高三英語書面(shūmiàn)表達優(yōu)質(zhì)課課件第一頁，共37頁。山東2007年高考考試說明第II卷書面表達部分的解讀(jiědú)與例證關于寫作“‘寫作’的詞數(shù)要求提高到120—150詞匯，既要求表達事實信息，又要陳述個人觀點，相對以往試題而言，思維和表達的空間驟然增大，需要考生花大力氣進行有關訓練。”

第二頁，共37頁。《齊魯晚報》2006年12月19日B2版[例證(lìzhèng)]當前不少文學作品被改編成電影。有人選擇看電影，有人則喜歡讀原著。請你以“Filmorbook,whichdoyouprefer?”為題，按照下列要點寫一篇英語短文：第三頁，共37頁。看電影：省時、有趣、易懂讀原著：細節(jié)更多、語言(yǔyán)優(yōu)美我的看法及理由注意：1、詞數(shù)：100-120文章題目和開頭已給出（不計入詞數(shù)）。2、參考詞匯：originalwork或bookintheoriginal（原著）

Filmorbook,whichdoyouprefer?Someofusthinkthatitisbettertoseethefilmthantoreadthebookintheoriginal.……………第四頁，共37頁。

Filmorbook,whichdoyouprefer?Someofusthinkthatitisbettertoseethefilmthantoreadthebookintheoriginal.……………[badbeginnings]

Idon’tthinkseeingafilmisbetterthanreadingabook.b.Asforme,……c.Othersholdtheviewthat……[badconclusions]

Ithinkbothfilmsandbookshavetheiradvantages.b.Ihavenopreferencebetweenthetwo.c.Ifirstwatchafilm,thenreadthebook.第五頁，共37頁。GoodConclusions：我的看法(kànfǎ)及理由：Revisedfilmisjustlikeonetreeintheoriginalwork’sforest.Iprefertogoacrosstheforestratherthanenjoyonlyonetree.Throughreading,everyreaderwillhaveadifferentHamletinmind.Sodon’tgiveupreading.Let’stastetheoriginalflavorofart.…Booksintroduceusintothebestsociety.Byreadingabook,wehearwhattheysaidanddid;weseethemasiftheywerereallyalive;wesympathizewiththem,enjoywiththem.第六頁，共37頁。[給出的參考答案]Someofusthinkthatitisbettertoseethefilmthantoreadthebookintheoriginal.Thereasonisthatittakeslesstimetounderstandthewholestory.Besides,thefilmisusuallymoreinteresting,anditiseasiertofollow.Someothershavejusttheoppositeopinion.Theythinkthattheycangetmoredetailedinformationfromtheoriginal.Meanwhile,thelanguageinthebookispossiblymorelivelyandbeautiful.第七頁，共37頁。Personally,Iagreewiththesecondview.ActuallyIhavemorereasonsforit.IthinkIcanstayathome,readingquietlyinasituationofmyown,andwhat’smore,Iamabletobetterunderstandtheauthor’sideas.Inaword,toreadtheoriginalworkisbetterthantoseethefilmbasedonit.第八頁，共37頁。高考英語(yīnɡyǔ)作文模版

對比觀點題型闡述主題題型解決方法題型

說明利弊題型

第九頁，共37頁。對比觀點題型（1）

要求論述兩個(liǎnɡɡè)對立的觀點并給出自己的看法。

1．有一些人認為。。。

2．另一些人認為。。。

3．我的看法。。。

（2）給出一個(yīɡè)觀點，要求考生反對這一觀點

第十頁，共37頁。Thetopicof①----------主題）isbecomingmoreandmorepopularrecently.Therearetwosidesofopinionsaboutit.SomepeoplesayAistheirfavorite.Theyholdtheirviewforthereasonof②-----------------（支持A的理由一）Whatismore,③------------理由二).Moreover,④---------------(理由三).

WhileothersthinkthatBisabetterchoiceinthefollowingthreereasons.Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一).Secondly(besides),⑥------------------（理由二）.Thirdly(finally),⑦------------------(理由三).

Frommypointofview,Ithink⑧--------------（我的觀點(guāndiǎn)）.Thereasonisthat⑨--------------------(原因).Asamatteroffact,therearesomeotherreasonstoexplainmychoice.Forme,theformerissurelyawisechoice.

