1、專題13書面表達(dá)1.【2018年江西中考】假如國外中學(xué)生來你校進(jìn)行為期一周的交流學(xué)習(xí)，期間計(jì)劃參加一項(xiàng)中國傳統(tǒng)文化的主題活動(dòng)，為此向你們征求活動(dòng)方案(plan)請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格中的信息提示，寫一篇英語短文，介紹你提供的活動(dòng)方案，內(nèi)容包括：茶或者民樂介紹，活動(dòng)安排以及與之相關(guān)的理由。要求：1.從表格中任選一個(gè)主題，合理安排活動(dòng)；2 .短文條理清楚，行文連貫，內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3 .短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和地名；4 .詞數(shù)不少于80,開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Chinese CultureIntroducti onScheduleReaso nsTeaPast and presentTime

2、:Places: tea farm, tea houseActivities:1. tea processing2. a tea art performanceFolk MusicMusic pieces and traditional instrumentsTime:Places: music room, schoolhallActivities:1. take musical instrumentclasses2. attend a folk music concertHello, friends. I've got a plan for you which may help yo

3、u learn about Chinese culture. Firstof all, I'd like to introduceHope you will have a good time.【答案】 Hello, friends. I've got a plan for you which may help you learn about Chinese culture.First of all, I'd like to introduce tea. It has a long history. It is said that Shen Nong discovered

4、 it as a drink. Tea is one of the most popular drinks in China. So we will have some interesting activities about it for you.On Saturday morning, you are going to visit a big farm where you can learn about tea processing.On Saturday afternoon, you are going to a tea house after dinner where you can

5、watch a tea art performance.Why do we plan a visit to a tea house for you? Because you can lean a lot more about tea culture there. You will see a young lady in a Chinese traditional dress who shows you how a cup of tea is made with tea sets, You can enjoy it and relax yourselves while listening to

6、pieces of traditional folk music.Hope you will have a good time.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清嘶，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如help sb. do .about Qiinese culture I d like to , one of the mon popular iinks be go-ng to . after dinner . a lot mere . be made 唱th , listen to , have a good time 等. 而 G sajd that Shen None dis

7、covered it as a drink. Tea is one of the most popular drinks in China. You will see a young:ady in a Cliinsse traditional dress who ±ovs you how a cup of tea is made with tea sets. You can enjoy it arid r?lax yourselves listening to pieces of tradjtional folk music. 種復(fù)雜從句結(jié)構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣,是本文

8、的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思 維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。2.【2018年內(nèi)蒙古包頭市中考】 假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)給你們的美籍教師 Bob寫一封電子郵件，向他簡要介紹 你校即將舉辦的英語文化節(jié) (English Culture Festival),邀請(qǐng)他參加本次活動(dòng)，并請(qǐng)他在節(jié)目最后做一個(gè)關(guān)于如何學(xué)好英語的講座。郵件還應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容：1 .活動(dòng)時(shí)間：本周五下午14:30-17:30;2 .活

9、動(dòng)地點(diǎn)：報(bào)告廳(Lecture Hall);3 活動(dòng)內(nèi)容：學(xué)生演唱英文歌曲注意：1.詞數(shù)90左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2 .可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3 .文中不得出現(xiàn)反映考生信息的真實(shí)人名、地名等內(nèi)容。Dear Bob,How is it going?Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Bob,How is it going?An English Culture Festival will be held in our school. All of us students do hope that you c

10、ould come and join us.The activity will begin in the Lecture Hall at 14: 30 this Friday ant last about 3 hours. We've prepared many programs for it, for example, English songs. What's more, some students will perform plays in English.As you know, many students in our school have difficulty i

11、n learning English well. So when the performance finishes, it would be very nice if you could give a talk and provide us with some practical advice.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li hua【解析】這是一篇給材料作文。要求寫一封電子郵件邀請(qǐng)你的美籍老師來參加你校即將舉辦的英語文 化節(jié)活動(dòng)，并請(qǐng)他在節(jié)目最后做一個(gè)關(guān)于如何學(xué)好英語的講座。郵件還應(yīng)包括以下內(nèi)容:L活動(dòng)時(shí)間:本周五 下午14:n活動(dòng)地點(diǎn);報(bào)告廳嘮Q

