專題04高考英語專項突破“讀后續寫”一品德故事

品德，一個需要重視，呵護的“珍品”……

01

閱讀下面短文，根據所給情節進行續寫,使之構成一個完整的故事。

Oneafternoonafterschool,Maryandherbrother,Keith,wereeatingatacafeneartheirhome.

Thatafternoon,theyhadtosharetheirtablewithanotherperson.Thatpersonwasayoungladyin

hertwenties.Aftereating,shewenttotherestroom.Withoutrealizing,shehadleftherhandphone

onthetable.Fiveminuteslater,shecameoutandwalkedoutofthecafewithoutlookingback.

Marysawthehandphoneonthetable.ShequicklytoldKeithJKeith,thegirlleftbehindher

handphone.^^

Keithlookedatthehandphone.Ittookhisbreathaway.Itwasoneofthelatestmodelsonthe

market.Keithhadalwayswantedahandphone.Buthisparentshadtoldhim,“Youdon'tneed

one.Youcanalwaysusethehousephone.^^

Hestaredatitforsomeminutes.Thenhesaidslowly,pausingoneveryword；〕wanttotake

thehandphone.

Marycouldnotbelieveherears.Shemerelystaredatherbrother.a4Youcan't!Whatifthe

ownercomestolookforit?”

Havingmadethedecision,Keithquicklygrabbedthehandphoneandputitinhisschoolbag.

Then,hetookMary'shandandledheroutofthecafequickly.

Oncebackhome,Keithlockedhishousedoorwithtremblinghands.Insidehisroom,hetook

outthepieceofbeauty.Oh,helikeditsomuch.Nowhehadhisownhandphone.Soon,hewas

polishingithappily.

ButMarytoldhim,“Keith,youcannotkeepthehandphone.WhatwillyoutellFatherabout

this?Hewillaskyouhowyougotthehandphone.^^

Keithsaidquickly,UIwillsayafriendlentittome.”

Marysaid,“Nowyouarelyingtoo."Ohdear!WhenhadKeithturnedsodishonest?

ThenMarysawahousephonenumberontheplasticcoverofthehandphone."Thisisthe

girFsphonenumber.Whydon'twejustcallthisnumber?Wewilltalktoherandaskhertocome

andtakebackherhandphone.^^Shewastryingtotalksomesenseintohim.

注意：1.續寫詞數應為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

Thatnight,Keithturnedoverinbedfromtimetotime.

Marywasveryhappytohearthat.

【答案】Thatnight,Keithturnedoverinbedfromtimetotime.Hehaddifficultysleeping,

uncertainaboutwhatheshoulddo.Ofcourse,helikedthenewhandphone.However,hewas

feelingsorryfortheowner.Whenhethoughthowsadtheyoungladywouldbeatthelossofher

handphone,hewasfullofguiltandshame.Thenextmorning,afteralongandrestlessnight,he

wasdeterminedtoreturnthehandphonetotheowner.Afterschool,hetoldMary,“Iamgoingto

phonetheowner.9,

Marywasveryhappytohearthat.Backhome,theyphonedtheowner'shousephone.Agirl

answeredthephone.Kevinasked,“Areyoutheownerofthehandphone?I'mKeith.Ihaveyour

handphone.Canyoucomeandgetit?”Thegirlreplied'Yes'excitedly,expressinghergratitude

repeatedly.Tenminuteslater,shewasatthesamecafetomeetKeith.Handingbackthe

handphonetoherandseeinghersmilehappily,Keithrealizedthathonestywasindeedthebest

policy.

