2024年高考英語寫作常考文體講練提分秘籍專題12道歉信考情分析考情分析年份卷區命題形式話題2021年北京卷提綱式因故不能赴約給好友寫道歉信2016年全國卷Ⅲ提綱式因故不能赴約給好友寫道歉信寫作方法指導寫作方法指導1.表示歉意，道歉的原由；2.出現差錯的原因，提出彌補措施；3.請求原諒。語言要誠摯，解釋的理由要真實。4.補充說明。客套話。好的道歉信不僅會取得對方的諒解，還會增進彼此的感情。寫作模板寫作模板模板①Dear

________(對象),Iamtrulysorrythat___________________________________(道歉的原因).Thereasonisthat______________________________________(介紹原因).Onceagain,Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused.Hopeyoucanacceptmyappologiesandunderstandmysituation.YoursSincerely,LiMing模板②Dear________,Iamexcessivelysorrytosay/tellyouthat①______________(直接表達自己不能實現先前的愿望或約定).②Now,Iamwritingyouthisletterofapologytoshowmydeepregret__________(表達歉意).③Pleaseacceptmysincereapology__________(誠懇希望對方能接受道歉).④Ifearyouaredispleasedat_________(表達出自己的心情，并請求對方原諒).⑤Ihopeyouwillunderstandmeandexcusemefor__________(過渡句).⑥Letmeexplain(開始介紹道歉的原因).⑦Thereasonformydelay/absencewasthat_________(闡述自己當時的處境和情況).⑧Ihadnowayoutbecause___________(總結自己道歉的原因).⑨Thereforeit’snotinmypowerto___________(希望下次再次實現愿望).⑩Naturally,Iwanttosuggest____________.Ishallbegladifyouwillkindlywriteandtellmewhenandwhereyou____________(約定下次約會的時間和地點)WemaymeetagainandIhopetoseeyousoon.SincerelyYours,LiHua常用表達常用表達1.