第十一頁，共37頁。（2）給出一個觀點，要求考生反對這一觀點

Somepeoplebelievethat①----------------（觀點一）.Forexample,theythink②-----------------（舉例說明)．Anditwillbringthem③-------(為他們帶來的好處).Inmyopinion,Ineverthinkthisreasoncanbethepoint.Foronething,④-------------(我不同意該看法(kànfǎ)的理由一).Foranotherthing,⑤-----------------(反對的理由之二)．

FormallwhatIhavesaid,Iagreetothethoughtthat⑥------------------(我對文章所討論主題的看法(kànfǎ))．第十二頁，共37頁。闡述主題題型

要求(yāoqiú)從一句話或一個主題出發(fā)，按照提綱的要求(yāoqiú)進行論述．

１.

闡述名言或主題所蘊涵的意義．

２．分析并舉例使其更充實．第十三頁，共37頁。Thegoodoldproverb----------------（名言或諺語）remindsusthat-----(釋義(shìyì)).Indeed,wecanlearnmanythingsformit.Firstofall,----------(理由一).Forexample,-------------(舉例說明).Secondly,-------(理由二).Anothercaseisthat-------(舉例說明).Furthermore,------------------(理由三)．

Inmyopinion,----------------(我的觀點).Inshort,whateveryoudo,pleaserememberthesay---A.Ifyouunderstanditandapplyittoyourstudyorwork,you’llnecessarilybenefitalotfromit.

第十四頁，共37頁。解決(jiějué)方法題型

要求考生列舉出解決(jiějué)問題的多種途徑

１．問題現(xiàn)狀

２．怎樣解決(jiějué)(解決(jiějué)方案的優(yōu)缺點第十五頁，共37頁。Inrecentdays,wehavetofaceaproblem-----A,whichisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.First,------------(說明Ａ的現(xiàn)狀)．Second,---------------(舉例進一步說明現(xiàn)狀)

ConfrontedwithA,weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewiththesituation.Foronething,-----------(解決方法(fāngfǎ)一).Foranother-------------(解決方法(fāngfǎ)二).Finally,-------(解決方法(fāngfǎ)三).

Personally,Ibelievethat-----------(我的解決方法(fāngfǎ)).Consequently,I’mconfidentthatabrightfutureisawaitingusbecause--------------(帶來的好處).第十六頁，共37頁。寫作中需要注意的問題表示讓步關系的詞：although,though,eventhough/if…Throughreading,everyreaderwillhaveaaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocope版[例證(lìzhèng)]amabletobetterunderstandtheauthor’sideas.以簡潔明了的句子為主，避免為追求使用However,othersprefertogooutfortraveling,________itcanincreasetheirknowledgeandbroadenOthersholdtheviewthat……表示選擇關系的詞：or,either…or,…Marygotupanddressingquickly.filmthantoreadthebookintheoriginal.modernworld,andtobepunctualisnotonlyagoodquality,Icanstayathome,readingquietlyinasituationofmyown,andwhat’smore,Istudentshavenotarrivedanyagreement.……………說明利弊題型

這種題型往往要求先說明一下現(xiàn)狀，再對比事物本身的利弊，有時也會單從一個角度（利或弊）出發(fā)(chūfā)，最后往往要求考生表明自己的態(tài)度（或?qū)κ挛锴熬疤岢鲱A測）

１.說明事物現(xiàn)狀２.事物本身的優(yōu)缺點（或一方面）

３.你對現(xiàn)狀（或前景）的看法第十七頁，共37頁。NowadaysmanypeoplepreferAbecauseithasasignificantroleinourdailylife.Generally,itsadvantagescanbeseenasfollows.First-------(Ａ的優(yōu)點(yōudiǎn)之一).Besides-----------（Ａ的優(yōu)點(yōudiǎn)之二）.Buteverycoinhastwosides.Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent.Oneoftheimportantdisadvantagesisthat----------------(Ａ的第一個缺點)．Tomakemattersworse,--------------(Ａ的第二個點)．

Throughtheaboveanalysis,Ibelievethatthepositiveaspectsoverweighthenegativeones.Therefore,Iwouldliketo---------------(我的看法)．