【解析】

本文以瑪麗和她的弟弟基思撿到一部手機為線索展開，講述了瑪麗和她她的弟弟在咖啡館

吃飯時，無意中撿到了一個女孩落在桌上的手機。基思非常喜歡這部最新型號的手機，盡

管瑪麗阻止，他還是把手機帶回家了。瑪麗發現手機塑料蓋上有一個電話號碼，她勸說基

思打這個電話聯系女孩。基思經過思想斗爭，意識到誠實才是最重要的，終于打了那個電

話，他們相約在那個餐館見面，把手機還給那個女孩。

【詳解】

1.段落續寫

①由第一段首句內容“那天晚上，基思不時在床上翻身。”可知，第一段可描寫基思經過思

想斗爭，意識到自己把別人的手機據為己有是不正確的行為，決定給女孩打電話。

②由第二段首句內容“瑪麗聽到這個消息很高興。”可知，第二段可描寫瑪麗聽說基思歸還

手機非常高興，他們通過電話聯系女孩，約在了同一家咖啡館見面，歸還了手機。

2.續寫線索：基思經過思想斗爭——打電話給女孩——相約在咖啡館——歸還手機一

感悟到誠實才是最好的策略

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①猶豫不決：uncertain/hesitate

②充滿:befullof?befilledwith

③決心做某事：bedeterminedtodo/decidetodo

情緒類

①羞恥：shame/abashment

②高興地：happily/delightedly

【點睛】

[高分句型1]

Hehaddifficultysleeping,uncertainaboutwhatheshould

do.（運用了連接代詞what引導的賓語從句）

[高分句型2]

Handingbackthehandphonetoherandseeinghersmilehappily,Keithrealizedthathonestywas

indeedthebestpolicy.（運用了that引導的賓語從句）

02

WhenthelastcustomerleftKFC,itwasalready10:30pm.Adam,an18-year-oldcollege

student,draggedhimselfhome.HehadbeenworkingatKFCforoveramonththatsummer

vacation.

Enteringhisroom,AdamfoundhisyoungerbrotherBillsittingontheedgeofhisbedwith

anuneasyexpressiononhisface.

“Sorry,Adam.I...Ididsomethingwrong,9,Billsprangupandsaidnervously.

“Whatisit?”

“ThisafternoonIsneaked（溜）outforarideonyourmotorcycleandaccidentallyhitour

neighborOsmanBrook'scar.IwassoscaredandI...Ihurriedhomeinpanic.^^

“Isthecarseriouslydamaged?”

“Theleftheadlightgotbroken.^^

“It'strulyyourfaultandifsreallydangeroustorideamotorcycleatyourage.Besides,ifs

illegal/Adamraisedhisvoice,obviouslyannoyed.Hearingthis,Billloweredhisheadandbithis

lipshard.

“Anyway,it'snousecryingoverspiltmilk.Iwilldealwithittomorrow.Nowyougotobed

andhaveagoodsleep.^^

ThenextmorningwhenAdamgotup,Billwasstillsleepingsoundly.Adamwasmore

determinedaboutwhatheoughttodoasanelderbrother.

Afterbreakfast,Adamtookoutallthemoneyhehadearnedandwentoutofthehousewith

it.Intheyardhesawhismotorcycle,onwhosesidethescratches（戈U痕）wereclearlyvisible.

Adamshookhisheadandsighedslightly.Thenhesquaredhisshouldersandquickenedhispace

toOsman'shouse.

Whenhearrived,hewaswelcomedbyOsman'swifeMary,whotoldhimthatOsmanhad

gonetothegaragetohavehiscarrepaired.

“Ihavesomethingimportanttotellhim.CanIwaituntilhecomesback?”Adamrequested

eagerly.

“Ofcourse.Heshouldbehomesoon,^^MaryinvitedAdamin,servedhimacupofcoffeeand

beganchattingwithhim.

Afterhalfanhour,thedooropenedandincameOsman.Havingsaidhellotoeachother,

OsmanandAdambothsatdownonthesofa.

注意：

1.續寫詞數應為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

Adamclearedhisthroatandbegantospeak.

Justthen,therecameaknockatthedoor.

【答案】

Adamclearedhisthroatandbegantospeak."Mr.Brook,I'mheretomakeanapology.

YesterdayafternoonmybrotherBilldamagedyourcarandranawayinpanic.Weareawfully

sorryforthat.”"Oh,Isee.Butifsnobigdeal,^^Osmansmiled.ThenAdamdrewoutthemoney

fromhispocketandsaidtoOsmanwithsincerity,a4ThisisallthemoneyIhave.Iwonderifitcan

payforyourloss."However,Osmaninsistedthatitwasonlyminordamageanddeclinedtotake

it.