道歉信中開頭段常用句式和套話Iamwritingthislettertoexpressmyregret…我寫這封信是想表達我的遺憾……Iamwritingtoapologizefor…我寫信是為……道歉。Iwouldliketogiveyoumyapologyfor…我想……向你道歉。Iamverysorrytosaythat…我很抱歉……Imustapologizeabout(not)doingsth…對于做了/沒做……，我必須道歉。Pleaseacceptmysincereapologyfor…請接受我對于^的真誠道歉。Iamwritingtosaysorryfor…我寫信是想對……說抱歉。Iamterriblysorry,but…我很抱歉，但是……2.中間段：陳述理由+補救措施陳述理由:理由：Ishouldhavebeenabletoattendyourlecture,butduetothefactthatsomethingurgenthappened,I'llhavetotaketheplaceofmymothertopickmyauntupattheairport,whoseflighthappenstoarriveonSaturdaynight.Andit'sthefirsttimethatmyaunthasreturnedtomyhometownsinceshestudiedabroadseveralyearsago.SoIhavenochoice/optionbuttocanceltheappointmentwithyou.我本應該參加你的講座，但由于發生了緊急的事情，我要代替母親到機場接我阿姨，她的航班在周六晚抵達，這是阿姨自從幾年前去留學第一次回國。我別無選擇只好取消和你的約會。補救措施：1.Iwantyoutoknowhowbadwefeelaboutitandtoassureyouthatitwillhappenagain.我想讓你知道我們有多難過，我向你保證這不會再發生了。2.Ihopethatthisdoesnotcauseyoutoomuchinconvenience.我希望這不會給你帶來太多的不便。3.Itwouldbeverykind(considerate)ofyoutogivemeanotherchancetodosth.Ipromiseitwillneverhappenagain.你太好了，再給我一次機會做某事。我保證不會再發生這種事情。4.Ifitisconvenientforyou,let'shaveanotherappointmenttodosth.如果方便的話，我們再約去做某事。5.WouldyoumindifIchangetheappointmenttime?你會介意我改變約會的時間嗎?6.Bytheway,canwehavedinnertogethersometimenextweek?順便說一下，我們在下周的某個時間一起吃晚飯好嗎?7.lsitpossiblethatImakeupforthelossbydoingsth.?可能讓我做某事來彌補損失嗎?3.道歉信中結尾段常用句式和套話Onceagain,Iamsorryforanyinconveniencecaused.我對于所造成的任何不便再次道歉。Pleaseallowmetosaysorryagain.請允許我再一次說抱歉。Hopeyoucanacceptmyapologiesandunderstandmysituation.希望你們能夠接受我的道歉，理解我的處境。Isincerelyhopethatyouwillbeabletothinkinmypositionandacceptmyapologies.我真誠的希望你能夠站在我的位置想一想，并且接受我的道歉。IwanttoletyouknowhowregretfulIamfeelingnow.我想讓你知道我現在感覺多么的遺憾。IamsorrythatIcan’t…buttrustthatyouwillbeabletounderstand.很抱歉我不能……，但我相信，你會理解的。高考真題精講高考真題精講（2021·北京卷）假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華。你和英國好友Jim原定本周末一起外出，你因故不能赴約。請你用英文給他寫一封電子郵件，內容包括：1.表達歉意并說明原因;2.提出建議并給出理由。注意：1.詞數100左右;2.開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數。DearJim,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJim,I’msorrytoinformyouthatIcan’tgooutwithyouthisweekend.I’vejustbeentoldthatIhavetogoandvisitmysickgrandfatherinthecountryside,whowassuddenlyadmittedtothehospital.Ihopethechangewon’tcauseyoutoomuchtrouble.HowaboutgoingoutnextSaturdaymorning?Ifit’sconvenientforyou,let’smeetattheschoolgateat9:00.Pleaseletmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.Ishouldbeavailableanytimenextweekend.Inaddition,nextSaturday,therewillbeaflowershowinBeihaiPark.Thenwecangotoseetheflowerstogether.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生給英國好友Jim寫一封電子郵件，就因故不能赴約而致歉并建議再約。【詳解】1.詞匯積累通知：tell→inform除此之外：inaddition→besides適合：fit→suit有空的：available→free2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Inaddition,nextSaturday,therewillbeaflowershowinBeihaiPark.Thenwecangotoseetheflowerstogether.拓展句：Inaddition,therewillbeaflowershowinBeihaiParknextSaturday,whenwecangotoseetheflowerstogether.【點睛】[高分句型1]I’msorrytoinformyouthatIcan’tgooutwithyouthisweekend.(運用了that引導的賓語從句)[高分句型2]I’vejustbeentoldthatIhavetogoandvisitmysickgrandfatherinthecountryside,whowassuddenlyadmittedtothehospital.(運用了who引導的非限制性定語從句)名校模擬題提升練名校模擬題提升練10篇1．（2023·湖南·湖南師大附中高三階段練習）假定你是李華，你的外教老師David與你約定每周六晚上一次口語課，但是你身體有不適的癥狀，按照規定要居家隔離，因此，請你給David寫一封道歉信，內容包括：1.表達歉意；2.說明理由；3.提出補救方案。注意：1.寫作詞數應為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearDavid,I’mindeedsorrytotellyouthatIwon’tbeabletoattendtheoralclassthisSaturdayasscheduled.Recently,I’mnotfeelingwellandrequiredtostayathomeaccordingtotherules.However,Iamveryfondofyourclassesandwouldliketomakeupforthelostlessons.SoI’mwonderingwhetherit’spossibleforthelessontoberecordedandifso,Imayhavethechancetolearnandreviewthroughthevideo.Pleaseallowmetosaysorryagain.Isincerelyhopethatyouwillbeabletounderstandmysituationandacceptmyapology.Yours,LiHua2．（2023·廣東東莞·高三校考階段練習）假定你是李華，你的朋友Sarah曾邀請你參加她下個星期四的生日晚會，可是弟弟生病了，需要人照看，不能去參加。請根據以下要點給他寫一封道歉信。1.表達歉意;2.解釋原因;3.提出彌補的辦法。注意：1.詞數80左右;2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。3.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。DearSarah,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearSarah,

I’mindeedverysorrythatIwon’tattendtoyourbirthdaypartyasIwasplannedbefore.

