作為一個經(jīng)驗(yàn)豐富的高考英語輔導(dǎo)老師，老師我有必要提醒你：讀后續(xù)寫跟作文一樣都是講究豹頭鳳尾，也就是說開頭要猛給人耳目一新的感覺；鳳尾就是要簡短扼要，不拖沓，但是要給人留下深刻印象，這個時候你就得需要積累多方面素材開頭分為副詞、形容詞短語、非謂語動詞、對話或者獨(dú)白、背景、行為描寫①副詞開頭Carefully,heskippedupallthebrokenglass.他小心翼翼地跳過了所有的碎玻璃。Joyfully,hesteppedoverthestreet.他很高興地踏過了街道。這里的carefully和joyfully把后面的兩個動作"step踩”和“skip跳”描寫的更加細(xì)致和生動。②形容詞短語開頭我們來看2018年高考真題，講的是爸爸帶兒子去朋友家農(nóng)場游玩而迷路的故事。第一段開頭給的提示句是:Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.突然，一只小兔子跳到了我的馬前。怎么接下來寫開頭呢?我們可以這么寫:Afraidthatlmighthurtthelovelysmallcreature,lautomaticallyletoutacrytostopmyhorse．意思是:我害怕我會傷害這個可愛的小生物，我自動發(fā)出一聲喊叫來阻止我的馬。這里用情緒形容詞+從句的形式，很好體現(xiàn)了后一個動作“喊叫cry”的原因。1.Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Afraidthatlmighthurtthelovelysmallcreature,lautomaticallyletoutacrytostopmyhorse.突然，一只小兔子跳到了我的馬前。我怕會傷害到這個可愛的小生物，不自覺地大叫了一聲，喝住我的馬。【情緒形容詞+從句”的形式，很好體現(xiàn)了后一個動作“喊叫cry”的原因。】2.Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.Exhaustedandhungry,lwonderedifwecouldfindourwayback.我們不知道自己在哪里，天變黑了。我又累又餓，想知道我們能不能找到回去的路。【情緒形容詞+從句”的形式，很好體現(xiàn)了后一個動作伴隨的情況:又累又餓!】③非謂語短語開頭Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Feelingdisappointed,Janehadtostayaloneforanothernight.但是沒有直升機(jī)來了，天又黑了。簡感到失望，不得不再呆一夜。【現(xiàn)在分詞+情緒形容詞】ltwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Feelingrefreshed,shecontinuedtowalkalongthestreamtofindthewayout.簡醒來的時候天已經(jīng)亮了。她感到神清氣爽，繼續(xù)沿著小溪散步，尋找出去的路。Hearinghisbagsunloadedonthedriveway，Poppy'searsprickedupandsuddenlyshewasonallfours.聽到他的包被卸在車道上，波比豎起耳朵，突然四肢著地。―【感官動詞ving形式作伴隨狀語】④背景描寫開頭Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.llookedoutofthecarwindow,windingrivers,loftymountains,sunnybeachesanddeepvalleys,holdingmeentirelyintheirfascination.我們開車穿過了幾個州，沿途看到了很多好風(fēng)景。我望著車窗外，蜿蜒的河流，高聳的山脈，陽光明媚的海灘和深邃的山谷，完全吸引了我的注意力。【視覺+環(huán)境描寫+擬人”的寫作手法，也成功地抓住了讀者的注意力】⑤動作描寫開頭Thenextdaywerememberedthebrandnewtentwehadbroughtwithus.Dadexchangedaglancewithme.WhynotcamptosatisfyMom?第二天，我們想起了帶來的全新帳篷。爸爸和我相互看了一眼。為什么不露營來滿足媽媽?【動作描寫+問句，引起讀者興趣】Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Heexposedhissharpteeth,snarlingatus,asheranforward.幾分鐘后，熊回到營地。當(dāng)他向前跑時，他露出尖利的牙齒，對著我們咆哮。【句子開頭使用一組動詞，描繪了一只令人害怕的發(fā)怒的北極熊，烘托了緊張氛圍，讓續(xù)寫情節(jié)更吸引人。】⑥事物名詞開頭1.Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.Ahowlsuddenlywarnedthemofthedangeroussituation,wherethreemencircledthewolf.幾分鐘后，另外兩名騎自行車的人來了。一聲嚎叫突然警告他們危險的情況，三個人圍著狼轉(zhuǎn)。