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好作文要求1.內容完整無疏漏。2.語句流暢不拼湊。3.語法正確無錯誤。4.書寫規范不潦草。請你評分I

am15-years-old.Ilikeplaybasketball.Ilikeeathealthfood,suchasvegetable,fruits.theycanmakemekeephealth.IfavoritesubjectismathandChinese.Iverylikemath.Becauseitinteresting.Mymathteacherusuallypatientwithme.Idon’tlikechemistry.ItdifficultforI.Iwanttomakesomefriend.Didyouwantmakefriendwithme?請你挑錯I

am15-years-old.

Ilikeplaybasketball.Ilikeeathealthfood,suchasvegetable,fruits.theycanmakemekeephealth.IfavoritesubjectismathandChinese.Iverylikemath.Becauseitinteresting.Mymathteacherusuallypatientwithme.Idon’tlikechemistry.ItdifficultforI.

Iwanttomakesomefriend.Didyouwantmakefriendwithme?請你挑錯I

am15-years-old.

Ilikeplaybasketball.Ilikeeathealthfood,suchasvegetable,fruits.theycanmakemekeephealth.IfavoritesubjectismathandChinese.Iverylikemath.Becauseitinteresting.Mymathteacherusuallypatientwithme.Idon’tlikechemistry.ItdifficultforI.

Iwanttomakesomefriend.Didyouwantmakefriendwithme?請你糾錯I

am15-years-old.Ilikeplaybasketball.Ilikeeathealthfood,suchasvegetable,fruits.theycanmakemekeephealth.IfavoritesubjectismathandChinese.Iverylikemath.Becauseitinteresting.Mymathteacherusuallypatientwithme.Idon’tlikechemistry.ItdifficultforI.Iwanttomakesomefriend.Didyouwantmakefriendwithme?15yearsoldplayingeatinghealthyvegetables,fruithealthyMyarelikemathverymuchIt’sisusuallypatientIt‘sdifficultformesomefriendsDo

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易錯點1.名詞的單復數問題。2.主謂一致問題。3.詞類誤用問題。4.Chinglish問題。5.時態、語法問題。Howtodescribeaperson?1.Whoishe/she?2.Howoldishe/she?3.Whatdoeshe/shelooklike?4.Whatishis/hercharacter?5.somethingelseWhichisbetter?1.天下大雨，他沒趕上校車。A.Hemissedtheschoolbusbecauseoftheheavyrain.B.Itrainedheavily,sohedidn’tcatchtheschoolbus.2.我們應當保護環境。Aweshouldprotecttheenvironment.BIt’sourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.3.我希望你能幫我A.I’mlookingforwardtoyourhelp.B.Ihopeyoucanhelpme.4.我不吃垃圾食品。A.Idon’teatjunkfood.B.Istayawayfromjunkfood.5.我們應該努力取得好成績。A.We’resupposedtotryourbesttogetgoodgrades.B.Weshouldworkhardtogetgoodgrades.√√√√√Haveatrytowriteacomposition.MybestfriendPossibleversionMybestfriendisPeter.Heis15yearsold.Heisofmediumbuild.Hehasshortblackhair.Helovesplayingpingpong.Heisgoodatmath.Heoftenhelpsotherpeople.Ilikemyfriend.Tryagain1.寫一篇80詞左右的短文，倡議健康生活，從三個方面說明保持健康。foodablanceddiet,vegetables,fruit,lessmeat…exercisedomoreexercise,takeawalk,playballgames…happinesskeephappy,makefriends,smile…Good WaystoKeepHealthyItisveryimportantforustokeephealthy.Butdoyouknowthewaystokeepushealthy?

2.請就你喜歡的寵物，如貓、狗等寫一篇70-80字的短文，為什么喜歡它，介紹大家認識你的寵物