高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習暖心店主卡洛斯：超越期待的早餐之約1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Special2，PleaseMyflightarrivedinSanDiegoaroundmidnight,andbythetimeIdrovehomeandgotintobeditwasnearly2:00a.m.Iwastiredandjet-laggedwhenIdraggedmyselfoutofthebed.Nevertheless,Ihadtobeupbrightandearlythatmorning:Iwastheopeningkeynoter(主旨發(fā)言人)atanationalconference.Inshort,Ineededtorecoverquickly.AheartybreakfastintheearlymorningsunwaswhatIneeded.IheadedforCarlos&Annie’s,apopularrestaurantlocatedintheheartoftheseasidetown.4續(xù)寫原文“I’dlikesteakandeggs,please,”IsaidtothewaitressafterIhadfinallyfoundatableintherestaurant.“Oh,I'msorry,”sheapologized.“We'reoutofSpecial#2.We'veservedthelastofoursteaks.HowaboutSpecial#14?”“Oh,nosteakandeggs?”Icouldn'tseemtoacceptit.I'mnotsureifitwasmyheartfeltsighthatcaughtCarlos,theowner'sattention.Hiswarm,caringbrowneyesseemeddeterminedtopinpointthebestsolution.Hethensaid,“Youknow,IthinkIdidseeonefinalsteakbackthere.”5續(xù)寫原文Pressingmyluck,Iquicklydeclared,“Wow,thatwouldbegreat.Butyouknow,I’mnotsureifIwantabreakfaststenkatall.WhatIreallywantisasteak—onethat’stwoinchesthick,tenderandjuicy,servedmediumrare.”“Nottoworry,”Carlosassuredmeandleft.Theyoungwaitressgavemeawink(眨眼)andsaidwithaknowingsmile,“CarlosisbeingCarlosagain!”Ididnotgiveherwordsmuchthought.Then,InoticedCarlosashelefttherestaurantthroughthesidedoorandwalkedintoaneighborhoodgrocerystoreacrossthestreet.Carlosexchangedmorninggreetingswitheveryoneheknewandevenhelpedtheownerofthebookstorenextdoorbyholdingtheitemsthatfilledherarms.Thenhereenteredtherestaurantwithabaginhishand.6段首句Paragraph1:Withinminutes，anexactSpecial2wasinfrontofme.Paragraph2:IwasabouttoleavewhenIlearnedCarloshadalreadysoldtherestaurant.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9作者乘飛機午夜抵達圣地亞哥，到家近凌晨兩點，疲憊又有時差反應，但次日一早要在全國會議上做主旨發(fā)言，急需恢復精力。于是，作者前往海邊小鎮(zhèn)中心一家頗受歡迎的餐廳Carlos&Annie’s吃早餐，點了招牌的“特餐2號”牛排和雞蛋，然而服務員告知牛排已售罄，推薦“特餐14號”，作者無法接受。或許是作者的嘆息引起了店主卡洛斯的注意，他溫暖的眼神中透著決心，稱后廚還有最后一塊牛排。作者提出想要一塊兩英寸厚、鮮嫩多汁、三分熟的牛排，卡洛斯欣然應允后離開。這時，作者注意到卡洛斯走出餐廳，穿過街道進入一家雜貨店，與認識的人打招呼，還幫隔壁書店店主拿東西，隨后拿著一個袋子回到餐廳。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節(jié)構建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph1:Withinminutes，anexactSpecial2wasinfrontofme.不一會兒，一份完美的“特餐2號”擺在了我面前。牛排色澤誘人，鮮嫩的肉質泛著油光，熱氣騰騰，香氣撲鼻。我滿心感激，迫不及待地拿起刀叉開始品嘗。每一口都鮮嫩多汁，口感恰到好處，仿佛所有的疲憊都隨著這美味的牛排一掃而空。我一邊享受著美食，一邊觀察著周圍的一切。卡洛斯依舊在餐廳里忙碌著，他與每一位顧客都親切交談，為孩子們講有趣的笑話，逗得他們咯咯直笑；他還幫著服務員收拾餐桌，動作嫻熟又自然。大家對他的態(tài)度都充滿了喜愛和尊重，不難看出他在這個小鎮(zhèn)上有著極高的人氣。用完餐后，我找到卡洛斯，真誠地向他表達了感謝。他只是憨厚地笑著說，能讓顧客滿意就是他最大的快樂。11續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph2:Truetohisword,SamuelliveduptohispromiseofgivingLilyalargesumofmoney我正要離開時，得知卡洛斯已經把餐廳賣了。這消息猶如晴天霹靂，讓我十分震驚。我難以想象，這么用心經營、對顧客如此熱情的人，怎么會舍得賣掉這家傾注了心血的餐廳。我找到那位年輕的服務員，向她詢問詳情。原來，卡洛斯的妻子生了重病，需要一大筆錢治療，為了給妻子治病，他不得不賣掉餐廳。盡管生活如此艱難，他卻依然在餐廳里盡心盡力，沒有絲毫懈怠。我被他的善良和堅強深深打動，決定為他做點什么。我回到家后，在社交媒體上分享了卡洛斯的故事，呼吁大家為他的妻子捐款。沒想到，這個故事引起了廣泛的關注，許多人紛紛伸出援手。幾天后，我?guī)еI集到的善款再次來到餐廳，卡洛斯看到我和這筆善款時，眼中滿是感動的淚水。他緊緊地握住我的手，激動得說不出話來。我相信，在大家的幫助下，卡洛斯的妻子一定會戰(zhàn)勝病魔，他們一家也會迎來美好的未來。