12、活動(dòng)內(nèi)容學(xué)生演唱英文微曲一口根據(jù)所給的材料內(nèi)容可 知本文時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)，人稱主要為第一人稱心在寫作時(shí)，要涵蓋材料中所提到的所有內(nèi) 容要點(diǎn)，要理順要點(diǎn),防止漏寫中同時(shí)要注意緊扣主題,連句成篇，保持文章的連貫性,要注意語言的表 述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣.要使用自己有把握的句式,單詞，詞匯，句式要 豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后必須認(rèn)真檢查是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。點(diǎn)睛：首先認(rèn)真審題， 看清題目中的要求和要點(diǎn)； 然后根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個(gè)要點(diǎn)中可能要 用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動(dòng)筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、段與段之間的過渡，

13、必要時(shí)可運(yùn) 用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使文章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后要細(xì)心復(fù)核檢查，確保正確無誤。3.【2018年山東德州市中考】 樹立自我保護(hù)意識(shí)，健康快樂地成長是每個(gè)青少年的必修課。下面是某地 關(guān)心下一代工作委員會(huì)為青少年編寫的青少年自我保護(hù)健康成長所手冊(cè) 的部分內(nèi)容。作為一名中學(xué)生，寫一篇文章，內(nèi)容包括：陳樹你是怎樣踐行手冊(cè)中提及的三條事項(xiàng)的；補(bǔ)充至少一條 你認(rèn)為重要的其他事項(xiàng)。Improve Child Self-protection2_ About food eat frut and eatfKtfbodXMako children grow healthilyL About traffic t

14、idescross dK zebra馬線”要求：1.語言通順，要點(diǎn)齊全，意思連貫，條理清楚，書寫規(guī)范;2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.80100詞，文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers. But how do I protect myself and grow up healthily? Now let me share my experiences and ideas with you.First, I always obey the traffic r

15、ulesIn short, if we obey the rules and take care of oursekes,we will grow up safely and healthily.答案 Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers.But how do I protectmyself and grow up healthily? Now let me share my experiences and ideas with you.First, I always obey the traffic

16、 rules and I never run the red light. When the traffic lightis red, I won' t go until it turns green. I always cross the zebra walk because it ' s safe. Second,I often eat healthily and safely. It' s important to eat more fruit and vegetables. Eating toomuch fast food will do harm to my

17、body. Third, I never meet strangers alone, especiallyfriendswho I make on the Internet. At the same time if we are true friends, we should help each other.What' s more, I ' d like to give you some advice. Now summer is coming, it' s dangerous for usto swim alone, especially in deep lakes

18、 or river. So don' t do that.In short, if we obey the rules and take care of oursekes,we will grow up safely and healthily.【解析】L認(rèn)直讀表格，弄明白表格的內(nèi)容。交通魏則：禁止闖紅燈、要走斑馬線©關(guān)干食物：多吃蔬菜 和水果、禁止吃垃圾食品。關(guān)于交朋友：禁止單獨(dú)見陌生人、互相幫助小2.用簡單明了的英語把這些提示內(nèi)容寫完整。3-要補(bǔ)充你認(rèn)為重要的其他一項(xiàng)4.人稱用第一人來寫。時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)*亮點(diǎn)說明：1 .本文書寫的內(nèi)容完整、條理清楚。2 .在文中使用了

19、First , Second, Third等詞匯，使文章層次分明。易于理解。3 .作者所加的一條很好，防溺水，是當(dāng)今安全隱患最大的。同時(shí)還運(yùn)用了句型It ' s dangerous for usto do sth.使文章增色不少。因此本文為上等之作。4 .【2018年山東濟(jì)寧地區(qū)中考】某英文網(wǎng)站的“Student Life”欄目正在向中學(xué)生征文，標(biāo)題為“Atime when I made someone happy : 請(qǐng)你寫一篇英文稿件，內(nèi)容需包括以下要點(diǎn)：1. Who was the person you made happy?2. When was it?3. What did

20、you say or do?4. Why did it make him/her happy?5. How did you feel at that moment?注意：1.詞數(shù)：100左右（題目不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)可能透考生真實(shí)身份的任何信息。【答案】 Last summer,though it was hot,I volunteered to teach children English in rural area.When I arrived there,I couldn'tadjust to the weather and life style.However,as

21、 time went by,I foundmyself quite happy when I saw the students I was teaching made great progress.In order to teach them,I had to keep on learning as well.As a result,my English improved a lot.Also,I madefriends with some of my students.We are still keeping in touch by letter now.In a word,not only

