備戰2023年中考英語高分作文熱點01講好中國好故事一、材料作文1．為鼓勵更多中學生學好英語，用英語講好中國故事，你校正在舉辦以“LearnEnglish,TellChina’sStories”為題的英語征文活動。請你寫一篇短文投稿。提示：（1）WhydowetellChina’sstories?（2）Whatcanwedototellthestorieswell?注意：（1）短文須包括提示內容；（2）不得出現真實的地名、校名和人名；（3）詞數80個左右。LearnEnglish,TellChina’sStories___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】LearnEnglish,TellChina’sStoriesWiththerapiddevelopmentofChina,moreandmoreforeignersarelikelytoknowmuchaboutChina.SoitismeaningfulforustotellChina’sstorieswell.Firstofall,weshouldpaymoreattentiontoourEnglishstudysincewehavetotellChina’sstoriesinEnglish.Moreimportantly,tellinggoodChina’sstoriescanmakeChineseculturespreadfaster.Wearesupposedtoreadbooksasmuchaspossible.Lastbutnotleast,goodChina’sstoriescanstrengthentherelationshipbetweenChinaandothercountriesintheworld.We’dbetterstudyforeignculturesaswell.TolearnEnglishwellisespeciallyimportantforus.WewilltryourbesttotellChina’sstorieswellinEnglishtomakeChinaknownbytheworld.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說明文，為材料作文；②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；③提示：人稱為第一人稱，注意語法正確性。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖，介紹為什么我們要講中國的故事；第二步，為了講好中國故事，我們能做的事情；第三步，書寫結語，呼吁大家努力學好英語。[亮點詞匯]①Moreimportantly更重要的是②Lastbutnotleast最后但同樣重要的是[高分句型]①WiththerapiddevelopmentofChina,moreandmoreforeignersarelikelytoknowmuchaboutChina.（with短語作伴隨狀語）②Firstofall,weshouldpaymoreattentiontoourEnglishstudysincewehavetotellChina’sstoriesinEnglish.（since引導原因狀語從句）2．中國的茶是世界上最受歡迎的飲品之一，假如你叫李華，你的學校正在舉行用英語講好中國故事的比賽，請圍繞茶的歷史、種類、加工、飲茶、益處等方面，根據下面的思維導圖，以“ChineseTeaCulture”為題，寫一篇英語短文。要求：1.語言表達準確，短文連貫、通順；2.短文應包括所有提示內容，可適當發揮，不要逐字翻譯；3.詞數80左右，開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。ChineseTeaCultureGoodmorning!Ladiesandgentleman.MynameisLiHua.Iamhappytosharemytopicwithyouhere.Chineseteaisoneofthemostpopulardrinksintheworld._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________CometoenjoyChineseteaculture.Maybe,youwilllikeit.【參考范文】ChineseTeaCultureGoodmorning!Ladiesandgentleman.MynameisLiHua.Iamhappytosharemytopicwithyouhere.Chineseteaisoneofthemostpopulardrinksintheworld.Chinesepeoplehavelikeddrinkingteasinceancienttimes.Teahasahistoryofover4000yearssincetheChinesebegantogrowanddrinktea.TherearemanykindsofteainChina,suchasgreentea,blacktea,oolongteaandsoon.LongjingTeaisfamousallovertheworld.Peopleuseteapotsorteacupstodrinktea.Theyaremadeofceramics.Drinkingteaisgoodforhealth.It’ssaidthatgreenteacanpreventcancer.Whenyouaretired,acupofteacanhelpyourelax.CometoenjoyChineseteaculture.Maybe,youwilllikeit.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說明文；②時態：本文采用“一般現在時”；③提示：要求包含所有提示內容，并適當發揮。[寫作步驟]第一步，具體闡述茶的歷史、種類、加工等；第二步，闡述喝茶的好處；第三步，表達希望。[亮點詞匯]①manykindsoftea很多種茶②andsoon等等③allovertheworld全世界[高分句型]①Drinkingteaisgoodforhealth.（動名詞作主語）②It’ssaidthatgreenteacanpreventcancer.（主語從句）③Whenyouaretired,acupofteacanhelpyourelax.（when引導時間狀語從句）3．假如你是李欣，你校正在開展“用英語講述你最喜歡的中國（電影、歌曲、發明……等）”為主題的視頻展評活動，請根據以下提示撰寫視頻文稿。1.