《大學英語》課程思政12023/6/56/5/2023TeachingContents教學內容TeachingObjective教學目標TeachingMethods教學方法MainPoints重點難點大學英語篇章寫作熟悉并掌握三段式作文法，利用對比法進行觀點論證講解+例示+啟發+討論+演練文章的連貫性和思想性過渡詞和連接詞的應用22023/6/56/5/202301020304Revision寫作模式回顧Analysis

素材獲取與分析Application素材整合與應用Summary方法提煉與總結

目錄CONTENTS32023/6/52023/6/56/5/202301401寫作模式的復習與回顧WritingPattern

2023/6/52023/6/56/5/2023Anessaynormallyhasthreemainparts:introduction,bodyandconclusion.IntroductionBodyConcludingpartHowtowriteacollegeessay:(三段式作文法)WritingdevicesEssaywriting52023/6/56/5/202302602寫作素材的獲取與分析WritingMaterials2023/6/52023/6/56/5/20237China'sfournewtechnologiesinthemodernsociety中國新“四大發明”?2023/6/52023/6/56/5/2023四大發明曾經我們耳熟能詳，我們引以為榮compasspaper-makinggunpowerprinting2023/6/52023/6/56/5/20232023/6/52023/6/56/5/20232023/6/52023/6/56/5/2023onlineshoppinghighspeedrailwayAlipayofobike2023/6/52023/6/56/5/2023改革開放40周年“中國夢”“一帶一路”“新四大發明”

Ithasbeen40yearssincethereformandopening-uppolicywascarriedout,andChinahasmaderemarkableachievementseversince.Asthedevelopingpolicyof"OneBelt,OneRoad"furthersthecooperationbetweenChinaandtherelatedcountries,Chinahasbeenplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleintheinternationalaffairs.Thenewadvancedhigh-techshavelaidgreatinfluenceonoursocietyandarehighlypraisedbothathomeandabroad,themostinfluencialofwhichareonlineshopping,highspeedrailway,ofobikeandAlipay.ThistopicwillbefocusedonAlipay.寫作第一步(Introduction)：時代背景分析介紹，導入話題2023/6/5改革開放四十年中國取得了舉世矚目的成就，“一帶一路”政策的實施，促進了中國和周邊國家的合作，中國的國際影響力日益增加，中國的發展創新不僅影響和改變著我們的生活，也引發越來越多的國際關注。由此，外國青年評出了所謂的“中國新四大發明”。2023/6/56/5/2023traditionalwaye-paymentComparedwiththetraditionalwaytopay,therearemanyadvantagesofAlipayandothere-payments.convenientsecure/safeeasytouserelaxinginconvenientnotsecureworrying寫作第二步(Body)：對比分析，優劣比較，觀點論證。傳統支付方式的弊端電子支付方式的優勢給大家五分鐘對比分析，分別列舉其利弊，然后分享討論2023/6/52023/6/56/5/2023Everycoinhastwosides.WeshouldnotoverlookthedangerofspendingtoomuchmoneybyAlipayorothere-payments.High-techshavegreatlyinfluencedandchangedourlifenowadays,therefore,wearesupposedtotakeadvantageofthehigh-techstobetterourlifeandbenefitthesociety.AsChinese,weshouldtakeprideinthetremendousachievementswehavealreadyaccomplishedaswellasmakeourgreateffortstomakecontributionsforthedevelopmentofourcountry.倡導理性消費，杜絕過度消費，提高安全意識！寫作第三步(Conclusion)：總結與倡議。2023/6/52023/6/56/5/202303Applicationofthematerialsinwriting1503素材的整合與應用2023/6/52023/6/56/5/2023

Ithasbeen40yearssincethereformandopening-uppolicywascarriedout,andChinahasmaderemarkableachievementseversince.Asthedevelopingpolicyof"OneBelt,OneRoad"furthersthecooperationbetweenChinaandtherelatedcountries,Chinahasbeenplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleintheinternationalaffairs.Thenewadvancedhigh-techshavelaidgreatinfluenceonoursociety,themostinfluencialofwhichareonlineshopping,highspeedrailway,ofobikeandAlipay.HereI'dliketotakeabouttheadvantagesofAlipayandothere-payscomparedwiththetraditionalways.(Introduction)MyViewonE-payment2023/6/52023/6/56/5/2023Everycoinhastwosides.WeshouldnotoverlookthedangerofspendingtoomuchmoneybyAlipayorothere-pays.Wearesupposedtotakeadvantageofthehigh-techstobetterourlifeandbenefitthesociety.

(Conclusion)

Comparedwiththetraditionalpayway,therearemanyadvantagesofAlipayandothere-pays.

Firstofall,e-paysbringusgreatconvenienceandsaveuslotsoftroubles.Wedon'tneedtotakealargeamountofmoneywithuswhenwemakealargepurchurseandlikewisewedon'thavetopreparesmallchangesaswell.Inaddition,wecanpayanywhereatanytimewithe-paysandallweneedisjustaphoneathand.Withoutmoneywithus,itgivesusasenseofsecuritybecauseweneedn'tworryaboutthelossortheftofthemoney.Lastbutnottheleast,e-paysareeasytouseaslongasthereisaphoneandwifi.Anyoneatanyagecanlearntousee-paystodoshoppings.Itisindispensableforourdailylife.(Body)2023/6/52023/6/56/5/20230404方法提煉與總結Summary2023/6/52023/6/56/5/2023Topic:Theadvantagesofe-paymentsIntroduction:

背景描述，自然導入話題Thenewadvancedhigh-techshavelaidgreatinfluenceonoursociety,themostinfluencialofwhichareonlineshopping,highspeedrailway,ofobikeandAlipay.HereI'dliketotakeabouttheadvantagesofAlipayandothere-payscomparedwiththetraditionalways.學習難點好的開始等于成功的一半。2023/6/52023/6/56/5/2023Body:

通過對比，發現優劣，論證觀點Point1:convenient?traditionalway?e-paysPoint2:secure/safe?traditionalway?e-paysPoint3:easytouse

?traditionalway?e-pays學習重點通過對比展開論證2023/6/52023/6/56/5/2023Conclusion:（總結觀點，發出倡議）WeshouldnotoverlookthedangerofspendingtoomuchmoneybyAlipayorothere-pays.Wearesupposedtotakeadvantageofthehigh-techstobetterourlifeandbenefitthesociety.加分點點睛之筆，拔高升華2023/6/52023/6/56/5/20232023/6/52023/6/56/5/2023tobecontinuedStructurewordsComparison:similarly,likewise,also,justas,similarto,thesameas,notonly...butalso...Contrast:

ontheotherhand,incontrast,incomparison,eventhough,although,whereas,while,unlike...加分小妙招——結構詞匯的巧妙運用232023/6/56/5/2023tobecontinuedTransitionalwordsFirstly,…Thismeansthat…Anotheradvantageisthat…Inotherwords,…Finally,…