1、【分界一中英語校本教材】英語作文指導資料EnglishWriting一、例題精析書面表達（滿分25分）題目：假設你叫王平，你認識到HappyTeens是一個特地經過睜開豐富多彩的活動來解決青少年問題的組織。請用英語給HappyTeens的主席Mr.Holmes寫一封電子郵件，介紹同學李強加入他們的組織。信的開頭和結尾已寫好，不計入總詞數。要點：李強是九年級二班的尖子生。正直、樂于助人，已幫助兩名貧困少兒重返學校。有時因父親母親要求太嚴格而感覺悶悶不樂。幾天前來向我征采建議。你激勵他加入HappyTeens，這樣就可以高盛行來。要求：1.語句暢達，意思連接。2.包含以上所有要點。3.詞數80左右

2、。DearMr.Holmes,IhaveafriendnamedLiQiang._Ihopeyouwillaccepthimtobeamemberoftheclub.Yours,WangPing【題目解析】（一）審題可得文體：寫信的應用文時態：一般現在時為主，還有現在完成時和一般過去時。要點掌握：李強是九年級二班的尖子生。正直、樂于助人，已幫助兩名貧困少兒重返學校。有時因父親母親要求太嚴格而感覺悶悶不樂。幾天前來向我征采建議。你激勵他加入HappyTeens，這樣就可以高盛行來。我認識到HappyTeens是一個特地經過睜開豐富多彩的活動來解決青少年問題的組織。我想介紹同學李強加入你們的組織。

3、（二）要點組織李強是九年級二班的尖子生。HeisatopstudentofClassTwoGradeNine.正直、樂于助人，已幫助兩名貧困少兒重返學校。Heisanhonestboyandhealwayshelpsothers./Heishonestandhelpful.Hehashelpedtwopoorchildrentoreturnedtoschooltostudy.有時因父親母親要求太嚴格而感覺悶悶不樂。Sometimesheisinabadmoodbecausehisparentsaretoostrictwithhim.幾天前來向我征采建議。Hecametoaskmeforadvi

4、ceafewdaysago.第1頁共8頁【分界一中英語校本教材】你激勵他加入HappyTeens，這樣就可以高盛行來。IencouragedhimtojointheHappyTeens.Hecanbehappyagain.我認識到HappyTeens是一個特地經過睜開豐富多彩的活動來解決青少年問題的組織。IlearntthatHappyTeensisaspecialorganizationtosolvetheyouthproblemsthroughallkindsofactivities.IlearntthatHappyTeensisaspecialorganizationwhichsolve

5、stheyouthproblemsthroughallkindsofactivities.我想介紹同學李強加入你們的組織。Iwanttointroducehimtojoinourorganization.（三）解析題目，寫好開頭和結尾，合適增加連接句子和連接詞，使文章一氣呵成。DearMr.Holmes,IhaveafriendnamedLiQiang.HeisatopstudentofClassTwoGradeNine.Andallofuslovehimverymuch.Why?Becauseheisanhonestboyandhealwayshelpsothers.Asweallknow,

6、hehashelpedtwopoorchildrentoreturnedtoschooltostudy.However,sometimesheisinabadmoodbecausehisparentsaretoostrictwithhim.Weallareunhappy.Andheisveryworried.So,hecametoaskmeforadviceafewdaysago.Thesedays,IlearntthatHappyTeensisaspecialorganizationwhichsolvestheyouthproblemsthroughallkindsofactivities.

7、SoIencouragedhimtojointheHappyTeens.Asresult,Iintroducehimtojointheorganizationinorderthathecanbehappyagain.Ihopeyouwillaccepthimtobeamemberoftheclub.Yours,WangPing二、中考考點要求1.依照中文提示，寫一篇70-100字左右的英文表達。(盡量不要高出150個單詞)內容完滿，用詞正確，句子暢達、連接、單詞拼寫和標點符號正確，書寫工整。三、作文七注意（一）從整體著眼,大綱挈領扣題意1.審清文體2.選準人稱3.用好時態4.突出要點（二）防備

