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閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。Myfive-year-olddaughterRuthieseemedverysmallstandingatthebaseofthehugerock-climbingwallasayoungemployeedouble-checkedherequipment.Itwasoursecondtimeatthisindoorcrowdedclimbinggym.Onourfirstvisit,Ruthiehadbeggedmyhusbandandmetolethertryclimbingthewall,butIdeniedher,afraidthatshewasundersized.Butlifehaddramaticallychangedsincethen.Afterreceivingacancerdiagnosis(診斷),Ifeltthatmylifewastooshorttodenyherachance.Istoodoutsidethewaitingarea,watchingtheemployeeattachRuthietoasafetyrope.Thenhegaveherathumbs-upsign,andmydaughterbeganclimbing!Withthatrope,shecouldn’tpossiblyfall.Shemightslip,butshewouldn’tfall.Iwassurprisedathowshedidthatsoeasilyandjoyfully.“Ifmycanceristherockwall,IwanttobeRuthie,”Ithought.Whenshetouchedthegroundagain,Ileanedoverthelowfenceandasked,“Howdoyoudothat?”“Ijusttrusttherope.It’sveryeasy,”shesaidwithashrug,andstartedonhersecondclimbing.Apparently,ifIhadknownthesecret,Icouldhaveclimbedthewallmyself.WhenIwassixteen,Ioncefailedtoclimbarockwall.Withaddedweightandreducedmuscletone,IdoubtedifIcouldevendoit.Ididn’tseeanyothermomstryingtoclimbthewall.Severalmonthsearlier,embarrassmentwouldhavestoppedmefromtrying.Butmycancerdidfunnythingstomybrain.ItmademerealizethatIneededtobebraverthanIthought.Withdetermination,Idecidedtotryitandthesameyoungemployeecheckedmysafetyropeandgavemethethumbs-upsign.AsIbeganmyclimb,Iwasexcitedbymyownbraveryfortryingsomethingsonew.However,onlytenfeetup,myfingersandtoesstartedtotire,andtherewasabsolutelynoplacetorest.MyexcitementbegantodisappearandIwasafraidthatIwasgoingtoslipandfall.注意:1.續寫詞數應為150個左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。ButIknewifIwantedtomakeit,Ihadtotrusttherope.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thatday’ssuccessfulexperienceinspiredmeinmycancerbattle.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:五歲的Ruthie站在巨大的攀巖墻下,身形顯得格外嬌小,工作人員幫她仔細檢查裝備。這是她們第二次來到室內攀巖館,第一次時,因擔心女兒年紀小、體格瘦弱,“我”拒絕了她攀巖的請求。然而此后生活發生巨變,“我”被診斷出患有癌癥,深感生命短暫,不應再剝奪女兒嘗試的機會。看著Ruthie輕松愉悅地攀爬,“我”驚嘆不已,她表示只是信任繩索所以覺得簡單。回想起自己16歲時攀巖失敗,且如今身體狀況不佳、體重增加、肌肉松弛,本有些猶豫,但癌癥改變了“我”的想法,讓“我”鼓起勇氣嘗試。攀爬途中,“我”起初興奮,可爬了僅十英尺就手指腳趾乏力,找不到休息之處,興奮漸消,恐懼襲來。伏筆及續寫中的回應:伏筆:第一次拒絕Ruthie攀巖,因覺得她體格小。回應:凸顯后來“我”因癌癥改變想法,同意她攀巖的轉變,體現“我”對生命、對孩子成長態度的變化。續寫中“我”受Ruthie感染,勇敢攀爬,完成自我突破。伏筆:“我”被診斷出癌癥,深感生命短暫。回應:解釋“我”為何不再阻攔Ruthie攀巖,推動情節發展,讓“我”的行為有了情感支撐。續寫中“我”將抗癌與攀巖類比,從攀巖經歷汲取抗癌力量。伏筆:Ruthie輕松信任繩索完成攀爬。回應:為“我”后續攀爬時內心的掙扎與最終選擇信任繩索做鋪墊,形成對比與呼應,展現榜樣的力量。續寫中“我”效仿Ruthie,克服恐懼,成功登頂。伏筆:回憶16歲攀巖失敗,且如今身體條件不佳。回應:增加此次攀爬的難度與挑戰,襯托“我”克服內心障礙、勇敢嘗試的可貴。續寫中克服身體局限,展現堅韌。伏筆:攀爬途中體力不支、恐懼來襲。回應:制造懸念與危機,引出后續“我”如何抉擇應對,吸引讀者。續寫中憑借信任繩索、堅定意志戰勝困難。續寫要點:第一段情感線:從恐懼、猶豫,幾近放棄,到在內心掙扎后選擇信任繩索,重燃斗志,堅定攀爬;故事線:“我”在體力不支、害怕滑落的絕境下,回想起Ruthie的話,決定像她一樣信任繩索,克服身體的疲憊與內心的恐懼,艱難地一步步向上攀爬,最終登頂。