暖心助力，守護(hù)童真——讀后續(xù)寫講義高一上學(xué)期期末聯(lián)考英語試題閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Oneevening,whileworkingattheconveniencestoreinmyneighborhood,Inoticedayounggirl,about8yearsold,wholookedverytired,carryingseveralbags.Concernedaboutherwell-being,Iapproachedherandaskedifsheneededanyhelp.Shetoldmethatshewaswaitingforafriendandfeltabitlostinthearea.Seeingheryoungfaceandthetirednessinhereyes,Idecidedtobuyhersomefoodandwater.Iinvitedhertostayinsidethestoreuntilherfriendarrived,ensuringthatitwassaferinside.Sheagreedandseemedgladtohaveaplacetorest.Aswechatted,shementionedthatshewasplanningtomeetupwithherneighbour,oneofherbestfriends.Theywereplanningalittleadventurearoundtown.Icouldseethatshewasexcitedbutalsoabitnervousabouttheplan.Wantingtoensurehersafety,Isoftlyaskedifshehadtoldherparentsaboutherwhereabouts(行蹤).Sheadmittedthatshehadn’t.Iexplainedtoherhowimportantitwastoletherparentsknowwhereshewas,sotheywouldn’tworryabouther.“DoyouthinkIshouldcallthemnow?”sheasked,lookinguncertain.“Yes,Ithinkthat’sagoodidea,”Ireplied.“They’llberelievedtoknowyou’resafe.”“ButIcan’tremembertheirtelephonenumbers,”shesaidhelplessly.IdecidedtocallapolicemanIknewwell,whooftenpatrolled(巡邏)ourarea.Thepolicemanarrivedquicklyanddealtwiththesituationwithgreatcare.Hespokekindlytothegirl,askingheraboutherplansandherfriend.Hetoldhertheimportanceofstayingsafeandkeepingherparentsinformed.Someminuteslater,thegirl’sneighbour,anoldergirl,arrived.Thepolicemanspoketothemaboutthepossibledangersofwandering(閑逛)aroundtown.Heencouragedthemtocalltheirparentsandletthemknowtheyweresafe.Luckily,theoldergirlrememberedhermother’stelephonenumberwell.Thepolicemansoongotintouchwithhermother.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。ThepolicemanandItogetherwaitedfortheoldergirl’smothertoarrive._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Afterthemeal,theoldergirl’smotherpaidforit._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意在一個夜晚，“我”在社區(qū)便利店工作時，注意到一個約8歲的疲憊小女孩拎著幾個袋子。“我”關(guān)心她的狀況，為她買食物和水，邀請她進(jìn)店等待朋友。聊天中得知她要和鄰居好友在鎮(zhèn)上冒險，且未告知父母行蹤。“我”意識到告知父母的重要性，因她記不起父母電話，便找來經(jīng)常巡邏的警察。警察到來后處理此事，不久小女孩的鄰居大女孩到達(dá)，大女孩記得母親電話，警察聯(lián)系上其母親。故事在此處續(xù)寫。故事分析開端1.“我”在便利店工作時發(fā)現(xiàn)疲憊且迷路的小女孩，對其提供幫助。發(fā)展2.“我”與小女孩交流，得知她未告知父母行蹤且不記得父母電話，“我”聯(lián)系警察處理此事。高潮（待續(xù)寫）1.年長女孩母親到達(dá)后的反應(yīng)，以及大家之間的互動，如交流、表達(dá)感謝等。結(jié)局（待續(xù)寫）2.女孩們安全回家，“我”從中獲得感悟，強調(diào)關(guān)心他人、保障安全的意義。伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)3.小女孩不記得父母電話：在續(xù)寫中作為推動情節(jié)發(fā)展的因素，引出警察聯(lián)系大女孩母親的情節(jié)，突出尋求幫助解決問題的過程。4.“我”對小女孩的關(guān)心以及警察的到來：在續(xù)寫中延續(xù)這種關(guān)懷氛圍，母親到達(dá)后對“我”和警察的感謝，體現(xiàn)關(guān)懷得到回應(yīng)，深化人與人之間相互幫助的主題。續(xù)寫要點（兩段）第一段著重描寫年長女孩母親到達(dá)便利店時的神情，她對“我”和警察的感激之情，以及她對女孩們的態(tài)度，如安撫、教育等。接著寫大家一起交流，女孩們認(rèn)識到自己的錯誤，表達(dá)今后會注意安全的決心。第二段描述飯后眾人分別的場景，女孩們和母親離開時的狀態(tài)，如與“我”和警察揮手告別等。最后以“我”的內(nèi)心感悟作為結(jié)尾，升華主題，強調(diào)幫助他人帶來的價值和意義。