1、上海中考英語作文專題指導一、中考英語作文寫作模式“四審四注意”寫作法“四審” ：一審標題文體格式。這樣可以為下面的寫作，如人稱、 時態(tài)、內容、格式等奠定基礎；二審人稱。如是以第一人稱I 或 we 為主還是以第二人稱you或第三人稱she, he, it 或 they 為主；三審時態(tài)。一般而言，寫作時文章應多以現(xiàn)在時（包括一般現(xiàn)在時、一般將來時、現(xiàn)在完成時和現(xiàn)在進行時）或過去時（一般宜用一般過去時和過去進行時）為主， 切忌時態(tài)混亂；四審內容。如有提示，應盡量按照所給提示來寫，不可偏題亂發(fā)揮， 可將有關內容提煉分解成幾句展開敘述，不可遺漏，這是很重要的一點，一般文章按who ， when ， wh

2、ere ， what ，how ， why 等要素展開。“四注意”：一注意如果文章沒有給出開頭結尾，一定要寫開頭結尾。當然，開頭和結尾的方式不能太落于俗套，要有一定的新意，一般一兩句即可，結尾要點題，有所立意；二注意句式要富于變化，不能通篇只有一種句式或句式過于單調，否則即使無語言和內容錯誤也難得高分，如可適當運用 if, when, although 等狀語從句，I think / I hope / Ibelieve that 等賓語從句，如用定語從句必須有絕對把握；三注意適當運用連接詞，如on one hand, on the otherhand; what s more; however

3、 等，這樣使文章更有層次、更富邏輯性，若語言和內容沒問題, 做到第二、三項 “注意”就很有希望拿組織結構分。四注意善于運用有把握的詞匯和句型，盡量運用課本所學詞句， 堅決避免不正確的 “中國式英語”， 更不能亂 “發(fā)明” , 一般一篇文章能用8 個左右的好短語或句式已很不錯。最后需要提醒考生的是，中考作文要取得高分，詞數(shù)不能太少 也不能太多，筆者覺得，以80詞左右為宜。另外，書寫一定 要認真、工整，以免造成不必要的失分。二、中考英語作文常見語言錯誤調查分析1.時態(tài)錯誤在型 錯類中文錯i關表達正確表達時態(tài)錯誤他在這兒已經7 年了。她喏給我們講故 事口He lius been here cilic

4、e 7 veins. JShe often tell us stories.He has been licit: for 7 years.SIh* often tells us stories.2.時間狀語錯誤錯誤 類型中文錯保表達正確表達誤用去年秦天 今晚 明天下午 ，點Iasi year's spring todays night; this night Kimonos allernonn al 1 口'clucklast springtonighu this eveningat 1 o'clock tomorrow afternoon多余一天下午在下個月 明天上午

5、one day a fternouiiin next monthin / on tomorrow morningone aflenioonnext monthtomorrow mornirm w3 .名詞單復數(shù)錯誤中文錯誤表達正確表達一些信息some informationssome information真有也Whar h grcai fun!Whai great fun!三份工作Lhice hriMthree pieces uf wurk / Lluee ju、4 .動詞誤用錯誤類型中文錯誤表達正確表達分詞 錯誤看見某人正在做 某事有某人在做某事對感興趣see sb, did sth.th

6、ere be sb. doing sth.be interesting insee sb. doing sth.there he sh. doing sth.bo interested in不定 式錯仗使某人做某事 請某人來希望某人做make sb. io do sth. ask sb. Lomehope sb, io do make do sth* ask m Lu cunie hope sb, will / can do want / wish sb. to do 用詞 不當參加活動join activitiestake part in / join in activities塊少動詞我很

7、高興O 他很累O1 xery happy. He very tired.1 am very happy. He is very lired.5 .語態(tài)錯誤錯誤 類型中文錯誤表達正確表達誤用 主動它是上海制造的 她叫海倫二 某物能用k made in Shanghai, She called Helen, slh. can useIl is made in Shanghai, She is (called) Helen, sth. can be used誤用這書好賣。 難說,The book is sold well.It is hnrd to be said.Great changes hav

