高考英語讀后續寫語篇練習用畫筆綻放光芒：艾米的逆襲之路1題目分析讀后續寫題目再現范文呈現努力方向2Part1題目呈現3續寫原文Amylovedtodraw,andherhands,alwaysdirtyfromthepencillead,movedonthepaper,showingthepicturesinhermind.Shewouldsitforhours,lostinart.Treesonherpagesseemedtoswinginanunseenwind,andthefacesshedrewworelifelikeexpressions.Herclotheswereoldandhadmanypatches(補丁),whichwerelaughedatbyherclassmates.TheirlaughterwasaclearcontrasttothequietdignitywithwhichAmycarriedherself.Amy’sfamilydidnothavemuchmoney,buttheylovedeachotherverymuch.HermotherworkedhardatmanyjobstotakecareofthemafterAmy’sfathergotsickanddied.4續寫原文Oneday,theschoolannouncedanartcontest.Theannouncement,withthetheme“NatureandHumanity,”wasmetwithawaveofchildren’sexcitement,Amyinparticular.Theschoolwouldselectthetopthreewinners,andtheheadteacherwouldawardthemprizes.Childrenenthusiasticallyregisteredforthecontestand,afterthoughtfulconsideration,finishedtheirownartpieces.Thecontestorganizersgatheredallsubmissionsoneweeklaterandsetupanexhibitshowcasingeveryparticipant’sworkintheschoolgym.5續寫原文Theschoolgymwasfilledwithviewersasthewallsdisplayedtheeffortsoftheyoungartists.Therewerepaintingsofcolorfullandscapeswherethesunburstthroughthickclouds.Somestudentshadcreatedportraits(肖像)oftheirheroes.Inthisseaofcreativity,onepaintingstoodout.Inthepainting,acommunitygardenwasdrawn,aplacewherepeoplefromdiversebackgroundscametogetherinajointeffort,theirhandsunitedintheactofplantingseedsofhopeandunity:Eachfigurewaspaintedwithsuchcareandattentiontodetailthattheyseemedtostepoffthecanvas,invitingtheviewertojointhemintheirlaboroflove.Theexhibitionwouldlastaweek,andallthestudentsandteacherscouldvotefortheirfavoritework.6段首句Paragraph1：Finallycamethedaywhenthewinnerswereannounced.Paragraph2：ThechildrenwhohadlaughedatAmystartedtoseeherinanewway.7Part2題目分析8續寫原文分析9艾米熱愛繪畫，她畫技精湛，筆下的世界栩栩如生。然而，由于家境貧寒，她穿著帶補丁的舊衣服，常遭同學嘲笑。學校舉辦以“自然與人性”為主題的藝術比賽，艾米滿懷熱情地參與。眾多學生提交作品后，學校在體育館展出。艾米的一幅描繪社區花園眾人齊心播種的畫作脫穎而出。展覽持續一周，全校師生投票。點1：位于續寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續寫第二段段首，續寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節構建的重點10續寫思路分析Para1：Finallycamethedaywhenthewinnerswereannounced.終于，到了公布獲獎者的那一天。整個學校的師生都齊聚在體育館，現場氣氛緊張又激動。校長邁著沉穩的步伐走上舞臺，手中拿著那份承載著眾多學生期待的獲獎名單。她清了清嗓子，開始緩緩念出名字。當念到“一等獎獲得者是……艾米！”時，整個體育館瞬間沸騰了。掌聲、歡呼聲交織在一起，艾米簡直不敢相信自己的耳朵。她先是愣在原地，隨后在同學們的注視下，腳步還有些遲疑地走上舞臺。校長微笑著將獎品遞到她手中，那是一套高品質的繪畫工具。艾米雙手接過獎品，眼中閃爍著激動的淚花，她用顫抖的聲音向校長和學校表達了誠摯的感謝。這一刻，她長久以來的努力和付出終于得到了回報。11續寫思路分析Para2：ThechildrenwhohadlaughedatAmystartedtoseeherinanewway.那些曾經嘲笑過艾米的孩子們，此時開始以全新的視角看待她。他們意識到，一個人的真正價值并不在于穿著打扮，而是體現在內在的才華與創造力上。他們紛紛走到艾米身邊，臉上帶著真誠的笑容，對她的畫作表達了由衷的欽佩。有的同學甚至虛心地向她請教繪畫技巧。艾米本性善良，她絲毫沒有計較之前同學們對她的嘲笑，而是熱情地分享自己的繪畫經驗和心得。從那以后，艾米在學校里成了大家心目中的榜樣。她的故事激勵著其他同學，讓大家明白，無論出身如何，都要勇敢追求自己的夢想。學校里也因此充滿了團結與尊重的氛圍，而這一切都源于艾米那幅令人驚艷的畫作。