Justthen,therecameaknockatthedoor.Osmanwenttoanswerit,onlytofindBill

standingoutside."'Morning,Mr.Brook.I...I'vecometosaysorryfor...”Billstammered.But

Osmanlaughedandlethimin.Thetwobrotherswerebothsurprisedandgladtoseeeachother.

Osmangavethemathumbs-upandpraisedthemhappily,“Goodboys,Itrulyappreciateyour

honesty.Justforgetaboutmycar."Whatevertheboyssaid,Osmanwouldn'ttakethemoney.

Finally,heacceptedtheirsuggestionthattheymakeituptohimbydoingsomeworkinhis

garden.

【解析】

本文以人物為線索展開，講述了在肯德基打暑假工的亞當深夜回家后得知弟弟比爾偷開他

的摩托車還把鄰居奧斯曼的汽車的左前燈撞壞了，盡管亞當很生氣，但是第二天一早帶著

打工賺的錢就去奧斯曼家道歉，他正要掏錢賠償時，比爾也來了，奧斯曼很欣賞兄弟倆的

誠實，沒有收錢，但是接受了他們在他家花園里干點活來補償他的損失的建議。

【詳解】

1.段落續寫：

①由第一段首句內容“亞當清了清嗓子，開始說話。”可知，第一段可描寫亞當為弟弟的過

錯向奧斯曼道歉，并愿意賠償，但是奧斯曼認為沒有必要賠償了。

②由第二段首句內容“正在這時，傳來了敲門聲。”可知，第二段可描寫比爾也來道歉，奧

斯曼很欣賞兄弟倆的誠實，堅決不收錢，但是接受了兩人在花園里干點活來補償他的損失

的建議。

2.續寫線索：亞當道歉并賠償—奧斯曼拒絕賠償——比爾上門道歉——

奧斯曼欣賞兩人的誠實——奧斯曼拒絕接受賠償但接受幫干園藝活的建議

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①.道歉：makeanapology/apologize/saysorry

②.取出：drawout/takeout

③.拒絕：decline/refusepolitely

情緒類

①.非常抱歉：beawfullysorry/feelmostregretful

②.驚慌地：inpanic/inalarm

【點睛】

[高分句型1].Osmaninsistedthatitwasonlyminordamageanddeclinedtotake

it.（由連接詞that引導的賓語從句）

[高分句型2].Osmanwenttoanswerit,onlytofindBillstandingoutside.

（由不定式短語作狀語，表意料之外的結果）

[高分句型3].Whatevertheboyssaid,Osmanwouldn'ttakethe

money,（whatever引導的讓步狀語從句）

03

Apainterlivingbypaintingportraitswasleadingapoorlife.

Oneday,awomancameby.Shelikedthepaintingsverymuchandaskedthepaintertodraw

aportraitforher.Theyagreedon2,000dollars.

Beforepaintingtheportrait,thewomanaskedthepaintertodrawmorejewels.Thepainter

curiouslyaskedwhy,butthewomanrefusedtoexplain.Afteraweek,theportraitwasdoneand

thewomancametotakethepainting.Atthismoment,shehitonanevilideaofbullyingthe

unknownyoungartist.Shethought,ccTheportraitisme.IfIdon'tbuythepainting,nobodywill

buyit.WhyshouldIpaysomuchmoney?,,Sothewomansaidtotheyoungpainter,t4Iwillonly

pay200dollarsforit.”

Theyoungmanwassurprised,forhehadnevercomeacrosssuchanexperience.Heargued

withher,expectingthiswomantokeeptotheagreement.

“Icanonlypay200dollarstobuythepainting,9,thewomanthoughtshewouldwinforsure.

Theyoungpainterknewthewomanbrokeherpromiseonpurpose,sohefeltannoyed.He

saidinafirmvoice,“No,Iwouldprefertokeepthispaintingratherthanbehumiliatedbyyou.