22、 did I help those in need,but also I myself learn a lot that summer.If I have another chance to do volunteer work,I am ready to go.【解析】寫作分析：這是一篇給定標(biāo)題的材料作文，需要逐條完成要點(diǎn)問題的回答，描述一次自己讓別人開心快樂的經(jīng)歷，是一篇記敘文，首先要讀懂5個(gè)問題，其次要用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z言和銜接手段把這五個(gè)問題的 回答聯(lián)系在一起，變成一篇短文，同時(shí)也要注意在描述過去的故事的時(shí)候要正確運(yùn)用過去時(shí)態(tài)。5.【2018年山東聊城地區(qū)中考】假如你要競選你班的體育委員，請(qǐng)你用

23、英語進(jìn)行競選演講。演講的主要內(nèi)容包括：1 .自己喜歡體育，身體健康；2 .擅長球類運(yùn)動(dòng)，尤其是足球和籃球；3 .可以傳授運(yùn)動(dòng)技藝，助大家比賽取得最佳成績。注意：1 .詞數(shù)：80左右；2 .可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3 .演講內(nèi)容中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校和個(gè)人名字；4 .演講的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。I want to be the PE monitor.【答案】I want to be the PE monitor. I enjoy sport, and I can run very fast. I' m really fitand healthy. Just watch me i

24、n the playground between lessons! I play most ball games well. ButI ' m really good at football, and I play basketball in the school team. Because I have a lot of good playing skills. I usually get the best score in every match. I can teach you some if you like. Choose me for the PE monitor and

25、you can get the best score too!【解析】這是一篇要求為了竟選你班的體育委員來介紹自己，動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)圍繞要點(diǎn)組織材 料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，在此基礎(chǔ)上亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的 要點(diǎn)。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應(yīng)用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)及大小寫等問題,不要犯語 法錯(cuò)誤口注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系,語意連貫，6.【2018年山東省青島】 現(xiàn)在，中學(xué)生在校內(nèi)能保證一定時(shí)間的運(yùn)動(dòng)量，但在校外普遍缺少運(yùn)動(dòng)甚至不運(yùn)動(dòng)。請(qǐng)就 此現(xiàn)象寫一篇短文，談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?nèi)容包括：1 .缺少運(yùn)動(dòng)甚至不運(yùn)動(dòng)的原因；2 .缺少運(yùn)動(dòng)甚至不運(yùn)動(dòng)對(duì)學(xué)生

26、的影響；3 .針對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象提出合理的改善建議。要求：1.詞數(shù)：80-100 （開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；4 .文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名和人名。參考詞匯：be short of 缺少M(fèi)any students are short of exercise in their spare time now 【答案】 Many students are short of exercise in their spare time now.They think doing exercisecan affect their studies.Therefore they have less time to st

27、udy.Doing sports is good for theirhealth. A person who takes exercises regularly will keep fit. In the school, students are forcedto take exercise in the PE class, they need to join certain activities.In this way, studentslive in a healthy lifestyle, they won' t get sick easily.But after they le

28、aving school, no oneforces them to do so, so they are lazy to take exercise so that their bodies get weaker.I think students should take exercise every day outside the school.In a word, exercise is helpful, important and absolutely necessary.【解析】話題作文寫出的句子要達(dá)意，完整，語法正確，合乎習(xí)慣，特別是句式，謂語動(dòng)詞形式要有根有 據(jù)，選用比較有把握的詞

29、匯，用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫蛯懗霭登蟹从硟?nèi)容要求的句子。英語作文要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài), 注意提供的觀點(diǎn)、材料，要注意句子的完整性，謂語動(dòng)詞的正確形式，句子之間的銜接和過渡，英語作文, 要忠實(shí)于材料,不必?cái)U(kuò)展，注意用好連詞，多用非謂語，慎用較難的句型，一定不能寫錯(cuò)句*7.【2018年山東省威海市】“照鏡子”是生活中的平常事，以生活為鏡，可以照出現(xiàn)實(shí)中真實(shí)的自己。請(qǐng)以“Mein the mirror ”為題，寫一篇 80詞以上的英語短文。圍繞自己最突出的一至兩個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)， 重點(diǎn)談?wù)勗谖磥淼纳詈蛯W(xué)習(xí)中如何揚(yáng)長避短、完善自我，成長為更好的自己。要求：1.題目已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2 .觀點(diǎn)正確、條理清晰、表達(dá)流暢

30、；3 .文中不得出現(xiàn)自己的真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。【答案】Me in the mirrorLooking at myself in the mirror, I know I am an outgoing girl. I like to make friends and I'malways ready to help them. So I'm very popular in my school. But I have a big problem, I'm lessinterested in my lessons and I can t concentrate in class