介紹你最喜歡的……的種類、名稱等基本信息；2.說明你喜歡……的原因及你在欣賞（使用等）時的感受；3.對你視頻觀眾提出倡導及建議。注意：1.文稿須全面反映提示信息；2.文中不能出現真實姓名及學校名稱；3.詞數80～100，開頭已給出，且不計入總詞數。Hello,everyone.I’mLiXin._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Hello,everyone.I’mLiXin.MyfavouritesongisLookupatthestarswhichissungbyZhangJie,oneofthemostpopularsingersinChina.It’sapopsongthatisfullofpositiveenergy.Ilikethissongbestfortworeasons.First,thesongsoundsverylivelythatitcanmakemehappy.Second,thelyricsofthesongareinspiring.It’spossibleforeveryonetomeetdifficultyinlife.Wheneverthathappens,Iwilllistentothatsong.Itcheersmeupandencouragesmetomoveon.Finally,Ihopeyouwillenjoythisvideoandgivemorevaluablecommentsonit.That’sall.Thanksforwatching.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態：時態主要為“一般現在時”；③提示：寫作提示題目已經給出，要圍繞寫作提示進行寫作，并可以適當發揮。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接文章開頭，并開篇點題，指出自己最喜歡的中國電影、歌曲、發明等的基本信息；第二步，說明喜歡它的原因及自己的感受；第三步，最后進行總結，并對視頻觀眾提出建議和倡導。[亮點詞匯]①befullof充滿②cheersb.up使某人振作起來③encouragesb.todosth.鼓勵某人做某事④moveon繼續前進[高分句型]①It’sapopsongthatisfullofpositiveenergy.（that引導的定語從句）②Wheneverthathappens,Iwilllistentothatsong.（whenever引導的時間狀語從句）4．假如你是李華，將參加你校“用英語講好成都故事”的演講比賽。請寫一篇英語演講稿，從以下幾方面講好成都故事。注意:1.需全面反映圖文信息；2.文中不能出現真實姓名及校名；3.詞數：100左右。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】：ChengduisacityinsouthwestChina.ItisthecapitalofSichuanProvince.Inthepast,peoplelivedahardlife,livinginsmalldarkhousesandtherewerenarrowroads.Butnow,ithasdevelopedintoamoderncity.Therearetallbuildingseverywhere.Theroadsarewide,andthereareallkindsofvehiclesonthestreets.Almosteveryfamilyhascars,andpeople’slivingstandardshaveimprovedalot.Inthepast,peoplecouldonlytravelonfootorbybike,butnowpeopleusuallydriveortakethesubway.ThemostfamousfoodinSichuanishotpot,whichisalsomyfavoritefood.Itishot,andpeoplealloverthecountrylikeitverymuch.Especiallythemandarinduckpotislovedbyallpeople,includingchildrenandtheelderly.SichuanoperaisalsoaspecialfeatureofSichuan.ItbeganintheTangDynasty.Ithasahistoryofabout1200years.IfyouwanttoknowmoreaboutSichuanOpera,pleasewatchtheperformanceintheGrandTheaternextWednesday,withfacechangingandfirebreathing.It’sveryinteresting.Ihopeyoucanwatchit.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態：時態為“一般現在時”和“一般過去時”；③提示：根據所給提示完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，包括成都的過去及現在的發展，川菜以及川劇的一些情況。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹成都的地理位置；第二步，具體介紹成都過去的情況以及現在的情況，以及川菜和川劇的情況；第三步，最后介紹川劇的演出，希望人們去觀看。[亮點詞匯]①onfoot步行②alloverthecountry全國③developinto發展成為[高分句型]①ThemostfamousfoodinSichuanishotpot,whichisalsomyfavoritefood.（which引導的定語從句）②IfyouwanttoknowmoreaboutSichuanOpera,pleasewatchtheperformanceintheGrandTheaternextWednesday.（if引導的條件狀語從句）二、書信作文5．西安博物院(Xi’anMuseum)在招募志愿者。假如你是光明中學的李華，請根據以下提示寫一封自薦信。1．熱愛西安歷史和文化；2．能用英語講好中國故事；3．性格外向，喜歡與人溝通；4．愛好廣泛，樂于挑戰自我；5．你希望從中收獲……要求：1．參考提示內容，可適當發揮；2．語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3．文章中不得出現你的任何真實信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；4．詞數：不少于70詞。(開頭結尾已給出，不計入總詞數)。

