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Walkingonthestreet,thebittercoldofaDecemberdayinWashington,D.C.wasruiningmymood.ThetemperaturewasbelowzerosoIduckedintothesubwaystation,hopingtogetwarm.走在街上,華盛頓特區12月的一天的嚴寒破壞了我的心情。氣溫低于零度,所以我躲進地鐵站,希望能暖和一下。

WarmthcametomybodyasIsettledontoabenchwithacupofhotcoffee.NowIwasreadytorelaxanddosomeseriouspeoplewatching.Inoticedahomelessmanseaatednearby.Thepleasantsmellofdeliciousfoodfromthesubwayfoodcourt(美食廣場)wastemptingmetoconsideranearlydinner.Fromthelonginglookinmyneighbor’seyesitwasobviousthathe,too,noticedthegoodsmell.Iwonderedhowlongithadbeensincehehadeatenanything,expectinghewouldapproachmeforahandout(施舍).Butheneverdid.

當我坐在長椅上,端著一杯熱咖啡時,溫暖涌上了我的身體。現在我準備放松一下,做一些嚴肅的事情觀看。我注意到一個流浪漢在附近游蕩。從地鐵美食廣場傳來的美味可口的氣味(美食廣場)誘惑我考慮早點吃晚飯。從我鄰居渴望的眼神中可以明顯看出,他也注意到了這種好聞的味道。我想知道他有多久沒有吃東西了,期待著他會來找我分發食物(施舍).但他從來沒有這么做過。Myheadandheartwerebattlingitout:theformertellingmetomindmyownbusiness,andthelatterurgingmetomakeanimmediatetriptothefoodcourtforhim.我的頭腦和心靈都在掙扎:前者告訴我少管閑事,后者敦促我立即為他去美食廣場。

Whilethisinnerdebatewasfierce,awelldressedyoungcouplesuddenlyapproached.“Excuseme,sir,”beganthehusband.“Wejustfinishedeatingandourappetitewasn'tasbigaswethought.Wehatetowastefood.Canyouhelpusoutandputthistogooduse?”Thekindstrangerhandedalargecontainerwithfood.“Thankyou."camethegratefulreply.FeelinggoodaboutwhatIhadseen,butdisappointedbymyownlackofaction,Iobservedmyneighbor’sresponsetohissuddengoodfort正當這場內心的爭論激烈時,一對衣著考究的年輕夫婦突然走近。“對不起,先生,”丈夫開始說。“我們剛吃完,食欲并沒有想象中那么大。我們討厭浪費食物。你能幫我們把這個好好利用一下嗎?”好心的陌生人遞給一個裝食物的大容器。“謝謝你。”感激的回答來了。我對所看到的一切感到很好,但對自己沒有采取行動感到失望,我觀察了鄰居對他突然好運的反應。une.

Heliftedthesoup,cuppinghishandsaroundthesteamingbowl.Itwasobviousthathewasgoingtoenjoythismiraclemeal.Heopenedmouthandsuddenly,hestopped.他端起湯,雙手環抱著熱氣騰騰的碗。很明顯,他將享受這頓神奇的大餐。他張大嘴巴,突然停了下來。

Thereasonforthisunexpectedbehaviorsoonbecameclear.Enteringthehallwasanewarrival,inhisseventies,hatlessandgloveless.Hislightweightjacketwasapoorprotectionagainstcold.Hisfaceandhandswereredanddamaged.Peoplearoundfocusedonhimwithpityandwhisperedatthissadsight.這種出乎意料的行為的原因很快就清楚了。走進大廳的是一位七十多歲的新來者,他沒有戴帽子,也沒有戴手套。他那件輕便的夾克御寒能力很差。他的臉和手都紅了,有損傷。周圍的人都憐憫地注視著他,聽到這悲傷的景象輕聲細語。注意:1.續寫詞數應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。文章大意;十二月的華盛頓很冷,我躲在地鐵暖和。旁邊的鄰居是一位流浪漢,顯然他和我一樣注意到了旁邊美食廣場的食物傳出來的香味。正猶豫要不要帶他去美食廣場吃頓大餐。這時走來一對老夫婦,他們委婉的表達自己食量不大,想要鄰居幫他們解決剩下的食物。流浪漢鄰居剛要舉起碗將熱湯喝掉,他注意新來的一位流浪者,他年齡很大,沒戴帽子和手套。情節續寫發展:第一段:我的鄰居很快把他那神奇的飯菜放在一邊,讓老人坐在同一個座位上。他指著飯菜說:“你能幫我嗎?”然后把熱氣騰騰的那杯湯放在陌生人手里。看到這一幕,我非常感動。第二段:我端著熱氣騰騰的湯和三明治走近他們。周圍的人對我報以贊許的微笑。“你能幫我嗎?”我問道。“為什么不呢?”他開玩笑地補充道。直到那天,我才真正學會了分享的意義。官方范文:

Myneighborwastheonlyonetakingaction.

Quicklypullingasidehismiraclemeal,myneighborleapedupandguidedtheelderlymantosharetheseat.Numbwithcold,theoldmandidn’texpectedtheinvitation,movingclumsily.Hardlyhadheseatedhimself,myneighbortenderlyputhisdownjacketovertheolderman’sshoulders,

slippinghisarmsintosleeves.Finally,hesaid“Canyouhelpmeout?”pointingtothemealandplacingthesteamingcupofsoupinthestranger’shands.Seeingthis,myheadandheartstoppedbattlingandIhadmydecision.

TearsblurredmyvisionwhenIwenttobuyfoodfromthefoodcourt.

Whatmyneighboursaidexactlyspokemymind.Withregret,Ifeltobligedtodothesame.

Respectfullyandcautiously,Iapproachedthemwithsteamingsoupandsandwich.

Peoplearoundcastanapprovingsmileinmydirection.“Canyouhelpmeout?”Iasked.

“Whynot?”headdedjokingly,“Butonlyifyougohalfwaywithmeonthatsandwich,

whichistoomuchforamanmyage.”Itwasn’tuntilthatdaythatItrulylearnedthemeaningofsharing.IleftthesubwaystationfeelingwarmerthanIhadeverthoughtpossible.參考范文一,

Myneighborwastheonlyonetotakeaction.

Withouthesitation,hegesturedtheoldmantositdownandpresentedhimthestreamingsoup.“Ithinkyoucantakethis,”hesmiled,hisvoicetingedwithpassionandrespect.Takenabackbythesuddenoffer,theoldmanhesitated.“Thankyou,sir.”Hemurmuredandtookthewarmsoup.Atfirst,hejustsippedthesoupbitandbitandsoongulpedthemall.Myneighborjustsatthere,watchingthewholescenesmilingly,butIcouldseethenoveltyofhim.Hewasneedyhimself,butheofferedwhatheonlyhadtoamoreneedyman.

TearsblurredmyvisionwhenIwenttobuyfoodinfoodcourt.

BuyingfoodforthemwastheleastIcoulddo.Deepdown,Iwasashamedofmycowardlinesstoofferhelpactively.NonoonerhadIgotoutfromthecourtthanIdelivered

themtomyneighborandtheoldman.“Ibuytheseforaparty,butnowitiscancelled.Canyoutaketheseforme?”Imadeupanexcuseawkwardly,shyingavoidinghiseyes.Theyjustacceptedithappilyandexpressedgratitudeoverandoveragain.

AsIkeptwalking,thewarmthsceneoftheirkindbehaviorlingeredinmymind,drivingawayallcoldness.

參考范文二,

Myneighborwastheonlyonetakingaction.

Heaskedtheoldmantositdownbesidehim,whostoodtherewithapuzzledlook,shiveringagainthechill.Myneighborjustapproachedhimandhelpedhimsitdown.Thenheextendedthewarmsouptotheoldman.Shockedandhappy,theoldmantookit.Butinsteadoftakingitall,hesaid,“let’sgohalfandhalf”.Withanunspokenunderstanding,theysmiledandsippedthesoupseparately.Movedbythescene,Icouldn'tignorethe

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