1、Beautify your CompositionBeautify your Composition高考評分標準高考評分標準第五檔（第五檔（21-25） ： 完全完成試題規定的任務，完全達完全完成試題規定的任務，完全達到了預期的寫作目的，到了預期的寫作目的，覆蓋所有的內容要點覆蓋所有的內容要點，用了，用了豐富豐富的語法結構，語法與高級詞匯的語法結構，語法與高級詞匯有有少些錯誤，全篇，全篇流暢，流暢，連詞使用較好連詞使用較好。第四檔（第四檔（16-20） ： 完全完成試題規定的任務完全完成試題規定的任務，達到，達到了預期的寫作目的，寫漏了一兩個要點，了預期的寫作目的，寫漏了一兩個要點，語法和詞匯

2、基語法和詞匯基本正確，本正確，有少些錯誤，主要是有少些錯誤，主要是想使用高級詞匯與復雜句想使用高級詞匯與復雜句子所致。子所致。第二檔第二檔 （6-10） ： 未適當完成試題規定的任務，未適當完成試題規定的任務，有要點，但表達不清晰，只有一些句子可讀。有要點，但表達不清晰，只有一些句子可讀。第一檔第一檔 （1-5） ：未完成試題規定的任務，只：未完成試題規定的任務，只是一些字詞的堆積，不成句，讓讀者根本不明白是一些字詞的堆積，不成句，讓讀者根本不明白寫什么。寫什么。0分：空白，或者抄寫一些無關的東西。分：空白，或者抄寫一些無關的東西。第三檔（第三檔（11-15） ： 大錯（時態、句子結構等）大錯

3、（時態、句子結構等）超過超過五六五六處，不能及格，寫漏了一些內容，但覆蓋處，不能及格，寫漏了一些內容，但覆蓋了主要要點，基本上讓人能夠看懂，基本達到了預了主要要點，基本上讓人能夠看懂，基本達到了預期目的。期目的。高考閱卷特點：高考閱卷特點：1.1. 閱卷時間閱卷時間短短； 2.2.閱卷的速度閱卷的速度快快； 3.3.閱卷老師的心理狀態：閱卷老師的心理狀態：給分中庸平均分給分中庸平均分 1515 4. 4. 高考卷其余部分是標準化計分高考卷其余部分是標準化計分書面表達是提高分數最大的潛力股書面表達是提高分數最大的潛力股15分的作文中規中矩，該對的都對，包括分的作文中規中矩，該對的都對，包括內容要

4、點的完整，語法與詞形的正確，但內容要點的完整，語法與詞形的正確，但句式簡單，沒有多少亮點。而句式簡單，沒有多少亮點。而20多分的作多分的作文句型詞匯方面就做了很好的包裝，它的文句型詞匯方面就做了很好的包裝，它的句子如人穿的衣服，它已經不是普通校服，句子如人穿的衣服，它已經不是普通校服，而是李寧、耐克等名牌，所以讓人覺得很而是李寧、耐克等名牌，所以讓人覺得很“拽拽”，而高考英語寫作要的就是這種很，而高考英語寫作要的就是這種很“拽拽”的感覺的感覺.1515分和分和2020多分的作多分的作文到底差在哪里？文到底差在哪里？高考作文評分原則高考作文評分原則形式上形式上勝人一籌勝人一籌，也就是文章結構，譴

5、詞造句，也就是文章結構，譴詞造句內容要點，發揮想象，適當拓展內容要點，發揮想象，適當拓展書面表達在評閱書面表達在評閱時遵循三原則時遵循三原則語言第一位（語言高級）語言第一位（語言高級）內容第二位（要點齊全）內容第二位（要點齊全）結構第三位（文章分段）結構第三位（文章分段）一、高級詞匯和句式一、高級詞匯和句式二、修辭手法二、修辭手法三、有效的連詞三、有效的連詞四、名人名言或諺語四、名人名言或諺語語言第一位（語言高級）語言第一位（語言高級）漂亮、地道漂亮、地道1.高級詞匯短語 詞匯反映你知識貯存量的多少，也是衡量詞匯反映你知識貯存量的多少，也是衡量英語水平的一個重要標志。英語水平的一個重要標志。詞

6、匯使用的原則詞匯使用的原則人靠衣裝，文靠詞裝人靠衣裝，文靠詞裝 1、詞組優先原則、詞組優先原則2、地道原則。、地道原則。3、避免重復原則、避免重復原則4、后、后、高高、長原則長原則 后學到、較高級、較長詞匯。后學到、較高級、較長詞匯。四項原則四項原則1、詞組優先原則、詞組優先原則原文A new railway is being built in my hometown.修正A new railway is under construction in my hometown.2、地道原則、地道原則原文Through traveling, I learned a lot of knowledge.