8、e been lakej place in Shanghai.The book sells wdL ll is hard to say.Great changes have takenplaceinShanghai*被動上海更生了很4 變化：構成 錯誤正在建錯一座橋上周我們看到I劉翔口PA bridge is been building.Liu Xiang is seen by us Iasi week.A bridge is being hui 1LLiu Xiang was seen by us last week.錯誤 類型中文錯誤表達正確表達她的英語很好：Her English is

9、very welLShe is g(kkJ a Eiiglish. /adj / adv.努力學習 沿著筆直 地走獨自地做某事work hardlygo straightl alongdo sth. lonely (adj.)Her English is very gm»dP work hard go straight along do sth. aloneadw / r我乘車去上學,1 by bus to school.go to school by bus / on a bus.prep./ adv.地離,一 金m kilometres farfrom . is kilometr

10、es away from prep./ 忱過馬路across the streetacross / cross IhcL-ZStreetnum.f adv.第一口第二D 第 三The first The second Tlie third birsl (Firstly) Second (Secondly) . rhird(Thirdly)乩/ 砌.在北部in the nori hemin the north*/ v.他感謝了我。He (hanked io / for me.He thanked / was thankful to me.7 .介詞誤用錯誤類型中文錯誤表達正瑞表達在村莊附近ned

11、iby the villagenear the t ill w誤用對有良效 在老師的幫助下 熟悉某人/某事 大聲地 在陽光下讀書have a good effect to under the teacher-s help familiar wiiti sb./to sth.with a loud voiceread under the sunhave a gcxid effect on with the teacher* s help familiar to sb. / wiih sth. in a loud voiceread in the sun多余到那兒在某人回家的路為人民服務anive

12、d al ihere, got io thereon one's way to home serve for the peoplearnved t reached ! got thereon one's wav home.serve ihe people8 .某些搭配和慣用法誤用中文錯誤表達正確表達價格便宜心The price is cheap.ITie price is low.請你做Please you du Please do 一他告訴我He tuld me whetherHe iDld me (that) .她15歲口She i$ fifteen years age中考

13、英語總復習專項訓練題寫作專項訓練A.中考英語熱門寫作話題1.關于學習Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic“How to learn English well ” .(以“怎樣學好英語”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。)Use the following points as a reference.(以下內容供參考) When did you start learning English? (in . / . years ago) How do you learn English? (listen careful

14、ly, study with a group, read English every day .) What is difficult to learn? (listening, grammar .) / Slit is fifteen- vear-okl. JShe is riflern, f She is a girl of 15. / She is fifteen years old. / She is a 15-year-oid girL我花了 10元買書一1 cost / spent 10 yuan lo buv lhe book.arIlie bunk cosl me 10 yua

15、n. / 1 spein 10 yuan (im buying / on the book.2. 關于興趣Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic“ My interest ” . （以“我的興趣”為題寫一篇不少于 60個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. （以下內容供參What is your interest?Why do you like it so much?3. 關于寫事Write a passage of at least 60 words ab

16、out the topic“ Unforgettable memories ” . （以“難忘的回憶”為題寫一篇不少于60 個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. （以下內容供參考） What is your unforgettable memory? Why do you think it is unforgettable?6. 關于寫人Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic“ My plan for summer holiday ” . （以“我的暑期計

17、劃”為題寫一篇不少于60 個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. （以下內容供參考） What are you going to do during the coming summer holiday? Give at least two points.5. 關于朋友Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic“ My good friend ” . （以“我的好朋友”為題寫一篇不少于 60 個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）Use the following poi

18、nts as a reference. （以下內容供參考） Who is your good friend? What do you often do with him or her? Why do you regard him or her as a good friend?Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic“ My English teacher ” . （以“我的英語老師”為題寫一篇不少于60 個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. （以下內容供參

19、考） Who is your English teacher?Do you like him or her?Why do you like him or her?7. 關于英語Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic“ I changed my ways of learning English” . （以“我改變了我學習英語的方式”為題寫一篇不少于 60 個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. （以下內容供參考） How did you learn Engli

20、sh in the past? Why do you change your ways of learning English? How do you learn English now?Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic“ An unforgettable trip ” . （以“一次難忘的旅行”為題寫一篇不少于60 個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. （以下內容供參考） Where did you go? What did you do duri

21、ng that trip? Why do you think it is unforgettable?9. 關于動物Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic“ My favourite animal ” . （以“我最喜歡的動物”為題寫一篇不少于60 個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. （以下內容供參考） What s your favourite animal? Why do you like it so much?Write a passage of

