閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。Icanwalkthepathtothelakenearourhouseinthedarkwithoutaflashlight—myfeetknowtheway.Aroundmyfamily’scottageinOntario,therearemorethan100acrestoexplore,crossedbycreeks(小溪)andvalleys.I’vebeenhikingupthemountains,crossingthosecreeksonthatlandforthepastthirtyyears,soitwasashockwhenIgotlostlastwinter.Lateonebright,afternooninFebruary,Iputonmysnowshoesandheadednorthwestfromthehouse.Whilemakingmywayupthelong,gradualslope,Istoppedtoappreciatethebeautyofnature.Finally,Iarrivedatthetopofthemountain.Withtoweringtreesthatseemedtotouchtheskyandcolorfulwildflowersundermyfeet,Itookadeepbreathandyelledattheremotemountain.Iwastotallycarriedawaybythebeautyofnature.Asthesunset,myfeetandfingersstartedtofeelcold.Idecidedtoheadback.Ididn’tturnbackthewaythatIhadjustcome.Ichangedmydirectionandchosethesteepsideofthehill.Ihadageneralsensethataheadwasthecreekthatledtothevalley,soIwalkedslowly,trustingthatthecreekwouldleadmetotheroadtomycottage.Imademywaydownthehillside.Alongtheway,Ipickedupsticksandexploredmywaythroughthisstrangewoods.Iusedmyphonetophotographthetrees,mountains,andanythingthatcaughtmyeyes.Asitwasgraduallygrowingdark,Ibegantodoubtthisroute.Wherewasthecreek?HadIwalkedinthewrongdirection?Ipulledoutmyphonetocheckmylocation,butitdiedinmyhand.Thatsenseofdoubtnowfeltmorelikepanic:Ididn’tevenhaveanyfoodoraflashlight.Itwasgettingdarkeranddarker.Iwascompletelyalone,lostinthewilderness.Iwalkednervously,trippingoverthingsinmypathandfeelingfrightenedwitharacingheartbeat.IthoughtIwasgoingtodiehereinthewoods.注意：1.所續寫短文的詞數應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Paragraph1:Butthen,IwasabouttogiveuphopewhenIsawaweaklightinthedistance._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Thehouse’sownerwelcomedmeinside._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意作者對自家位于安大略的小屋周邊環境十分熟悉，在這片超過100英畝、遍布小溪和山谷的土地上已徒步三十年，閉著眼都能走到附近的湖邊。去年二月一個陽光明媚的下午，作者穿上雪鞋向西北方向登山，山頂的美景讓其陶醉。日落時，作者決定返程，沒有走原路，而是選擇了陡峭的山坡，想著順著小溪就能回到小屋。下山途中，作者拍照留念，天色漸暗時，卻發現沒找到小溪，懷疑走錯路，拿出手機查看位置，結果手機沒電。此時孤身一人身處荒野，既無食物也無手電筒，作者滿心恐懼，以為自己要命喪于此。故事山分析開端：作者在熟悉的土地上向西北方向登山，享受美景。發展：作者決定返程，選擇不同路線，途中拍照，天色漸暗開始懷疑路線。高潮：手機沒電，作者意識到迷路，身處荒野，極度恐慌。結局（待續寫）：作者看到遠處燈光并前往，得到幫助。尾聲（待續寫）：作者在房子主人的幫助下安全回家，感悟這段經歷。伏筆以及在續寫中的回應作者對周邊環境熟悉，暗示即使迷路也有找到出路的可能，續寫中可體現憑借以往經驗判斷方向前往燈光處。提到天色漸暗，為后文手機沒電、陷入恐慌做鋪墊，續寫中可回應在黑暗中朝著燈光艱難前行的困難。作者選擇陌生的陡峭山坡下山，是迷路的原因，續寫中可體現對這條錯誤路線的反思，以及在尋找燈光過程中因地形困難而遭遇的阻礙。未攜帶食物和手電筒，加劇困境，續寫中可體現到達有燈光處時因饑餓和寒冷對屋內溫暖與食物的渴望。