DearSirorMadam,Thankyoufortakingyourtimetoreadmyletter.MayIhavethehonortoworkasavolunteeratXi’anMuseum?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourstruly,LiHua【參考范文】DearSirorMadam,Thankyoufortakingyourtimetoreadmyletter.MayIhavethehonortoworkasavolunteeratXi’anMuseum?MynameisLiHua.IamstudyingintheGuangmingMiddleSchoolnow.IlovethecultureandhistorywhichXi’anhasverymuch.IamanoutgoinggirlandIliketocommunicatewithpeople.Ihavemanyhobbieslikethepaino,dance,chess,evenbasketball.Iespeciallyliketochallengemyself.IcantellChinesestorieswellinEnglish.Ihopetolearnmoreaboutourcountryandhometownbyjoiningyou.Ihopetomakemorefriends,too.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourstruly,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為書信作文；②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中“收獲”一項，適當添加細節，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。開門見山提出希望加入對方舉辦的志愿活動；第二步，具體進行自我介紹；第三步，書寫結語，表達期待收到答復。[亮點詞匯]①liketodosth.喜歡做某事②verymuch非常③challengeoneself挑戰自我④tellstories講故事[高分句型]①IlovethecultureandhistorywhichXi’anhasverymuch.(which引導的定語從句)②Ihopetomakemorefriends,(動詞不定式作賓語)三、講稿6．假如你是李華，你所在的學校將舉行一次英語演講比賽。請你結合以下思維導圖，以“Iamproudofourcountry”為題寫一篇演講稿，簡要闡述中國這些年在環境、傳播中國文化以及太空工業等方面的發展與變化，并談談你的感受。詞數90左右。注意事項：(1)必須包含提示內容，可適當發揮。開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數；(2)意思清楚，表達通暢，行文連貫，書寫規范；(3)請勿在文中使用真實的姓名，校名和地名。IamproudofourcountryHi,everyone.It’smygreathonortogiveaspeechhere._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thanksforlistening.【參考范文】IamproudofourcountryHi,everyone.It’smygreathonortogiveaspeechhere.Obviously,greatchangeshavetakenplaceinChinatheseyears.Forexample,theenvironmenthaschangedforthebettersincethegovernmenttooksomeusefulmeasures.Clearriversandblueskyreturntoourlife.Atthesametime,Chineseculturespreadsquicklyaroundtheworld,whichmakesmoreforeignersinterestedinit.What’smore,Chinahasmadegreatprogressinitsspaceindustry.Manyspaceshipshavebeensuccessfullylaunched,makingChina’sspacedreamareality.I’mproudofourcountryandIhopeI’llbetheprideofourcountryinthefuture.That’sall.Thanksforlistening.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇演講稿；②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，要求以“Iamproudofourcountry”為題，結合提示內容進行寫作，適當添加細節，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明自己很高興可以做演講；第二步，具體闡述寫作內容，從“環境、文化、航天工業等”幾個方面重點介紹；第三步，表達自己的感受；第四步，書寫結語。[亮點詞匯]①takeplace發生②Forexample例如③Atthesametime同時[高分句型]①Atthesametime,Chineseculturespreadsquicklyaroundtheworld,whichmakesmoreforeignersinterestedinit.（which引導的定語從句）②I’mproudofourcountryandIhopeI’llbetheprideofourcountryinthefuture.（and連接的并列句和省略that的賓語從句）7．2022年是“中國夢”提出十周年。作為21世紀的青少年，我們應該如何踐行自己的“中國夢”。假定你校將在本周開展以“ForOurDreams”為主題的英語演講比賽。請你根據以下提示用英文寫一篇演講稿。要求：1.語句通順，意思連貫，80詞左右；2.文章必須包含所給提示，可適當發揮；3.文中不得出現真實姓名和學校名稱。參考詞匯：wearmasks，saveenergyForOurDreamsHello,everyone!It’sagreathonortogiveaspeechhere.Whatshouldwedotoachieveourdreams?