7、修正Through traveling, I gainedobtained a lot of knowledge.4、后高長原則后學到、較高級、較長詞匯。原 詞 替換詞hard diligentlyvery rather extremelypay attention to attach importance tohappy delighted enjoyablemore and more the increasing number of3、避免重復原則、避免重復原則原文I like reading while my brother likes watching television.修正I l

8、ike reading while my brother enjoys watching television. Adj. 聰明的、腦筋好的聰明的、腦筋好的cleversmartwisebrightintelligent 電腦在我們生活中的作用是十分重要的。 1.Computers are very important in our life. 2.Computers play a very important role in our life. puters are of great importance in our life.EXEX、運用高級詞匯：、運用高級詞匯：As a result

9、, the plan failed. (一般一般)She went to Austria in order to study music. (一般一般)Suddenly I thought out a good idea.(一般一般)The plan turned out to be a failure.The plan turned out to be a failure. (高級高級)She went to Austria for the purpose of studying She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music.mu

10、sic. (高級高級)A good idea occurred to me./ A good idea suddenly struck me(高級高級)At the news of her deathAt the news of her death, he went.he went. (高級高級)She has trouble in pronouncing the wordShe has trouble in pronouncing the word. (高級高級)When he heard she had died, he went pale with sorrow. (一般一般)She c

11、ant correctly pronounce the word. (一般一般)運用高級詞匯：運用高級詞匯：2，句式多樣，文章增，句式多樣，文章增“靚靚 使用較豐富的句式：使用較豐富的句式：運用得當的句子結構運用得當的句子結構可以給文章增色不少，從而使整篇文章因可以給文章增色不少，從而使整篇文章因此而生輝此而生輝 他昨天下午來的。 1.He came here yesterday afternoon. 2.He didnt come here until yesterday afternoon. 3.Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here.

12、 4.It was yesterday afternoon that he came here.思考：什么樣的作文會成為一篇思考：什么樣的作文會成為一篇好作文好作文 無遺漏信息點（審題）無遺漏信息點（審題）篇章條理清晰：分段和過渡詞篇章條理清晰：分段和過渡詞句式多樣句式多樣地道的高級詞匯和恰當的詞組地道的高級詞匯和恰當的詞組思考：你能想到的好句式有哪思考：你能想到的好句式有哪些？些？ 強調句強調句倒裝句倒裝句 with復合結構復合結構advancedsentences定語從句定語從句名詞性從句名詞性從句非謂語動詞非謂語動詞常用諺語常用諺語被動句被動句一、一、肯定不如雙否好肯定不如雙否好二、二、

13、陳述不如倒裝妙陳述不如倒裝妙三、三、主動不如被動巧主動不如被動巧四、從句不如分詞傲四、從句不如分詞傲高級句式使用的原則：抓住高考閱卷老師的心理的秘訣高級句式使用的原則：抓住高考閱卷老師的心理的秘訣 謄寫規范不要少謄寫規范不要少 修辭的使用在書面表達中算作很大的亮點，在高中階段很修辭的使用在書面表達中算作很大的亮點，在高中階段很少有學生會注重修辭的應用。雙重否定也是種修辭，而且對少有學生會注重修辭的應用。雙重否定也是種修辭，而且對于考生來說，只要稍加注意，可以在文章中設計雙重否定的于考生來說，只要稍加注意，可以在文章中設計雙重否定的句子。就變成了亮點句，起到強調作用。句子。就變成了亮點句，起到強

14、調作用。一、肯定不如雙否好一、肯定不如雙否好I couldnt have made so much progress in English without his help.I have made great progress in English with his help.The postman comes on time every day. . The postman never fails to come on time倒裝是一種最簡單易行的使句子呈現亮點的方法。在高中階段只需掌握倒裝的四種形式，足以應對書面表達，如何應用倒裝，有很多方法和技巧。 1.Only when we rea

15、lize the importance of environmentalprotection can we solve the problem of pollution. 2. So precious is time that we cant afford to waste it.3.Diligent as he was, he failed in passing the exam. 4. By no means should teenagers get into the habit of smoking.二、陳述不如倒裝妙二、陳述不如倒裝妙1.否定詞開頭：否定詞開頭：2. Not until

