2023上海中考英語逆襲沖刺名校模擬真題特快專遞第五期專題09書面表達一、話題作文1．（2023·上海虹口·統考一模）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation（根據以下情境寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格）下列是學校征集的模范學生的其中四條標準，你最認同哪一條？為什么？請舉例說明。注意：1.文中不得出現姓名、校名等個人信息，否則不予評分。2.照抄閱讀語篇不得分。3.請選擇一條填在橫線上作為標題。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文BehonestAsweknow,honestyisveryimportant.Itisoneofpeople’sgoodqualities.PeopleneedhonestyandIhopeeveryoneishonestandtrusting.Lastterm,mybestfriendwantedtocopymyhomeworkbecauseheplayedcomputergamesuntilmidnightandhadnotimetodohishomework.ButIthoughtitwasagainsthonesty,soItoldhimnottocopymyhomeworkandIwouldhelphimnexttime.Honestyisquiteanimportantqualitytoaperson.SoIthinkasamodelstudent,hemustbehonest.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態：時態為“一般現在時”和“一般過去時”；③提示：本文首先要選擇其中一條標準，并通過舉例說明，可適當增加細節，突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出話題，表示誠實是很重要的，并講述為什么誠實很重要；第二步，通過舉例說明誠實的重要性；第三步，書寫結語。[亮點詞匯]①oneof……之一②playcomputergames玩電腦游戲[高分句型]①PeopleneedhonestyandIhopeeveryoneishonestandtrusting.(and連接的并列句)②Lastterm,mybestfriendwantedtocopymyhomeworkbecauseheplayedcomputergamesuntilmidnightandhadnotimetodohishomework.(because引導原因狀語從句)二、材料作文2．（2023·上海長寧·統考一模）Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Mysuggestionsforthenewschoolmates”(請根據下面的提示，以“給新同學的建議”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。)度過了幾年的初中學習生活，你終將面臨畢業，而馬上又會有新的同學即將進入你上過的初中。請根據你的親身體驗寫封短信給這些新同學，給他們提一些學習生活方面的建議，如：學習方法、參與活動、業余生活、師生關系、課后作業等等。短信的開頭2句已提供。(注意：文中不得出現任何姓名、校名以及其他標志性的具體信息，否則不予評分。)MysuggestionsforthenewschoolmatesDearfellowschoolmates,Welcometoourschool.AsI’mleavinghereforaseniorhighschool,I’dliketowriteafewlinesofsuggestionsforyou…__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文Dearfellowschoolmates,Welcometoourschool.AsI’mleavinghereforaseniorhighschool,I’dliketowriteafewlinesofsuggestionsforyou.Inyourschoollife,youshouldpreparewellforeachlesson.Inclass,youmustlistentotheteachercarefully.Andyoushouldalwaysbefriendlytoyourclassmatesandteachers.Besides,it’simportantforyoutodoyourhomeworkonyourown.Inyourdailylife,yououghttokeepahealthydiet.Also,it’snecessaryforyoutoexercisealot.Youcantakeactivepartinallkindsofactivities.Andyoushouldlearntomakegooduseofyourtime.Ihopeyouwillhaveawonderfulschoollife.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏，適當增加細節完整表述內容。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹對新同學各方面的建議；第二步，結尾總結。[亮點詞匯]①befriendlyto對……友好②allkindsof各種各樣的③preparewellfor準備好[高分句型]Also,it’snecessaryforyoutoexercisealot.（It固定句型）3．（2023·上海·九年級一模）三人行，必有我師焉。在我們的成長過程中，一定有這樣一位“老師”，他們的某種品質讓我們佩服，他們的某個行為讓我們贊嘆，或者他們說的某句話給予了我們力量……每個人都有長處，如果我們能善于發現他人的長處，借此來彌補自己的短處，那么我們將變得更加優秀。請按以下要求，寫一篇短文。內容須包含以下要點：1.Whoisyour“teacher”?2.Whatdidhe/shedo?3.Whathaveyoulearnedfromhim/her?要求：1.80~120詞；2.文中不出現真實的人名、校名。