31、. In my spare time I spend too muchtime on computer games, so I don' t get good grades which make my parents disappointed.Whenl go to senior high school I hope to get along well with my classmates and try to make morefriends. I hope we can help each other and learn from each other. I will make a

32、 good studyresolution and try my best to go for it. I decide to have a healthier lifestyle.I'll spend moretime on my schoolwork and develop good learning habits. I will concentrate more in class and finish my study tasks carefully. What's more, I will read more books and master good leaningm

33、ethods. I hope to make great progress and make my parents proud of me.【就析】這是一篇話言作文,根據(jù)所給的材料介紹一下鏡子里的我 所提供的材料中涉及到介紹白己的 最突出的一至兩個(gè)優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn),重點(diǎn)談?wù)勗谖磥淼纳詈蛯W(xué)用中如何揚(yáng)長避加、完善自我，成長為更好 的自己 時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人梆為第一人稱,注意作文中必須包含所給的材料的所有信息.并適當(dāng)發(fā) 抨 寫作時(shí).避免使用漢浩式的英洽.盡量使用我們熟態(tài)的句子或?yàn)檎Z 語法要止承.我達(dá)要符合英誥 習(xí)慣.注意時(shí)態(tài)，時(shí)間狀浩的搭百吸主調(diào)一致問題,寫作中適當(dāng)使用連同1注意上下文聯(lián)系緊跑,將合

34、造輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條里性【高分句型一】I'm less interested in my lessons and I can' t concentrate in class.我對(duì)功課不太感興趣，上課也不能集中精力。be interested in 短語的使用，使文章增色不少。【高分句型二】In my spare time I spend too much time on computer games, so I don' t get good grades which make my parents disappointed.業(yè)余時(shí)間，我花太多的時(shí)間在電腦游戲上，所以我

35、沒有取得好成績，這使我的父母很失望。which make my parents disappointed. 是由 which弓I導(dǎo)的定語從句。【高分句型三】I will concentrate more in class and finish my study tasks carefully.我斗各集中精力在課堂上，認(rèn)真完成我的學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)。說明作者在后來認(rèn)識(shí)到了錯(cuò)誤，而努力學(xué)習(xí)。8.【2018年陜西省中考】 假如你是李華，上周日你獨(dú)自在家照看你五歲的妹妹Nana,請(qǐng)根據(jù)表格內(nèi)容，寫活動(dòng)上午講故事，唱歌，中午煮面(cook noodles ),休息(have a rest ),下午玩游戲，看動(dòng)回片

36、(watch cartoons )感受要求:1.參考表格內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2 .語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3 .文章不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4 .詞數(shù)：不少于70詞。（開頭已給出但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。）Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home.【答案】 Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at ho

37、me.In the morning, I told her many funny stories first. Then we sang and danced happily together.I also taught her to speak a few simple English words and she learned well. At noon, I cookednoodles with tomatoes and eggs. She said they were delicious. I was very glad that she enjoyedthe lunch. Then

38、we had a rest. In the afternoon, we played games together. After that, we watched cartoons until my parents came back. I felt tired but happy.【解析】寫作分析：這篇作文是要求寫一份日常活動(dòng)的描述*描述一天的行為活動(dòng)。苜先要注意的就是時(shí) 態(tài)，寫作背景基于上周日，所以全文要使用一般過去時(shí)，其次要注意各個(gè)短語的正確表達(dá)方式，最后不能 忘記適當(dāng)表達(dá)自己的感受。寫作亮點(diǎn)：善于分段，可以用首段進(jìn)行概括性描述，闡明背景（ my parents were not at

39、home ）。第二 段可以進(jìn)一步開始細(xì)節(jié)描述。涉及到的短語有told her many funny stories , sang and danced happily ,taught her to speak a few simple English words, cooked noodles , had a rest 等等， 使用短語的時(shí)候也有亮點(diǎn)，能夠通過副詞happily 或者介詞短語 with tomatoes and eggs讓動(dòng)詞短語的含義更加豐富。文章最后收尾簡潔，用一句話點(diǎn)出了自己的感受，使得文章結(jié)構(gòu)完整。9.【2018年四川成都市】假如你是圖中女孩，你與家人于 4月29日共度

40、周日。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖中所示寫一篇英文日記，講述你當(dāng)天所見和所做之事。注意：1.日記應(yīng)包含圖中所有信息2 .日記中須寫出當(dāng)天的一些感受3 .日記應(yīng)格式正確，語句通順，句式多樣4詞數(shù)：100左右。參考詞匯：城堡castle 螃蟹crab【答案】Sunny Sunday,April 29（th）Today I had a good time with my parents on the beach It was so fine that I could see the risingsun and flying sea birds. a boat sailed itself in the distance.

