1、高考備考書面表達(dá)應(yīng)用文專題 求助信之豐順中學(xué) 高三19班 李洪慶Step 1 analyze the requirements(認(rèn)真審題) Step 2 draw up an outline(謀篇布局)Step 3 organize the sentences(聯(lián)句成篇)Step 4 get the article polished up(錦上添花)Step 5 check the mistakes(查漏補(bǔ)缺)Five steps to write an English essay：求助信的文章框架：1.直言目的2.描述困難3.表達(dá)希望得到的幫助（自我介紹）（聯(lián)系方式）1. ask for h

2、elp/seek for help_2. encounter some problems_3. be faced with difficulties _4. offer some constructive guidance_5. be grateful to sb. for sth _ _ _6. offer sb. a hand _7. (做)某事有困難 _8. 給某人留下深刻印象_9. 設(shè)法成功做某事 _10. 進(jìn)一步的消息_11. 請某人幫忙_12. 一次難忘的經(jīng)歷_ 尋求幫助遇到一些問題面臨困難提供一些有建設(shè)性的指導(dǎo)have trouble in （doing ）sth.給某人幫助 l

3、eave sb. a deep impression manage to do sth. further information ask sb. a favor an unforgettable experience 因某事感激某人Recitation 提出請求幫助 1. 我想知道您是否能夠 2. 如果您能幫助我，我將感激不盡。闡明自己的問題 3. And Ive found that my problem lies chiefly in two aspects. For one thing, . For another thing, . 4 . Therefore, its my hope

4、that you can give us some practical tips on how to . 表達(dá)謝意 5. 謝謝您一切的好意。 Useful patterns1.I am writing this letter to ask you to do me a favor/give me a hand.2.I am encountering three problems which troubles me a lot. To begin with,Whats worse,What troubles me most is3.Unfortunately, I find it quite d

5、ifficult to do. 4.Faced with the above problems, I am eager to get your help. Would you please offer me some advice on?5. I wonder if you can help me with these difficulties. I really appreciate it if you could help me.【Sentence Correction】1. The whole thing is getting very difficult and I real need

6、 your good advice! real改為really2. The main reason Im writing is that I have litte favour to ask. little前面加a3. I thank you in the advance for your prompt attention to these matters. 刪掉the4. I would like to bring your attention to some problems what are occurring in this block. what改為that/which5. The

7、people in the apartment below mine often play loudly music late at night, making it very difficult for me to sleep. loudly改為loud6. Also, there is often rubbish leaving in the stairway. leaving改為left7. I would appreciate you if you would help me solve these problems. 第一個(gè)you改為it8. Were trying to find

8、someone to look after the cats while we away. away前加are9. There are hundreds of people go to work in cars and buses. go改為going10. I look forward to hear from you about the action that the council will take on this matter. hear改為hearingDear Mr. Brown, Im now safely back to home. Thanks you very much

9、for all the kind I got from you during my stay. Hope everything are fine with you there. Now I wonder whether I could ask you favor. When I come back, I suddenly realized that I have left my English dictionary behind at your place. Thankkindnessis_a_came_had【Passage Correction】 It is an precious gif

10、t from my American teacher. Would you please be so kindly as to send it back to me? Ill pay for the postage. The dictionary must on the bookshelf in my bedroom. It is the one with a red cover. Thanks and all the best.Yours,Li Huaakind_be【Appreciation】【2013新課標(biāo)卷：請求幫助接機(jī)】 假定你是李華。請你給筆友Peter寫封信，告訴他你叔叔李明將去

11、他所在城市開會，帶去他想要的那幅中國畫，同時(shí)詢問他是否可以接機(jī)。信中還需說明： 李明：高個(gè)子，戴眼鏡 航班號：CA985 到達(dá)：8月6日上午11:30【Structure】Dear Peter, How are you doing? Im writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to have a meeting in your city. Do you remember the Chinese painting I promised you last year? My uncle will bring it to you soon

12、. I hope you will like it. I wonder if you could do me a favour. This is the first time that my uncle visits the US, so I hope you can meet him at the airport. He arrives at 11:30 a.m. on August 6th and his flight number is CA 985. I would appreciate it if you could take him to his hotel. My uncle i

