寫作應(yīng)用文之

申請郵件Emily假定你是李華，你希望參加學(xué)校組織的英語夏令營，請你給負責(zé)該夏令營的老師MissEvans寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括，

1.寫信目的。

2.參加理由。

3.表達期待。

注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80詞左右。

2.適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，使文章流暢連貫;

3.開頭結(jié)尾已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

(Analyzing審題):Figureoutthewritingpurpose,thetense＆theeventbeforeyoustart.ThinkThinking

letterofapplication申請信genre體裁theletterofapplicationtense時態(tài)person

人稱以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，將來時第一（liHua-I），二（MissEvans-you

)，structure結(jié)構(gòu)Thebeginning（背景+目的）Thebody主體--參加理由1:（至少拓展兩點）

2：3:Theend結(jié)語Whatarethefeaturesofthewriting?

Construct&Addstructure結(jié)構(gòu)ThebeginningThebody主體

(具體)Theend結(jié)語Thebody:AdditionaldetailedfactsMostimportantinformation

（2）Theend:（3）LessimportantThebeginning:Mostimportantinformation

（1）ThinkingPurposeHowdoweconstructaletterofapplication?ReasonsforparticipationStep2(Outlining列提綱):ArrangetherequirementsintoeachpartPara.1intention--明確申請意圖。(可補充強調(diào)個人興趣并表示對夏令營的期待）Para.2reasonsforparticipation--whydoyouapply?（注意拓展內(nèi)容的豐富和合理）Para.3expectation(Adding補充):AddsomedetailedinformationWritealetterofapplicationChecklistContent內(nèi)容要點齊全)有適當(dāng)拓展要點)Structure段落:分段落寫作（3-4段）)結(jié)構(gòu)：內(nèi)容布局合理)LanguagePolishthelanguageWritingpurposepara.1表明寫信目的01在郵件開頭直接陳述申請參加英語夏令營的意圖，簡潔明了地表達自己的需求。明確申請意圖02簡述自己對英語學(xué)習(xí)的熱情以及參加夏令營的個人興趣和期望，展現(xiàn)積極態(tài)度。強調(diào)個人興趣SomeusefulexpressionsSomeusefulexpressionsaboutpara.1writingpurposeI'm

writing

toexpressmykeeninterestin/strongdesireto....organisedby...Iamwritingtoapplyforanopportunity/position/postto.....Reasons

forparticipationpara.2體驗文化交流提升英語能力通過夏令營的沉浸式學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境，提高英語聽說讀寫能力。有機會通過英語與不同文化背景的人交流，拓展視野。促進社交能力通過與來自不同背景的人交流，增強自信心，提升個人社交能力。SomeusefulexpressionsReasons

forparticipation：Participatinginthisactivitywillhelpmeimprovemy...skillorability],whichisessentialformypersonalandprofessionalgrowth.Ibelievethis...willprovidemewithvaluableopportunitiestolearnfrom....andbroadenmyherisons.The....offersaplatformformetopracticemysocialskillsandlearnhowtointeractwithpeoplefrom....Expressionsofexpectationpara.301表達渴望和期待02期待積極回復(fù)SomeusefulexpressionsExpressionsofexpectation：IsincerelyhopethatIwillhavetheopportunityto...ItwouldbeagreathonorandIamconfidentthatIwillmakethemostofthisopportunity.Ifgiventhechanceto...,Iamcertainthatitwillnotonly...butalsohelpme....Ilookforwardtotheopportunitytolearnandhavefun.Iamextremelyeagerandlookingforwardtoreceivingyourpositivereply.Ibelievethis...willbeanunforgettableexperienceforme.Onepossiblevesion:DearMissEvans,

IamwritingtoexpressmykeeninterestinjoiningtheEnglishSummerCamporganizedbyourschool.

Theimmersiveenvironmentwillbeanexcellentopportunitytoimprovemylanguageskills,andIameagertolearnfromnativespeakersandexperiencedteachers.IbelieveparticipatinginthiscampwillnotonlyenhancemyEnglishproficiencybutalsoprovideaplatformtointeractwithpeersandbroadenmyhorizons.Iamlookingforwardtothechancetoimmersemyselfinadifferentcultureandmakenewfriends.

HowIwishyoucouldgivemethegoldenopportunity!Andyourtimelyreplycouldn'tbeappreciatedmore.

Yours

LiHuaConclusions!!!一、審題干：文體、人稱、時態(tài)二、審要點：圈畫要點，列關(guān)鍵詞三、擬提綱：確認文章段落架構(gòu)，分配句子Para1:寫作目的

把問題以最簡潔的語言呈現(xiàn)出來，開門見山Para2:圍繞要點

增補細節(jié)Para3:結(jié)尾

緊扣主題詞*亮出關(guān)鍵詞

四、加工潤色：更換高級詞匯，變簡為復(fù)，促成3-5個復(fù)合句或高級

表達

五、連句成篇，添加適當(dāng)銜接詞Showtime!Excellentworkfromstudents!DearMissEvans.

SoblissfulamIthatI'meagertoparticipateintheEnglish

SummerCamp,whichwillbeorganizedbyschool.

Firstandforemost,withthetargetofimprovingtheEnglishlauguagecapacity.IconsiderthatIcan'tmissthisopportunityspeciallytailoredtome.Additionally,notonlycanIbroadenmyhorizonsoftheworld,butalsoIcanenhanceabilityoftalkingwithothersandincreasemyconfidence.

I'dappreciateitifyoucangrantmewiththispreciouschance.Lookingforwardtoyourreply!