1、分析河南近10年中招真題書面表達可知，“居住環境”這一話題在2018年以“What I like about where I live”為題考查介紹自己居住的地方。結合全國真題可知，該話題通常還有“介紹城鄉生活的異同，選擇哪種及理由”這一命題角度。命題探索(2018河南)每個人都生活在一個特定的環境。請以“What I like about where I live”為題，并根據以下要點和要求用英語寫一篇短文，描述你生活的環境。典例剖析審標題：我喜歡居住的地方審時態：一般現在時審人稱：第一人稱審文體：說明文一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句1. 要點：1)你生活在什么樣的環境； 2)你喜

2、歡這個環境的什么； 3)你對這個環境有何期望。2. 要求：1)文中不得出現真實姓名和學校名稱； 2)詞數80左右。要點1：自己生活之處的交通、環境等。 要點2：你生活的環境有什么獨特之處。 要點3：對這個環境的期待。一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句1. I prefer to live in my city.I prefer to live in my city as this place has the beautiful scenery and the people here are kind.2. She likes her hometown best.She likes her

3、 hometown best because it has left many soft and sweet memories in her heart.3. Our city is beautiful.Our city is beautiful and it is famous for its universities.1角度生活環境及喜歡的原因一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句好 句 記 背一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句4. I would like to go to the farm on holiday.I would like to go to the farm on

4、 holiday, and then I can pick fresh vegetables.1. I would rather live in the countryside than in city.(擴寫具體的原因)_2. The place I like best around me is my home. (擴寫具體的因)_I would rather live in the countryside than in city as the air isnt badly polluted in the countryside.The place I like best around m

5、e is my home because it is a place where I can get warmth and safety.一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句句 子 擴 寫 3. Zhengzhou is a good place for fun in my eyes. (擴寫著名之處)_4. He likes the life near the beach best. (擴寫具體的原因)_Zhengzhou is a good place for fun in my eyes and it is famous for many places of interest. He

6、 likes the life near the beach best because he can often go surfing.一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句1. Once a steel factory often throw the waste into the near river. Later the government took action to improve the situation.2. In the past, there were only narrow and dirty roads in the small town. Now the stree

7、ts are wide and clean.2角度生活環境的變化一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句好 句 記 背3. Another big change is that there are much more tall buildings. People used to live in old flats, but now most of them have moved into new houses.4. There were green hills and wild birds near the lake. The air was clean and fresh then. Now

8、 it has become a modern town. 一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句1. 曾經人們都往河里扔垃圾。之后政府采取措施應對這個問題。_2. 過去，環境問題嚴重，到處都是垃圾?，F在，我的家鄉發生了巨大的變化。_In the past, pollution was serious, and there was rubbish everywhere. Now great changes have taken place in my hometown.Once people threw rubbish/garbage into the river. Later the go

9、vernment took action to deal with this problem.一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句句 子 仿 寫 3. 另一個巨大的變化是道路變寬了?，F在，人們可以選擇開車外出。_4. 過去房屋既古老又小。現在，你可以看到很多現代建筑。_The houses were old and small before. Now you can see many modern buildings.Another big change is that the roads become much wider. Now people can choose to go out

10、 by car.一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句1. In the country it is quiet and peaceful.In the country it is quiet and peaceful since there arent too many people.2. The people live in the city. They can seldom see the blue sky.The people who live in the city can seldom see the blue sky.3角度介紹城鄉生活異同一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好

11、句好 句 記 背3. In the city there are interesting things to do. People have many choices of activities.In the city there are interesting things to do as people have many choices of activities.4. Now traveling from the city to the countryside is convenient.Now it is convenient to travel from the city to t

12、he countryside.一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句1. We live in the city. Everything is convenient for us now. (用原因狀語從句升格) _2. The people live in the countryside. They always seem friendly and helpful to their neighbors.(用定語從句升格)_The people who live in the country always seem friendly and helpful to their neighbor

