專題03提綱作文之咨詢建議類近三年考情分析近三年考情分析年份地區話題命題形式2023年湖北恩施以“HowtoLiveaHealthyLife”為題的征文比賽提綱作文四川雅安以“Howtomakeoursparetimemoremeaningful?”為主題，用英語寫一篇演講稿提綱作文山東濱州你的英國筆友Amy發來郵件，向你訴說她最近的困擾。請你根據郵件內容用英語給她回封郵件，談一談你對這問題的見解。提綱作文江蘇蘇州主題是“HowtomakeSuzhoumorebeautiful”,以“Startingfrommeandnow”為題向中外朋友介紹你的想法提綱作文2022年吉林以“LearningtoManageOurOwnLives”為題寫一篇短文提綱作文黑龍江齊齊哈爾以“HowtoMakeMyselfBetter”為題，談談你將如何塑造更好的自己。提綱作文四川南充的英國朋友Tracy的學校即將開設特色選修課程，她正在考慮是否選修漢語，來信詢問你的建議。提綱作文2021年遼寧簡單描述一下我們的考試壓力主要體現在哪些方面，并針對此種情況給出合理的建議。提綱作文重慶以“MyCreativeEnglishHomework”為主題的征文活動，提出合理建議提綱作文寫作方法指導寫作方法指導咨詢建議類書面表達四步法：1.首先要知道給出建議的格式：常用書信格式；2.然后寫出提建議的原因；3.最后根據具體的情況給出明確的建議；4.寫出希望。寫作模板寫作模板Inrecentdays,wehavetofacetheproblem____________A,whichisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.First,____________（說明A的現狀）.Second,

____________（舉例進一步說明現狀）.

FacedwithA,weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestodealwiththesituation.Foronething,____________（建議一）.Foranother____________（建議二）.Finally,____________（建議三）.

常用表達常用表達首段：I’msorrytohearthatyouhavedifficultyindoing....Don’tworryaboutit!HerearesomeusefulsuggestionsI’dliketosharewithyou.主體段：1.主題句：Actually,ifyouarecareful,you’llfindvarioussimplewaystohelpyousolvetheproblem.（其實，如果你細心，你會找到各種簡單的方法來幫助你解決問題。）2.要點：Firstandforemost,It’s+adj/n.+for/ofsb.todo....Sothat...（首先也是最重要的，是......）Inaddition,youaresupposedtodo...,whichcannotonly...butalso...(此外，你應該做...，這不僅可以...而且...)What’smore,youhadbetter(not)do...,because...(更重要的是，你最好（不）做……，因為……)Lastbutnotleast,Isuggestyou(should)do...,fromwhich,you’reabletodo...(最后但并非最不重要的一點是，我建議您（應該）做......，從中，您可以做到......)尾段：Withthesesuggestionscarriedout,Ifirmlybelieveyouwillimprove...alot.(有了這些建議，我堅信你會進步很多。)Isincerelyhopethatmysuggestionscanbeofgreathelp.Lookingforwardtoyourearliestreply.(衷心希望我的建議能對您有所幫助。期待您的早日回復。)中考真題精講中考真題精講（2023·湖北恩施·中考真題）自教育部等十七部門聯合印發《全面加強和改進新時代學生心理健康工作專項行動計劃（2023—2025）》以來，越來越多的人開始關注青少年的健康。某英語網站擬舉辦一次以“HowtoLiveaHealthyLife”為題的征文比賽。作為青少年，我們該如何健康生活？請根據下表要點提示，從如何保持身體健康和心理健康兩方面寫一篇英語短文投稿。身體健康心理健康堅持鍛煉擁有自信保證睡眠保持好心情…………寫作要求：（1）文中必須包含表格中所給的要點，另對任意一方面補充一條你自己的觀點；（2）條理清晰，字跡工整，詞數不少于80。開頭已經給出，但不計入總詞數；（3）文中不得出現真實人名和地名等相關信息。參考詞匯：physicalhealth身體健康