【事物名詞+擬人+where引導(dǎo)的非限定定語從句】Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Thisunexpectedappearancefrightenedmyhorse,whichmadeitrunwildly.突然一只小兔子跳到我的馬前面。這意外的出現(xiàn)嚇壞了我的馬，使它狂奔。【事物名詞+which引導(dǎo)的非限定定語從句】⑦對話/獨(dú)白開頭1.“Let’sseewhogetstherefirst!”Rachelshouted,asshepedaledfastandzoomedpastJenny.“讓我們看看誰先到那里去!”瑞秋一邊叫著，一邊飛快地蹬著車從珍妮身邊沖過去。2.Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhi"Getintothecar.”PaulshoutedatMac.汽車突然停在他面前。“上車!”保羅對麥克喊道。【語言描寫，體現(xiàn)了人物的緊張心理+事態(tài)的緊迫性】?讀后續(xù)寫萬能素材情緒萬能句：一、情緒萬能句"Aflushof+情緒名詞”+“動詞”+“某人”①Aflushof+sweepover;②Awaveof+floodover;③Awaveof+eoverAwaveofhappinesssweptoverme.我感到高興極了。Aflushofpanicsweptoverhim.他感到非常恐慌。Aflushofragesweptoverme.我感到非常生氣。Aflushofexcitementsweptoverme.我感到非常激動。Aflushofgriefsweptoverme.我感到非常悲傷難過。Aflushofembarrassmentsweptoverme.我感到非常尷尬。Aflushofguilt/shamesweptoverme.我感到非常羞愧。Aflushofdisappointmentsweptoverme.我感到非常失望。Aflushofastonishmentsweptoverme.我感到非常驚訝。Aflushofpridesweptoverhim.他感到自豪，一種強(qiáng)烈的自豪感涌上心人的絕望描寫：①.聽到這個消息，他絕望到將悲傷淹沒在酒中。Hearingthenews,sodesperatewashethathedrownedsadnessinwine.Hearingthenews,hewassodesperatethathedrownedhissadnessinwine.②看到損壞，他絕望地舉起雙手。Hethrewuphishandsindespairwhenhesawthedamage.Seeingthedamage,hethrewuphishandsindespair.③他看著周圍的混亂，被一種絕望的感覺所淹沒。Hegazedattheconfusionaroundhimandwasoverwhelmedbyafeelingofdespair.Helookedatthechaosaroundhimandwasoverwhelmedbyasenseofdespair.④事故發(fā)生后，托尼突然被扔進(jìn)了一個黑暗的世界，陷入了絕望。Aftertheaccident,Tonywassuddenlythrownintoaworldofdarknessandsankintohopelessness.Aftertheaccident,Tonywassuddenlythrownintoadarkworldandfellintodespair.⑤絕望和無助的她跪了下來，悔恨的淚水順著臉頰流下來。Desperateandhelpless,shekneltdown,withtearsofregretstreamingdownhercheeks.Withtheemergeofdesperateandhelpless,shefelltoherknees,tearsofremorsestreamingdownhercheeks.⑥湯姆眼里噙著淚水，高聲喊道:“回來吧，我的青春!"他的聲音充滿了絕望。Withtearsinhiseyes,Tomyelledatthetopofhisvoice,“ebackmyyouth!"andhisvoicewasfullofdespair.Tom,withtearsinhiseyes,cried,"eback,myyouth!"Hisvoicewasfullofdespair.3.人的感動描寫：①她被深深的觸動，幾乎說不出話來。Shewassodeeplytouchedthatshecouldhardlyspeak.②她淚流滿面，連連道謝。Withtearsstreamingdownherface,shethankedhimagainandagain.Shethankedherwithtearsstreamingdownherface.③被故事感動落淚，她一句話也說不出來。Movedtotearsatthestory,shefailedtoutteraword.Movedtotearsbythestory,shecouldnotsayaword.④一股援流在她心中升起。Awarmcurrentroseinherheart.Awaveofgradualroseinherheart.⑤蘇珊低著頭，聽到這句話，抹去眼淚。AsSusanbentherhead,sheheardtheremarkandshewipedawaytears.Susan,withherheaddown,wipedhertearsatthewords.