16、/till 5 pm. did he come here yesterday.3. It was not until/till 5 pm. that he came here yesterday.1. He didnt come here until 5 pm. yesterday.把地點狀語放在句首后面主謂倒裝。這樣做的好處之一是把地點狀語放在句首后面主謂倒裝。這樣做的好處之一是倒裝本倒裝本身就是高級結構身就是高級結構，第二是，第二是倒裝后把真正的主語放到了句子的末尾，倒裝后把真正的主語放到了句子的末尾，后面還可以繼續加從句后面還可以繼續加從句，使整個句子再呈現更多的亮點使整個句子再呈現更多

17、的亮點。2.地點狀語開頭地點狀語開頭Our library is in the center of our school.In the center of our school lies our library.On the bank stand some flowers.In the sky hang little stars.Our library lies in the center of our school.It is between the garden and the teaching building. In the center of our school lies our

18、library，which is between the garden and the teaching building.Only in this way can we achieve our goal.3.Only的倒裝句：的倒裝句：Only in this way can I improve my EnglishOnly by taking exercises can we keep healthy4.as：1. Young as I am, I can manage it2. Rich as our country is, we have a lot of problems3. Bad

19、ly injured as he was, he managed to take down the cars number.Try as you will, you wont manage it三、主動不如被動巧三、主動不如被動巧 英語中經常用被動語態，漢語經常用主英語中經常用被動語態，漢語經常用主動語態；英語中經常用是事物或形式主動語態；英語中經常用是事物或形式主語開頭，強調一件事發生在什么人身上，語開頭，強調一件事發生在什么人身上，而漢語經常用人稱開頭強調一個人發生而漢語經常用人稱開頭強調一個人發生了什么事。所以使用被動語態符合英語了什么事。所以使用被動語態符合英語的習慣，如果能將整個文章

20、中的習慣，如果能將整個文章中兩個句子兩個句子變成被動語態，就會呈現句型的變化，變成被動語態，就會呈現句型的變化，使整篇文章句型豐富。使整篇文章句型豐富。每次可以借五本書最多借十天每次可以借五本書最多借十天(2006NMET)We can borrow five books at most, and we can keep them for ten days.At most five books can be borrowed at a time and they can be kept for ten days.哪種表達法分數會更高？哪種表達法分數會更高？幾乎所有的狀語從句都可以變成獨立主格或

21、分幾乎所有的狀語從句都可以變成獨立主格或分詞結構，時間狀語從句，原因狀語，條件狀語詞結構，時間狀語從句，原因狀語，條件狀語等。例如條件狀語從句：等。例如條件狀語從句：If such is the case, you should apologize to her. 如何變成獨立主如何變成獨立主格或分詞結構呢？學會下面的口訣，如果你的格或分詞結構呢？學會下面的口訣，如果你的作文中有狀語從句，馬上可改成獨立主格或分作文中有狀語從句，馬上可改成獨立主格或分詞結構這個最大的亮點。詞結構這個最大的亮點。四、從句不如分詞傲四、從句不如分詞傲口訣：一去，二看，三改。口訣：一去，二看，三改。一去：去連詞；二看

22、：看主語；三改：改分詞。一去：去連詞；二看：看主語；三改：改分詞。 第一步，去掉連詞if；If such is the case, you should apologize to her. 第二步，看前后兩句話的主語，前后主語不一致， 所以要改成獨立主格；第三步，改分詞，is 變成分詞是being最后變成 Such being the case, you should apologize to her如果前后兩句話主語一致，就變成分詞結構。原文原文 The young man couldnt help crying when he heard the bad news.修正修正 Hearing

23、 the bad news, the young man couldnt help crying.原文原文 If everything is taken into consideration, we ought to have another chance.修正修正 Everything taken into consideration, we ought to have another chance.1 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用V-ing形式）.2. To his surprise, the little girl knows

24、 so many things.（使用名詞性從句）3. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用強調句型) 4. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虛擬語氣）On his arriving, please give me an e-mail.What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.Practice 改寫句子改寫句子 It w

25、as not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help. 5. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式) 6.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句）7He had no sooner come back from Bei

26、jing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒裝句)No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.Singing and laughing, they went back to school.Study hard and youll make rapid progress.1. 通過使用網絡與家人聯系是很方便的通過使用網絡與家人聯系是很方便的（2010南通模擬）南通模擬）It is convenient to keep in touch with your family by using t