Asforthesuddenchange,Ihavetoadmitithasanunavoidablereason.Mylittlebrotherarebeingsickfordays.Soitisnecessaryforhimtobecared.Iamresponsibleforlookingafterhimwhilemyparentsareworking.Therefore,Ihavetostaytoacpanyhimthatday.Ihopeyoucanunderstandmysituationandforgivemyabsence.

Isitpossibleforyouandmetohaveaprivatemeeingatthisweekend?Idolongforapleasantchatwithyouandgivethepresenttoyou.

ItismuchtomyregretthatImissthechanceofsuchahappygettoghther.Onceagain,pleaseacceptemysecereapology.Yours,LiHua3．（2023·江蘇揚州·高三階段練習）假如你是李華，與朋友Smith約好了本周末去市博物館，因故不能赴約，請給他寫封道歉信，內容包括：1.表示歉意；2.說明原因；3.另約時間。注意：1.詞數80左右；2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。DearSmith,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearSmith,I’mwritingtosincerelyapologizefornotbeingabletoacpanyyoutoMuseumthisweekend.Myheadmasterinformedmethatwewouldparticipateinavoluntaryactivitytohelpcreateacivilizedcity,whichissoimportantthatIdon’twanttomissit.ThatisthereasonwhyIwon’tbeavailableatthattime.Ifit’sconvenientforyou,wecanmakeitnextweekend,orletmeknowwhattimesuitsyoubest.Pleaseallowmetosaysorryagain.Yours,LiHua4．（2023·廣西玉林·統考模擬預測）假定你是李華，你和你的朋友Mike約好了本周六去博物館，但是由于你臨時要參加“美麗市容，從我做起”(Beautifulcity,Startfromme)的志愿者活動而不能與其同行。請根據以下要點給他寫一封道歉信。1.表達歉意；2.簡介志愿者活動；3.另約時間。注意：1.詞數100左右；2可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。DearMike,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearMike,Havingsignedupforavoluntaryactivity,I’mterriblysorryfornotbeingabletotourthemuseumwithyouthisSaturday.Therefore,I’writingtoexpressmysincereapologyfortheinconveniencecausedallofsudden.Asyouknow,I’vebeenwaitingforachancetodevotemyselftoraisingpublicawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.Consequently,whentheopportunitytovolunteercame,Iseizeditwithouthesitation.Onthatday,allthevolunteerswillputuppostersabouthowtoleadalowcarbonlifestyleandpickupthetrashalongtheroads,whichwilltakeawholeday.Consideringthat,IamafraidthatIwon'tkeepmyword.Itispossibleforustofixedanotherdatewhenyouareavailable.WordsfailtoconveyhowapologeticIfeelandIhopethatyoucanacceptmyheartfeltandgenuineapology.

