高考英語短文改錯專題復習

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令Whafsthemaintroublewhencorrectingacomposition?

弋改錯步驟

Howtodoproofreading?

一、測試點分布

①Reviewtypesandformsoferrors

Findoutthewrongphrasesorsentences(1min)

1.usefulinformations

2.inafact

3.1doitbyme.

4.onneed

5.feelhappily詞法：

6.myeighteenbirthday

7.neither---nor—J句法：

8.1wasscaredandbegintocry.

=>summarizethetypesoferrors(測試點分布)

L行文邏輯：

②3formsofcorrecting//

二、Correctthefollowingsentencesandsummarize

>動詞

1.動詞的時態(tài)和語態(tài)錯誤.

(1)However,myfatherhadtoreturntoworkonMondaysoweflybacklastSaturday.

(2)Growingupisnoteasy.Sometimesallthatisneedissomeonetorelyon.

2.主、謂不一致的錯誤.

(3)Istayedthereforoneandahalfhoursandmadesurethatthegirlwereallright.

(4)Goodnightandremember,you,deardiary,ismyonlysouvenirfrommypastlifeandmyonlyfriend.

3.非謂語動詞錯誤

(5)IwasattheShanghaiRailwayStation,buyatickettoHangzhou.

(6)Freshvegetablesandhighqualityoilareusingforcooking.

(7)1couldnottorunveryfastandfellbehind.

(8)LiMengcameseemeeveryday.

注意：1.弄清動詞作謂語/非謂語

2.作謂語時，考慮和；

作非謂語時，考慮___________________

practice1:

l.Notonlythestudentsbutalsotheteacherlikethefilm.

2.Whentheycamehere,Iwillshowthem.

3.TeainChinawastraditionallydrankfromcupswithouthandles.

4.Ifoundthegameexcitedandmydadexplainedtherules.

5.Haveteainthelateafternoonprovidesabridgebetweenlunchanddinner,whichwillnotbeserved...

>名詞

(9)Itfeltverystrangetotravelwithoutanyluggages.

(10)InearlyJanuarythisyear,therateofUFOreportswassteady,aroundthreeperweeks.

(1l)It?sashametobreakyourwords.Youshouldmeanwhatyousay.

注意I：可數(shù)名詞(+s)與不可數(shù)名詞(-s)

常考的不可數(shù)名詞：_______________________________________________________

practice2

1.Don'tlosehearts,you'llbesuccessfulintime.

2.1needsomemoreinformations.

3.Thesemachineslookthesame,buttheyareofdifferentkind.

4.TherearetwogirlsfrommycoursehereandIplantomakefriendwiththem.

>還要注意______________

(12)Globalwarminghasalreadybecomeaseriouslyproblem.

(13)Igottothefinishinglinefirst.Iwontherace.Ifeltveryproudlyofmyself.

(14)Hehasacomfortableroom,patientlynurses,andagreatdealoftimetoread.

(15)ShanghaiisoneofthebusycitiesinChina.

注意：I.弄清形容詞(修飾名詞)和副詞(修飾動詞、形容詞、句子)用法

修飾名詞、be動詞、系動詞要用；

修飾動詞、形容詞、整個句子用；

2.正確使用比較級(than)和最高級(the)

3.-ing修飾,-ed修飾

practice3

1.Heaskedangryifwehadfinishedthework.

2.Yes,itisclearlythatyourlifeinyourcountryisquitedifferentfrommine.

3.Hisfatherlooksmuchmorehappiertoday.

4.SoIgratefulacceptedtheoffer.

>,細領悟

16.WiththehelpofKatia,aroommateofme...

17.ItwasonlywhenwedidtheirchemistryprojecttogetherthatIbegintounderstand...

18.Hefounddifficulttolearnmathwell.

19.Afterthinkingforsometime,Ilethercopymyanswers.Butafterthetest,allofuswerecalledtotheteacher'soffice.

注意：1.人稱代詞(男女不分/單復不分)，物主代詞，反身代詞的使用.

2.代詞指代的人或事物前后不一致的錯誤.

3.it作形主、形賓或指代時有缺漏(make,find,think)

4.both,all,either,neither,none的使用.

practice4

l.Somestudentsmayalsosaveupforourcollegeorfutureuse.

2.IwaslearningtoexpressmeinsimpleEnglish.

3.IalwaysthoughtinChineseandtriedtotranslateanythingintoEnglish.

4.OnedayIwrotealittlestoryandshowedtomyteacher.

>需關注

主要考查習慣搭配方面的基礎知識，其錯誤表現(xiàn)形式主要有三種：多詞、少詞和搭配錯誤。

20.1cametoasuddenstopjustinthemiddleontheroad.

21.Tonysawatoyonashopwindow.

22.1plannedtoreturnforeverytwoyears.

注意：時間狀語前有指示代詞等修飾時不用介詞.

practice5

1.I'msuretheywilllaughtomeandseemeasafbol.

2.Atlastwereachedtothevillageatthefootofthehill.

3.Whenayoungmanstartstoearnhisownliving,hecannolongerexpectotherstopayhisfood.

4.Thegentlemaninsistedatmyreceivingthemoney.

A常光顧

23.Butinthatcase,wewilllearnlittleaboutworld.

24.Eachofmycafeswillhaveadifferentthemeandanuniquestyle.

25.1boughtmyticketbutturnedaroundtopickupmybagfromthefloor.

注意：1.冠詞a,an和the的用法錯誤.

2.連詞but,and,or,so和although的邏輯性用法錯誤（錯用and與but/

勿連so與bucause/although不與but連/肯是and,否是or）

practice6

1.1cameintothelivingroomandsawoneofthemjustgothroughthekitchendoorbutturnonthelight.

2.Hewillstaythereoneandtwodays.

3.Thedriverputthewindowdownandofferedusaumbrella.

>多分析，習慣邏輯要記住.

26TodayIwashavingaPElessonwhileIfelldownandhurtmyfoot.

27.Theyareinterestedinplantingvegetablesintheirgarden,thatisontherooftopoftheirhouse.

注意：并列句、復合句（名從、定從、狀從）

二、Summary：

短文改錯口訣：

動詞,名詞；還要注意—和；

.細辨別;常光顧.

，細領悟;需關注

多分析、要記住.

3stepstodoproofreading：

四、短文改錯：學生在答題中存在的問題

改錯格式：

短文改錯原則：

五、實戰(zhàn)演練Practice

Theteenageyearfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywerealsothebestandworseyearsinmy

life.Atthefirst,IthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsbyyourself.However,myparentsdidn'tseemto

thinksuch.Theyalwaystellmewhattodoandhowtodoit.Atonetime,Ieverfeltmyparentscouldn'tunderstandme

soIhopedIcouldbefreelyfromthem.IshowedthemIwasindependentbywearstrangeclothes.NowIamleaving

hometoc