8、使用漢語式英語，盡量使用自己熟悉的句型。幾種句型可交替使用，以防備重復和死板。（三）多用簡單句型，記事、寫人一般都不需要復雜的句型。多使用陳述句、一般疑問句、祈使句,惋惜句.合適使用復合句和重申句。別的,要依照文章內容需要少量套用一些英語格言警句,諺語等以加強文章的感染力.（四）注意語法、句法知識的靈便運用。1）語態、時態要正確無誤。2）主謂語要一致，主語的人稱和數要和謂語一致。3）注意人稱代詞的用法。4）注意冠詞用法。比方：Heisanhoneststudent.中的an不能夠寫成a。5）注意拼寫、標點符號和大小寫。e.g：receive,believe,fourteen,forty,nin

9、th,restaurant,etc.（五）謀篇布局寫好篇章結構【抓兩頭促中間】（六）檢查改正文章:仔細檢查，改正錯誤。中考作文評卷是依照要點、語言正確性、上下文的連接性來給分，依照錯誤多少來扣分。因此，中考時花幾分鐘時間用來檢查錯誤顯得特別重要。檢查錯誤應從以下幾個方面下手：1）格式可否有錯。2）拼寫有無錯誤。3）語言可否用錯。4）可否遺漏要點5)時態、語態錯誤。6)標點和大小寫錯誤。7）人稱可否用錯。（七）寫好稿本（若是時間贊同的話）,爾后再抄到卷面上。書面表達要特別注意書寫工整，卷面齊整。書寫可否工整，卷面可否齊整與得分高低直接有關。第2頁共8頁【分界一中英語校本教材】四、謀篇布局寫好篇章

10、結構【抓兩頭促中間】（一）作文全能結構表示圖Beginningtopicsentence主題句開頭-說出文中的要點、核心問題【寫好開頭，好的開始是成功的一半】Middlesupportingsentences支持句正文-用例子、實事或數據圍繞主題開展表達、談論。【注意使用連接詞】Endingconcludingsentence結論句結尾-對全文的總結和概括。【結尾畫龍點睛，首尾響應】（二）開頭、結尾和正文三大板塊的訓練【寫好開頭，好的開始是成功的一半】Goodbeginningishalfdone.仔細審題，提煉和概括主題句開頭全能句型：.playsanimportantpartinthe.A

11、sweallknow,.becomesmoreandmore.3)Aseverybodyknows,.isoneofthemost.in.4)Manypeoplesaythat.ButIdontthinkso.5)Iwillneverforgetthe.3.造主題句訓練Makeatopicsentence.1）SmokingAsweallknow,smokingisabadhabit.Manystudentssaysmokingisfun,butIdontthinkso.Aseverybodyknows,smokingisbadforourhealth.2）TheSpringFestivalI

12、willneverforgettheSpringFestival.第3頁共8頁【分界一中英語校本教材】TheSpringFestivalplaysanimportantpartinourlife.ManypeoplesaythatChristmasismorepopularthantheSpringFestival.ButIdontthinkso.3）LearningEnglishAsweallknow,Englishbecomesmoreandmorepopular/important.ManypeoplesayitsdifficulttolearnEnglish.ButIdontthink

13、so.4）Tobeavolunteerforthe16thAsianGamesAsweallknow,the16thAsianGamesiscomingsoon.Iwanttobeavolunteerforit.Avolunteerplaysanimportantpartinthe16thAsianGames.5）ASchoolTripIwillneverforgettheschooltriplastweek.【寫好結尾畫龍點睛，首尾響應】與開頭響應，再次重申自己的看法,注意防備重復句式。結尾經典詞組、句型：Atlast/Finally.最后Inaword,.總而言之Inshort,.簡言之W

14、ehopethat我們希望Letstryourbestto.Ibelieveifwecan.,.willbe.Whata.!/How.!3.依照主題概括訓練Makeaconcludingsentence1）KeepinghealthyLetstryourbesttokeephealthy.Inshort,itsimportanttohavegoodhabitsandkeephealthy.2）HelpingothersIbelieveifwecanhelpothers,theworldwillbemoreandmorebeautiful.3）Tobeagreenconsumer(綠色花銷者)L

15、etstryourbesttobeagreenconsumer.Inoneword,itsnecessaryforustoprotecttheenvironment.4）BeijingHowbeautifulBeijingis!WhynotcometoBeijingandenjoyyourself?開頭、結尾的實戰訓練書面表達在平時生活中你主動幫助你的父親母親做家務活嗎？請你依照提示用英語寫一篇80字左右的短文，描述你平時所做家務以及你對家務的看法。提示：1.扔垃圾2.掃地3.幫助媽媽做飯4.洗衣服5.為花澆水6.飯后洗碗要求：語句暢達，語法正確。不得逐句翻譯。滿分作文（25分）Asweall