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Justastheoldsayinggoes,“Whenthreearewalkingtogether,Iamsuretofindteachersamongthem.”MybestfriendLucyissucha“teacher”whotaughtmetheimportanceofplanningahead.Lastsummer,LucyandImadeanappointmenttogoclimbingafterfinishingourhomework.ThinkingIstillhaddaystofinishit,Ikeptputtingoffdoingmyhomework.Asaresult,LucyfinisheditaheadoftimewhileIhadtoomuchhomeworktodo.IhadtobreakmypromiseandapologizetoLucy.Althoughshefeltdisappointed,sheexpressedherunderstandingandadvisedmetomakeaplanahead.Insteadofgoingclimbing,shevolunteeredinaparkatlast.Ihavelearnedifweplanaheadandcarryoutourplansaccordingly,westillhaveplentyoftimetogetthingsdoneanddomoremeaningfulthings.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態：時態主要為“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作提示已給出，要圍繞寫作提示進行寫作，并可以適當發揮。[寫作步驟]第一步，開篇點題，使用提示中所給的諺語“三人行，必有我師焉”，交代寫作目的；第二步，介紹自己難忘的經歷；第三步，介紹從這次經歷收獲了什么。[亮點詞匯]①makeanappointment預約②putoff推遲③breakmypromise違背諾言④plentyof大量的[高分句型]①Asaresult,LucyfinisheditaheadoftimewhileIhadtoomuchhomeworktodo.（while引導的比較狀語從句）②Ihavelearnedifweplanaheadandcarryoutourplansaccordingly,westillhaveplentyoftimetogetthingsdoneanddomoremeaningfulthings.（if引導的條件狀語從句）4．（2023·上海·九年級一模）你的學校正在開展主題為“Themostbeautifulvolunteer”的征文活動，請寫一篇文章介紹一位志愿者，以及她/他的事跡。文章內容可以包含以下幾個問題：1.Whoishe/she?2.Whatdidhe/shedo?(Whatdoeshe/shedo?)3.Whatcanyoulearnfromhim/her?注意：1.短文中不得出現考生的姓名、校名等個人信息，否則不予評分。2.照抄閱讀語篇不得分。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：TheMostBeautifulVolunteerLiHongisapolitegirl.Sheisbothkindandpatient.Sheisahelpfulvolunteer.Atschool,sheisalwaysreadytohelpteachersandclassmates.Atweekends,shetakespartinalotofactivities.Sheoftendoessomecleaninginthestreet.Besides,shegoestothelibrarytohelpcarrybooks.Also,shelooksafteroldpeopleinthenursinghome.WeallthinkLiHongissuchanexcellentgirlthatweshouldlearnfromher.We’dliketorecommendherforTheMostBeautifulVolunteer.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中對這位志愿者的介紹要點，適當添加細節，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。借用“寫一篇文章介紹一位志愿者，以及她/他的事跡”來引出重點介紹的內容；第二步，具體闡述寫作內容。從“品質、所做的事、對她的評價等”幾個方面重點介紹這位志愿者的具體情況；第三步，書寫結語，表達“我們想推薦她成為最美志愿者”的愿望。[亮點詞匯]①bereadytodosth.樂意做某事；②takepartin參加；③lookafter照顧；④nursinghome養老院。[高分句型]①WeallthinkLiLeiissuchanexcellentboythatweshouldlearnfromhim.（such...that引導的結果狀語從句）②Manyvolunteerscometothelibrariestodotheserviceafterwork.(動詞不定式作目的狀語)5．（2023·上海·九年級一模）每個人在人生旅途中總會遇到過困難，遭受挫折。在你遇到的那些困難和挫折時，是否也有那么一個人曾經啟發你、引領你笑著面對困境，努力戰勝困難。請根據表格提示內容，選擇其中一個對象（老師，同學，父母或者其他人）寫出你們之間的故事。Whatdifficultiesyoumetfailtheexam,loseconfidence,feellonely…Whohelpedyouteachers/friends/parents/strangers...Howdidhe/shehelpyouencouraged,offersuggestions…Whathaveyoulearnedbepositive,brave,confident...要求：1.包含所有要點，不逐字翻譯，圍繞要點適當發揮；2.書寫規范、工整，條理清晰；3.文中不得出現真實人名、地名、和校名等；4.詞數：100左右。