psychologicalhealth心理健康HowtoLiveaHealthyLifeNowadays,moreandmorepeoplehavecometofocusonteenagers’health.Thefollowingsaremyopinionsabouthowweteenagersliveahealthylife.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文HowtoLiveaHealthyLifeNowadays,moreandmorepeoplehavecometofocusonteenagers’health.Thefollowingaremyopinionsabouthowweteenagersliveahealthylife.Firstly,wemustkeephealthy.Weshouldhaveabalanceddiet.Thismeanseatingdifferentkindsoffoodandlotsoffreshfruitandvegetables.We’dbetterplaysportsatleastonehoureveryday.Exercisemakesusstrongerandhelpsusrelax.Weshouldgetatleasteighthours’sleepatnight,sothatwecanhaveenoughenergytostudy.Secondly,wehavetobementallyhealthy.Wemustbeconfidentandhavegoodmoodseveryday.Finally,behappy.Happinessisimportantforourhealth.Ifyouareworriedaboutsomething,trytosolveitassoonaspossible.Tosumup,healthiswealth.Keepinghealthyisveryimportantforus.Ihopeeverybodycanliveahealthylife.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；③提示：要求以“HowtoLiveaHealthyLife”為題，結合提示內容進行寫作，適當添加細節，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出自己對青少年如何過健康生活的看法；第二步，具體闡述寫作內容，從身體健康和心理健康兩個方面重點介紹；第三步，書寫結語。[亮點詞匯]①keephealthy保持健康②differentkindsof不同種類的③beworriedabout擔心④sumup總結[高分句型]①Weshouldgetatleasteighthours’sleepatnight,sothatwecanhaveenoughenergytostudy.（sothat引導的目的狀語從句）②Ifyouareworriedaboutsomething,trytosolveitassoonaspossible.（if引導的條件狀語從句）（2023·四川雅安·統考中考真題）自從國家推行“雙減”政策（“DoubleReduction”policy）以來，學生有了更多的課余時間開展課外活動。你校英語社團將舉辦“怎樣讓我們的課余生活更有意義？”的演講比賽，請你以“Howtomakeoursparetimemoremeaningful?”為主題，用英語寫一篇演講稿，分享你的課外活動和感受。內容要點：1.參加志愿者活動，如：看望老人，……；2.參加俱樂部，如：音樂俱樂部，……；3.……（至少補充兩項活動）；4.你的感受。注意：1.詞數80-100，已經給出的部分不計入總詞數；2.演講稿必須包括所有要點，可以適當發揮，使其連貫、通順；3.文中不得出現真實人名、校名和地名等相關信息。Dearfriends,Sincethe“DoubleReduction”policywascarriedout,wehavehadmoresparetimetoenjoyafter-schoolactivities.NowletmetellyouhowImakemysparetimemoremeaningful.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou.【答案】例文Dearfriends,Sincethe“DoubleReduction”policywascarriedout,wehavehadmoresparetimetoenjoyafter-schoolactivities.NowletmetellyouhowImakemysparetimemoremeaningful.First,wecantakepartinmorevoluntarywork,suchasvisitingtheoldandchattingwiththem.Second,wecanjoindifferentclubsbecausedifferentkindsofactivitiescanenrichoursparetime.Third,it’sgoodtohelpourparentsdosomehouseworktoshowourloveforthem.Fourth,itisagoodchanceforustogetclosetonatureandrelaxourselves.Inmyopinion,wecandosomesportstomakeusstrongerandhealthier.Inaword,let’smakefulluseofoursparetimeandpromoteourliteracy.That’sall.Thankyou.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇演講稿；②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；③提示：要求以“Howtomakeoursparetimemoremeaningful?”為主題，結合提示內容進行寫作，適當添加細節，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出對下文業余時間的介紹；第二步，具體闡述寫作內容。從“參加志愿者活動、參加俱樂部、幫助父母、親近自然”幾個方面重點介紹；第三步，介紹自己的觀點和感受。[亮點詞匯]①takepartin參加②suchas例如③differentkindsof不同種類的④makefulluseof充分利用[高分句型]①Second,wecanjoindifferentclubsbecausedifferentkindsofactivitiescanenrichoursparetime.（because引導的原因狀語從句）②Inaword,let’smakefulluseofoursparetimeandpromoteourliteracy.（let’sdosth句型）（2023·山東濱州·統考中考真題）假如你是李華，近日你的英國筆友Amy發來郵件，向你訴說她最近的困擾；自己體型微胖，想通過節食減肥，以更美的面貌進入新的學校學習。請你根據郵件內容用英語給她回封郵件，談一談你對這問題的見解。參考詞匯:diet(v.節食),appearance(n.外貌),innerbeauty(內在美)DearLiHua,IhavebeenabitlargerthanothergirlssinceIwaslittle.Foralongtime,thisreallytroubledme.IfeelmoreworriedbecauseIwillstartmyseniorhighschoollifesoon!IamafraidthatthestudentsinthenewschoolwilllaughatmebecauseIam“big”.Idecidetolookmorebeautiful,soIwanttoloseweightbydieting.Whatdoyouthinkofmyplan?Canyougivemesomeadvice?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,Amy要求：1.要點齊全，并適當發揮；2.文中不得出現真實姓名與校名；3.卷面整潔，書寫美觀，可適當加2—3分；4.80詞左右。開頭與結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。DearAmy,

