1、 What makes a good writing?structure contentlanguageIs the essay divided into parts? Does each part have a topic sentence? Are all the details stated? Is everything to the point? Are there any mistakes? Does the writer use any linking words? Are there any good sentence patterns ? Is there any advanc

2、ed vocabulary? 是指因過失或疏忽等做錯了事，給別人帶來是指因過失或疏忽等做錯了事，給別人帶來了麻煩或損失，發覺后給對方賠禮道歉并請求對了麻煩或損失，發覺后給對方賠禮道歉并請求對方原諒的信件。通常包括以下方原諒的信件。通常包括以下三三部分部分內容：內容：1: 1: 開門見山，表明寫信目的，表示歉意。開門見山，表明寫信目的，表示歉意。2: 2: 說明出現差錯的原因，提出彌補措施。說明出現差錯的原因，提出彌補措施。3: 3: 再次致歉，請求原諒，希望得到理解再次致歉，請求原諒，希望得到理解（語言要誠摯，解釋的理由要真實）。（語言要誠摯，解釋的理由要真實）。道歉信：道歉信：Which o

3、ne would you like better? attach importance to handwritiingA good beginning is half done.I am writing to apologize forI am writing to say sorry forI regret to inform you that I am unable toThank you for, but I am sorry to say thatbroke carelessnessorderguiltyhappierDear Bill, Im sorry to say that I

4、have broken the clock on the wall in our room. Yesterday, looking up, I occasionally found the face of the clock was dirty when sweeping the floor, so I took it down and cleaned it with a piece of soft cloth. Unexpectedly, when I put the clock back where it belongs, it fell off the wall and dropped

5、onto the ground. Whats worse, it didnt work. In order not to influence our use of the clock and time management, I will use my pocket money to buy a new one to replace it. Please accept my apology. I promise that it wont happen again.常用語塊常用語塊1. 1. 因某事向某人道歉因某事向某人道歉_ _ _ 2.2.向向說對不起說對不起_3.3.接受我的道歉接受我的道

6、歉_4.4.為某事原諒某人為某事原諒某人_5.5.并非故意做某事并非故意做某事_6.6.彌補，償還彌補，償還_7.7.賠償，償還賠償，償還_8.8.給你帶來不便給你帶來不便_9.9.給你帶來許多麻煩給你帶來許多麻煩_10.10.更加小心更加小心_11.11.犯這樣愚蠢的錯誤犯這樣愚蠢的錯誤_ apologize to sb for sth / make an apology to sb for sth say sorry to accept my apology forgive sb for sth have no intention to do sth make up for pay for

7、 / compensate for cause your inconvenience make such a stupid mistake cause you much trouble be more careful套用句式套用句式1.1.我寫這封信的因我寫這封信的因向你道歉。向你道歉。2.2.請接受我真誠的道歉。請接受我真誠的道歉。3.3.對于我說的話對于我說的話/ /做的事做的事, ,我確實感到很抱歉。但我確實感到很抱歉。但請相信，我并非故意要請相信，我并非故意要I am writing to apologize for/I am writing to say sorry forPleas

8、e accept my sincere apology.I am indeed very sorry for what I said/ did, but please believe I had no intention to4.4.我真心希望你能理解我的處境我真心希望你能理解我的處境/ /設身處地地位我設身處地地位我考慮，并接受我的道歉。考慮，并接受我的道歉。5.5.對于造成的不便我再次表示歉意。對于造成的不便我再次表示歉意。I sincerely hope you can understand my situation/think in my position and accept my

9、apology.Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. 假定你是李華，寒假中作為交流生短期去英國假定你是李華，寒假中作為交流生短期去英國培訓，回國時因為匆忙，把房東培訓，回國時因為匆忙，把房東BobBob的音樂光盤夾的音樂光盤夾在行李中帶了回來。現在請你給在行李中帶了回來。現在請你給BobBob寫一封道歉信，寫一封道歉信，要點如下：要點如下：1.1.對自己帶走音樂光盤表示歉意。對自己帶走音樂光盤表示歉意。2.2.提出解決的辦法。提出解決的辦法。3.3.再次請求原諒。再次請求原諒。Dear Bob,_ Yours sincerel

10、y, Li Hua I am writing to make an apology to you for I forgot to return a music CD which I borrowed from you last week. Yesterday I came back from England and found it in my luggage. I am so sorry that you cannot listen to it at present. The CD which I borrowed from you is made in England, so I believe you can find another one in your local store. How about your buying another CD by yourself and I will pay for it? If you cannot find a similar one, I would sent it back to you through a post office. And if there are any other