首句供參考：Lookingbacktomypastlife,I’llneverforget…___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:Lookingbacktomypastlife,I’llneverforgetmyfriendTomwhoalwaysencouragesmewhenIwanttogiveup.Onedayonahotafternoon,weweregoingtohaveaPEtest,whichIwasnotgoodatit.Whentheteststarted,Iwasalreadyoutofenergy.SoIranmuchmoreslowlythanmyclassmates.Justatthemoment,IheardTomsaid,“Comeon!Youcandoit.Neverquit.”SuddenlyIfeltthewarmthfromthebottomofmyheart.Istartedtotrymybesttofollowhim.Atlast,Ipassedthetest.WithoutTom’sencouragement,Iwouldn’tdoitsuccessfully.AndIalsolearnedthatkeepworkinghardandneverquit.Doubtlessly,you’llsucceed.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態：時態為“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點已經給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點；注意行文連貫、條理清晰，無語法使用錯誤。[寫作步驟]第一步，開篇點題；第二步，圍繞要點進行介紹，具體包括遇到的困難、他/她是如何幫助你等方面；第三步，闡述自己從這次經歷中學習的東西。[亮點詞匯]①lookbackto回顧②giveup放棄③begoodat擅長④tryone’sbesttodosth.盡某人最大努力做某事[高分句型]①I’llneverforgetmyfriendTomwhoalwaysencouragesmewhenIwanttogiveup.（who引導的定語從句）②weweregoingtohaveaPEtest,whichIwasnotgoodatit.（which引導的非限制性定語從句）③AndIalsolearnedthatkeepworkinghardandneverquit.（that引導的賓語從句）6．（2023·上海·統考一模）中國的茶是世界上最受歡迎的飲品之一，假如你叫李華，你的學校正在舉行用英語講好中國故事的比賽，請圍繞茶的歷史、種類、加工、飲茶、益處等方面，根據下面的思維導圖，以“ChineseTeaCulture”為題，寫一篇英語短文。要求：1.語言表達準確，短文連貫、通順；2.短文應包括所有提示內容，可適當發揮，不要逐字翻譯；3.詞數80左右，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。ChineseTeaCultureGoodmorning!Ladiesandgentleman.MynameisLiHua.Iamhappytosharemytopicwithyouhere.Chineseteaisoneofthemostpopulardrinksintheworld._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________CometoenjoyChineseteaculture.Maybe,youwilllikeit.【答案】例文ChineseTeaCultureGoodmorning!Ladiesandgentleman.MynameisLiHua.Iamhappytosharemytopicwithyouhere.Chineseteaisoneofthemostpopulardrinksintheworld.Chinesepeoplehavelikeddrinkingteasinceancienttimes.Teahasahistoryofover4000yearssincetheChinesebegantogrowanddrinktea.TherearemanykindsofteainChina,suchasgreentea,blacktea,oolongteaandsoon.LongjingTeaisfamousallovertheworld.Peopleuseteapotsorteacupstodrinktea.Theyaremadeofceramics.Drinkingteaisgoodforhealth.It’ssaidthatgreenteacanpreventcancer.Whenyouaretired,acupofteacanhelpyourelax.CometoenjoyChineseteaculture.Maybe,youwilllikeit.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說明文；②時態：本文采用“一般現在時”；③提示：要求包含所有提示內容，并適當發揮。[寫作步驟]第一步，具體闡述茶的歷史、種類、加工等；第二步，闡述喝茶的好處；第三步，表達希望。[亮點詞匯]①manykindsoftea很多種茶②andsoon等等③allovertheworld全世界[高分句型]①Drinkingteaisgoodforhealth.（動名詞作主語）②It’ssaidthatgreenteacanpreventcancer.（主語從句）③Whenyouaretired,acupofteacanhelpyourelax.（when引導時間狀語從句）7．（2022春·上海金山·九年級校考一模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Myviewsononlinestudy”(以“在線學習之我見”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格)隨著在線學習模式的開啟，你對在線學習的態度是什么？你在線上學習的過程中有什么經驗可以向大家分享？請結合自己或他人在線學習的經歷，談談你對這個話題的看法。（注意：短文中不得出現任何人名、校名及其他相關信息，否則不予評分。）