ALetterofApplication高考英語寫作之申請信

假定你是李華。你在網上看到一個帖子:英國青少年Eric正在尋找一名中國高中生作為語言學習伙伴。請你給他寫一封電子郵件,內容包括:1.寫信目的;2.你的優勢;3.你的期待。Thinking體裁：申請信話題：申請語言學習伙伴時態：

一般現在時(優勢,目的)一般將來時(期待被接受)人稱：第一人稱(我的優勢，我的期待)

假定你是李華。你在網上看到一個帖子:英國青少年Eric正在尋找一名中國高中生作為語言學習伙伴。請你給他寫一封電子郵件,內容包括:1.寫信目的;2.你的優勢;3.你的期待。5.謀篇布局：Para1:Para2:Para3:自我介紹(個人信息)+寫信目的“我”的優勢希望與你共同成長ThemehaveagoodcommandofEnglishmakeproficiency(熟練)inChineseandChineseculturebeeasy-going/outgoing/friendlyDearEric,

IamLiHua,aChinesehighschoolstudent.LearningthatyouarelookingforanEnglishlearnerwhosenativelanguageisChinese(現在分詞短語作狀語,其中that引導賓語從句,whose引導定語從句),Iamwritingtoexpressmywishtobecomeyourlanguageexchangepartner.

Firstly,havingstudiedEnglishforyears(現在分詞短語作狀語),Icanunderstandyoubetterculturallyandmakesurewecommunicatesmoothly(流暢地)(省略that的賓語從句).Secondly,Ihaveawiderangeof(各種各樣的)interestsandagoodknowledgeofChinese.Sotherearelotsoftopicswhichwecantalkabout(定語從句),especiallythoserelatedtoChineselanguagelearning(過去分詞短語做后置定語).

Ihopewecanbehelpfultoeachother.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua

OriginalEditionDearEric,

(寫信目的)IamLiHua,aChinesehighschoolstudent.LearningthatyouarelookingforanEnglishlearnerwhosenativelanguageisChinese,Iamwritingtoexpressmywishto

beyourlanguagelearningpartner.(你的優勢)Ipossessseveraladvantagesthatwouldmakemeasuitablepartnerforyou.Firstly,

asanativeChinesespeaker,Ihaveadeepunderstandingofmyownlanguageaswellasthecultureandhistorybehindit,whichcangreatlyassistyouinimprovingyourChinese.Additionally,

IhavebeenstudyingEnglishforseveralyearsandameagertoenhancemyproficiencyfurther.Lastbutnotleast,

Iamapatientandresponsibleperson.

Iwillbededicatedtoprovidingyouwiththebestlearningexperienceandsupport.

(你的期待)

IsincerelyhopethatIwillbegiventhisopportunity.I’mconfidentthatthislanguageexchangecouldbemutually(相互的)beneficial.

Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua

strengthsactionsStep1:申請信特點及寫作步驟題型特點：高考中常見的申請信主題通常與學生學習和生活息息相關。如：申請參加某活動、申請當志愿者、申請某一社團職位等。Structure:Para.1Para.2Para.3開頭正文結尾：①Identity(身份)②Intention(寫信目的)①②strengths:Initially,...Furthermore...actions:enabletodo...過渡句/中心句:申請信特點及寫作步驟題型特點：高考中常見的申請信主題通常與學生學習和生活息息相關。如：申請參加某活動、申請當志愿者、申請某一社團職位等。Structure:Para.1Para.2Para.3開頭正文結尾：①Identity(身份)②Intention(寫信目的)①②strengths:Initially,...Furthermore...actions:enabletodo...過渡句/中心句:TherearetworeasonswhyIamqualifiedforthisjob.IamcomfidentthatIamequaltothispositon.申請信特點及寫作步驟題型特點：高考中常見的申請信主題通常與學生學習和生活息息相關。如：申請參加某活動、申請當志愿者、申請某一社團職位等。Structure:Para.1Para.2Para.3開頭正文結尾：①Identity(身份)②Intention(寫信目的)①②strengths:Initially,...Furthermore...actions:enabletodo...過渡句/中心句:wishingachance

Mainpart:個人優勢和能做的事情Expanding(詞句積累）Step2experienceIhaverich/sufficient/abundantexperiencein…Ihaveworked/volunteeredin...for+時間段Iamexperiencedin...

skillsIamqualified(有資格)for...Ihaveagoodcommandof我精通...Iamskilledat(擅長)/amexpertin(擅長)/amfamiliarwith(熟悉)personalityAsanoutgoingperson,IlikecommunicatingwithIamsoeasy-goingandfriendlythat......模板Dear…,I’mLiHua,astudent….Learningthatyouareinneedof+招聘崗位，Ican’twaittoapplyforit.IamconfidentthatIamequaltothejob.Tobeginwith,I+本人優勢1.Besides,I+本人優勢2.Mostimportantly,本人優勢3.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoconsideration.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yours,LiHua我是李華，...的學生。了解到你需要…，我等不及要申請了。我相信我能勝任這份工作。首先，我+本人優勢1。此外，我+本人優勢2。最重要的是，本人優勢3.如果您能考慮我的申請，我將不勝感激。期待盡快收到您的來信。Imitating(仿寫）Step3首段仿寫1.我是李華，一名來自一班的高二學生，了解到我們學校需要志愿者接待外國交換生，我等不及要申請了。I’mLiHua,aseniortwostudentfromClass1.Learningthatourschoolisinneedofvolunteerstoreceiveforeignexchangestudents，Ican’twaittoapplyforit.2.我是李華，一名在倫敦學習的中國學生，了解到你們中國畫展覽需要志愿者，我等不及要申請了。I'mLiHua,aChinesestudent(whois)studyinginLondon.LearningthatyouareinneedofvolunteersfortheChinesepaintingexhibition,Ican'twaittoapplyforit.3.我是李華，一名乒乓球愛好者，了解到我們學校的乒乓球俱樂部在招收（recruit）新成員，我等不及要申請了。I’mLiHua,atabletennislover.Learningthatourschooltabletennisclubisrecruitingnewmembers,Ican'twaittoapplyforit.中間段要點梳理(本人優勢）