13、s tall. He will be wearing dark glasses and a blue jacket. Thank you very much in advance. Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua寫信目的困難；問題具體細(xì)節(jié)感謝及回復(fù)【Appreciation】Translation【2011山東卷改編：演講比賽寫稿求助】作文原題假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國朋友Tom上個(gè)月來到北京學(xué)習(xí)。七月份你將去北京參加暑期中學(xué)生英語演講比賽(speech contest)，你在資料搜集、語言運(yùn)用等方面遇到了困難。請根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給Tom寫一封電子

14、郵件：1. 詢問Tom的生活和學(xué)習(xí)情況； 2. 談?wù)勀愕睦щy并請Tom幫忙；3. 告訴Tom你打算賽后去看他。親愛的Tom，你來北京學(xué)習(xí)已經(jīng)一個(gè)月了。一切如何？我真的很開心和你在這里度過這么難忘的一段經(jīng)歷。今年七月，我將參加中學(xué)生英語演講比賽。為了有更好的表現(xiàn)，我正在做準(zhǔn)備。然而，我仍然在收集有用的材料上有困難。同時(shí)，我發(fā)現(xiàn)難以恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂糜⒄Z。如果你能幫助我，我會非常感激。你知道，自從你離開后，我一直想著你，所以我希望在英語比賽后在北京見到你。我等不及再次和你見面了。你的，李華Its been a month since you studied in Beijing. How is every

15、thing going with you? 1. 你來北京學(xué)習(xí)已經(jīng)一個(gè)月了。一切如何？我真的很開心和你在這里度過這么難忘的一段經(jīng)歷。2. 今年七月，我將參加中學(xué)生英語演講比賽。為了有更好的表現(xiàn)，我正在做準(zhǔn)備。 I am going to take part in an English speech contest for middle school students in July. To have a very good performance, I am making preparations for it. However, I still have some trouble in co

16、llecting useful materials. Meanwhile, I find it hard to use English properly. 3.然而，我仍然在收集有用的材料上有困難。同時(shí)，我發(fā)現(xiàn)難以恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂糜⒄Z。4. 如果你能幫助我，我會非常感激。 I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand. /I would be very grateful if you could do me a favor.You know, I have been missing you since you left, so I hope t

17、o see you in Beijing after the English contest. 5.你知道，自從你離開后，我一直想著你，所以我希望在英語比賽后在北京見到你。6. 我等不及再次和你見面了。I cant wait to see you again!【模仿翻譯】Dear Tom,Its been a month since you studied in Beijing. How is everything going with you? I am going to take part in an English speech contest for middle school stu

18、dents in July. To have a very good performance, I am making preparations for it. However, I still have some trouble in collecting useful materials. Meanwhile, I find it hard to use English properly. I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand.You know, I have been missing you since you left,

19、so I hope to see you in Beijing after the English contest. I cant wait to see you again!Yours,Li Hua求助信寫作三步走：介紹自己、提出請求-說明原因及其它事項(xiàng)-表達(dá)謝意、期盼答復(fù)Tips: 在許多情況下，求助信是寫給不太認(rèn)識的人或者機(jī)構(gòu)，所以在信的開頭可以做一下簡單的自我介紹。同時(shí)，由于提出的請求往往都是需要麻煩別人的事情，所以要注意語氣的禮貌程度，不要吝嗇你的感謝。1正確把握時(shí)態(tài),保證語言準(zhǔn)確性-目前某方面存在困難一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)- 描繪得到幫助后的進(jìn)步一般將來時(shí)2. 熟悉常用句型,提高文章整體美感-

20、首先做自我介紹，簡要交待自己的困難,展望獲得幫助后自己的進(jìn)步Attention3. 貼切使用過渡性詞匯,提高文章邏輯性-first, besides, whats more-in the meanwhile, at the same time, in addition, also4. 適當(dāng)使用高級表達(dá)方式,提高表達(dá)檔次-“很難與朋友相處” 1).Its hard to get along with my friends.2). I find it difficult to get along .Sample 1：Dear_, My name is _. Im _. I have met much difficulty in_. First, _. Whats worse /Worse still, _. Whats worst, _. Faced with / Facing so much difficulty, I have