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：MyviewsononlinestudyThisspringournewtermdoesn’tcomeontimebecausetheepidemicbrokeout.Wehavetolearnonlineathome.WehavelessonsfromMondaytoFriday.Classesbeginat7:30andendat4:00everyday.WestudyMath,English,Chinese,PhysicsandPE.Duringonlinelearning,therearemanyproblems.Somestudentsthinkthatthiskindoflearningmethodisveryfreshandcanstimulatetheirinterestinlearning.Iftheymeetproblemsinlearning,theycanasktheteacherforhelpintime.Butsomeotherstudentsthinkit’snotgoodbecausetheycan’tconcentrateonlearningandtheycannotstudyascarefullyasinclass.Whentheirparentsgotowork,theyfeellonelyathomealone.Asforme,IlikelearningathomebecauseIneedn’tgetupearly.Ihavemoresleeptime.Iwon’thurrytoschool.ButImissmyschool,myteachersandmyclassmate.Ilookforwardtomeetingthemsoon.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；③提示：寫作中需要回答額問題已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏“內容提示”中的要點。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹在家在線學習的經歷；第二步，分享同學在線學習的經驗和看法；第三步，表達自己對在線學習的看法。[亮點詞匯]①stimulate激發②concentrateon專心于……[高分句型]①Somestudentsthinkthatthiskindoflearningmethodisveryfreshandcanstimulatetheirinterestinlearning.（that引導的賓語從句）②Whentheirparentsgotowork,theyfeellonelyathomealone.（when引導的時間狀語從句）三、電子郵件8．（2023·上海徐匯·統考一模）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation（根據以下情境寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格）。假設你是Joe，你校校報正在通過郵件評選最受歡迎的一個欄目（section）。備選欄目如下：·Schoolsports·Wordgamesandcrosswordpuzzles·Schoolclubs·BookorFilmreviews·Poemsbystudents請給校報寫封郵件，談談你的選擇，并簡要說明理由。注意：1.信中不得出現姓名、校名等個人信息，否則不予評分。2.照抄閱讀語篇不得分。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文DearEditor,I’mgladtohearthatyouareselectingthemostpopularsection.Fromthepointofmyview,myfavoriteoneistheSchoolsports.Thereareseveralreasonswhichcanaccountformyopinionasbelow.Firstofall,everyteenagerhashisownsportsidol.Inthiscolumn,wecangetthelatestsportsinformationintime.Secondly,inthiscolumn,wecanoftengetsomesportssuggestions,whichwillhelpstudentstoarrangesportsreasonablyduringschool.Yours,Joe【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應用文，為電子郵件；②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；③提示：要求根據題目要求談談你喜歡的欄目及原因。不要遺漏題目中的要點，適當添加細節，寫作時保持主謂一致，注意字數要求。[寫作步驟]第一步，首先介紹校報正在通過郵件評選最受歡迎的一個欄目的消息；第二步，談談你最喜歡哪個欄目；第三步，談談你選擇這個欄目的理由。[亮點詞匯]①Fromthepointofmyview在我看來②Firstofall首先③helpsbtodosth幫助某人做某事[高分句型]①I’mgladtohearthatyouareselectingthemostpopularsection.（賓語從句）②Thereareseveralreasonswhichcanaccountformyopinionasbelow.（定語從句）四、看圖作文9．（2023·上海楊浦·統考一模）LastFriday,Marywenttothenightmarket.Lookatthepicturesandwriteastoryinatleast80wordsonthetopicLuckyMary(上周五，Mary去了夜市。請根據圖片提示，以《幸運的瑪麗》為題，寫一篇不少于80個單詞的短文)寫作提示及要求：①下列詞匯你在寫作的過程中可能會使用到：dartn.飛鏢，teddybearn.玩具熊，gamestand游戲攤位。②關注圖片傳遞的信息與圖片之間的關聯，適當增加對話或內心獨白。③寫作內容中不得出現真實姓名和校名。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：LuckyMaryLastFriday,Marywenttothenightmarket.Whileshewaswalkingaimlessly,shesawagamestandplayingdarts.Theprizewasateddybear.Marylikedthisteddybearverymuch.Shespenttenyuanplayingwithdarts.Playingthisgamewasnottoodifficultforher.Intheend,allthreeofherdartswerehit.Thegamestandownerwassurprised.Marywontheteddybear.Shewenthomewiththeteddybearhappily.How