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讀后續寫閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。Jenny,aneleven-year-oldgirl,hadalwaysbeenshyandquiet.Sherarelyspokeupinclassandoftenfoundherselffeelinginvisible.Oneday,herteacherannouncedaschooltalentshow.Jennylovedsingingbuthadneversunginfrontofanyoneexceptherfamily.Theideaofperforminginfrontofthewholeschoolterrifiedher.Thatevening
Jennytoldhermomaboutthetalentshow.“Ithinkyoushouldparticipate,”hermomsaidgently.“ButI’mtooscared,”Jennyreplied.“WhatifImakeamistakeandeveryonelaughsatme?”HermomthoughtforamomentandthenhandedJennyasmall,beautifulnecklace.“Thisbelongedtoyourgrandmother,”shesaid.“Sheworeitwhenevershefeltnervousorscared.Itgaveherthecouragetofaceherfear.Maybeitcandothesameforyou.”Jennydecidedtogiveitatry.Overthenextfewweeks,shepracticedsingingeveryday,wearingthenecklaceforcourage.Shestillfeltnervous,butthethoughtofhergrandmother’sstrengthhelpedherpushthroughherfear.Onthedayofthetalentshow,Jenny’sheartwaspoundingasshestoodbackstage.Shecouldheartheaudiencetalkingandlaughing,andherlegsfeltlikejelly(果凍).Butthenshetouchedthenecklaceandtookadeepbreath.Shewalkedontothestage,thebrightlightsmakingithardtoseethecrowd,andbegantosing.注意:(1)續寫詞數應為150個左右;(2)請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。AsJennysang,shefeltherconfidencegrowing.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Aftertheperformance,Jennyfeltarushofemotions.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Jenny參加才藝表演的故事續寫續寫要點第一段:著重描寫Jenny演唱過程中的狀態變化,如聲音從顫抖到穩定,逐漸投入表演,觀眾從喧鬧到被吸引而安靜,展現她自信的增長。第二段:詳細描述表演結束后的情景,包括觀眾的反應、他人的贊揚,以及Jenny內心的情感,如自豪、自信,體現她的成長與蛻變。情感線Jenny一開始極度緊張恐懼,站在舞臺上雙腿發軟,聲音顫抖。但隨著演唱的進行,她逐漸找回自信,聲音變得穩定有力。表演結束后,面對觀眾的熱烈掌聲,她先是驚訝,隨后被自豪和成就感填滿,內心充滿自信,完成了從害怕到勇敢的情感轉變。故事線Jenny開始演唱,聲音最初帶著顫抖,隨著自信的增加,聲音逐漸穩定。觀眾從一開始的隨意聊天,被Jenny的歌聲吸引,現場變得安靜。Jenny沉浸在演唱中,完全忘記了緊張和恐懼。表演結束,現場先是安靜,隨后爆發出雷鳴般的掌聲。老師和同學們圍上來,對Jenny的表演給予高度贊揚。Jenny內心充滿自豪和自信,意識到自己克服了恐懼,收獲了成長。主旨升華句ThisexperiencetaughtJennythattruecourageliesnotintheabsenceoffear,butinthedeterminationtofaceithead-on.(這次經歷讓Jenny明白,真正的勇氣不在于沒有恐懼,而在于有決心直面恐懼。)Itshowsthatwiththesupportoflovedonesandthestrengthwithinourselves,wecanbreakthroughourlimitationsandachievetheseeminglyimpossible.(這表明,在親人的支持和自身的力量下,我們可以突破限制,實現看似不可能的事情。)Jenny'sjourneyfromshynesstoconfidenceprovesthateverysmallstepoffacingfearisagiantleaptowardspersonalgrowth.(Jenny從害羞到自信的歷程證明,每一次勇敢面對恐懼的一小步,都是個人成長的一大步。)Throughthisperformance,Jennylearnedthatthemostpreciousthinginlifeisnottheapplausewereceive,butthecouragewediscoverwithinourselves.(通過這次表演,Jenny學到,生活中最珍貴的不是我們得到的掌聲,而是我們在自己內心發現的勇氣。)Thisstoryremindsusthatnomatterhowgreatourfearsmayseem,thereisalwaysawaytoovercomethemandshinebrightly.(這個故事提醒我們,無論我們的恐懼看起來多么巨大,總有辦法克服它們,綻放光芒。)寫作示范示范一AsJennysang,shefeltherconfidencegrowing.Atfirst,hervoicewasabitshaky,butasthefamiliarmelodyflowed,shefoundherrhythm.Thenecklacearoundherneckseemedtogiveheragentlenudgeofencouragement.Theaudience,whowerechattingidlybefore,graduallyquieteddown,theireyesfixedonJenny.Sheletgoofallherworriesandsangfromthebottomofherheart.Aftertheperformance,Jennyfeltarushofemotions.Forasplitsecond,theauditoriumwasdeathlysilent,andthen,likeatidalwave,applausethunderedthroughtheroom.Jenny'seyeswidenedinsurprise,andthenshebrokeintoabigsmile.Herteacher,withaproudlookonherface,cameupandgaveherawarmhug.Classmatescrowdedaround,showeringherwithcompliments.Jennyrealizedthatshehadnotonlyconqueredherstagefrightbutalsofoundanewversionofherself,amoreconfidentandfearlessone.示范二AsJennysang,shefeltherconfidencegrowing.Herhands,whichweretightlyclenchedatfirst,graduallyrelaxed.Theonce-poundingheartnowbeatinharmonywiththemusic.Shenoticedthatthefacesintheaudience,whichwereblurryatfirst,becameclearerasshefocusedonhersinging.Peoplewerenoddingtheirheadsinrhythm,andsomeevenhadtheireyesclosed,enjoyingthesong.Aftertheperformance,Jennyfeltarushofemotions.Shestoodthere,frozenforamoment,stillindisbeliefthatshehadjustperformedinfrontofthewholeschool.Then,theoverwhelmingapplausebroughtherbacktoreality.Herclassmatesrushedontothestage,cheeringandjumpingaroundher.Hermom,inthefrontrow,hadtearsofjoyinhereyes.Jennyknewthatthiswasaturningpointinherlife.Shehadfacedherbiggestfear,andthesenseofaccomplishmentshefeltwasindescribable.Fromthatdayon,shewasnolongertheshygirlsheusedtobe.參考答案AsJennysang,shefeltherconfidencegrowing.Theinitialtrembleinhervoicedisappeared,replacedbyaclearandstrongsound.Shefocusedonthemelodyandthewords,lettingherselfgetlostinthemusic.Theaudiencebecamesilent,andshecouldfeeltheirattentiononher,notwithjudgment,butwithappreciation.Bythetimeshefinished,therewasamomentofsilencefollowedbyaburstofapplause.Jennyfeltawarmthinher
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