情感線起初，“我”對小女孩充滿關(guān)心，在等待大女孩母親到來時有些忐忑。母親到達(dá)后表達(dá)感謝，“我”感到欣慰。交流過程中，“我”看到女孩們認(rèn)識錯誤，心情逐漸輕松。最后大家分別，“我”收獲了滿足感和對幫助他人的深刻感悟。故事線1.警察和“我”等待年長女孩母親到達(dá)便利店。2.母親到達(dá)后表達(dá)感激，并邀請“我”和警察吃飯。3.吃飯時大家交流，女孩們道歉并承諾注意安全。4.飯后母親付賬，帶女孩們回家，大家揮手告別。5.“我”從這次經(jīng)歷中獲得感悟。主旨升華句Thisexperiencetaughtmethatalittleconcernandatimelyhelpinghandcanbringwarmthandsafetytoothers,makingtheworldabetterplace.（這次經(jīng)歷讓我明白，一點關(guān)心和及時的援手能給他人帶來溫暖和安全，讓世界變得更美好。）Throughthisevent,Irealizedthatsmallactsofkindnesscanpreventbigtroublesandcreateaharmoniousandcaringcommunity.（通過這次事件，我意識到小小的善舉能避免大麻煩，營造和諧有愛的社區(qū)。）Itwasn'tjustthehelpthatmattered;itwasthesenseofresponsibilityandlovethatgrewwithinme,makingmemoreawareoftheimportanceoflookingoutforothers.（重要的不只是幫助本身，而是在我心中滋生的責(zé)任感和愛，讓我更明白關(guān)愛他人的重要性。）Thisstoryservesasareminderthatineverysmallhelpingbehaviorliesthepowertochangelivesandbuildamorecompassionatesociety.（這個故事提醒我們，每一個小小的幫助行為都蘊含著改變生活、構(gòu)建更具同情心社會的力量。）AsIwatchedthemleavethatday,Icarriedwithmethevaluablelessonthatkindnessiscontagious,andeveryactofkindnesscanstartabeautifulchainreaction.（那天看著他們離開，我收獲了寶貴的一課：善良具有感染力，每一個善舉都能引發(fā)美好的連鎖反應(yīng)。）寫作示范一ThepolicemanandItogetherwaitedfortheoldergirl’smothertoarrive.Beforelong,aworried-lookingwomanrushedintothestore.Hereyeswerefilledwithreliefwhenshesawthetwogirlssafeandsound.Shewalkedstraightuptous,hervoicetremblingwithgratitude.“Youtwoarelifesavers.IwassoworriedwhenIcouldn'tfindmydaughter.”Shethenturnedtothegirls,gentlyscoldingthemfornottellingher.Thegirlshungtheirheadsinshame,sayingsorry.Duringthemeal,wesharedthestory,andtheatmospherewaswarm.Thegirlspromisedtobemorecarefulinthefuture.Afterthemeal,theoldergirl’smotherpaidforit.Astheypreparedtoleave,thegirlsgaveusbighugsandwavedgoodbyewithbrightsmiles.Iwatchedthemwalkaway,feelingasenseofaccomplishment.Thissimpleactofkindnesshadnotonlyensuredthegirls'safetybutalsomademerealizehowasmalleffortcouldhaveabigimpact.Itstrengthenedmybeliefthatlookingoutforotherswasaresponsibilityweallshared.寫作示范二ThepolicemanandItogetherwaitedfortheoldergirl’smothertoarrive.Soon,ananxiousmotherappearedatthedoor.Sheletoutasighofreliefandquicklyhuggedherdaughterandthelittlegirlbesideher.Shethankedusprofusely,hereyesshiningwithgratitude.“Idon'tknowwhatIwouldhavedonewithoutyourhelp.”Atthedinnertable,themothertalkedtothegirlsaboutsafety.Thegirlslistenedattentively,noddingfromtimetotime.Theysincerelyapologizedfortheirthoughtlessness.Afterthemeal,theoldergirl’smotherpaidforit.Astheyleft,thegirlsskippedawayhappily,shouting“Thankyou!”overtheirshoulders.Istoodthere,feelingawarmglowinside.Thisexperiencemademeunderstandthathelpingotherswasnotonlyaboutsolvingproblemsbutalsoaboutpassingonloveandcare.Itwasasmallsteptowardsbuildingamorefriendlyandsecurecommunity.參考答案ThepolicemanandItogetherwaitedfortheoldergirl’smothertoarrive.Shortlyafter,awomanhurriedintothestore.Herfacewasfullofanxietyatfirst,butitsoftene