第二段情感線:受攀巖成功激勵,由之前對癌癥治療的擔憂、迷茫,轉變為堅定、積極面對;故事線:“我”將攀巖過程與抗癌歷程相類比,意識到如同信任繩索一樣,要信任醫療團隊與治療手段,以更頑強的毅力投入抗癌斗爭,迎接未來挑戰。主旨升華句:Inthefaceofdifficulties,trustistheropethatpullsusupfromtheabyssoffearanddoubt.(面對困難時,信任是將我們從恐懼與懷疑的深淵拉起的繩索。)Sometimes,thegreatestcourageisfoundinthesmallestofus,likeachild'sfearlesstrust,inspiringourjourneyforward.(有時候,最偉大的勇氣源自我們當中最弱小的個體,就如孩子無畏的信任,激勵著我們前行。)Life'schallenges,whetheratoweringrockwalloradauntingillness,canbeconqueredwhenwefindthestrengthtotrustandpersevere.(生活中的挑戰,無論是高聳的攀巖墻還是可怕的疾病,當我們找到信任與堅持的力量時,都能被征服。)Thejourneyofovercomingobstaclesisnotjustaboutphysicalstrength,butaboutthementalresolvetotrustintheunseensupport.(克服障礙的旅程不只是關乎體力,還關乎信任無形支持的精神決心。)Whenweembracetrustasourguide,wecanscaletheheightsofourfearsandemergevictoriousontheotherside.(當我們將信任當作指引時,就能翻越恐懼的高峰,在彼岸取得勝利。)寫作示范一:ButIknewifIwantedtomakeit,Ihadtotrusttherope.Iclosedmyeyesforamoment,gatheringmyfrayednerves.ImagesofRuthie'sconfidentclimbflashedbeforeme.Itookadeepbreathandwhispered,“Justtrustit.”Withnewfounddetermination,Ireachedforthenexthold.Myfingersached,butIgrittedmyteeth.Slowly,Ifoundarhythm,movingonelimbatatime.AsInearedthetop,thecrowdbelowseemedtofadeaway.AllIcouldfocusonwasthatropeandthegoalabove.Finally,Igraspedthetopledge,andawaveofeuphoriawashedoverme.Thatday’ssuccessfulexperienceinspiredmeinmycancerbattle.Irealizedthatcancerwasmytoweringrockwall,andthemedicalteamandtreatmentweremyropes.Ihadbeensoafraid,doubtingeverystepoftheway.Butnow,likeonthewall,Ichosetotrust.Ifacedchemosessionswithanewmindset,seeingthemasnecessaryclimbs.Whenthesideeffectshithard,Irememberedthestruggleonthewallandheldon.Iwasdeterminedtoreachthesummitofrecovery,knowingthatwithtrustandperseverance,Icouldconquerthismountaintoo.寫作示范二:ButIknewifIwantedtomakeit,Ihadtotrusttherope.IglanceddownandsawRuthielookingupatme,hereyesfullofanticipation.ThatsimplelookgavemethepushIneeded.Iforcedmyfingerstouncurlandgrabthenextprotrusion.Itwasagony,butIrepeatedRuthie'smantrainmyhead:“Justtrusttherope.”AsIinchedhigher,sweatpoureddownmyface,mixingwithtearsofexertion.ButIdidn'tstop.Eachmovewasabattle,butIwaswinning.Eventually,Ihauledmyselfoverthetop,collapsinginaheapofexhaustionandpride.Thatday’ssuccessfulexperienceinspiredmeinmycancerbattle.Iunderstoodthatjustastheropehadmybackonthewall,Ihadasupportsysteminmyfightagainstcancer.Family,friends,anddoctorsweretheretocatchmeifIfell.Istoppeddreadingthefuturescansandtreatments.Instead,Iembracedthemasopportunitiestoprovemystrength.Wheneverself-doubtcreptin,IthoughtbacktothatvictoriousclimbandknewIhadthegutstofaceanything.Iwasonajourneytobeatcancer,andthiswasjustthebeginning.【答案】ButIknewifIwantedtomakeit,Ihadtotrusttherope.Itookadeepbreath.Immediately,Ifeltthesafetyfromtherop
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