1、Unit 6 The admirableWriting寫作題目閱讀下面短文，根據其內容寫一篇60詞左右的內容概要。Why do earthquakes happen? Scientists believe that the surface of the earth is covered by a number of moving plates. Sometimes two plates move towards and push against each other. Sometimes they stop for years but at other times they jump and

2、an earthquake is felt. Because of the movements of these plates , China , California of America and Japan, have alot of earthquakes. You can see the result in San Francisco where the Pacific plate meets the North American plate. When the 1906 earthquake happened, the Pacific plate jumped 5 to 6 metr

3、es to the north.China is a country where many earthquakes happen. The Pacific plate is pushing China from the east and the Indian plate is pushing China from. the southwest. The power of this movement created the Himalayas and Mount Qomolangma. It now causes earthquakes in China. We cannot stop eart

4、hquakes but we can do things to make sure they do not destroy the whole city. First it is not a good idea to build houses along the line where two plates meet. Second, if you think there may be an earthquake，make sure to build houses on rocks rather than on sands. Third, you must make the houses as

5、strong as possible. Weak buildings will fall down in an earthquake, but strong ones may stay up._文本分析本文是一篇說明文，是典型的“總分”結構，全文共分為兩段。每段的中心大意如下:第一段:介紹了地震發生的原因;第二段:介紹了中國是-個地震頻發的國家及其原因,并介紹了減少地震損害的措施。篩選、整合信息在讀懂原文并抓住大意的基礎上，定位每個段落的主要內容。第一段: Sometimes two plates move towards and push against each other. Someti

6、mes they stop for years but at other times they jump and an earthquake is felt.第二段: We cannot stop earthquakes but we can do things to make sure they do not destroy the whole city.轉換表達要點1第一段的前半部分內容可概括為要點1,該要點含有時間先后順序，可用when引導的時間狀語從句來表述,例如，可同義轉換為“When two plates move towards and push against each oth

7、er, an earthquake just happens. , 可提煉概括為“Earthquakes happen when two moving plates jump and push against each other.。要點2第一段的后半部分內容可概括為要點2,該要點是對要點1的簡單舉例說明,可用副詞thus與要點1銜接,即Thus, because of the movements of these plates ,China, California of America and Japan have a lot of earthquakes. ,可同義轉換為“Thus, in

8、 areas, like China, California of America and Japan, earthquakes happen a lot. ,結合“You can see the result in San Francisco where the Pacific plate meets the North American plate.可利用定語從句將前面總結的句子轉換為“Thus，in areas， like China， California of America and Japan，where different plates meet, earthquakes hap

9、pen a lot. ”要點3第二段內容可概括為要點了,該要點具體介紹了減少地震損害的-些措施。文中采用列舉的方式提出三種措施:結合Weak buildings will fall down in an earthquake, but strong ones may stay up.用非謂語結構及省略句式概括為“To protect our cities from this deadly power, wed better build houses in the regions with few earthquakes or on more solid bases if necessary,

10、making them strong enough to survive earthquakes.連句成篇_寫作積累1.economic losses經濟損失e to ones rescue挽救某人3.be trapped in ruins被困在廢墟中4. The earthquake caused structural damage to the buildings.地震對建筑物結構造成了破壞。5.The global water shortage is becoming increasingly severe. 全球水資源短缺(問題)正變得日益嚴重。6.A severe earthquak

11、e destroyed almost everything.一場劇烈的地震幾乎毀了一切。7.People are more and more aware of the importance of the protection of the environment.人們越來越意識到環境保護的重要性。It not only affects our everyday life, but may also threaten our lives. 它不僅影響我們的日常生活，還有可能威脅我們的生命。實戰演練閱讀下面短文,根據其內容寫一篇60詞左右的內容概要。A 7. 1-magnitude quake t

12、oppled(使倒塌) houses, cut off power and first-aid materials supply in northwest Chinas Qinghai Province on Wednesday while rescuers faced difficulties in searching for the buried.Rescuers have set up more than 40 tents for survivors in the Gyegu Town, near the epicenter(震中) in the Tibetan Autonomous P

13、refecture of Yushu in southern Qinghai. But the effort seems far less than enough for the area inhabited (居住于) by some 100, 000 people.Many people sought temporary shelters in buildings that remained unaffected by the tremor(輕微地震).In the yard of Yushus Sports Committee, nearly 1 ,000 people were sit

14、ting or lying on the ground in sheer (完全的) darkness. Some wrapped themselves up with quilts taken out from the debris(殘骸). Some brought their own tents and others turned on the lights of motorcycles.“Im hungry and thirsty. Weve been waiting for help since morning, said ZhaxiToinzhub.A woman said her

15、 three children were still buried in the rubble(瓦礫).The National Meteorological Station forecast on Wednesday that temperatures may hit minus 3 degrees Celsius at night and 15 degrees Celsius in the daytime in the coming days.The town will see sunny weather in the coming days, providing favorable co

16、nditions for rescue operations.The town is located in a remote area in Qinghai and the quake and ensuing(隨后發生的) landslides have damaged roads, causing great difficulties for rescuers and, especially, machines to enter the region.“Rescuers had to dig with bare hands or iron sticks on Wednesday, looki

17、ng forward to the arrival of digging machines,”said a rescuer surnamed Wang, who was working at a collapsed hostel.“The searching operation became even harder at night without lighting facilities, he said. In addition, rescuers may easily get exhausted working at a place with an altitude (海拔)of abov

18、e 4 ,000 meters.Thousands of rescuers and medical staff are rushing to Yushu from many regions of China, bringing machines，disaster-relief materials and medicines to the quake-hit town. The government， organizations, enterprises and individuals are offering donations of money and materials to the re

19、gion._答案參考范文Earthquakes happen when two moving plates jump and push against each other.( 要點1) Thus， in areas， like China, California of America and Japan, where different plates meet, earthquakes happen a lot.( 要點2) To protect our cities from this deadly power, wed better build houses in the regions

20、 with few earthquakes or on more solid bases if necessary,making them strong enough，to survive earthquakes. (要點3)實戰演練寫作指導語篇內容解讀本文是一篇新聞報道，主題語境是人與自然，主題語境內容是自然災害與防范。本文共13短。第1段簡明扼要地介紹了地震發生的時間，地點，震級和破壞程度等。第2段到底12段詳細描述了受災群眾的基本情況：饑渴交迫，無家可歸，還介紹了在惡劣的環境下，救援人員面臨很多挑戰。第13段講述了許多救援人員前往玉樹實施援救，政府，各種組織和個人等為災區捐獻各種物資。Para. 1: Introduction of the earthquake: place, time, magnitude, the survivors and rescuers.文章脈絡分析Para. 13: the government and organizations are offering help.The weather co