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圖表作文(zuòwén)的框架第十九頁，共37頁。StudyingAbroadAttendingschoolsabroadhasmanyadvantages.Firstly,bylookingatourowncountryformoutside,wecanwidenourvisionandbroadenourminds.Secondly,wecanvisitfamousscenicspotsandmakefriendswiththelocalpeople.thirdly,wecanusetheforeignlanguage…quickly.However,therearealsosomedisadvantagesinattendingaforeignschool.Themostseriousproblemisthelanguagebarrier.Moststudentsdonothaveadequateknowledgeoflanguagespokenthere.Onarrivingthere,theyfinditdifficulttounderstandwhattheteachersaresaying.Furthermore,thecostoflivingismuchhigherthanthatinourcountry,somoststudentshavetofindpart-timejobtosupportthemselves.Onthewhole,itisagoodthingtostudyabroad.However,onemustnotlosesightofthedisadvantages.說明(shuōmíng)利弊型第二十頁，共37頁。

OnpunctualityPunctualitymeansobservingregularorappointedtime.Thereisnodoubtthatpunctualityisofgreatimportanceinmodernworld,andtobepunctualisnotonlyagoodquality,butitisalsotoshowrespectforothersandtowintrust.AsfarasIamconcerned,failuretobepunctualinkeepingone’sappointmentisinvitedtoadinnerandarriveslaterthantheappointedtime,hekeepsalltheothersguestswaiting.Thisisgreatdiscourtesytowardsboththeguestsandthehost.Asaproverbsays,“Timefliesnevertoberecalled”,thisistrue.Ifwelosesomething,wemayfinditagain.Butlosttimecanneverberegained.Infact,timeitselfislife.Therefore,wastingother’stimeisthesameastakingawaytimefromothers’lives.闡述(chǎnshù)主題題型第二十一頁，共37頁。

IstheonlywayouttogotocollegeWehadadiscussionaboutwhetheritistheonlywayoutforseniorstudentstogotocollege.Viewsvaryfrompersontoperson.Themajorityofstudentsconsideritnecessarytogotocollege.Theythinkitcanwidentheirknowledgeandimprovetheirqualities.Onlyinthiswaycantheyfindbetterjobsaftergraduation.Veryfewstudentsthinkitunnecessarytogotouniversity,becausethetuitionistoohighfortheirfamilytoafford.What’smore,it’sratherhardforcollegegraduatestofindsatisfactoryjobs.Thirtypercentofthestudents,however,believe“AllroadsleadtoRome.”Therefore,itdoesn’tmakeanydifferencewhethertheygotocollegeornot.Inmyopinion,wecanreceiveabettereducationatcollegesothatwecanseverourmotherland.圖表(túbiǎo)作文第二十二頁，共37頁。怎樣寫好一篇英語(yīnɡyǔ)作文第二十三頁，共37頁。寫作中需要注意的問題了解短文(duǎnwén)寫作的內(nèi)容及要求把握好寫作步驟寫作時要注意“三忌”形式上要一致避免犯小的筆誤（語法，拼寫）書寫規(guī)范，工整第二十四頁，共37頁。形式上的一致也是運用英語進行(jìnxíng)表達時需要十分注意的Twentypercentofthestudentsinourclassisfromthesuburb.b.人稱、指代要一致BringyourbooksheretomorrowandIwillreturnittothelibrary.c.平行(對稱)關系要一致Myteacher,MrWang,ispatientaswellasimagination.d.時態(tài)（語態(tài)）的起點要一致Marygotupanddressingquickly.第二十五頁，共37頁。書面表達(biǎodá)注意銜接與連貫表示轉折關系的詞：but,while,however,yet,ratherthan,not…but,whereas,…表示選擇關系的詞：or,either…or,…表示原因，結果關系的詞：for,thus,because,since,…表示并列關系：notonly…butalso,and,both…and,aswellas.neither…nor..,…表示時間關系的詞：when,while,as,before,after,….表示目的的詞：forthispurpose,sothat,inorderthat,…表示讓步關系的詞：although,though,eventhough/if…表示條件的詞：if,unless,as/solongas,…第二十六頁，共37頁。eg:Therefore,it’sveryimportantforustoformhealthyeatinghabits.__________,badeatinghabitsarestillverycommonamongusstudents.(2006福建卷)______youdidn’tspeakclearly,_____Ididn’tlistenwell.However,othersprefertogooutfortraveling,________itcanincreasetheirknowledgeandbroadentheirhorizons.(2006陜西卷)However,thischangehasbad_________goodeffects,especiallydependenceontheInternet.(2006廣東(guǎngdōng)卷)________hegothome,hesaidtohisgrandpa,“Birdsalsoneedfriends!”(2006遼寧卷)HoweveraswellassinceEitherorWhen第二十七頁，共37頁。寫好主題句：一.主題句在段落中常出現(xiàn)的位置由兩種。1.段落開端:后面(hòumian)的句子提供支持信息或論證。Someofusthinkthatitisbettertoseethefilmthantoreadthebookintheoriginal.Thereasonisthatittakeslesstimetounderstandthewholestory.Besides,thefilmisusuallymoreinterestinganditiseasiertofollow.段落結尾：前面提供細節(jié)的支持句，最后用一句總結性的主題句加以概括。I’mahighschoolstudentsinBeijing,wheretheWinterAsianGameswillstart.MyspokenEnglishisgoodandIcancommunicatewithforeignersfluently.AndIhaveothervirtues.IlikesportsandI’mfamiliarwithBeijing.SoIthinkI’msuitableforservingtheWAG.第二十八頁，共37頁。寫好段落主題句的三原則概括(gàikuò)全段主要內(nèi)容，既不能以偏概全，也不能隨意擴大范圍如：在一段介紹“我在英語學習聽說讀寫方面發(fā)生的變化”的段落中，主題句應該是：MyspokenEnglishhasimprovedalot.GreatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyEnglishstudy.2.有體現(xiàn)中心思想的關鍵詞或短語。3.以簡潔明了的句子為主，避免為追求使用復雜結構而導致理解錯誤或主題不鮮明的句子。