Yours,LiHua5．（2023·全國·高三專題練習）假定你是李華，寒假中作為交流生短期去英國培訓，回國時因為匆忙，把房東Bob的音樂光盤夾在行李中帶了回來。現在請你給Bob寫一封道歉信，要點如下：1.對自己帶走音樂光盤表示歉意；2.提出解決的辦法；3.再次請求原諒。注意：1.詞數100左右；2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。3.開頭語和結束語已為你寫好。DearBob,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearBob,Iamwritingtomakeanapologytoyou,forIforgottoreturnamusicCDwhichIborrowedfromyoulastweek.YesterdayIcamebackfromEnglandandfounditinmyluggage.Iamsosorrythatyoucannotlistentoitatpresent.TheCDwhichIborrowedfromyouismadeinEngland,soIbelieveyoucanfindanotheroneinyourlocalstore.HowaboutyourbuyinganotherCDbyyourselfandIwillpayforit?Ifyoucannotfindasimilarone,Iwouldsenditbacktoyouthroughapostoffice.Andifthereareanyothersolutionsyoulike,pleaseletmeknow.Iamterriblysorryagainformycarelessness.Pleaseforgivemeforanyinconveniencecaused.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua7．（2022春·全國·高三專題練習）假如你是李華，你和你的朋友Mike約好了本周末去博物館，但是你因為臨時要參加學校組織的“美麗市容，從我做起”的志愿活動，而不能同行。請根據以下要點給他寫一封道歉信。1.表達歉意；2.簡介活動內容和意義；3.另約時間。注意：字數100詞左右___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearMike,Havingsignedupforavoluntaryactivity,I’mterriblysorryfornotbeingabletotourthemuseumwithyouthisSaturday.Therefore,I’writingtoexpressmysincereapologyfortheinconveniencecausedallofsudden.Asyouknow,I’vebeenwaitingforachancetodevotemyselftoraisingpublicawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.Consequently,whentheopportunitytovolunteercame,Iseizeditwithouthesitation.Onthatday,allthevolunteerswillputuppostersabouthowtoleadalowcarbonlifestyleandpickupthetrashalongtheroads,whichwilltakeawholeday.Consideringthat,IamafraidthatIwon’tkeepmyword.Itispossibleforustofixedanotherdatewhenyouareavailable.WordsfailtoconveyhowapologeticIfeelandIhopethatyoucanacceptmyheartfeltandgenuineapology.Yours,LiHua7．（2023·廣東東莞·高三階段練習）假定你是李華，你校組織的“英語交流到山區”活動將于下周一舉行。你是志愿者，但因生病不能參加，請你用英語給組織者Mr.George寫一封道歉信，內容包括：1.表達歉意；2.解釋原因；3.已將志愿工作安排他人完成。注意：1.寫作詞數應為80左右；2.請在答題卡的相應位置作答。DearMr.George,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearMr.George,IamLiHua,avolunteeroftheactivity"EnglishmunicationtotheMountains".Now,I'mwritingtoexpressmysincereapologytoyoufornotbeingpresentattheactivitytobeheldnextMonday.ThereasonformyabsenceisthatIsuddenlyfellill.Myparentssentmetohospital,andIhavetostaythereforaweek.Asformyvolunteerwork,IhaveaskedmyclassmateTomtodoit.Sincerelyhopingthatyoucanacceptmyapologies.Yours,LiHua8．（2023·北京·高三專題練習）假定你是李華，在澳大利亞留學期間，父母維修廚房時影響到了鄰居James，請給他寫一封道歉信，內容包括：1.表達歉意；2.解釋原因。注意：1.詞數100左右；2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearJames,

Wewereveryshockedtogetyourletterplainingaboutthenoisefromourflat.Wedidn'texpectitspoiledyoureveningsandcausedyousomedistress.Wedohopeyouacceptourapologies.

Myparentsarebusyatworkduringdaytime,sotheyhavetorefitourkitchenintheevenings.What'smore,theyarenotsoexpertatdoinghouserepairsthattheyhavedifficultyingettingthingstofitproperly.Astherepairisstillnotfinished,wewillcallinaprofessionalworkertofinishtheworkthisweekend.Wepromisethathe'llworkonlyduringdaytimehours,soyouwon'tbedisturbedintheeveningsagain.

Sorrytohavecausedtheseproblems.Yours,LiHua9．（2023·河南·高三專題練習）假設你是高三學生李華，昨天，你和你的外籍同桌Tom關于用集體班費給災區捐款這一問題發生了一些小爭執，請你按照以下要求給他寫一封道歉信。1.表達自己的歉意；2.闡述道歉的原因(至少2條)；3.表達自己的友好之情，提倡(advocate)相互理解、相互尊重。注意：1.詞數100左右。2.文中不得提及考生所在學校和本人姓名。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________