作者以為要命喪于此的絕望，與后文看到燈光形成強烈反差，續寫中可體現看到燈光后的驚喜和重新燃起的希望。續寫要點（兩段）第一段：著重描寫看到燈光后的心理變化，如從絕望到燃起希望，以及向燈光處前進的過程，包括途中克服的困難，如被樹枝絆倒、雪地難行等。第二段：描述房子主人的熱情接待，如提供食物、溫暖的環境，以及與主人的交流，最后表達對這次經歷的感悟，如對陌生人善意的感激，對自然的敬畏。情感線從迷路時的恐慌、絕望，到看到燈光時的驚喜、希望重燃，再到進入房子后的安心、感激，最后是對這次經歷的深刻感悟，展現情感的起伏變化。故事線作者迷路，陷入恐慌。看到遠處燈光，燃起希望。艱難向燈光處前行，克服困難。到達有燈光的房子處。受到房子主人熱情接待。安全回家，感悟經歷。主旨升華句Inthefaceoftheunknowninnature,hopecanalwaysshinethroughthedarkestmoments,justlikethelightinthewilderness.Thekindnessofstrangerscanbeawarmharborinthestormyseaoflife,remindingusofthebeautyofhumanity.Ourexperiencesinnature,whetherfullofbeautyorhardships,arepreciouslessonsthatshapeourunderstandingoflifeandourplaceintheworld.Eveninthemostfamiliarplaces,unexpectedchallengescanarise,teachingustobepreparedandadaptableatalltimes.Amomentofdespaircanturnintoanewbeginning,anditisourperseveranceandthehelpofothersthatleadusoutofthedarkness.寫作示范示范一

Butthen,IwasabouttogiveuphopewhenIsawaweaklightinthedistance.Atthatmoment,myheartleapedwithaglimmerofhope.Ignoringthepaininmylegsandthecoldnessthathadseepedintomybones,Istumbledtowardsthelight.Thesnowwasdeep,andeverystepwasastruggle.Brancheswhippedatmyface,butIpressedon.AsIgotcloser,thelightgrewbrighter,guidingmelikealighthouseinthestormysea.Thehouse’sownerwelcomedmeinside.Hequicklybroughtmeawarmblanketandacupofhottea.Shivering,Isatbythefireplace,feelingthewarmthslowlyreturntomybody.TheownerlistenedpatientlyasItoldhimmystory.Hethenofferedtodrivemehome.Onthewayback,Iwasfilledwithgratitudeforhiskindness.Thisexperiencetaughtmetoalwaysbepreparedandtoneverlosehope,nomatterhowdirethesituationmayseem.示范二

Butthen,IwasabouttogiveuphopewhenIsawaweaklightinthedistance.Itwaslikeamiracle,cuttingthroughthethickdarkness.Mydespairwasinstantlyreplacedbyarushofexcitement.Ipickedupmypace,thoughmyfeetwerenumbfromthecold.Thepathwasuneven,andIfellseveraltimes,buteachtimeIgotup,moredeterminedthanever.Thelightseemedtobemyonlysalvation.Thehouse’sownerwelcomedmeinside.Thesmellofwarmfoodhitmynostrils,andIrealizedhowhungryIwas.Hefedmeandletmerestforawhile.AfterIrecovered,hecalledmyfamilytoletthemknowIwassafe.AsIleftthehouse,Ithankedhimsincerely.Thisadventureinthewildernessmademeappreciatethevalueofkindnessandthepowerofhope.Italsomademerespecttheunpredictabilityofnatureevenmore.【答案】Butthen,asIwasabouttogiveuphope,Isawaweaklightinthedistance.AsIcamecloser,thelightgrewbrighter.Itwascomingfromasmallareaintheforest.Inthecenterstoodatinywoodenhouse,itswindowsshiningwar