新高考2021讀后續(xù)寫真題講解史妙欣MiaMia讀ThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother’sDay.Howpleasedandproudmotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.When:Where:Who:

讀Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstove(火爐)burnertoheatupthefryingpan(煎鍋).EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesink(洗碗池)andputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.讀ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelid(蓋子)startingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff’shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.How:excitementpanickedcalmmessy續(xù)What:Para1:Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.

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Para2:Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.Plot3:與上文銜接：__________________________________Plot4:升華主題：____________________________________爸爸指導(dǎo)、幫助他們他們順利在媽媽起床前做好早餐當(dāng)雙胞胎失望地環(huán)顧四周時(shí)，他們的父親出現(xiàn)了。這對(duì)雙胞胎把早餐端上樓，叫醒他們的媽媽。媽媽很驚訝、感動(dòng)并了解情況雙胞胎感謝媽媽平時(shí)的付出寫1.Withoutasecondthought,句子。

沒有多想/毫不猶豫，....2.Awaveof+情緒名詞+sweptover人. 誰(shuí)感到一陣xx。Awaveof_______________________sweptover_____________.他們的媽媽感到非常驚訝和幸福。3.A’s+adj.+wordswhisperedinB’smind.A...的話在B的腦海里回響。4.Itseemedasif+句子。

仿佛...Itseemedasif_________________________________________. (savior)仿佛爸爸是上天派來(lái)的救世主。surpriseandhappinesstheirmothertheirfatherwasthesaviorsentbytheheaven寫5.Noonewasmore+adj.thansb. 沒有人比...更...。 否定詞+比較級(jí)=最高級(jí)Noonewasmore_____________than___________.沒有人比他們的爸爸更能支持他們。Shebelievednoonewasmore_________than_________.她覺得沒有人比他更幸福。supportivetheirfatherblissfulherPara1:Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.1.__________________________________,hewasgreatlysurprised.知道他們?cè)跍?zhǔn)備什么后，他非常驚訝。2.Soimmediately,heofferedtogetinvolvedinthekid’sjob.3.First,heputthepotofporridgeona_______heat,_____________________________________________________.首先，他把一鍋粥放在小火上，讓Jeff小心煮十五分鐘。4.Andthen,heaskedJennatobreakanothertwoeggsandmixthemwithmilk.寫:加分項(xiàng)：使用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞KnowingwhattheywerepreparingforgentleaskingJeffto

watchoutforitgoingforfifteenminutes.Para1:Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.5.______________________________,theystartedtofrybreadtogether.所有的準(zhǔn)備工作都做好了，他們開始一起煎面包。6.___aflash,sweetsmellfilledtheairinthekitchen.___theirdelight,thebreakfastwasasuccessintheend.一瞬間，廚房里彌漫著甜甜的氣味。令他們高興的是，早餐最后很成功。寫:加分項(xiàng)：使用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞WithallpreparationsdoneInToPara2:Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.1.___________________________，thewomanhearda“HappyMother’Day!”fromheradorablechildren____________________________________.睜開眼睛，女人聽到了來(lái)自她可愛孩子的“母親節(jié)快樂”，手里還拿著熱騰騰的早餐。2.____________________________________,with_________explanationshebetterrealizedhowpreciousthisMother’sDaysurpriseis.孩子們身后站著他們的父親,聽了他的解釋她更清楚這份母親節(jié)驚喜的可貴。寫:加分項(xiàng)：使用高級(jí)句型(定語(yǔ)從句，倒裝句，強(qiáng)調(diào)句)Eyesopened/Openinghereyeswhoheldhot,sweetbreakfastbeforeherBehindthechildrenstoodtheirfatherwhose寫Para2:Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.3.Thetwochildrencouldfinishcookingabreakfast,____________________.兩個(gè)孩子能做好早餐，這是她沒想到的。4.Thetwinshuggedtheirmoth