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強化寫作(考研寫作評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)最高檔③采用多種銜接,文字連貫,層次清晰寫作三要素考研圖畫寫作分析理解·話題商業(yè)、環(huán)保問題、溺愛、不孝敬老人、盲目追星、不悲觀··描述圖畫——闡釋意義——作出評論(舉例論證、應(yīng)對措施·一、首①討·最近,當(dāng)?shù)貓蠹埳系囊环藷崃业挠懻揜ecently,therearisesafiercediscussionaboutapictureinourlocal②現(xiàn)象發(fā)Thepastseveralyearshavewitnessedaphenomenonthatavarietyof…文章關(guān)鍵詞…h(huán)avebeengrowinglyprevalentandwidespreadinourmodernsociety. common\serioussocialproblem.Whatavividandthought-provokingpictureitisindescribingonecommon\serioussocialproblem.旨在aimtodo\aimatngItgoeswithoutsayingthatthepictureaimsatrevealingawidespreadandsevereprobleminChina,whicharousesindividuals’greatconcern.revealarouseone’sconcern=drawone’sattention=provokeone’s①漫畫②③Both二、描述圖畫岔路口之一一幅圖,描述由五個分句構(gòu)成Asisvividlyandthought-provokingshowninthecaricature·諷刺地荒謬可笑地清晰地obviously\apparently\noticeably生動地吸引人地發(fā)人深省地thought-·致,選擇圖畫正中間的。20042009:anoceanof·2004:ontheracetrack\playground養(yǎng)老足球賽:onafootball愛心是一盞燈:ontheinthedarkness:inthemiddle\centerofthe·坐sit躺liestand走walk跑runswim現(xiàn)在分詞:最常見:raisingone’s最常見:dressedin…五分句法描述Asissymbolicallyandvividlyshowninthecaricatureabove,ontheracetrackrunsayoungathlete,rushingtotheend,dressedinat-shirtandapairofshorts,withsweatfloatinginthewind.Asisvividlyandthought-provokingshowninthecaricatureabove,onthegroundruntwodisabledmen,assistingeachother,dressedincleanandtidyclothes,withtwopairsofsticksbehindthem.…,onapileofstrawstandsahen,raisingherheadandpromisingthathereggsareasroundasnormalones,withtwoeggsbehindher.…,inthesunshinestandsanAmericangirl,raisingherheadandsmilinghappily,dressedinChinesetraditionalcostume,withapairofearrings,anecklaceanda三、描述圖畫岔路口之二①中文標(biāo)題:圖畫上方\·Atthelower\upperpartofthepicture,wecansee\notice\observeseveralChinesecharacters,whichreadthat…·2004Atthelower\upperpartofthepicture,wecansee\notice\observeseveralChinesecharacters,whichreadthattheendisalsoanewbeginning.·2001:愛心是一盞燈,在越的地方越明Atthelower\upperpartofthepicture,wecansee\notice\observeseveralChinesecharacters,whichreadthatwherethereislove,thereishope.loveisalamp,andisbrighterinthedarkerplace.loveisalamp,beingbrighterinthedarker 邊緣、邊白處margin\marginal·Whatwecanseeonthemarginalpartofthepictureisashortpoem,whichmeansahortpom=amenindite\imply定性法\推理法①定性法使用主系表結(jié)構(gòu)——主語+am\is\are+表語n.A是 AB(某種精神)對A(圖中主人公)的影響很大\·TheinfluenceofthespiritonAisTheinfluenceofthespiritontwodisabledmenisTheinfluenceofthespirit\ChinesecultureontheAmericangirlis推理法Awilldosth.\Awillnotdosth.(A=圖中主人公Thetwodisabledmenwillkeepwalkingalloverthe·1998Thiskindofbusinessmanwillnotsurviveinthemarket·Obviously,wecansafelydrawaconclusionfromthepicturementionedabovethat…draw=make\reach\comeAorB(人\物AB之間的關(guān)系(態(tài)度、表現(xiàn)Obviously,wecansafelydrawaconclusionfromthepicturementionedabovethattheAmericangirliscrazyabouttheChinesecostume.圖中事物:twosportsmen\twofootballObviously,wecansafelydrawaconclusionfromthepicturementionedabovethattwofootballplayersarenotconfidentenough.neitherofthetwofootballplayersisconfidentpicture——pictures\twopictures\apairofsit——satlie——laystand——stoodwalk——walkedrun——ranswim——onthecontrary\bycontrastunfortunay\tooursurprise簡Whatwecanfindoutinthesecondpictureisfindout=discover\disclose·2003副詞:話題\bothAsissatiricallyandappealinglyillustratedintheuppercartoon,inthegreenhousestoodadelicateflower,growingwithflourishandvigor(bloominginafullshape\openingcompley),protectedbytheshelter,withthestormoutside.Whatwecanfindoutinthesecondpictureisthattheflowerdiedimmedia介賓短語:withouttheTooursurprise,whatwecanfindoutinthesecondpictureisthattheflowerperishedimmediaywhenmovedoutoftheprotection.Thefirstpictureshowsthat…Whatwecanseeinthesecondpictureisthat…ThefirstpictureshowsthatanattractiveandhandsomemanwritesthenameofBeckham,aBritishsoccerstar,onhischeek.Whatwecanseeinthesecondpictureisthataplain-lookingyoungsterpays300YuantomakehishairstyleassameasBeckham’s.