Todayyoubreakyourwordandsomedayyoumustpay20timesfbrit”

“Whatajoke!20timeswillbe40,000!Iwon'tbestupidtopay40,000dollarstobuythe

painting!?,

“Well,we'dbetterwaitandsee,“theyoungartistshoutedtothewomanwholeftangrily.

Afterthestimulationofsuchanincident,thepaintermovedoutofthissadplace,studiedunder

acknowledgedteachersandworkedharddayandnight.Morethanadozenyearslater,hefinally

startedanewwayandbecamepopularinthecircleofart.However,thewomanhadforgottenthe

artist9spaintingandwordsthenextday.

注意：

1）續寫詞數應為150左右；

2）請按如下格式作答。

Oneday,thatfamouspainterdecidedtoholdanartexhibition.

Thewomanwenttherehurriedly,apologisedamilliontimesandpromisedthatshewould

buyherportraitassoonaspossible.

【答案】Oneday,thatfhmouspainterdecidedtoholdanartexhibition.Presentinthe

exhibitionhallwerecrowdsofcelebritiesandartists.Itwasafeastinthecircleofart.Inthecentre

wasapaintingentitled"Thief,pricedat40,000dollars.Strangelyenough,thewomaninthe

paintinglookedjustthesameasthevainwomaninreality.Wordspreadandfinallyitreachedthe

woman,sears.Sherecalledtheincidentandthepainter.Itdawnedonherthatthepainter

humiliatedherinthisway.

Thewomanwenttherehurriedly,apologisedamilliontimesandpromisedthatshewould

buyherportraitassoonaspossible.Thesuccessfulpainterturnedhisbacktoher,speechless.

Withmanyvisitorsaround,soembarrassedwasshethatshestoodthereawkwardly,feelingthe

bloodrushtoherface.Thenthepainterturnedaroundandhandedhertheportrait.Beforethe

womancouldpay,thepainterexplainedthatitwasagiftforher,hopingshewouldbeanhonest

womanwithoutvanity.Anyway,forthepainter,itwasthisincidentthatmadehimwhatheis

today.

【解析】

本文以人物為線索展開，講述了一個靠畫肖像為生的畫家過著貧窮的生活，他為一位女士

畫像，結果女士故意違背諾言，不按約好的價錢支付費用，讓畫家很生氣。十幾年后，畫

家終于在藝術界大受歡迎，決定舉辦一次藝術展，展覽上畫家把這位女士的畫像掛出來，

取名《小偷》，女士得知后趕到，給畫家道歉，最終畫家把畫像還給了她，希望她能做一

個誠實的女人。

【詳解】

1.段落續寫：

①由第一段首句內容“一天，那位著名的畫家決定舉辦一次藝術展。”可知，第一段可描寫

畫家把女士的畫像掛出來，取名《小偷》，消息傳開了，最后傳到了那個女人的耳朵里。

②由第二段首句內容“女子匆匆趕到，道了無數次歉，并承諾會盡快買下她的畫像。”可知

,第二段可描寫畫家是如何應對女士道歉的以及事情的最終結局。

2.續寫線索：舉辦藝術展——掛出女士畫像，取名《小偷》——女士得知消息一

女士趕到——女士道歉——畫家贈畫

3.詞匯激活

行為類

舉辦：hold/host

侮辱：humiliate/insult

意識至U：itdawnonsb.that/sb.cometorealizethat

情緒類

匆忙：hurriedly/inahurry

無言：speechless/silent

【點睛】

【高分句型11Beforethewomancouldpay,thepainterexplainedthatitwasagiftfbrher,

hopingshewouldbeanhonestwomanwithoutvanity.（運用了that弓|導賓語從句）

【高分句型21Withmanyvisitorsaround,soembarrassedwasshethatshestoodthere

awkwardly,feelingthebloodrushtoherfhce.（運用了部分倒裝）

04

Itwasmytwelfthbirthday,andwhatIreallywantedmostwasanewbicycle.ButIknewthat

myfamilycouldn,taffordone,soIsettledforabedsidetablewithlockabledrawers,asafeplace

tokeepmyprivatestuff.