22、at least 60 words about the topic“ Online shopping is changing the way of our life”（以“網上購物正在改變我們的生活方式”為題寫一篇不少于 60 個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. （以下內容供參 What s your view on online shopping? What are its advantages and dis-advantages? Please give one or two suggestions to you

23、r friends if they love online shopping.11. 關于學科Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic“ My favourite subject ” . （以“我最喜歡的學科”為題寫一篇不少于60 個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）Use the following points as a reference. （以下內容供參考） What s your favourite subject? Why do you like it best?12. 關于變化Write a passage of at l

24、east 60 words about the topic“ Changes in myself ” . （以“我的變化”為題寫一篇不少于 60 個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）Use the following points as a reference.（以下問題可供參考） Have you had any changes in yourself since you came to the middle school? Which are the most important changes? （Give at least 2 examples） What do you think of t

25、he changes?13. 關于節(jié)日Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic“ The Lantern Festival ” . （以“元宵節(jié)”為題寫一篇不少于 60 個詞的短文，標點符號不占格。）Use the following points as a reference.（以下內容供參考） Do you like the Lantern Festival and why do you like it? What do people usually do on the Lantern Festival?B. 提示性作文 每個

26、人都有自己的夢想，努力堅持終能實現(xiàn)。請根據下圖及 表格中所提供的信息寫一篇文章。TomL出身貧寒，付不起學費，但一直自學， 考上了大學臼2,上大學時堅持打零工(pari Time job),并照顧遭遇車禍的父母口3,堅持夢想(follow one's drcam )，擁 有 了自己的農場口Yuu你的少想如何實現(xiàn) 你的夢想勤奮學習【要求】1 .所寫內容必須包括表格中的信息，可適當發(fā)揮；2 .介紹Tom ,談談你的夢想并自擬兩點實現(xiàn)夢想的途徑;3 .文章不少于90詞；4 .語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，條理清楚，字跡工整(2015 年中考英語總復習專項訓練題（六）參考范文A.1.How t

27、o learn English wellEnglish is very important for us. Everyone wants to learn it well. Do you know how to learn it well? Here are my ways:Firstly, I listen to the teacher and make notes carefully in class. I review / go over my old lessons and prepare my new lessons after class.Secondly, I like spea

28、king English with my classmates, not only in classroom, but also on the playground. It s important to improve my spoken English.Thirdly, I keep a diary every day to practise my written English.Besides, I often read English newspapers and magazines in order to enrich my knowledge on English culture.2

29、.My interestI have a wide range of interests and enjoy doing many things in my free time. I am a lover of reading. I often read in my spare time. I read many kinds of books and newspaper. I like the stories and news in themvery much. There are a lot of knowledgeandinteresting things as well. I am al

30、so a music lover. I like all kinds of music. I often listen to the music programmes on radio. Although I can t sing English songs well, I like them a lot. I like sports as well. I often play badminton after classes in the afternoon. Ioften run in the morning. When I am doing sports, I forget all my

31、trouble and worry. Of course, sports can also help me in building my body.In short, I enjoy my life here in school. Reading books, listening to music and doing sports are very helpful to my health and my studies.3.Unforgettable memoriesHow time flies! Three years passed in a blink. Lots of memories

32、left in my head. Teachers, classmates, hard work and above all friendship stay in mind. Looking back, I have gone through either the joy of success or the pains of failure. Teachers are friendly to us in life and always strict with us in study. Classmates and friends help me so much. With their help

33、 I ve madegreat progress. But I m a careless boy. And I always make mistakes which can be avoided. Senior middle school life is a new beginning and it gives me a chance to overcome my shortcomings. As it is said,“ It is notour abilities that show what we truly are, it is our choice. ” The two-month

34、holiday will also provide me the freedom to think over and make up my mind to do it better in the future. And I believe I can do it.4.My plan for summer holidayThe summer holiday is coming. We will have plenty of time to enjoy ourselves. But I think we should plan the time carefully. We had better m

35、ake a list of all the things we wish to do and try hard to keep a balancebetween work and play. In the holidaywe can domany activities. For example, we can play with friends.We can do differentsports.It is alsomeaningful for us to work as volunteers. Besides, we can do some reading. It can help get