27、he Internet.2.我們所需要做的我們所需要做的 是冷靜下來是冷靜下來,反思我們的學習方法。反思我們的學習方法。 （2010揚州模擬）揚州模擬） What we need to do is to calm down and reflect on our learning method.3. 只有以這種方式，只有以這種方式， 我們才能進步。我們才能進步。（2010濰坊模擬）濰坊模擬）Only in this way, can we make progress.熟能生巧熟能生巧Translate the sentences4.我們對自己的態度才是最關鍵的我們對自己的態度才是最關鍵的。（20

28、10蘇州模擬）蘇州模擬） It is our attitude to ourselves that matters(counts).5.坐在一盤子粽子前，這個男孩不知道如何打開他們。坐在一盤子粽子前，這個男孩不知道如何打開他們。（unwrap) （2010淄博模擬）淄博模擬） Sitting before a plate of zongzi, the boy didnt know how to unwrap them.6.正如圖中所示，愛就像黑暗中的一盞燈。正如圖中所示，愛就像黑暗中的一盞燈。 （2008北京模擬）北京模擬） As is shown in the picture, love i

29、s like a lamp in the dark. 但是值得提醒的是，同學們在使但是值得提醒的是，同學們在使用復雜的句型和結構時，要有把用復雜的句型和結構時，要有把握能正確地表達；也要注意分寸，握能正確地表達；也要注意分寸，應根據書面表達的內容和篇章結應根據書面表達的內容和篇章結構而定，做到地道得體，千萬不構而定，做到地道得體，千萬不能生搬硬套，畫蛇添足。能生搬硬套，畫蛇添足。多看 多背 多模仿 多翻譯走近高考范文走近高考范文Fill in the blanks（2009 山東）山東）1._(眾所周知）眾所周知）that China is a country with a long hist

30、ory.2._ (隨著春隨著春節的臨近），節的臨近），people will hold all varieties of activities.3._(自從自從我見過史密斯先生已經好久了）我見過史密斯先生已經好久了）and I miss him a lot.It is well knownWith the Spring Festival drawing nearIt has been a long time since I saw Mr. Smith（2009 北京北京）1.We bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees,_ (一路上有說有笑）一路上有說有笑

31、）.2._(一到達），一到達）， we began to work immediately.3._ (看到一排排的看到一排排的樹），樹），we all have a sense of achievement.talking and laughing all the wayUpon arrivalSeeing the lines of trees1. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名詞性從句）3. He did not know what had happened until he had read the ne

32、ws in the newspaper.(使用強調句型) 4. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虛擬語氣）What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.Practice 怎樣使用較豐富的句式和高級詞匯怎樣使用較豐富的句式和高級詞匯 It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. I couldnt have passed t

33、he physics exam but for your help. 5. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用過去分詞)6. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式)7.I wont believe what he says. （no matter what狀語從句） 8.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （祈使句+and）Followed by many st

34、udents, she walked out of the lab.Singing and laughing, they went back to school.No matter what he says, I wont believe. Study hard and youll make rapid progress.9He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒裝句使用倒裝句)10.We all think he is a great man. (think highly of)11.As a

35、result the plan was a failure. (turn out)12. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. (the morethe more)No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.We all think highly of him .The plan turned out to be a failure.The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.書寫潦草、字數不夠書寫潦草、字數不夠或

36、未能傳達讀者任何信息，得或未能傳達讀者任何信息，得 分分 0 卷面不整潔卷面不整潔; ; 涂改較多涂改較多; ;語言語言 錯誤多錯誤多; ;層次不清層次不清; ;得得 分分5Not good!Worse!Neat!1.備詞備詞1. take care of/ look after/ attend to / keep an eye on/ care for2. agree with / suit/ adapt oneself to /be accustomed to doing sth. /adjust oneself to /be adjusted to3. have some difficu

37、lty in doing sth/ there is some difficulty in (ones) doing sth.4. decide to do sth./make up ones mind to do sth. /be determined to do sth2.造句造句1. I feel lonely at a new university. It is at a new university that I feel lonely. It is the first time that I have been at university, which leads me to fe

38、el lonely.2. I cant take good care of myself, so/as a result I often feel homesick. I cant attend to myself well, feeling homesick Because I cant take good care of myself, I often feel homesick.3. Because of different climates and food, they often feel sick. Different climates and food dont agree wi

39、th / suit me. I dont adjust myself to different climates and food.4.I have some difficulty in getting on well with others. There is some difficulty in getting on well with others. It is difficult for me to get on well with others.5. I feel I am not a person that I used to be. I feel I am no longer what I used to be.6.To my joy , the teachers words encourage me . What delights me is what the teachers have said encourages me.7.However hard it is, I have mad