Wewenttothecharityshopwherewefoundanolddarkone.Itdidn'tlooktoocool,butI

thoughtthatIwouldpaintittomakeitlookbetter.

Afterwetookithome,Iwasgettingreadytopaintit.WhenIpulledthedrawersout.Ifelt

somethingstucktotheback.Ireachedinalltheway,andguesswhat?Asealedbagwithsome

papersinit.

WhenIopenedthebag,Irealizedthatthepaperswereofficialdocuments.And,wrappedin

themwereabunchoftenandtwentydollarbills!Talkaboutfindingatreasure!Andonmy

birthday!

“Isthissomekindofjoke?,,Isaidaloud.Iwentaheadandreadthepapers,anditturnedout

tobeawill.Someoldladywasleavinghersavingsforhersonandgrandchildren.

Mymindwasgoingcrazy.WasItheluckiesttwelve-year-oldever?WiththismoneyIcould

buythecoolestbicycle.Whoknows?

Ibegancounting.WhenIreachedathousanddollars,mymotherwasknockingonmy

bedroomdoor.Iquicklyclosedthedrawerwiththemoneyinit.

“Doyouwantsomehelp?Iseverythingallright?^^sheasked.

No,everythingwasnotright.Actually,mystomachwasgrowling（低吼）.

'Tmokay,"Ilied.

Whenmymotherleftmyroom,Ilayonmybed,startingthinking.Whatadilemma（窘境）！I

wishedthereweresomeoneIcouldtalkwith.CouldIkeepitandgetallkindsofstuffformeand

myfamily?Itwouldn'tbetoobadformetokeepit,ifIsharedit...right?Thoughtsranthroughmy

mind.ButIreallydidn'tneedsomeoneelsetogivemetheanswer.

注意：

1.續寫詞數應為150左右；

2.請按格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

Ifinallymadeadecisionandcalledmyparentsintomybedroom.

Thoughsurprised,theshopownerhelpedfindthefamily'stelephonenumber.

［答案］Ifinallymadeadecisionandcalledmyparentsintomybedroom.Whenmyparentssaw

whatIhadfoundinthedrawertheywerewide-eyedandspeechless!Then,theyreadthepapers

carefullyandweremovedtotears.Whentheyasked,"Whatshouldwedo?”Isaid,"Let'stakeit

backtothestoreandfindherMyfathernoddedwithasmileonhisfaceandmymother

huggedmewarmly,saying"Youaremypride,dear."IfeltveryhappybecauseIalreadyknew

rightfromwrong.Wecollectedallthemoneyandpapersatonce,puttingtheminthedrawer.We

rushedtothecharityshopwiththedrawerinthehopetofindtheownerassoonaspossible.

Thoughsurprised,theshopownerhelpedfindthefamily'stelephonenumber.Withinafew

minutes,thefamilyallcameover.WhenIshowedthemwhatIhadfoundinthedrawer,they

couldn'tbelievetheireyes.Theparentshadtearsintheireyes.Theywerestillsadaboutthelady9s

deathandthefatherhadjustlosthisjob.Itwaseasytoseethatmyactofhonestygavethemhope.

Theyshowedmesinceregratitudefromthebottomoftheirhearts.Infact,Ihadneverfeltbetter

before.NonewbicyclecouldhavemademefeltasgoodaboutmyselfasIfeltthatdaybecauseI

passedaveryimportanttest-alostandfoundtestofmyowncharacter.

【解析】

本文以人物為線索展開，講述了作者在12歲生日時，父母給他買了一個二手的床頭柜作為

生日禮物，作者發現在床頭柜里有以前主人的遺書和很多現金，經過一番思想斗爭之后，

作者和家人一起把錢還給了去世老人的家人們。

【詳解】

1.段落續寫：

①由第一段首句內容“我終于做了決定，把父母叫到我的臥室。”可知，第一段可描寫作者

與父母分享這件事后，他們做出歸還東西的經過。

②由第二段首句內容“店主雖然很驚訝，但還是幫他找到了這家人的電話號碼。”可知，第

二段可描寫作者與那一家人見面的經過以及個人的深切感受。

2.續寫線索：做出決定——父母的表揚——尋找失主——失主的感激——個人感悟

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①著急去：rushto/hurryto

②歸還：takesth.back/returnsth.

