Unit

3

My

School學以致用·主題寫作實戰演練

假設你是李華，下面是你的美國筆友Tom發來的電子郵件，請你仔細閱讀郵件并回復他。Dear

Li

Hua,

How

are

you

doing?

I

want

to

know

about

your

new

school

and

your

school

life.

Here

are

some

questions.

What's

your

school

like?

What

is

your

favourite

place

and

why?

Could

you

please

tell

me

about

them?

Write

to

me.Yours,Tom要求：

1.詞數70左右，郵件開頭、結尾已給出，不計入總詞數;

2.文中不能出現真實的姓名及校名；

3.內容包含所有要點，語句通順，書寫規范，可適當發揮。Dear

Tom,

I

am

happy

to

get

your

email.

Let

me

tell

you

about

my

new

school

and

my

school

life.

My

school

is

very

big

and

clean.

The

classroom

building

is

in

the

middle

of

the

school

with

four

floors.

There

is

a

large

garden

in

front

of

the

classroom

building.

It's

my

favourite

place

because

there

are

many

beautiful

flowers

in

the

garden.

On

the

left

of

the

classroom

building

is

the

sports

field.

My

classmates

and

I

often

do

exercises

together

on

the

sports

field.

There

are

many

trees

around

my

school.

It

is

really

beautiful.

I

like

my

school

very

much.

How

about

yours?

Please

write

to

me

soon.Yours

truly,Li

Hua單元主題寫作

寫作能力拓展導練一、單元主題詞匯·高頻詞匯梳理二、教材佳句仿寫·高分句式訓練1.教材原句：What's

your

new

classroom

like,

Peter?仿寫：你的房間是什么樣的？_______________________What's

your

room

like?2.教材原句：There

are

40

student

desks

in

the

room.仿寫：運動場上有10名教師。_________________________________________There

are

ten

teachers

on

the

sports

field.3.教材原句：It's

my

favourite

place

because

there

are

many

kinds

of

food.仿寫：我最喜歡劉老師，因為她很友善。____________________________________________I

like

Mrs

Liu

best

because

she

is

very

kind.4.教材原句：How

about

your

school?仿寫：你的新朋友怎么樣？_____________________________How

about

your

new

friends?5.教材原句：Your

school

sounds

fun!仿寫：這個主意聽起來很棒！_______________________The

idea

sounds

great!三、以讀促寫·主題寫作典例剖析

參考詞匯：示意圖

diagram；實驗室lab

要求：1.語言通順、準確；

2.要點齊全，可適當發揮；

3.詞數不少于70。_________________Step

1

謀篇布局指導第一段：學校概貌①

This

is

a

diagram

of

our

school.②

Our

school

is...第二段：校園布局①

...

is

in

the

middle

of

...②

There

is

...

in

front

of

...③

On

the

left

of

...

is

...

and

...

is

on

the

right

of

...第三段：學校師生①

Our

teachers

are

...②

Our

classmates

are...第四段：對學校的評價Our

school

is

a

good

place

to

study.續表Step

2

高階詞句應用1.Our

school

has

many

trees.（用存現句升格）___________________________________2.Our

classmates

are

friendly.（增加細節，擴寫句子）_______________________________________________________There

are

many

trees

in

our

school.Our

classmates

are

friendly

and

we

often

help

each

other.Step

3

佳作展示評析This

is

a

diagram

of

our

school.

Our

school

is

big

and

clean.

Our

classroom

building

is

in

the

middle

of

our

school.

There

is

a

garden

in

front

of

the

classroom

building.

On

the

left

of

the

garden

is

our

library

and

our

lab

is

on

the

right

of

the

garden.

There

is

a

large

playground

behind

①②③④⑤這些介詞（短語）的使用，清晰準確地描述了學校的布局，更有空間感。the

classroom

building.

There

are

many

trees

in

our

school.

Our

teachers

are

very

kind

and

we

all

like

them.

Our

classmates

are

friendly

and

we

often

help

each

other.

Our

school

is

a

good

place

to

study.

We

all

like

it.⑥存現句是本單元的重點語法，文中正確使用了存現句，體現了學以致用。

本篇文章根據圖片提示，準確描寫了學校的情況，思路清晰，層次感強。續表學以致用·主題寫作實戰演練

假設你是李華，下面是你的美國筆友Tom發來的電子郵件，請你仔細閱讀郵件并回復他。Dear

Li

Hua,

How

are

you

doing?

I

want

to

know

about

your

new

school

and

your

school

life.

Here

are

some

questions.

What's

your

school

like?

What

is

your

favourite

place

and

why?

Could

you

please

tell

me

about

them?

Write

to

me.Yours,Tom要求：

1.詞數70左右，郵件開頭、結尾已給出，不計入總詞數;

2.文中不能出現真實的姓名及校名；

3.內容包含所有要點，語句通順，書寫規范，可適當發揮。Dear

Tom,

I

am

happy

to

get

your

email.

Let

me

tell

you

about

my

new

school

and

my

school

life.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

My

school

is

very

big

and

clean.

The

classroom

building

is

in

the

middle

of

the

school

with

four

floors.

There

is

a

large

garden

in

front

of

the

classroom

building.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

How

about

yours?

Please

write

to

me

soon.Yours

truly,Li

Hua

It's

my

favourite

place

because

there

are

many

beautiful

flowers

in

the

garden.

On

the

left