Ihavereceivedandreadyourletter,inwhichyousaidyouwantedtoloseweightbydieting.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,

LiHua【答案】例文DearAmy,

Ihavereceivedandreadyourletter,inwhichyousaidyouwantedtoloseweightbydieting.Asyoumentionedintheletter,Ihavesomeadviceforyou.Firstly,thereisnoneedtocareaboutwhatothersthinkofyou.Themostimportantthingistobeconfidentandpositive,asitwillhelpyouhavecouragetofaceandovercomeyourtrouble.Innerbeautyismoreimportantthanappearance.Secondly,keepahealthydiet.Stayawayfromhigh-fatfoodandeatmorefruitandvegetablesinstead.Abalanceddietisveryimportantforlosingweight.Thirdly,doingproperexerciseisnecessary.You’dbettergetupearlyinthemorninganddosomesportsregularly.Themoreyouexercise,thehealthieryou’llbe.Ihopemyadvicewillbehelpfultoyou.Yours,

LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應用文，為電子郵件；②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；③提示：根據郵件內容提出建議，并適當添加細節，寫作時保持主謂一致，注意字數要求。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出話題，提出要給Amy的建議；第二步，具體闡述給Amy同學的三個建議；第三步，總結全文，表達期望。[亮點詞匯]①thereisnoneedtodosth沒必要做某事②stayawayfrom…與……保持距離③havecouragetodosth有勇氣做某事[高分句型]①Ihopemyadvicewillbehelpfultoyou.（賓語從句）②Stayawayfromhigh-fatfoodandeatmorefruitandvegetablesinstead.（祈使句）（2023·江蘇蘇州·統考中考真題）HappyHomeClub本期的主題是“HowtomakeSuzhoumorebeautiful”，你打算以“Startingfrommeandnow”為題向中外朋友介紹你的想法，請你用英語寫一篇發言稿，內容包括：1.觸動你的一件事情；2.這件事給你的啟示；3.你的倡議。注意：1.詞數：100左右。2.內容完整（照抄閱讀語篇不得分）3.文中不得出現與考生相關的真實校名和姓名等信息。Startingfrommeandnow________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文StartingfrommeandnowLastweekend,Iwenttothecityparkwithmyclassmates.Whenwegotthere,wewereamazedthatthereweredifferentkindsofrubbishontheground.Wefeltverysadaboutthat.Thecityisourhome,soweshouldtryourbesttokeepthecityclean.Firstofall,weshouldprotectourenvironment.Don’tthrowrubbisharoundorspitanywhere.We’dbetterplantmoretreestomaketheairclean.Second,wearesupposedtobefriendlyandhelpfultoothers.Third,weoughttoobeythetrafficrules.Don’tridetoofastorplayonthestreet.Lastbutnotleast,remembertosaveenergy.Turnoffthelightsandtapsintime.Aslongaswetryourbestandstartingfrommeandnow,IbelieveSuzhouwillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇演講稿；②時態：時態為“一般現在時”和“一般過去時”；③提示：要求根據題干中的提示介紹如何讓自己的家鄉變得更美，適當增加細節。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹觸動你的一件事情以及這件事情給你的啟示；第二步，為了使蘇州變得更美，介紹你的倡議；第三步，書寫結語。表達“希望家鄉會更美麗”的愿望。[亮點詞匯]①differentkindsof各種各樣的②besupposedtodosth.應該做某事③remembertodosth.記得做某事④intime及時[高分句型]①Whenwegotthere,wewereamazedthatthereweredifferentkindsofrubbishontheground.