③擁抱：embrace/holdinone*sarms

情緒類

①感動落淚：bemovedtotears/betouchedtotears

②感謝：showsinceregratitude//begrateful

【點睛】

[高分句型1]WhenmyparentssawwhatIhadfoundinthedrawertheywerewide-eyedand

speechless!（由when引導的時間狀語從句和what引導的賓語從句）

[高分句型2]Wecollectedallthemoneyandpapersatonce,puttingtheminthe

drawer.（用現在分詞作伴隨狀語）

[高分句型3]Itwaseasytoseethatmyactofhonestygavethem

hope.（由that引導的主語從句）

05

Havingmarchedacrossthegrasslandforfivedays,General,ChenGeng（陳俄）wasdragging

hisexhaustedbodycarefullystepbystep,leadinghisweakhorse.

Hesuddenlysawthefigureofasmallboyappear.ChenGengwasabouttogreetthelittle

RedArmysoldierwhenhesawthattheboywasstaggering促前跚）andthenfelldown.ChenGeng

hurriedforwardafewstepsandhelpedthelittlesoldierbackonhisfeet.Heaskedtheboyina

kindtone,"Areyouallright?^^Thelittlesoldierturnedaround.Hisfacewaspaleandbloodless,

withthetwoeyesunusuallywideasaresultofhunger,yetshiningwithspirit.

“Youmustbe...GeneralChenGeng!^^thelittlesoldierrecognizedtheman.

“Yes,IamChenGeng.Howareyou,youngman?Youcertainlyhavetobecarefulcrossing

thisswampygrassland.Onecarelessslip,andyoucanfindyourselfindanger.Itisessentialthat

wecomeoutofthisgrasslandalive.^^

Thelittlesoldiernoddedinagreement."Don'tworry,General,hesaid.'Tmphysically

strong.^^Inspiteoftheboy'sconfidentreply,ChenGengwasstillworriedabouthim.Hecould

seethatthelittlesoldierlackedenergy:couldthischildpullthroughthetrials?

GeneralChenGengorderedthelittlesoldiertomounthishorse,intendingtogivehimarest.

Buttohissurprise,theboyrefusedhimwithalookofannoyance,t4What!DoyouthinkI'mnot

goodenough?^^theboycried."I'mstrongerthanyou.Ifyoudon'tbelieveme,lefshavea

contest.^^

Atthattime,ChenGengwastooexhaustedtoengageinacontestofenergy.Allhecoulddo

wastakeabarleydumpling（青裸面），andsaytothelittlesoldier,4tWell,here,haveit!”Butthe

boysimplysmiled,saying,46Youkeepit.Ihavemorefoodthanyouhave,“pointingtoabulging

（鼓鼓的）blackbaghewascarryingonhisback.

注意：

1.續寫詞數應為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

Intheend,ChenGenggavein,mountedhishorseandrodeon.

Heopenedtheboy'sbackpack,onlytofindabundleofbark（樹皮）.

【答案】Intheend,ChenGenggavein,mountedhishorseandrodeon.Andthelittle

soldierfollowedhim.Althoughthelittlesoldierwasweak,hetriedhisbesttomoveonstepby

step.Suddenly,hewasstumbledbyabrunch.ChenGengatoncegotdownfromhishorseand

helpedhimstandup.Atthattime,ChenGengsaidtohim,“Youmusthavearestandeat

something,whichcanmakeyouhavestrength.Youaresoweakthatifyoucontinuetomoveon,

youwillbeeasytosinkinaswamp.Ifsmyorder.^^ThenChenGengtookdowntheboy'sbag.

