1、No.1Step I: Warming up and leading inStep II: Pre-writingtask1:Read the letter and answer the questions1）Who is the letter from? (Wang Zhidong)2）Who is the letter to (Sunbeam Travel Agency)3）How does the writer open his letter? (Dear sir or Madam)4）How does the writer end his letter? (Best wishes)2

2、Paragraph2: Step II: Pre-readingtask2: Read the letter again and chosea Expresses the writers thanks.b Explains who the writer is and what he wants.c Suggest how the writer can be reached.d Give details of the request.d State the topic of the letter.1 Paragraph1: 3 Paragraph3: 4 Paragraph4: 5 Paragr

3、aph5: e b d c a Step II: Pre-readingTask3 : summarize the letter1.Para 1 Beginning :Stating the topic of the letterl I am writing to ask for your help with.l I am writing to ask for information about.l I am Li Yan, a student from Guangming Middle school. Step II: Pre-readingPara 2 Body :Making polit

4、e requests l My mother asked me to write to you for information and ask you for help. l We would like to know about.l Could you recommend a good three-star hotel and arrange rooms for us?l We would also appreciate information about places of.l I would like to know about.l Could you please.l I would

5、be happy/glad if you could.l I would appreciate it if you could.l I wonder if you could.Para3.Ending: Expressing thanks Thanks in advance for your kind attention Your kind help will be much appreciated. I am very thankful for your help.Step II: Pre-readingTask4: Readingdiscussion假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外資公司兼職，

6、已寫好申請書和個人簡歷（resume）。給外教Ms Jenkins寫信，請他幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。注意：1. 詞數100左右。2. 可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。Step III : While-writingl1.Whom does Li Hua write to? (Ms Jenkins)l2.Why does he write this letter? (請他幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式format）l3.What is the main idea of each paragraph? Para1: Self-introdution the topic. Par

7、a2: My request and the context. Para3: My wish.Step III : While-writingStep III : While-writingTask5:Write a letter some rules about writing in the exams寫作基本步驟：1.仔細審題，列舉大綱。圍繞要點，寫出句子。添加過渡，確保連貫。先求正確，再求靈活。認真眷寫，卷面整潔。影響高考英語書面表達得分的幾個因素:1.語篇信息是否完整2.行文是否連貫流暢，語言是否得體。3.是否使用高級詞匯4.是否使用復雜句5 .卷面整潔,書寫工整Step III :

8、While-writingClear structure: Connecting Words and Phrases： Sentence structure: A（Beginning）開頭常用句式 (自我介紹和寫信背景以及目的)1.I am LiHua, a middle school student from .2.My name is Li Hua, a 16yearold girl who has been studying in .school of China.3.Now, I am writing to ask for your help with my resume.4.I am

9、 writing to turn to you for your help. firstly，first of all, then，next, besides, whats more, in addition, B. (Body)第二段常用句式及短語（事情的來龍去脈及我的請求）1) I am planing to take a part-time job, so I would like to .2) I plan to apply for a part-time job, so.3) This is the first time that I have.so.4) I would appre

10、ciate it if you could.5) improve my vocabulary and grammarStep III : While-writingC. (Ending)結尾常用句式，(提出你的希望并表達祝福)1) I hope you can agree with me.2) Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.3) Im looking forward to your reply. Step III : While-writingyou have 15 minuts to write your draft your let

11、terStep III : While-writingStep IV: Post-writing：Task6: Edit your composition on your own【自評】 ：1. 要點是否齊全；2. 時態、語態是否正確 ； 3. 主謂是否一致（尤其是第三人稱單數的動詞形式)；4. 標點及大小寫是否正確。【互評】：1結構是否合理？要點是否齊全？2是否有精彩詞句?(如有,請用波浪線劃出）3是否有中式英文？是否有可改善的字、詞、句?(如有，如時態、語態、主謂一 致、行文邏輯、詞性等，請用直線劃出.） 4卷面是否整潔？字跡是否工整Task6: Edit your composition

12、s each otherStep IV: Post-writing：Step IV: Post-writing：a possible version范文：Dear Ms Jenkins,I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time

13、job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I dont even know if there are something to pay attention to. So, Im writing you the letter , hoping you can giv

14、e me some help. I will be very grateful if you can help me.Looking forward to your reply. And Id be really thankful.Yours,Li HuastepV: Format英文書信格式英文書信格式1. 信頭。信頭。包括寫信人的地址和日期, 通常放在信箋的右上角（也有人放在左上角，如本文），順序是先寫地址，后寫日期，地址和日期的寫法都要符合英語的表達習慣。寫地址應由小到大：門牌號碼、街名、城(縣)名、省 (市)名、國名。這與漢語的習慣完全相反。兩種寫法：月、日、年（如March 8, 2017）； 日、月、年（如8th March, 2017）。 2. 稱呼稱呼。英文信里的稱呼一般以Dear . 或My dear .開頭。 4. 結束語。結束語。 在熟悉的人之間常用 Sincerely yours / Yours sincerely；在不太熟悉而應該客氣的人之間常用Truly yours / Yours truly；在親密的親友之間常用Yours affectionately / Affectionately yours / Yours等