12Part3范文呈現13范文呈現Finallycamethedaywhenthewinnerswereannounced.Thewholeschoolgatheredinthegymnasium,andtheatmospherewasfulloftensionandexcitement.Theheadmastersteppedontothestagesteadily,holdingthelistofwinnersthatcarriedtheexpectationsofmanystudents.Sheclearedherthroatandbegantoreadthenamesslowly.Whensheannounced,"Thefirst-prizewinneris...Amy!"theentiregymnasiumeruptedinstantly.Applauseandcheersintertwined.Amycouldhardlybelieveherears.Shefrozeinplaceatfirst,andthen,underthegazeofherclassmates,shewalkedontothestagehesitantly.Theheadmasterhandedhertheprizewithasmile,asetofhigh-qualitypaintingtools.Amytooktheprizewithbothhands,hereyesglisteningwithexcitedtears.Sheexpressedhersinceregratitudetotheheadmasterandtheschoolinatremblingvoice.Atthismoment,herlong-termeffortsanddedicationfinallypaidoff.14范文呈現ThechildrenwhohadlaughedatAmystartedtoseeherinanewway.Theyrealizedthataperson'struevaluedoesnotlieintheirappearanceorclothing,butintheirinnertalentandcreativity.TheycametoAmyonebyone,withsinceresmilesontheirfaces,expressingtheirsincereadmirationforherpaintings.Someclassmatesevenaskedherhumblyforpaintingskills.Amy,beingkind-hearted,didn'tholdanygrudgesagainstherclassmatesfortheirpreviousmockery.Instead,shesharedherpaintingexperiencesandinsightsenthusiastically.Fromthenon,Amybecamearolemodelintheschool.Herstoryinspiredotherstudents,makingthemunderstandthatnomatterwhattheirbackgroundis,theyshouldbravelypursuetheirdreams.Asaresult,theschoolwasfilledwithanatmosphereofunityandrespect,allbecauseofAmy'samazingpainting.15升級版范文呈現Finallycamethedaywhenthewinnerswereannounced.Theentireschoolcongregatedinthegymnasium,anairofpalpableanticipationhangingheavyintheair.Theheadmaster,withmeasuredsteps,ascendedthestage,clutchingthemuch-awaitedlistofwinners.Afterclearingherthroat,shecommencedtheslowanddeliberateprocessofannouncingthenames.Themomentshedeclared,"Thefirst-prizewinneris...Amy!"thegymnasiumeruptedintoacacophonyofapplauseandcheers.Amy,caughtoff-guard,stoodfrozenforamoment,scarcelyabletobelieveherears.Then,underthecollectivegazeofherpeers,shemadeherwayhesitantlytowardsthestage.Theheadmaster,beamingwithpride,presentedherwiththeprize,asetoftop-notchpaintingutensils.Amy,herhandstremblingslightly,receivedtheaward,hereyeswellingupwithtearsofjoy.Inavoicechokedwithemotion,sheexpressedherprofoundgratitudetotheheadmasterandtheschool.Atthatinstant,herarduouseffortsandunwaveringdedicationwerefinallyvindicated.16升級版范文呈現ThechildrenwhohadoncemockedAmybegantoviewherthroughanewlens.Theycametorealizethataperson'strueworthisnotdeterminedbytheiroutwardappearanceorsartorialchoices,butratherbytheirinnatetalentandcreativespirit.Onebyone,theyapproachedAmy,theirfacesadornedwithgenuinesmiles,andexpressedtheirheartfeltadmirationforherartwork.Someevenhumbly