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’splayapartinrealizingourdreams.Thankyouforlistening!【參考范文】：ForOurDreamsHello,everyone!It’sagreathonortogiveaspeechhere.Whatshouldwedotoachieveourdreams?First,weneedtobehealthy.Stayawayfromillnessbywearingmasksandwashinghandsoften.Second,happinessisimportantforus.Soifwehaveproblems,talkmorewithourfriendsandparentsaboutthem.Third,it’snecessaryforustoworkhard.Remembertodohomeworkintimeandreviewwhatwe’velearnedafterclass.Lastbutnotleast,wearesupposedtoberesponsible.It’sourdutytosaveenergyanddoeverythingwecantoprotecttheenvironment.Let’splayapartinrealizingourdreams.Thankyouforlistening!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇演講稿；②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；③提示：要求以“ForOurDreams”為主題，結合提示內容進行寫作，適當添加細節，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖，引出我們應該做什么來實現我們的夢想這一主題；第二步，具體闡述寫作內容。從“健康、幸福、努力和有責任感”幾個方面重點介紹；第三步，書寫結語。[亮點詞匯]①stayawayfrom遠離②intime及時③besupposedto應該④playapartin在……中起作用[高分句型]①Soifwehaveproblems,talkmorewithourfriendsandparentsaboutthem.（if引導的條件狀語從句）②Remembertodohomeworkintimeandreviewwhatwe’velearnedafterclass.（祈使句和what引導的賓語從句）8．2022年是“中國夢”提出十周年。作為21世紀的青少年，我們應該如何踐行自己的“中國夢”。假定你校將在本周開展以“ForOurDreams”為主題的英語演講比賽。請你根據以下提示用英文寫一篇演講稿。要求：l.語句通順，意思連貫，80詞左右；2.文章必須包含所給提示，可適當發揮；3.文中不得出現真實姓名和學校名稱。ForOurDreamsHello,everyone!It’sagreathonortogiveaspeechhere.Toachieveourdreams,wemustdeveloptheabilityaboutself-protectionandself-management.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Let’stryourbesttomakeourdreamscometrue.Thankyouforlistening!【參考范文】Hello,everyone!It’sagreathonortogiveaspeechhere.Toachieveourdreams,wemustdeveloptheabilitytooutself-protectionandself-management.Self-protectionisanimportantabilityforus.Weshouldlearntoprotectourselvesfromdanger.Remembertostayawayfromillness.Forexample,weneedtowearmaskswhengoingout.Washinghandsoftenisalsonecessary.Besides,howtoreducelearningpressureisimportant,too.Sowehadbettertalkmorewithourfriendsandparentsaboutwhatwethinkandhowwefeel.Ontheotherhand,weshouldlearntomanageourtimeandbehaviors.Makegooduseoftime.Don’tloseourselvesincomputergamesandspendmoretimestudyingorexercising.Trytobehavewell.Don’tspitinpublicorthrowlitterhereandthere.Let’stryourbesttomakeourdreamscometrue.Thankyouforlistening!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇演講稿作文；②時態：時態為“一般現在時”；③提示：考生應注意圖表中的提示要點就是寫作的基本方向，不要遺漏要點。[寫作步驟]第一步，點明主題：為實現我們的夢想，我們必須培養自我保護和自我管理的能力；第二步，在培養自我保護能力方面提出合理建議；第三步，在培養自我管理能力方面提出合理建議。第四部，書寫結語。[亮點詞匯]①stayawayfrom遠離②forexample例如③ontheotherhand另一方面④besides此外⑤inpublic在公共場合⑥hadbetterdosth.最好做某事[高分句型]①Washinghandsoftenisalsonecessary.經常洗手也是必要的。(動名詞短語作主語)②Don’tloseourselvesincomputergamesandspendmoretimestudyingorexercising.不要沉迷于電腦游戲，多花點時間學習或鍛煉。(否定祈使句)9．近日，習近平主席在給中國單板滑雪運動員蘇翊鳴同學的回信中提到“新時代是追夢者的時代，也是廣大青少年成就夢想的時代。希望你們心系祖國，志存高遠，腳踏實地，在奮斗中創造精彩人生，為祖國和人民貢獻青春和力量。”我校正以“DreamBig,WorkHard”（志存高遠，腳踏實地）為主題舉辦英語演講比賽。假如你是李華，請你寫一篇英語演講稿參加比賽。要求：1.80—120字，開頭已經給出，不計入總詞數。2.文中不能出現自己的姓