（when引導時間狀語從句）②We’dbetterplantmoretreestomaketheairclean.（“sb.hadbetterdosth.”表建議的句型）③IbelieveSuzhouwillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.（賓語從句）（2022·吉林·中考真題）隨著年齡的增長，青少年需要在生活中不斷提高自我管理能力，以便在衣、食、住、行等方面更好地管理自己。請以“LearningtoManageOurOwnLives”為題，用英語寫一篇短文。內容包括：1.結合實際，談談在生活中提高自我管理能力的重要性。2.列舉在生活中自我管理能力薄弱的現象(至少兩個)，并提出合理化建議。3.發出在生活中提高自我管理能力的號召。寫作要求：1.語言流暢，層次清晰，內容可以適當發揮。2.詞數80-100，開頭與結尾部分已經給出，不計入總詞數。3.書寫規范，卷面整潔。4.文中不能出現考生姓名和學校名稱。LearningtoManageOurOwnLivesThesedays,weChineseteenagersoftendependonourparentsinourdailylives.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inshort,theearlierwemanageourownlives,thebetteritisforourfuture.【答案】例文LearningtoManageOurOwnLivesThesedays,weChineseteenagersoftendependonourparentsinourdailylives.wecan’tdealwithdifficultiesbyourselves.Soit’simportantforustolearntomanageourownlives.Ithinkourparentsshouldbelieveinusandneverdoeverythingforus.Sometimesit’sOKtogiveusproperadviceandtheyshouldallowustomakeourowndecisions.Also,Ithinkparentsshouldencourageustofacetheproblemsbravelyandtrytosolvethem.Forme,Iseldomdidhouseworkinthepast,becauseIthoughtitisourparents’work.Thisisawrongopinion.Weshouldlearntodohouseworklikesweepingthefloorandtakingouttherubbish.Ihardlycookedeither.Whenmymotherwasonbusiness,IrealizedImustlearntocookbymyself.Afterthat,Ifindthatcookingisnotasdifficultasitseems.Inshort,theearlierwemanageourownlives,thebetteritisforourfuture.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。以“學習管理我們自己的生活”為題寫一篇短文。2.寫作指導：本文采用一般現在時和一般過去時，人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主。本文分為四段式：第一段引出主題；第二段談談在生活中提高自我管理能力的重要性；第三段列舉在生活中自我管理能力薄弱的現象；第四段發出在生活中提高自我管理能力的號召。寫作時保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標點錯誤。（2022·黑龍江齊齊哈爾·中考真題）中國共產主義青年團已經走過了百年歷程。作為新時代青年中的一員，未來屬于我們，希望寄予我們，奮斗的青春更美麗。請以“HowtoMakeMyselfBetter”為題，談談你將如何塑造更好的自己。要求：1.字跡工整，段落清晰，表達清楚，語法正確，行文連貫；2.思維導圖中的提示詞僅供參考，可適當發揮；3.詞數：80-100詞。HowtoMakeMyselfBetter________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文HowtoMakeMyselfBetterAsateenager,IthinkIshouldworkhardertomakemyselfbetter.Firstofall,itisimportanttolivehealthily.Iwilleatmorefruitandvegetables.Iwillalsotakeexerciseeverydayandgetenoughsleep.What’smore,Ishouldworkhardatallmysubjects.I’llnotbeafraidtofacechallengesanymoreandtrymybesttosolvetheproblems.Besides,itisnecessarytohaveagoodrelationshipwithfamilyandfriends.Lastbutnotleast,it’sourresponsibilitytotakecareofourparents.I’llalsodowhatIcantohelpotherpeople.Bydoingthese,Iwillmakemyselfbetterandbetter.【解析】1.題干解讀：本文以“HowtoMakeMyselfBetter”并結合思維導圖中的提示詞寫一篇文章，介紹如何成為更好的自己。