13、s.Everything is convenient for us now since we live in the city.一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句句 子 升 格 3. More job opportunities are offered in the cities. Many college graduates search for work there (用原因狀語從句升格)_4. Living in the city or the countryside is wonderful.(用it is adj. to do sth.升格)_It is wonderful t

14、o live in the city or the countryside.Many college graduates search for work in the cities as more job opportunities are offered there.一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句Our hometown Zhengzhou is a beautiful city and it attracts many tourists every year. Firstly, _(獨特之處1). Secondly,_(獨特之處2).Thirdly, _(獨特之處3). Do y

15、ou like to go to my hometown? its the biggest city of Henan/it has the biggest population of Henan Province/.語段練習1生活環境及喜歡的原因 it has many places of interest/it is famous for its places of interest/.its a city with a long history/the people there are friendly/.一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句練語段Many people regard

16、 with great interest how their hometowns have changed. On the one hand, _(變化1) and _(變化2). On the other hand, the environment has changed a lot/there are more trees on both sides of the road/.語段練習2生活環境的變化 there are a lot of new and modern buildings now/the transportation becomes better than before/.

17、一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句however, _(變化3). Therefore, I hope _(自己的期望) the traffic becomes heavier than before/the air pollution becomes worse and worse/. more people can pay attention to the pollution/.一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句語段練習3城鄉生活的異同 There are some differences between city life and co

18、untry life. To begin with, in the city _(表現1), while in the countryside _(差異表現1). Whats more, _(表現2) in the city. people live in apartments/buy vegetables from the supermarket/.people live in their houses/grow vegetables for themselves/. people go to supermarkets to buy what they need/they go outsid

19、e by subway or by bus/.But in the countryside, _ _(差異表現2). Meanwhile, there is something in common between the city life and country life. _ (相同點1) and _ (相同點2) it isnt convenient for people to buy things/they dont have many interesting places for fun/.Its easy to find places for relaxing/.the life

20、quality has improved a lot/.一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句What I like about where I liveI live in a small and quiet city in Henan Province. It has a long history and its beautiful. Different from other cities, it has no skyscrapers or endless cars on the streets. People there are seldom late for their work an

21、d enjoy a slow and peaceful life. And that is what I like most about my city.However, my city has her problems. She has no highspeed trains. I hope she will soon have highspeed trains so that I can travel to other cities more easily!一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句成篇章 (2019孝感改編)隨著年齡的增長，你周圍的事物也發生了很大的變化。請以“Great

22、changes around me”為題，并根據以下要點和要求用英語寫一篇短文，介紹你周圍的變化。1. 要點：1)你周圍事物過去的樣子； 2)你周圍事物現在的改變； 3)你對這些變化的感受。2. 要求：1)文中不得出現真實姓名和學校名稱； 2)詞數100左右。寫作練兵寫作練兵2020 新變化Great changes around me_寫作練兵寫作練兵In the past few years, great changes have taken place around me. The roads used to be narrow and crowded. The houses were

23、old and small. The air wasnt fresh enough. Sometimes, there was terrible smell. The river was polluted badly and there was rubbish in it.Nowadays, the roads are wide and clean. Its really convenient for people to go out. We can choose different kinds of transportation to go anywhere. Lots of tall bu

24、ildings have been built in the city._寫作練兵寫作練兵Most of us have moved to big beautiful houses. The sky is blue and the clouds are white. The birds are singing happily. My hometown looks like a big garden with green trees, grass and colorful flowers.Our country is rich and strong, and we are living a ha

25、ppy life. Im sure as time goes on, our life will become better and better!在定語從句中，從句在句子中作定語，修飾先行詞。初中階段能掌握簡單的由which, that, who, whom, whose等引導的定語從句。先行詞為人：who/that/whom/whose引導；先行詞為物：which/that/whose引導。巧用定語從句教材鏈接1. 先行詞為人：I know the girl who/that has curly hair.A nurse is a person who looks after patients health.He is the one who has given me a lot of help.2. 先行詞為物：I like sports which/that are safe for me.This is the best gift that I have ever received.巧用定語從句句式連接范例 教材鏈接1. This is a book.