讀后續寫微技能之笑口常開教學設計教材分析讀后續寫的教學目標1.讀后續寫不是隨心所欲，是要在開頭語和提示詞的幫助下完成續寫部分。所續寫部分不能脫離各自段落的首句開頭語，即：不能另起爐灶。這些開頭語與傳統寫作中的開頭語類似，在某種程度上引導你的思路向哪方面發展。2.續寫短文多以記敘文故事類文章或者夾敘夾議類文章為主，故事情節有曲折、有起伏，但是，故事線索的邏輯性比較強。這樣考生能夠根據提示詞語，順著原來文章的思路續寫文章，并適當發散。讀后續寫要求讀寫并重。與閱讀理解題一樣，讀后續寫同樣需要對本篇文章精確理解，這樣所續寫部分才不至于偏離主題，就這方面而言有點類似閱讀理解題中對文章后續發展的推斷，如“Whatwouldhappennext?”3.所給文章的未完部分的思路和內容并不一定是唯一的，考生可以根據自己對文章的理解，從而對文章的結尾有不同的詮釋。教學重點1.精讀文章，確定文章線索。每篇文章都有各自獨特的寫作思路，通過精讀文章，找到該篇文章的寫作線索。2.回扣原文，揣摩續寫思路。根據文章后面的要求，再次快速回讀短文，抓住文章的思路，結合段首的提示語，最終確定續寫段落的思路，確定續寫段落的內容。3.續寫文段與所給短文及段落開頭語的銜接程度；句子結構的多樣性，語言的豐富性，并通過句與句之間連接詞的正確使用，使上下文連貫。內容的豐富性；應用語法結構和詞匯的豐富性和準確性；上下文的連貫性。讀后續寫微技能之“笑口常開”Part1課前自主探究一．Brainstorm:你能想到哪些關于“笑”的詞或詞組:__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Part2課中提能練一．ObserveandSummarize:感悟并總結每一組句子使用的表達“笑”的方式。GroupA①Oneday,shecameintomyroom,laughingmerrily.有一天，她愉快地笑著走進我的房間。②Sherodetherestofthewayhome,wearingaMonaLisasmileofpeaceandgrace.她帶著蒙娜麗莎般平靜而優雅的微笑，騎完了回家剩下的路。③Thegirlswaitedfortheirturn,gigglinghappily.女孩們排隊等候，開心地咯咯笑著。Summary:_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________GroupB①Thesmilefrozeonherlips.她臉上的笑容僵住了。②Hereyesgleamedandherfragilefacebrokeintosmile.她的眼睛閃爍著光芒，精致的臉龐展現出微笑。③Abrightsmileappearedon∕spreadacross∕crossed∕lituphisface.Hisfacesplitintoawidesmile.他臉上露出∕綻放出了燦爛的笑容。④Onseeingtheedian(丑角，喜劇演員)，theaudienceburstintolaughter∕burstoutlaughing∕roaredwithlaughter..一看見那個喜劇演員，觀眾突然大笑起來∕哄堂大笑。⑤Hesmiled∕grinnedfromeartoear.他笑得合不攏嘴。Summary:_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________GroupC①Annabecamehappynowandagentle∕bright∕wide∕shiningsmilespreadoverherface.安娜變得開心，整張臉洋溢著溫和∕燦爛的微笑。②Hegavemeawintrysmile.他給了我一個冷笑。③Sherubbedthebackofherneckandgavemeabitter∕forcedsmile.她撓了撓脖子，沖我苦笑。Summary:_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________二．Application:學以致用Exercise1:情境練習（看短視頻補全句子）1.Thebaby______________________whenhismotherplayedajokeonhim.Thebabysatthere,_____________________.2.Whattheteachersaid_________________________________.3.Onhearingwhathiswifesaid,______________________.4.Trumansaidgoodbyetoeveryone____________________.Exercise2:用上面學到的表達笑的方式補全下面短文Onholiday,Idecidedtoplayajokeonmysweetestgrandma.Earlyinthemorning,Isecretlywalkeduptoherdoorstepwithacanofredpaintanddrewtworedrosesonherdoorstep.EverytimeIthoughtabouthowfunnyitwouldbetoseegrandmatrytopickupthegift,1.____________________(我都忍不住笑起來).AssoonasIfinishedpainting,Iknockedonthedoorandrantohidebehindbushestowatchthefun,2.________________________（我繼續咯咯地笑）asIwaitedforgrandmatoopenthedoor.Finally,sheappeared,lookingintothedarkness.Thenshespottedtheredgiftatherfeet.‘’Oh,howwonderful,aholidaygiftforme!’’Shecalledouthappily3._____________________（臉上帶著燦爛的笑容）.However,whenshebentdowntopickuphergift,shequicklyrealizedthatitwasjustajoke.Sodisappointedwasshethat4.___________（她臉上的笑容僵住了∕逐漸消失了）.Shewipedherhandsonherwhiteapronandenteredherroomslowly.Throughthewindow,Icouldseehersittinginachair,sighinginsilence.OnlythendidIrealizehowchildishIwas.Irushedtoaflowershopinstantlyandboughtabunchofrosesforher.Onseeingtheflower,5.___________（她立刻笑得合不攏嘴）.IapologizedtohersincerelyforwhatIhaddone.Shehuggedmetightlyandwhispered“Itdoesn’tmattermysweetheart,thanksforyourgift”.Fromthisexperience,Ilearnedthatweshouldn’tplayjokesonotherpeoplecasually,especiallyontheelderlyPart3課后鞏固練“I’mgoingtomissyousomuch,Poppy,”saidthetall,thinteenager.Hebentdowntohughisoldfriendgoodbye.Hestoodup,huggedhisparents,andsmiled,tryingnottolethisemotionsgetthebetterofhim.Hisparentswerenotquiteabletocontroltheirs.Theyhaddriventheirsonseveralhoursoutoftowntotheuniversitywherehewouldsoonbelivingandstudying.Itwastimetosaygoodbyefornowatleast.Thefamilyhuggedandsmiledthroughmistyeyesandthenlaughed.Theboyliftedthelastbagontohisshoulder,andflashedabrightsmile.“Iguessthisisit,”hesaid.“I’llseeyoubackhomeinamonth,okay?”Hisparentsnodded,andtheywatchedashewalkedoutofsightintothecrowdsofhundredsofstudentsandparents.Theboy’smotherturnedtothedog,“Okay,Poppy,timetogobackhome.”Thehouseseemedquietasatombwithouttheboylivingthere.Allthatweek,Poppydidn’tseeminterestedinherdinner,herfavoritetoy,oreveninherdailywalk.Herownersweresadtoo,buttheyknewtheirsonwouldbebacktovisit.Poppydidn’t.Theyofferedthedogsomeofherfavoritepeanutbuttertreats.Theyevenlethersitonthesofa,buttheoldgirljustwasn’therusualcheerfulself.Herownersstartedtogetworried.“WhatshouldwedotocheerPoppyup?”askedDad.“We’vetriedeverything.”“Ihaveanidea,butitmightbealittlecrazy,”smiledMom.“Withoutanybodyleftinthehousebutus,thisplacecoulduseabitoffun.Let’sgetalittledogforPoppy.Itdidn’ttakelongbeforetheywalkedthroughthefrontdoorcarryingabigb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