16、know,itsimportanttohelpparentsdohouseworkduringourdailylife.Ioftenhelpthemdohousework.Ithrowtherubbishawayandcleanthefloorinthemorning.Ihelpmymothercooklunch.Aftersupper,Ialwayswashdishes.Ithinkitcanmakemyparentsfeelmoreenjoyableafterwork.Ialwayswashclothesformyfamily.Besides,wateringtheflowersisals

17、omyduty.Ilikethemverymuchandtakegoodcareofthem.Inaword,themorehouseworkIdo,thehappiermyparentswillbe.（即總括又說明看法）第4頁共8頁【分界一中英語校本教材】【正文：語言簡潔，井然有序】1.句短句交織使用最好。2.基一般的同學要盡量使用句，文章算不上圓滿，但很用，基好的同學要合適寫些從句提高品位。3.掌握要點，次清楚。4.注意句子與句子、段與段之渡自然，行文，注意合適使用，比方：and,so,or,but,become正文：巧用連接詞，賜予語言靈氣需要熟記的連接詞有：1、按事情展的先后或序1）F

18、irstly,Secondly,Thirdly2）first,then/next,afterthat/next,finallysoon,suddenly,atthatmoment,assoonas,fromnowon,atthesametime,not.until,before,after,when,while,during2、表示并列notonly.butalso,both.and,either.or,neither.nor，on(the)onehandontheotherhand3、表示例或充1）forexample2）besides/whatsmore/whatsworse4、表示折ho

19、wever,but，although,insteadof5、表示原因thanksto,becauseof，because6、表示果asresult(of),so，so.that,such.that,7、表目的inorderto,sothat8、表比thesameas,than,ofall.正文巧用連接詞和從句的實戰訓練Example:生活中充了，有父親母親的，有兄弟姐妹的，有朋友的，有老的.以“Love”，要描述一件生在你身的事。要求：1、言范，寫工整。2、80個左右（開已出，不入數）3、文中不要出真的人名，校名和地名Lovemeansgiving.Lovemeanspayingattenti

20、ontoothers.Lovemeansgivingwarmthtotheoneyoulove.Lovealsomeansunderstanding.基一般的同學的寫法：Lovemeansgiving.Lovemeanspayingattentiontoothers.Lovemeansgivingwarmthtotheoneyoulove.Lovealsomeansunderstanding.Oneday,Iplayedfootballwithmyclassmatesontheplayground.Ifelldownandhurtmylegsbadly.Myclassmatestookmeto

21、thehospital.Duringmystayinbed,theycametohelpmewithmylessons.Theysaid,“Wearegoodfriends,weshouldhelpeachother.wasdeeplymoved.Icouldntsayaword.Thankstomyclassmates.Iwilldomybesttogivemylovetoothers.第5頁共8頁【分界一中英語校本教材】基礎好的同學的寫法：范文Lovemeansgiving.Lovemeanspayingattentiontoothers.Lovemeansgivingwarmthtoth

22、eoneyoulove.Lovealsomeansunderstanding.Thereisalotoflovearoundus.Oneday,whenIwasplayingfootballwithmyclassmatesontheplayground,Ifelldownandhurtmylegsbadly.Myclassmatestookmetothehospitalatonce.Duringmystayinbed,theycametohelpmewithmylessons.Theysaid,“Aswearegoodfriends,weshouldhelpeachother.”Iwastoo

23、tosayaword.Thankstomyclassmates.Iwilldomybesttogivemylovetoothers.正文：巧用連接詞，賜予語言靈氣（上詞句子比較）Whichsentenceisbetter?1.Iplayedfootballontheplayground.Ifelldownandhurtmylegs.(good)WhenIwasplayingfootballontheplayground,Ifelldownandhurtmylegs.(better)句式富于變化Whichsentenceisbetter?1.Wearegoodfriends.Weshouldhe

24、lpeachother.（good）Wearegoodfriendsandweshouldhelpeachother.（better）Aswearegoodfriends,weshouldhelpeachother.（best）句式富于變化1.IwasdeeplymovedandIcouldntsayaword.(good)Iwastoomovedtosayaword.(better)五、作文步驟審題解析題目：找出作文的文體、時態、人稱和文章的要點。依照要點的意思用英語進行最貼切的表達。注意每一個句子的主語盡量多樣化，也就是說句子種類要多樣化（能力的范圍內盡量簡單句和復合句交替使用），但文章的