1.我精通/擅長…Ihaveagoodcommandof…【進階版:我精通+我能做的事】我精通…，這使我能…Ihaveagoodcommandof…,whichenablesmetodo…我精通…，所以我做…沒問題.①Ihavesuchagoodknowledgeof…thatIhavenotroubledoing…②Withagoodcommandof…,Ihavenodifficultydoing…【仿】我精通英語和中文。Ihaveagoodcommandof(both)EnglishandChinese.【仿1】我精通英語和中文，這使我能和游客順暢地交流。Ihaveagoodcommandof(both)EnglishandChinese,whichenablesmetocommunicatewithvisitorsfluently/smoothly.中間段要點梳理(本人優勢）

1.我精通/擅長…Ihaveagoodcommandof…【進階版:我精通+我能做的事】我精通…，這使我能…Ihaveagoodcommandof…,whichenablesmetodo…我精通…，所以我做…沒問題.①Ihavesuchagoodknowledgeof…thatIhavenotroubledoing…②Withagoodcommandof…,Ihavenodifficultydoing…【仿】我精通英語和中文。Ihaveagoodcommandof(both)EnglishandChinese.【仿2】我精通英語和中文，所以我與游客交流沒問題.①IhavesuchagoodcommandofEnglishandChinesethatIhavenotroublecommunicatingwithvisitors.中間段要點梳理(本人優勢）

1.我精通/擅長…Ihaveagoodcommandof…【進階版:我精通+我能做的事】我精通…，這使我能…Ihaveagoodcommandof…,whichenablesmetodo…我精通…，所以我做…沒問題.①Ihavesuchagoodknowledgeof…thatIhavenotroubledoing…②Withagoodcommandof…,Ihavenodifficultydoing…【仿】我精通英語和中文。Ihaveagoodcommandof(both)EnglishandChinese.【仿2】我精通英語和中文，所以我與游客交流沒問題.②

WithagoodcommandofChineseandEnglish,Ihavenodifficulty/troublecommunicatingwithvisitors.中間段要點梳理(本人優勢）

2.我了解…Iamfamiliarwith…【進階版:我了解+我能做的事】我了解…，這使得我能…Ihaveacquiredagoodknowledgeof…,whichenablesmetodo…【仿】我很了解中國畫。Iamfamiliarwith/

haveagoodknowledgeofChinesepaintings.【仿1】我很了解中國畫,這使得我能給游客提供詳細的講解。IhaveacquiredagoodknowledgeofChinesepainting,whichenablesmetoofferdetailedexplanationstovisitors.中間段要點梳理(本人優勢）

2.我了解…Iamfamiliarwith…【進階版:我了解+我能做的事】我了解…，這使得我能…Ihaveacquiredagoodknowledgeof…,whichenablesmetodo…喜歡…,我了解…，這無疑有助于…Interestedin…/Asa…lover,Ihaveacquiredagoodknowledgeof…,whichwillundoubtedlyhelpto…【仿】我很了解中國畫。Iamfamiliarwith/

haveagoodknowledgeofChinesepaintings.【仿2】作為一名京劇愛好者，我對其很了解，這無疑有助于讓外國人更加了解中國的文化。AsaPekingOperalover/InterestedinPekingOpera,Ihaveacquiredagoodknowledgeofit,whichwillundoubtedlyhelptomakeforeignersknowmoreaboutChineseculture.中間段要點梳理(本人優勢）

3.我在…方面有經驗

Iamexperiencedin…/Ihavemuchexperiencein…【進階版:經驗+我能做的事】我在…方面有經驗，這使得做某事對我來說很容易…Ihavemuchexperiencein…,whichmakesiteasyformeto…【仿】我在擔任志愿者方面很有經驗。Ihavemuchexperienceinservingasavolunteer.【仿1】我在參加比賽方面有經驗，這使得我能容易適應艱苦的訓練。Ihavemuchexperienceinparticipatinginsuchcompetitions,whichmakesiteasyformetoadapttohardtraining.中間段要點梳理(本人優勢）

3.我在…方面有經驗

Iamexperiencedin…/Ihavemuchexperiencein…【進階版:經驗+我能做的事】我在…方面有經驗，這使得做某事對我來說很容易…Ihavemuchexperiencein…,whichmakesiteasyformeto…我曾經…，這使我在…方面具有了相關的經驗。Ihaveeverdonesth.,whichequipsmewithrelevantexperience.【仿】我在擔任志愿者方面很有經驗。Ihavemuchexperienceinservingasavolunteer.【仿2】我曾經多次擔任過志愿者，這使我在解決問題方面具有了相關的經驗。Ihaveeverworkedasavolunteerformanytimes,whichequipsmewithrelevantexperiencein

dealingwithproblems.中間段要點梳理(本人優勢）

4.我是…樣的人

Iam+adj.(optimistic/independent/energetic/hard-working=diligent/warm-hearted/cooperative/patient/determined)【進階版:個性+我能做的事】我…樣，能夠…Being+adj.,Iamableto…/Being+adj.enablesmeto…【仿】我樂觀且獨立，能夠適應新環境。Beingoptimisticandindependent,I’mabletoadapttothenewenvironment.Beingoptimisticandindependentenablesmetoa