2.寫作指導：本文以一般將來時為主，人稱以第一人稱為主。第一段引入話題；第二段從不同的方面介紹如何成為更好的自己；第三段進行總結。寫作時運用不同的句式和短語使文章層次清晰、邏輯清楚，做到無單詞拼寫和語法錯誤。（2022·四川南充·中考真題）假如你是李華，你的英國朋友Tracy的學校即將開設特色選修課程，她正在考慮是否選修漢語，來信詢問你的建議。請你根據所給提示給她寫封回信。要點：（1）給出你的建議；（2）談談學習漢語的重要性；（3）結合自身經歷，介紹至少2種學習漢語的方法。要求：1.必須包含所給要點，可適當發揮；2.語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規范；3.文中不得出現真實人名、校名或地名；4.詞數100左右(開頭和結尾已經給出，不計入總詞數)。DearTracy,I’msogladtohearfromyou.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopemyadvicecanhelpyou.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearTracy,I’msogladtohearfromyou.KnowingyouhaveaninterestinChinese,IsuggestyouchoosetheChinesecourse.WiththedevelopmentofChina,Chineseisbecomingmoreandmorepopular.LearningChineseisnotonlyawaytocommunicate,butalsoachancetoadmireChineseculture.AsaChinese,IhavebeenlearningChineseformanyyears.Ihavemuchexperiencetosharewithyou.Inmyopinion,therearemanywaystolearnChinese.It’susefultoreadChinesebooksandlistentoChinesesongs.What’smore,youaresupposedtojoinaChineseclubtopracticeyourspokenChinese.Learningisalifelongjourney.Keeppracticingeveryday,thenitwillbringsomethingnew.Ihopemyadvicecanhelpyou.Yours,LiHua【解析】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇書信作文。針對Tracy是否選修漢語給出建議，談談學習漢語的重要性并給出學習漢語的方法。注意要點齊全，可適當發揮。2.寫作指導：寫作時要以第一和第二人稱來行文，時態以一般現在時為主。作文可分為三段，第一段給出建議，是否應該選修漢語以及學習漢語的重要性；第二段結合自身經歷，介紹學習漢語的方法；第三段收尾。要保證語言連貫，無語法和拼寫錯誤。（2021·遼寧中考真題）作為中學生，我們現在的學習壓力很大，經常面對各種考試，因此有時會產生焦慮情緒。請你根據內容提示，簡單描述一下我們的考試壓力主要體現在哪些方面，并針對此種情況給出合理的建議。提示：1、表現：擔心考試；考前很難入睡；考試時發揮失常……2、建議：請從考前學習準備、作息時間和放松方式這三方面，給出至少四條緩解考試壓力的具體建議。要求：1、觀點鮮明，結構合理，內容連貫，要用到所有提示內容，并適當發揮；2、文中不得出現真實的人名、校名等相關信息；3、詞數：80詞左右，文章的開頭已經給出，不計入總詞數。HowtoDealwiththeExamStressWestudentsareverybusywithschoolworkandinthefaceofmanyexamseveryschoolday.Someofus____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】HowtoDealwiththeExamStressWestudentsareverybusywithschoolworkandinthefaceofmanyexamseveryschoolday.Someofusaresoworriedaboutexamsthatit’shardtofallasleepbeforethem.Whenwepaymuchattentiontotheexam,thetestresultswon’tbegood.Parentsandteacherswillblamethem,theywillalsoloseconfidence.Ifwehaveproperstress,wecanworkharder,butifwehavetoomuchpressure,itmayhaveabadeffectonourstudy.Weshouldlearntoreleasepressure.Firstofall,weshouldreviewcarefullyandmakefullpreparationbeforetheexam.Second,weshouldn’tstayuplatetoreviewfortheexam.Third,afterreviewingforaperiodoftime,weshouldalsorelaxourselvesappropriately.Inaddition,ifwedowellintheexam,wewillgiveourselvesappropriaterewards.SoIhopeeveryonecandealwiththeexamstressproperlyandgetgoodgrades.【詳解】1.

