寫作技法點撥系列九、解讀信息,穩固構建圖表作文【核心點撥】常用句型1.開門見山,點明主題的常用句式(1)Lastweek,wemade/did/carriedoutasurveyon...(2)Thechartdescribes/tells/shows...(3)Asisshowninthechart,foodpricehasbeenontherise/decrease.(4)Itcanbeconcludedfromthegraphthat...(5)Wecanseefromthetablethat...

2.呈現數據,分析原因的常用句型(1)Foodpricehasincreasedby19%.(2)Thedata/statistics/figurescanbeinterpretedasfollows.(3)Thedata/statistics/figuresleadustotheconclusionthat...(4)Therearetworeasonsthataccountforthisphenomenon.3.歸納總結或發表評論的常用句型(1)Inaword,practiceisfarmoreimportantthanbookknowledge.(2)Personally/Inmyopinion/AsfarasI’mconcerned/Frommypointofview...(3)Wecandrawtheconclusionthat...【典題示例】在最近學校組織的一次社會實踐活動中,你班同學參加了一項關于青少年課余活動情況的調查,調查結果如下。請用英語寫一篇短文,簡要介紹調查情況,談談你的看法,并提出建議。【審題謀篇】文章體裁議論文中心人稱第三人稱主要時態一般現在時信息要點1.點明調查的主題;2.分析調查數據;3.表明通過數據分析所得出的結論;4.發表自己的個人觀點。【詞句構建】1.詞匯漢語一般詞匯高級詞匯偏愛likebetter_________________________超過(尤指數字上)morethan__________占……比例takeup__________prefer/haveapreferenceforoutnumberaccountfor漢語一般詞匯高級詞匯談到;涉及talkabout_____________________重視payattentionto___________________________________whenitcomesto/refertoattachimportanceto/attachemphasisto2.句式①如圖表所示,男生和女生都偏愛看電視和視頻。一般表達:ThechartshowsthatbothboysandgirlslikewatchingTVorvideosbetter.高級表達:_____________________,bothboysandgirlshaveastrongpreferenceforwatchingTVorvideos.(定語從句)Asisshowninthechart②我們應該更加重視那些能夠激勵孩子發展他們的創造力和增進身體健康的活動。一般表達:Weshouldpaymoreattentiontoactivitiesthatcanencouragechildrentodeveloptheircreativityandbuildupphysicalhealth.高級表達:________________________________________thatcanencouragechildrentodeveloptheircreativityandbuildupphysicalhealth.(attachemphasisto...;被動句)Moreemphasisshouldbeattachedtoactivities【連句成篇】

Recentlymyclasstookpartinthesocialpracticeorganizedbyourschool,inwhichweconductedasurveyamongkidsaged5—14abouttheirextra-curriculumactivities.Theresultsareasfollows.

Asisshowninthechart,bothboysandgirlshaveastrongpreferenceforwatchingTVorvideoswiththepercentagerankingfirstat100%.Moreboysthangirlsenjoyskateboardingorrollerblading,bikeridingandelectronicorcomputergamesasleisureactivities,eachaccountingfornearly40%,70%and80%.However,girlsoutnumberboysbyalmost20%whenitcomestoartandcraft.

Wecandrawaconclusionfromthissurveythataccordingtothedata,passivepursuitsarefarmorepopularnowadaysthanactiveonesandthosewhooptforcreativepastimesareintheminority.

Inmyopinion,sincetheaddictiontowatchingTVorvideosorplayingelectronicorcomputergamesislikelytodoharmtochildren’shealth,parentsshouldberesponsibleforlimitingthechildren’stimespentonpassiveleisureactivities.Inaddition,moreemphasisshouldbeattachedtoactivitiesthatcanencouragechildrentodeveloptheircreativityandbuildupphysicalhealth.【即時應用】近來某網站對人們外出旅游的頻率和目的進行了一次問卷調查,結果見下圖。請根據圖表提供的信息用英語寫一篇短文,介紹圖表所示此次調查結果,并談談你自己外出旅游的目的。詞數100個左右。文章的開頭已經給出,不計入總詞數。

Recentlyanonlinesurveyontravelinghasbeenconducted.Inthesurvey,peopleareaskedabouthowoftenandwhytheytravel,andtheresultsareasfollows.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】

Recentlyanonlinesurveyontravelinghasbeenconducted.Inthesurvey,peopleareaskedabouthowoftenandwhytheytravel,andtheresultsareasfollows.

Chart1showsthat33%ofthepeopleoftengotraveling,thereasonforwhichliesinthefactthattheyhaveenoughtimeandmoney.Nearlyhalfofthepeopledoitnowandthen,whilethosewhoseldomgoouttotravelaccountfor21%.

AsisshowninChart2,peopletravelfordifferentreasons.Thelargestpercentageofpeople,about48%,putenjoyingbeautifulnaturalsceneryinthefirstplacefortheirtravel.Overaquarterofthemenjoylearningaboutcultureandcustomsand