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Withinminutes，anexactSpecial#2wasinfrontofme.ThesteaklookedexactlyasIhadwishedfor.Itwasthick,tenderandjuicy,withabeautifulpinkish-redcenter.Thearomawafteduptomynose,makingmymouthwaterinstantly.Ipickedupmyknifeandforkandstartedtodigin.AsIate,IwatchedCarlosmovingaroundtherestaurant.Hestoppedateachtable,chattingwithcustomers,makingsuretheyweresatisfiedwiththeirmeals.Heeventookthetimetodrawafunnypictureforalittlegirlsittingatthenexttable,causinghertoburstintolaughter.Everyoneintherestaurantseemedtoknowhimwellandgreetedhimwithwarmthandrespect.AfterIfinishedmymeal,IwipedmymouthandwalkedovertoCarlos.Ithankedhimsincerelyforgoingoutofhiswaytomakemybreakfastsoperfect.Hejustsmiledandsaid,"It'smypleasure.MakingcustomershappyiswhatIlivefor."14范文呈現(xiàn)IwasabouttoleavewhenIlearnedCarloshadalreadysoldtherestaurant.Iwascompletelytakenaback.Icouldn'tbelievethatthiskind-heartedman,whohadputsomuchloveandeffortintorunningtherestaurant,wasgivingitup.Ifoundtheyoungwaitressandaskedherwhathadhappened.ShetoldmethatCarlos'swifehadfallenseriouslyillandneededalargeamountofmoneyfortreatment.Inordertosaveher,Carloshadnochoicebuttoselltherestaurant.Despitehisdifficultsituation,hewasstillworkinghardintherestaurant,makingsureeverythingwentsmoothlyuntilthenewownertookover.Iwasdeeplytouchedbyhisstory.IdecidedthatIhadtodosomethingtohelphim.WhenIgothome,IsharedCarlos'sstoryonsocialmedia,askingpeopletodonatemoneytohelphiswife.Tomysurprise,thestoryspreadquickly,andmanypeopleweremovedbyCarlos'skindnessandselflessness.Theystartedtodonatemoneygenerously.Afewdayslater,Iwentbacktotherestaurantwiththemoneywehadraised.WhenCarlossawmeandthemoney,hiseyesfilledwithtearsofgratitude.Heheldmyhandtightlyandcouldn'tsayaword.Iknewthatwiththehelpofeveryone,hiswifewouldgetbetterandtheirfamilywouldhaveabrightfuture.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Withinminutes，anexactSpecial#2wasinfrontofme.Thesteak,whichwaspreciselytwoinchesthickasIhadrequested,laytheretemptingly,itstenderandjuicytextureglisteningunderthesoftlightoftherestaurant.Thearoma,waftingtowardsme,mademymouthwateruncontrollably.Ipickedupmycutleryandbegantosavorthedeliciousmeal.WhileIwasenjoyingthesteak,InoticedCarlosmovingaroundtherestaurantnon-stop.Stoppingateachtable,heengagedinfriendlyconversationswithcustomers,crackingjokesandensuringthateveryonewascontentwiththeirorders.Heevenentertainedalittlegirlbydrawingacutepictureforher,whichledtoburstsoflaughterfromthechild.Everyoneintherestaurant,whoknewhimwell,greetedhimwithgenuinewarmthandrespect.Afterfinishingmymeal,IwalkedovertoCarlos,expressingmysinceregratitudeforhisextraordinaryeffortsinmakingmybreakfastsoperfect.Withagentlesmileonhisface,hesimplyreplied,"It'smypleasure.MakingcustomershappyiswhatIlivefor."16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)IwasabouttoleavewhenIlearnedCarloshadalreadysoldtherestaurant.Itwasapieceofnewsthatleftmecompletelystunned.Howcouldthiskind-heartedman,whohaddedicatedsomuchofhistimeandenergytorunningtherestaurant,giveitup?Ifoundtheyoungwaitressandinquiredaboutthesituation.Whatshetoldmewastrulyheart-wrenching.Carlos'swifehadfallenseriouslyillandrequiredalargesumofmoneyfortreatment.Tosaveher,Carloshadnoalternativebuttoselltherestaurant.Despitehisowndifficultcircumstances,hewasstillworkingdiligentlyintherestaurant,making