第二十九頁，共37頁。請根據(jù)下面選篇的結構(jiégòu)形式和內(nèi)容確定一個主題句。________________Firstly,thetuitionisreasonable.Secondly,theuniversitycanhelpthestudentsgetasumofloanfromthebanks,whichreducestheloadofpeasantfamilieslikemine.Thirdly,itsprogramincomputerisrecognizedastheleaderinthecountry.WhydoIchoosetomajorincomputerscienceinthisuniversity?B.ThereareseveralreasonswhyIhavedecidedtoattendthisuniversity.Learningaforeignlanguagehaschanged.Notsolongagostudentswouldsitwithpensinhand,writingthebasicformsofalanguage,andthelearningstructurestheywouldneverbeabletospeak.Inthatsameclassroomtoday,pensandnotebookshavebeenputaway.Thespokensoundsofforeignlanguagefilltheroom…第三十頁，共37頁。寫好段落擴展句擴展句是主題句的具體例證或有力支持。寫好擴展句要注意以下三點:擴展句要緊扣文章中心和主題句的內(nèi)容(nèiróng)。擴展句是主題句的補充和支持。2.擴展句的層次很重要。一個主題句可以從以下幾方面展開，每一個方面就是一個擴展句。這些擴展句只有按照時間，空間，因果等邏輯順序展開，文章才能層次分明，條理清晰。3.關聯(lián)詞對擴展句來說很重要。漢語注意思想相聯(lián)，英文強調(diào)形式相聯(lián)。從屬于一個主題句的幾個擴展句不能簡單地堆砌在一起了事，而要用豐富多采的連詞連接起來。第三十一頁，共37頁。閱讀(yuèdú)下面的文段，并為所給的擴展句排列順序：IthinkI’mfitforthejob._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________SoI’msureIcandothejobwellifIgettheposition.I’mfondofEnglishanddowellinbothspeakingandwriting.B.Asastudent,Ihavereadalotandhavemuchknowledgeinmanyfields.C.Aboveall,Ionceworkedasareporterformyschoolbroadcastingstation.D.Besides,I’measytogetalongwithandenjoyworkingtogetherwithothers.BADＣ第三十二頁，共37頁。寫好結尾句結尾句要緊扣段落主題，有要有所擴展。結尾句要力求簡潔有力，意味雋永。結尾句可以借鑒一下幾種方法：總結法如04年湖北試題關于英語學習(xuéxí)的