25、人稱、時態應基本保持一致。別的，若是你有些要點不會直接表達，則注意轉變成你會表達的英文去表達，但不要改變文章原來的意思更不能夠因為不會表達就放棄表達也許用錯誤的表達。3.多運用過渡詞，連句成文，使全篇結構緊湊。每個點都要寫全，并要有合適發揮,并按要點來分段，注意段落的結構，段落不能亂分，要有過渡。4.寫好開頭和結尾。5.復查糾錯。檢查錯誤應從以下幾個方面下手：1）格式可否有錯。2）拼寫有無錯誤。3）語言可否用錯。4）可否遺漏要點。時態、語態錯誤。6)標點和大小寫錯誤。7）人稱可否用錯。注意書寫，卷面做到無任何一處涂改。要求：打好稿本，并在稿本上改正。附：卷子的卷面很重要，要求有時間，都要稿本，

26、特別是看圖寫句子。六、附：8個話題作文1.關于學習英語的話題:“HowtolearnEnglishwell?”2.衛生健康飲食:“初三學生要不要參加體育鍛煉”。4.環境問題5.關于“人口問題POPULATION”6.關于中學生使用手機的優缺點,談談你的看法7.介紹自己的興趣業余愛好。8.春節民俗與計劃,如何過2010年的春節。第6頁共8頁【分界一中英語校本教材】.保Itsourdutytoprotectourenvironment。ItisveryimportanttotakecareofourenvironmentWeshouldnotthrowlitterontothegroundWesh

27、ouldnotspitinapublicplace/cutdownthetreesWeshouldplantmoreflowersandtrees。WemustpickupsomerubbishandthrowitintoadustbinIfeveryonemakescontributionstoprotectingtheenvironment,theworldwillbecomemuchmorebeautiful.二、旅游1.LastSunday(Saturday,),itwassunny(rainy,windy,foggy,)2.Igotupveryearly(late).Afterbre

28、akfastIwenttowithmyfriendsbybike,bus，Weenjoyedourselves.Weforgotthetime.Wedidntcomebackuntil5oclock。Weallfeltverytired,butwewerehappy.IthoughtIwouldneverforgetthistrip.7.Lastsummer,myparentsandIwenttoBeijingforourholidays。Wevisitedalotofplacesofinterest.Wehadagoodtimethere.Weboughtalotofthings.Thecl

29、othesherearegoodandcheap.三、比賽LastSunday,ClassOnehadafootballmatchwithClassTwo.Allofuswenttowatchit.Thematchwasveryexciting.Infact,Ihaveneverseensuchanexcitingmatchbefore。Thescorewas5-3.Ourteamscoredthreegoalsinthelastfifteenminutes.ClassOnewonthismatch.ClassTwolost.ClassOneplayedwell.Theydeservedtow

30、in。TheirPEteacherwasverypleasedwiththeirperformance.四、健康Itisveryimportanttokeephealthy.Howcanwekeephealthy?Wecantgotosleeptoolate.Wecantgetuptoolate。Weshouldeatthefoodhealthily.Weshoulddomoreexercise.LastTuesdayIgotacoldandhadapaininmyhead。Ididntfeellikeeatinganything.Idecidedtoseethedoctor.Inthedoc

31、torsoffice,thedoctorlooksovermecarefully.Hesaid:Nothingserious.Andhetoldmetotakearestanddrinkmorewater.Anursegavemeaninjection.Itwasalittlepainful.Thedoctoraskedmetotakethemedicinethreetimesaday.Afewdayslater,Ifeltbetter.FromthenonIbelievethatkeepinghealthyisthemostimportantthingintheworld.五、學科Myfav

32、oritesubjectisEnglish。MorethanthreequartersoftheinformationontheInternetisinEnglish.Itisusedbytravelersandbusinesspeopleallovertheworld.第7頁共8頁【分界一中英語校本教材】ChinahasjoinedtheWTOandtheOlympicGameswillbeheldinChina.Englishbecomesmoreandmoreuseful.5.SoEnglishisveryimportantandIlikeEnglishverymuch。WehavealotoffunintheEnglishclass.OurEnglishteacheroftenmakesushappyintheEnglishclass.IhopeIcangoabroadone