36、us prepared for the new term. I hope all of us will have a wonderful holiday.5.My good friendI have a good friend. Her name is Susan. She is 14years old. She s from America. She s a tall girl with blue eyes and she has long golden hair. She likes doing sports, especially swimming and running. Sheenj

37、oys reading books and listening to music. What smore, she is very interested in Chinese history and culture. So she often reads books about China. She s lovely and friendly. She gets on well with her friends. She s also helpful. She often helps me learn English. With her help, I made much progress i

38、n English. I m lucky to have such a good friend.6.My English teacherOur English Teacher Ms Huang, came to our school two years ago. She has been an English teacher for more than 30 years. She works hard and has been a model teacher for many years. She is kind and friendly to us after class, but she

39、is rather strict with us in class. She always encourages us to speak andread more English. She often says,“ Practice makes perfect. ” She is good at teaching and tries her best to make every lesson lively and interesting. She often gives us slide shows, teaches us English songs and helps us put on s

40、hort English plays. She is not only our teacher but also our friend. We all respect and love her. Tomorrow she is going to attend an important meeting, at which she will be given a medal for her advanced deeds.7.I changed my ways of learning EnglishAs an international language, English plays a great

41、 character in our life. English has become more and more important to us. Therefore, I changed my way of learning English so that I can improve my English ability.In the past, I didn t listen to English news often. So I changed it. I began to listen to English songs. And I listened to the words of t

42、he song carefully in order to learn more words. Everytime when I met the words which I didn t know, I would looked it up in the dictionary. And I always tried to remember it after looking it up. After a month, I found that I knew more words than my classmates.I used to write as few words as I could.

43、 No doubt, I changedit.Withthe help of my friendsandmyteacher,I triedto writemore articles.Finally, Isucceeded. I took up writing as a hobby and I will never forget it.I m glad that I changed my way of learning English.And everything I changed will make me more and more interested in English.8.An un

44、forgettable tripI went to Chongqing in July 22. It is a city which was built near mountains. So people call it Mountain City. In Chongqing, I went to the Red Stone Centre, to see the places which the prisoners lived in the past. It is a terrible and awful trip. There were a lot of dogs, and soldiers

45、 with guns near the prisons. And most of the prisoners were good men. They didn t want to tell the bad people where the other people were. So they were put into the prison. They lived in very small houses. No good food to eat, no good water to drink.They had only twenty minutes to stay outside per d

46、ay but they still said nothing. I think they are the heroes in that century. I will follow their spirit.9.My favourite animalMy favourite animalis dog. I like it because it canhelp people in manydifferent ways. Many, manyyears ago, dogs were alreadypeople s pets. Theylived in caves withpeople.Dogs w

47、ere very goodhelpers. They guarded the caves and kept people safe from danger.Nowadays, dogs are also people s pets. But some people are unkind to their dogs. They do not look after them and leave them in the street. We should be kind to dogs. They are our friends. They can help us do many things. T

48、hey help the police catch thieves and find missing people. They also help blind people cross the road safely. 10.Online shopping is changing the way of our lifeAs we all know, online shopping has become more and more popular among people especially the young people. We can buy nearly everything on t

49、he Internet.In my view, online shopping has already changed the way of our life. People tend to surf the Internet to buy what they need. I think the advantage of online shopping is its convenience. People only sit in the soft and click the mouse at home to buy what they want.It can save people a lot

50、 of time and money. The disadvantage is that online shopping is not always safe. Sometimes your private information will be let out. So if you love online shopping, please be careful with your personal information and the website so that you can benefit from online shopping.11.My favourite subjectEn

51、glish is my favourite subject because English is used widely in the world, especiallyin Shanghai, acity with so many foreigners. What s more, I like itbecause my English teacher is kind and friendlytome.In order to learn English well, I read English aloud every morning and listen to the teacher care

52、fully in class. After class, I often watch English programmesand keep an English diary every day.In a word, I love English and I will continue to learn it better.12.Changes in myselfEveryone has changed a little or a lot since the day he came to the middle school. So have I. I am no longer a little

53、girl because I am a middle school student now. I think that I have changed a lot. For example, I become more confident and friendly than ever before.I have made a lot of friends and we often have a good time. We help each other and share things together.And I also get rid of some of my bad habits. For example, I used to spend much time o