高考英語讀后續寫語篇練習芒果樹引發的鄰里矛盾與和解1題目分析讀后續寫題目再現范文呈現努力方向2Part1題目呈現3續寫原文TheMangoTree—AFriendofAllItwasausualcheerfulandplayfuldayforDorothy.Theonlydifferencewasthatherfamilyhadshiftedtoanewapartment.Althoughshehadbeeninthenewhousejusttwodays,Dorothyhadalreadystartedlikinghernewhomeverymuch,notonlybecauseofthespaciousrooms,butalsobecauseofalargemangotreewhichhadlovinglyextendeditsbranchesacrossthebalconyofherhouse.Themangotreenotonlygaveabeautifulviewbutalsoservedasahomeforalargenumberofbirdsandsmallanimals.Dorothy’smotherwasalsofondofplantsandhadkeptmanypottedplantsinthebalcony.Aweekpassedby.OnaSundaymorning,Dorothywasawakenedbyaloudnoiseinherneighbourhood.Sherantowardsthebalconyand,tohersurprise,foundsomepeoplechopping(砍)offthebelovedmangotree.Sheranuptohermotherandexplainedthematter.4續寫原文Dorothyandhermotherlookeddownfromthebalcony.TheysawthewomenundertheguidanceofMr.Denver,cuttingthemangotreedown.Mr.Denverwastheresidentofthegroundfloorapartment.Hesaidangrily,“Look,Iamgettingthisjobdoneundermyexpense.Thistreeisblockingmyview.Icannotseemycarproperlybecauseofthisannoyingtree.”DorothyandhermotherunderstoodthattherewasnopointinhavinganargumentwithMr.Denver.5續寫原文Fromthenon,Dorothytriedallpossiblewaystotakeherrevenge(報復)againstMr.Denverforcuttingherbelovedmangotree.Shedidmanytrickssuchasstickingthegumonhiscallngbell,pouringsugarinhisbalconytoattractants,jumpingonthefloortocreatenoise,etc.Dayspassedby.Onemorning,asDorothywashelpinghermotherwaterthepottedplantskeptinthebalcony,shecouldn’ttakehereyesawayfromthefreshgreenleavescomingfromtheinjuredmangotree.Dorothycouldn’tholdherexcitementandstartedjumpingwithdelight.6段首句Paragraph1：Severaldayslater,Dorothy’sparentsdecidedtoinviteMr.Denverandhisfamilyfordinner.Paragraph2：Mr.DenverreceivedDorothy’smother’sgiftwarmlywithasmile.7Part2題目分析8續寫原文分析9多蘿西一家搬到新公寓，她因寬敞房間和陽臺外的芒果樹很快喜歡上這里。一周后，丹佛先生以芒果樹遮擋視線為由砍掉它。此后，多蘿西一直想報復丹佛先生。一天，她驚喜地發現受傷的芒果樹長出新綠葉。幾天后，多蘿西的父母決定邀請丹佛先生一家共進晚餐。點1：位于續寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續寫第二段段首，續寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節構建的重點10續寫思路分析Para1：Severaldayslater,Dorothy’sparentsdecidedtoinviteMr.Denverandhisfamilyfordinner.幾天后，多蘿西的父母決定邀請丹佛先生一家共進晚餐。多蘿西得知這個消息后，心里十分抗拒，她撅著嘴，滿臉不情愿地說：“為什么要請他，他可是砍了我們心愛的芒果樹！”父母耐心地向她解釋，鄰里之間和睦相處很重要，希望借此機會化解矛盾。在父母的勸說下，多蘿西勉強同意。晚餐當天，丹佛先生一家如約而至。多蘿西不情不愿地和他們打了招呼，隨后便沉默不語。餐桌上，大家起初都有些拘謹，氣氛略顯尷尬。丹佛先生似乎也有些不自在，偶爾說幾句話，聲音都帶著一絲不自然。多蘿西則一直低頭吃飯，對丹佛先生的態度依舊冷淡。11續寫思路分析Para2：Mr.DenverreceivedDorothy’smother’sgiftwarmlywithasmile.丹佛先生微笑著熱情接過多蘿西母親的禮物。母親溫和地說：“打開看看吧，這是我們的一點心意。”丹佛先生打開盒子，看到里面是芒果樹的新鮮綠葉，頓時愣住了。