① 脆的,易碎的;嬌貴的\纖弱的,嬌弱的\精美的,雅致的\需要處理的; “美麗脆弱,爹地奉獻一生,三角戀愛復(fù)雜,弟弟里面提示”·Undoubtedly,theintentionofthedrawingistoreveal·Byexhibitingthepictureabove,theexaminer(作者)triestoconvey(傳達)themessagethat…將其中的詞引申(由物到人,由小見大國內(nèi)問題:inourmodern國際問題:allaround\overthea+very的替換詞+increasingnumberofin+very的替換詞+increasingnumbersSuchtwoyoungmenarecrazyaboutBeckhamyoungmenarecrazyaboutfamous·Nowadays,adramaticallyincreasingnumberofyoungmenarecrazyaboutpeopleinourmodernsociety,suchasexcellentathletes,popsingers,famousactorsandCurrently,aconsiderablygrowingamountofforeignfriendsarecrazyaboutChinesecultureallaroundteworld,includingChinesefoof,PekingOpera,handwritingandotherforms.拓展段落的四種方法:兩大(舉例子、找原因)兩小(反證法、列數(shù)字舉例OurdailyhasbeenfilledwithavarietyofIcanfindoutnobetterillustrationotherthanthefollowingtwo(themostvitalone).Takeasanexample,例一Likewise,例二….(simultaneously\inthesamemanner)、、、didnot…butto·2004Ourdailyhasbeenfilledwithavarietyofexamples.TakeYaoMing,thebasketballstar,asanexample,hedidnotsatisfywhathehaveachievedinChina,buttogotoAmericantocontinuehiscareer(NBAtoplayingbasketball).反證·Withthequickeningpaceofmodernlifeandtheincreasinglyfiercecompetitioninallaspectsofoursociety,…沒有……文章,一個人很難成功hardlycananyonesucceedinhiscareerorstudyingwithout+文章.Iftherewerewere\had\shouldWerethereno正面…,嚴重…(sb.wouldhardlydosth.).③若此趨勢繼續(xù)下去,嚴重·Werethistrendistocontinue,oursociety\environmentwouldsufferagreatdestructionbythattime.Withthequickeningpaceofmodernlifeandtheincreasinglyfiercecompetitioninalllinesofoursociety,hardlycananyoneachievesuccessinhiscareerorstuffywithoutperseverance(堅持不懈).(determination\akindofspirit\astrongbelief)列數(shù)·Asthestatisticsfrequentlyappearingonofficialnews·Accordingtotherecentsurveyconductedbyacertainnon-profitorganization,…·thenumberof…h(huán)asincreased\decreasedby…%(27.3%)untillastDecember.·2005:homelessold·1998:fake··燈:peoplehel·:peopleenjoyingChinese·溫室花朵:parentsindulging\spoilingtheir·2004:graduates\successful·追星:peopleadoringpop·不自信:unconfident\pessimisticpeoplepeoplehavingnotenoughconfidencepeoplebeingnotconfident·互助:peopleheleach·2009:peoplesurfing·文化火鍋:peoplelearningdifferent(fieldsofculturepeoplelearningEnglish·船上丟peopledestroying·灑了的酒:peoplewithpassive·養(yǎng)老足球賽:oldmennottakengoodcareoldmennotgettinggood找原·Severalfactorsmayleadto\beresponsiblefortheThephenomenonmayattributeto\resultfromseveralfactors,Thephenomenonmainlyresultsfromanoceanofreasons,+butIshallhereexploreonlyafewofthemostsignificantOnonehand,ontheother(hand),Foronething,foranother(thing),(1)原①金錢(正反Thosepeoplepossess\lackthefinancialabilitytodosth.(不定式作目的狀語Sb.dosth.duetothefactthattheyarecorruptedin(2)Numerouspeoplearetemptedby albenefitstodoTraditionaleducationsucceeds\failsintrainingsb.todoUnexampledly(史無前例的)fiercesocialcompetitionforcessb.todo⑥Ourmodernsocietyisshortofrigidlawsandregulationstrestrictthosewhodo·(1)Itgoeswithoutsayingthat文章canwidenourhorizonsandexertaprofoundinfluenceonour alitiesandlives.(2)如果沒它有,我們不能想象會發(fā)生什Obviously,文章isofgreatsignificancetousthatweretherenoit,wecannotimaginewhatwouldhappenintheworld.·(1)Itwillshowmoreprofoundandfar-reachingsignificancewiththepassageof②:越來越嚴重的Itwillshowincreasinglyseriousresultswiththepassageoftime.②:從長遠來看,這必然是構(gòu)建和諧社會的絆腳Itmustbetheobstacleofestablishingaharmonioussocietyinthelong——到Tosolvethi
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