragged.Somerunnersspedpast,butherefusedtoyield.“Allthoseearlymornings,allthatpainduringtraining,thisismymoment,”hemuttered.Gatheringeveryounceofstrength,hesurgedforward.Thecrowdroaredashecrossedthefinishline,awidegrinonhisface.Fromthatdayon,Jasoncontinuedtopursuehispassionforrunning.Hesethissightsonnational-levelmarathons.Heorganizedrunningworkshopsforbeginners,sharinghisstrugglesandtriumphs.Ineveryrace,whetheritwasalocal10Koragruelingultra-marathon,hecarriedthesamespirit.Heunderstoodthatvictorywasaboutthejourney,notjustthefinishline.寫作示范二Finally,thedayofmarathonarrived,thestartinggunfired,andtheracebegan.Jasonlaunchedintoasprint,hisheartthumpingwildly.However,afamiliaracheinhisinjuredmusclemadehimwince.Butheclenchedhisfistsandpressedon.Astheraceworeon,fatiguecloudedhismind.Runnersovertookhim,butherefusedtobedaunted.Memoriesofhisarduoustrainingsessionsfloodedhismind.Withaburstofdetermination,hequickenedhispace.Ashenearedthefinishline,hesummonedallhisremainingenergyandsprinted.Themomenthecrossedtheline,awaveofreliefandpridewashedoverhim.Fromthatdayon,Jasoncontinuedtopursuehispassionforrunning.Heaimedtobreaklocalrunningrecords.Hewroteablogabouthisrunningexperiences,inspiringcountlessyoungathletes.Ineachcompetition,hefacedchallengeswithunwaveringresolve.Herealizedthattruevictorywasinperseveringthroughhardshipsandinspiringothers.【答案】Finally,thedayofmarathonarrived,thestartinggunfired,andtheracebegan.Thefirstfewmileswerefullofexcitement.Butasthedistanceincreased,thechallengeintensified.Hislegsburned,andhislungsgaspedforair.Inthefinalstretch,Jasonusedafinalburstofenergy.Thecrowd’scheers
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