多蘿西的母親接著說：“這棵芒果樹給我們帶來了很多快樂，雖然它被砍了，但生命力很頑強，又長出了新葉。我們希望您能理解我們對它的感情，也希望鄰里之間能像這棵樹一樣，即便經歷波折，也能重新煥發生機。”丹佛先生聽后，滿臉羞愧，他真誠地向多蘿西一家道歉，表示自己當初太自私。多蘿西看到這一幕，心中的怨恨也漸漸消散。從那以后，兩家人的關系逐漸緩和，共同守護著這份鄰里情誼。12Part3范文呈現13范文呈現Severaldayslater,Dorothy’sparentsdecidedtoinviteMr.Denverandhisfamilyfordinner.WhenDorothyheardthenews,shewascompletelyagainstit.Shepoutedandsaidreluctantly,"Whyshouldweinvitehim?Hecutdownourbelovedmangotree!"Herparentspatientlyexplainedthatharmoniousneighborhoodrelationswereimportantandthiswasachancetoresolvetheconflict.Aftermuchpersuasion,Dorothyagreed.Onthedayofthedinner,theDenversarrived.Dorothygreetedthemwithahalf-heartedsmileandthenremainedsilent.Atthedinnertable,everyonewasabitawkwardatfirst.Mr.Denverseemedill-at-ease,andhiswordswereabitstiltedwhenhespoke.Dorothyjustkeptherheaddown,eatingquietlyandstillshowingacoldattitudetowardsMr.Denver.14范文呈現Mr.DenverreceivedDorothy’smother’sgiftwarmlywithasmile.Hermothersaidgently,"Openit.It'salittlesomethingfromus."Mr.Denveropenedtheboxandwasstunnedtoseethefreshleavesofthemangotreeinside.Dorothy'smothercontinued,"Thismangotreebroughtusalotofjoy.Althoughitwascut,it'ssotoughthatnewleaveshavegrown.Wehopeyoucanunderstandourfeelingsforitandthatourrelationshipcanbelikethistree,revivingafterdifficulties."Mr.Denverlookedashamed.HesincerelyapologizedtoDorothy'sfamily,admittinghehadbeentooselfish.Seeingthis,theresentmentinDorothy'sheartgraduallydissipated.Fromthenon,thetwofamilies'relationshipimproved,andtheycherishedtheneighborhoodfriendshiptogether.15升級版范文呈現Severaldayslater,Dorothy’sparentsdecidedtoinviteMr.Denverandhisfamilyfordinner.Uponhearingthis,Dorothywasvehementlyopposed.Pouting,sheretortedreluctantly,"Whyonearthshouldweinvitehim?He'stheonewhochoppeddownourbelovedmangotree!"Herparents,withgreatpatience,elucidatedthatharmoniousneighborhoodrelationswereofutmostimportanceandthatthispresentedanopportunitytomendtherift.Afterpersistentpersuasion,Dorothyacquiesced.Onthedayofthedinner,theDenversarrived.Dorothygreetedthemwithaforcedsmileandthenlapsedintosilence.Atthedinnertable,anairofawkwardnessprevailedinitially.Mr.Denver,clearlyill-at-ease,spokewithahintofstiffness.Dorothy,keepingherheaddown,atequietly,maintainingacolddemeanortowardsMr.Denver.16升級版范文呈現Mr.DenverreceivedDorothy’smother’sgiftwarmlywithasmile.Hermother,inagentletone,said,"Goaheadandopenit.It'satokenofourregard."Mr.Denver,uponopeningthebox,wasleftstunnedatthesightofthefreshleavesofthemangotreewithin.Dorothy'smothercontinued,"Thismangotreewasasourceofgreatjoyforus.Despite