41、 What a beautifulscene! Dressedin swimming suit, I swam in the blue and clear sea. Then, I played volleyball with my parents.Finally, I managed to make a sand castle with tools. It looked so true to life that a crab even wanted to live in it.What a pleasant day! I not only got close to nature but al

42、so shared happiness with my family.【解析】假如你是圖中女孩，你與家人于月芋日共度周日，請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖中所示馬一篇英文日記,講述你當(dāng) 天所見和所做之事。根據(jù)圖片提示，動(dòng)筆前要先認(rèn)真閱讀要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮口寫作中，應(yīng)注意 描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上s結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容.可知本文主要是第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)迸行 敘述小語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系 緊密.符合邏輯關(guān)系Y10.【2018年四川廣安市中考】假設(shè)下周你所在的班將開展為期一周的研學(xué)活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示用英語寫一則通知告知全班同學(xué)。陽光農(nóng)場之旅

43、活動(dòng)時(shí)間活動(dòng)地點(diǎn)陽光農(nóng)場活動(dòng)內(nèi)容1.幫助清理農(nóng)場垃圾，搞好農(nóng)場衛(wèi)生；2.學(xué)習(xí)種菜、植樹；3.野餐，采摘水果（蘋果，梨）3 tips不要到河里游泳，不要單獨(dú)仃動(dòng)。要求:1.字跡工整，書寫規(guī)范，包含全部要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的學(xué)校、班級(jí)名稱；3.80詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；4.請(qǐng)將書面表達(dá)內(nèi)容寫在答題卡上相應(yīng)的位置。參考詞匯：rubbish（ 垃圾）clear away（ 清理）Sunshine Farm（ 陽光農(nóng)場）Hello, everyone,May I have your attention, please?That's all Thank you!【

44、答案】Hello, everyone, May I have your attention, please? Next week our class are going to have a journey to Sunshine Farm. The journey will last for one week. On the farm we're going to do some cleaning and help clear away rubbish at first. Then, we'll learn how to plant trees and grow vegetab

45、les. During the week, we will have a picnic and help the farmers pick fruits such as apples and pears. For our safety, we mustn't go swimmingin the river and we should keep together. Nobody is allowed to leave the class group and go alone. Wish you a happy journey!That' s all. Thank you!【解析】

46、寫作分析：這則作文是要求與一M知，告知同學(xué)們即將開展的為期一周的研學(xué)活動(dòng)，需要闡明 活動(dòng)的時(shí)間“地點(diǎn)“內(nèi)容,以及相關(guān)的注意事項(xiàng)，寫作難度不大,討論即將發(fā)生的事情可以借助一般將來 時(shí)，行文注意前后連貫結(jié)構(gòu)完整即可。寫作亮點(diǎn)：首先要點(diǎn)明主題“下周要去做什么”，用到了 “ have a journey to "（去一旅行）這個(gè)短 語。其次就針對(duì)這次旅行做出較為細(xì)致的描述，描述時(shí)間，描述即將進(jìn)行的事件，提到了 “do somecleaning "（幫助清掃），“help clear away rubbish "（幫助清除垃圾），plant trees （種樹）、"

47、;grow vegetables ”（種植蔬菜），“have a picnic ”（去野餐），“help the farmers pick fruits "（幫 助農(nóng)民采摘水果），"be allowed to do ”（被允許去做），其中情態(tài)動(dòng)詞must的用法準(zhǔn)確，wemustn't go swimming in the river 意為“我們禁止去河里游泳"，mustn' t表示"禁止"。結(jié)尾處有祝福語"Wish you a happy journey!”，總體來說短語使用準(zhǔn)確，時(shí)態(tài)正確，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，有相關(guān)細(xì)節(jié)的補(bǔ)充，

48、行文連貫，完成了既定的寫作任務(wù)。11.【2018年四川省樂山市】現(xiàn)在，戴眼鏡的學(xué)生越來越多；為此，國家把每年6月6日定為愛眼日。請(qǐng)你結(jié)合自己的體會(huì)，就如何愛護(hù)眼睛，給校報(bào)英語欄目寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括：1 .吃有益于眼睛的食物，如：胡蘿卜、雞蛋等；2 .多做眼保健操，長時(shí)間用眼后可看看遠(yuǎn)方；3 .養(yǎng)成良好的用眼習(xí)慣，如：不躺著玩手機(jī)或看書等。注意：1.詞數(shù)80詞左右；4 .可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；5 .開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Nowadays, more and more students are getting near-sighted, so National Eye Care Da