⑥我被他的所作所為深深感動。眼淚不由自主地掉了下來。Iwasdeeplymovedbywhathehaddone,tearsrollingdownwithoutcontrol.Iwasdeeplymovedbywhathedid.Thetearsfellinvoluntarily.⑦淚水在她的眼眶里打轉(zhuǎn)。Tearswelledupinhereyes.Tearswererollinginhereyes.⑧淚水從眼眶中滑落，他跑到媽媽溫暖的懷抱里，輕輕地說:‘媽媽，謝謝你。Tearsdroppingfromhiseyes,herantoMum'swarmhug,andsaidgently"Mumthankyou."⑨老人的所作所為讓她深受感動，淚水不受控制地滾落下來。Shewasdeeplymovedbywhattheoldmanhaddone,withtearsrollingdownwithoutcontrol.人的寬慰類描寫①她用手指撫摸我的頭發(fā)，說:"一切都會好起來的。"Shestrokedherfingersthroughmyhairandsaid,"Thingsaregoingtobefine."②他伸出手手指組成一個“心"，說:我會一直陪著你的。Hereachedouthishandwithhisfingerforminga"heart",saying"I'llalwaysbetherewithyou."③她握著我的手，哭著說:“非常感謝!""你不知道這對我來說意味著什么。Sheheldmyhands,weeping,"Thankyousomuch!Youhavenoideahowmuchthismeanstome."④聽到這話，我感到一股暖流在我體內(nèi)蔓延開來。Hearingthis.lfeltawarmflowspreadinginsideofme.人的尷尬描寫①她站在椅子旁邊，既驚訝又尷尬。Shestoodbesideherchair,surprisedandembarrassed.Shestoodbythechair,withsurprisedandembarrassed.②突然，她站了起來，紅紅的臉上寫滿了尷尬。Suddenly,shestoodup,embarrassmentwrittenonherredface.Suddenly,shestoodup,withherruddyfacefillingwithembarrassment.③"我沒有意識到有人在這里，"彼得尷尬地說。"Ididn'trealizesomeonewasinhere."Petersaidembarrassed.Ididn'trealizeanyonewashere,"saidPeterawkwardly.④瑪麗張開嘴，眼睛睜得大大的，臉變紅了。Maryopenedhermouthwithhereyeswideningandfaceturningred.Maryopenedhermouth,hereyeswidened,andherfaceturnedred.⑤妻子尷尬地站在那里覺得臉上的血都涌了上來。Thewifestoodtherewithembarrassmentandshefeltbloodrushingtoherface.Thewifestoodthereinembarrassmentandfeltthebloodrushtoherface.⑥所有的空氣似乎都消失了，她覺得整個世界都在注視著她。Alltheairseemeddisappearandshefeltasifthewholeworldwaswatchingher.Alltheairseemedtobelost,andshefeltthatthewholeworldwasgazingather.⑦她尷尬得笨手笨腳地站在那里，感覺臉上的血都涌了上來。Soembarrassedwasshethatshestoodthereclumsily,feelingthebloodrushingtoherface.Shestoodawkwardlyfumblingandfeltthebloodrushtoherface.⑧她尷尬地死了，心臟猛烈地跳動著，猛烈地撞擊著她的肋骨。Shewasstruckdeadwithembarrassment,heartbeatingpainfullyfastbangingagainstherribs.Shediedofembarrassment,herheartbeatingviolentlyagainstherribs.⑨他低下頭，猶豫了片刻，不知道該如何掩飾內(nèi)心的尷尬。Heloweredhishead,hesitatedforamomentwonderinghowtohidehisinnerembarrassment.Helookeddownandhesitatedforamoment,notknowinghowtohidehisembarrassment.情緒類高分句1.看到信的結(jié)尾，她再也抑制不住內(nèi)心的悲傷，潸然淚下。Seeingtheendingoftheletter,shecouldnotcontainhersorrowandtearsrolleddownhercheeks.2.一想到這個，她嘴角露出了久違的笑容。Atthethoughtofthis,thereisalongexpectedsmileacrossherlips.3.在回家的路上，爸爸緊緊地拉著我，眉頭緊鍍。Onourwaybackhome,myfatherheldmetightly,wearing