題干解讀：題目要求根據提示內容，寫出考試壓力的表現，提出自己的建議等，可以適當的發揮，寫作時要運用正確的英語表達，要選用恰當的詞匯和短語。

2.

寫作指導：寫作時要與已給出的開頭融合起來，用第一人稱和其他人稱相結合來寫作，時態以一般現在時為主，多用情態動詞should提出建議，要做到要點齊全，無單詞拼寫和語法錯誤。（2021·重慶中考真題）教育部近日印發通知，要求控制中小學生的書面作業總量，合理布置不同類型的作業。為此，某英文雜志社正在開展以“MyCreativeEnglishHomework”為主題的征文活動。請你寫一篇征文，講述自身經歷，提出合理建議。要求：1.80-120詞，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；2.文中不能出現自己的姓名和所在學校的名稱。參考信息：1.做過的最有創意的英語作業（內容、收獲……）；2.更多有創意的英語作業建議（形式、理由……）；3.……MyCreativeEnglishHomeworkDoingEnglishhomeworkhelpsustopracticeandusewhatwe’velearnedinclass.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyCreativeEnglishHomeworkDoingEnglishhomeworkhelpsustopracticeandusewhatwe’velearnedinclass.DoingcreativehomeworkmakesusmoreinterestedinEnglish.Onceourteacheraskedustowritealettertoaforeigner.WeweretoldtointroducetheSpringFestivalintheletter.ItnotonlyhelpedmeimprovemywrittenskillsbutalsoprovidedagoodchancetospreadChinesetraditionalculture.Inmyopinion,it’salsoagoodchoicetodrawmindmaps.Ithelpsustohaveabetterunderstandingofthelessons.Besides,wecanlearntosingEnglishsongs,sincemostofuslovesinging.Inthisway,ourEnglishaswellashobbiesdevelop.Ihopewe’llhavemorecreativeEnglishhomeworkinthefuture.【詳解】1.題干解讀：這是一篇材料作文，要求根據所給的參考信息以“MyCreativeEnglishHomework”為題寫一篇征文，從自身經歷來談談自己的有創意的英語作業，并提出合理的建議。注意要點齊全。2.寫作指導：審題可知，本文寫自身經歷時用一般過去時，提建議時可采用一般現在時，人稱主要以第一、三人稱交替使用。文章開頭已給出，第一段點題；第二段寫自身經歷，第三段提出建議；第四段總結。寫作中可使用亮點詞匯和句型為文章增添色彩，如：notonly...butalso...，It固定句型等。注意保證上下文語句通順，條理清晰，文中無單詞和語法上的錯誤。名校模擬題提升練名校模擬題提升練（2023·河北唐山·期中）假如你是李亮，你的朋友Mike發來一封郵件向你詢問一些有關健康的建議。下面是郵件的部分內容。請你根據所給內容，給Mike回復一封郵件。Ioftengetsickthesedays.MydoctortoldmethatIatetoomuchmeatandchocolate.Andheadvisedmetotakesomeexerciseinmyfreetime.ButIdon’tknowhowtoeatproperlyandexerciseeveryday.Canyougivemesomesuggestions?注意：（1）請認真閱讀郵件并回答郵件中的所有問題，可適當發揮。（2）回復郵件中不得出現真實的地名、校名和人名。（3）詞數80個左右（開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數）。HiMike,I’msorrytohearthatyoudon’tfeelwellthesedays.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopeyouwillgetbettersoon.LiLiang【答案】例文HiMike,

I’msorrytohearthatyoudon’tfeelwellthesedays.I’dliketosharesomegoodwaystokeephealthywithyou.

First,eatmorefruitandvegetables.Saynotofastfoodsuchashamburgersandchips.Eatingtoomuchofthemmaybeharmfultoyourhealth.

Second,domoreexerciseeveryday.Findoutyourfavoritesportandkeepdoingit.Butremembernottodotoomuchatonetime.

Third,getenoughsleep.Asateenager,youshouldsleepatleast8hourseveryday.Neverstayuptoolate.

Finally,trytodothingsthatmakeyouhappysuchastalkingwithyourfriendsandenjoyingarelaxingmovie.

Ihopeyouwillgetbettersoon.LiLiang【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇電子郵件；②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏回答郵件中所提出的問題，適當添加細節。[寫作步驟]第一步，根據開頭提示，表示很愿意提供幫助；第二步，給出具體的建議；第三步，書寫結語。[亮點詞匯]saynoto對……說不beharmfulto對……有害keepdoingsth.繼續做某事stayuptoolate熬夜[高分句型]①Saynotofastfoodsuchashamburgersandchips.（祈使句）②Finally,trytodothingsthatmakeyouhappysuchastalkingwithyourfriendsandenjoyingarelaxingmovie.（定語從句）（2023·河北秦皇島·期中）每個人的生命只有一次，所以我們一定要珍愛自己的生命。那么在遇到危險時，我們該怎樣保護自己呢？請根據以下提示，以HowtoProtectOurselves為標題寫一篇英文發言稿。安全對每個人都很重要交通：外出時遵守交通規則；食品：吃健康食物，少吃垃圾食品。自我保護是重要技能之一遇到危險要保持冷靜；要及時報警或向老師、家長求助；盡可能避免受傷，保證自己的安全。要求：1．短文必須包括所有要點，可適當發揮；2．詞數80左右，要適當運用連接詞語，使句子通順、連貫。開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。提示詞：self-preservation（自我保護），keepcalmHowtoProtectOurselvesDearfriends,Everyonehasonlyonelife.Weshouldtreasureourlives.Buthowcanweprotectourselves?Herearesomesuggestions.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’sall.Thankyou!【答案】參考范文HowtoProt