49、y is set onJune 6 every year.【答案】 Nowadays, more and more students are getting near-sighted, so National Eye Care Day isset on June 6 every year. As we all know, eyes are the windows to the soul. We should try ourbest to protect them. Here are some suggestions for good eye health.First, eat some foo

50、ds that are good for eyes, such as carrots and eggs. Second, do more eyeexercises to make them relax. Also, it ' s helpful to look far away from time to time after studying long. Finally, make sure to have a good eye habit. Don' t read books or use a cell phone in bed. In a word, eyes are so

51、 important that all of us should do what we can to keep them healthy.t解析】亮點(diǎn)說明:這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿,表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如mueandEy Car Day ,汗ery 的唱十 al： . try ottr 收近，be good ibr . such as , do more1 eytrbt helpfiL to n look far away . from tme to time , makf mure have a good tys hat it 7 in 次 d , m a vrord等。

52、而Brsr： "g血：壬血:v；等語句的運(yùn)用;不僅使習(xí)作思路清嘶,層次分明；而且豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容,使表 達(dá)多樣，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識(shí)準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級(jí)詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。12.【2018年天津市】 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，以“ The Story of Li Hua ”為題，為學(xué)校廣播站英語專 欄寫一篇短文，介紹發(fā)生在你班同學(xué)李華身上的一件事。(1)上周五放學(xué)后李華乘公交車回家

53、，看到有人在吃橘子，并把橘皮扔在車上。(2)李華把橘皮撿起，放進(jìn)垃圾桶。(3)乘客用手機(jī)拍了照片，發(fā)布到網(wǎng)上。(4)老師知道后表揚(yáng)了李華，李華說這是他應(yīng)該做的。(5)你覺得參考詞匯：果皮 peel 垃圾桶dustbin 發(fā)布post 表揚(yáng)praise要求：(1)詞數(shù)：80-100 個(gè)。(2)短文的題目和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。(3)要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。The Story of Li HuaLast Friday, when my classmate Li Hua took a bus back home from school.【答案】The Story of Li HuaLas

54、t Friday, when myclassmate Li Hua took a bus back home from school. After school last Friday,Li Hua took a bus home and saw someone eating oranges and throwing orange peel on the bus.So he picked it up and put it into the dustbin. The passenger on the bus took photos of Li Hua with their mobile phon

55、es and and posted them online. After knowing it, the teacher praised Li Huaand encouraged others to learn from him.I thinkLi Hua did a good deed. It is impolite to throwlitter in public places.【解析】本文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含題目中所提供的所有信息。靈活運(yùn)用各種句式，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各個(gè)要點(diǎn) 完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確，簡潔。最后必須認(rèn)真查蛉是否有漏寫，有無 拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等。點(diǎn)睛

56、：這篇短文使用了大量的固定短語，為文章增色不少，如 take a bus ; put into ; take photos of ; encourage to do sth; ; learn from 等； and ;so和固定句型 It is + 形容詞+to do sth等的運(yùn)用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理；同時(shí)語言流暢，內(nèi)容完整，是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。13.【2018年江蘇省徐州市】 你校英文報(bào)組織了題為“我喜歡的英語諺語，征文活動(dòng)，你有意參加。請(qǐng)從下面兩句英語諺語中任選一.句.，寫一篇90詞左右的短文，參加征文活動(dòng)。Many hands make light work.Meanin

57、g: If lots of people share the work, it will make a job easier to complete.Practice makes perfect.Meaning: If you keep practising , you will be better at it.短文內(nèi)容須包括：（1 ）你喜歡的諺語及其含義（2 ）體現(xiàn)該諺語含義的個(gè)人經(jīng)歷注意：1.短文中已給出的部分（見答題卡）不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2 .短文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名和地名。【答案】My favourtite English sayingMy English saying is many

58、 hands make light work. It means if lots of people share the work, Itwill make a job easier to complete.Last term, our class decided to give a charity show to help children in poor areas. It was difficultto get everything ready in a short time. Luckily, all my classmates worked together and sharedthe work. Some students handed out leaflets, others prepared the costumes, and others helpeddownload th