名字：______________?HappyChildren’sDay!！！讀后續寫之第70期周報導學案--G103/Mia續：Para1:Afterfurtherdiscussion,Ilearnedthejuggler'smotherlivedthreeminutesfrommyhouse.Para2:Oncebackhome,Icalledthenumberonthecrumpled(弄皺的)pieceofpaper.Whatdidwediscuss?WhatwastherelationshipbetweenIandthejuggler?Whatwasthenumber?WhydidIcallthenumber?讀：(在長長的文章里挖呀挖呀挖)[1]ManyyearsagoIvisitedBern,thebeautifulcapitalofSwitzerland.Oneevening,Iwalkedintotheheartofthecity.Oldmenplayedcheckersatstonetablesamid(在...中)musicians,jugglers(變戲法的人)andotherstreetperformers.Istoppedtoenjoythesightsandsounds.[2]AnAmericanaccentrangout①abovethevoicesoftheothers."One...Two...Three!"Heartylaughter②erupted(爆發)fromthecrowdaroundajuggler.Afterthequick-handedmagictricks,hisattentiveaudiencethrewcoinsandmovedon.[3]Asthejugglerbentdown(彎下)tocollectthesmallchange,Isaid,"Ilikedyouract."Thejugglerlookedupwithasurprisedexpression,asifhedidn'texpectanyonetostayaround."Hey,thanks!YousoundlikeanAmerican.''[4]Ilaughed,admittingthatI'dbeendrawnto③speakwithhimpartlybecauseofhisAmericanaccent.IpolitelyaskedhimwhatpartoftheStateshewasfrom."California,"thejugglerreplied."Andyou?"Irespondedinthesamegeneralway.“Pennsylvania.OutsidePhiladelphia."Thejugglerstoppedpickingupcoins."Oh...whereoutsidePhiladelphia?"Iwasslightlytakenaback.④WhydidthenameofthetownmatterifhewasfromCalifornia?Feelingstrange,Ianswered."Haverford."[5]Thejugglerwasverysurprisedandhisfacesoftened.Hespokejustaboveawhisper.⑤"IwenttoHaverfordHighSchool.""ButIthoughtyousaidyouwerefromCalifornia?"Isaid.Thejugglerdrewinabreath⑥andpouredout⑦astoryhe'dlockedawayforalongtime.[6]"IdiscoveredIlovedtoperformwhileIwasinhighschool.IwantedtostudytheartsincollegebutmyfatherfeltIshouldstudyaserioussubject,likemedicine.IfeltIhadnochoice,soIwenttocollegeinCalifornia,butIcouldn'tstudywhatIdidn'tlove.Ratherthangohomeandfacemyfather,IlefttheStatestoachievemydreaminEurope.”Withaquietsigh(嘆氣),heconcluded,"Ihaven'tspokenwithmymominsevenyears.'KeyExpressions動作描寫1ringout2heartylaughter3bedrawnto5speakjustaboveawhisper6drawinabreath7pourout心理描寫4Iwasslightlytakenaback.Elements(5W1H)WHO: _________________________________________________________________WHERE:________________________________________________________________WHEN: _________________________________________________________________WHY: _________________________________________________________________WHAT/HOW: __________________________________________________________ConflictPlot: ______________________________________________Emotion:______________________________________________Solution_________________________________________________________Theme_________________________________________________________寫：Para1:Afterfurtherdiscussion,Ilearnedthejuggler'smotherlivedthreeminutesfrommyhouse.Action: ______________________________________________________Emotion:______________________________________________________Para2:Oncebackhome,Icalledthenumberonthecrumpled(弄皺的)pieceofpaper.Action: ______________________________________________________Emotion:______________________________________________________萬能模板：（更適合中國寶寶體質的句型）1.動作描寫：Withoutasecondthought,句子。沒有多想/毫不猶豫，....Withoutasecondthought,Inoddedandhuggedwithhimtightly.①沒有多想，他撿起了地上的食物。Withoutasecondthought,__________________________________________________.②我毫不猶豫地將我知道的告訴她。Withoutasecondthought,__________________________________________________.③沒有多想，他追隨自己的心去追求自己的夢想。Withoutasecondthought,__________________________________________________.心理描寫：Awaveof+情緒名詞+sweptover人.誰感到