Heopenedtheboy'sbackpack,onlytofindabundleofbark（樹皮）.Andimmediatelythe

littlesoldiertookbackthebagandhidit.ButChenGenghadalreadyseenthebark.Withtears

wellingupinhiseyes,ChenGenggavethelittlesoldierabarleydumpling.Butthelittlesoldier

refused.Again,ChenGengorderedtheboytohaveit.Thelittlesoldierhadtotakeitandwasvery

grateful.Thenhegobbledthedumpling.Afterthat,hefeltenergeticandthencontinuedtomarch

onwithGeneral,ChenGeng.

【解析】

本文以人物為線索展開，講述了陳窿在草原上行軍了五天，身體疲憊，突然他看到一個小

紅軍倒在地上，他走過去把小士兵扶起來。小士兵認出了陳康將軍。因為穿過沼澤地很危

險，所以陳廉讓小士兵休息一會，但是小士兵不肯休息。于是陳震只能給小士兵拿出一個

青棵面，但是小士兵說自己包里有吃的。陳麋拗不過小士兵，于是上馬和小士兵前行，但

是小士兵太虛弱，被一個樹枝絆倒。陳麋把他扶起來，命令他吃一些東西。但是發現小士

兵的包里不是食物而是樹皮。于是他將自己的青棵面給了小士兵，并命令他吃下去，小士

兵吃了青棵面后，有了力氣，隨后兩人一起繼續前進。

【詳解】

1.段落續寫：

①由第一段首句內容“最后陳窿屈服了，騎上馬開始前行。”可知，第一段可描寫陳廉不在

勸小士兵吃東西，兩人開始前行，但是小士兵因為身體虛弱，被樹枝絆倒。

②由第二段首句內容“他打開小男孩的背包，發現里面是一捆樹皮。”可知，第二段可描寫

陳展發現小士兵的背包里都是樹皮，于是將自己的青棵面給了小士兵，并命令他吃下去。

2.續寫線索：繼續前行——小士兵被絆倒—陳鷹把他扶起來——命令他吃東西一一

打開包，發現是樹皮——陳展將自己的青裸面給小士兵，命令他吃下去一

小士兵吃下青棵面——倆人繼續前行

3.詞匯激活行為類

①前進:moveon/advance/goforward

②休息：havearest/takearest

③命令：order/command

情緒類

①感謝的：begrateful/bethankfiil/showone'sgratitude

【點睛】

[高分句型1]Youmusthavearestandeatsomething,whichcanmakeyouhave

strength.（運用了which引導的非限定性定語從句）

[高分句型2]Youaresoweakthatifyoucontinuetomoveon,youwillbeeasytosinkina

swamp.（運用了“so...that+句子”句型，表示“如此...以至于"）

專題04高考英語專項突破“讀后續寫”一品德故事

品德，一個需要重視，呵護的“珍品”……

01

閱讀下面短文，根據所給情節進行續寫,使之構成一個完整的故事。

Oneafternoonafterschool,Maryandherbrother,Keith,wereeatingatacafeneartheirhome.

Thatafternoon,theyhadtosharetheirtablewithanotherperson.Thatpersonwasayoungladyin

hertwenties.Aftereating,shewenttotherestroom.Withoutrealizing,shehadleftherhandphone

onthetable.Fiveminuteslater,shecameoutandwalkedoutofthecafewithoutlookingback.

Marysawthehandphoneonthetable.ShequicklytoldKeithJKeith,thegirlleftbehindher

handphone.^^

Keithlookedatthehandphone.Ittookhisbreathaway.Itwasoneofthelatestmodelsonthe

market.Keithhadalwayswantedahandphone.Buthisparentshadtoldhim,“Youdon'tneed

one.Youcanalwaysusethehousephone.^^

Hestaredatitforsomeminutes.Thenhesaidslowly,pausingoneveryword；〕wanttotake

thehandphone.

Marycouldnotbelieveherears.Shemerelystaredatherbrother.a4Youcan't!Whatifthe

ownercomestolookforit?”

Havingmadethedecision,Keithquicklygrabbedthehandphoneandputitinhisschoolbag.

Then,hetookMary'shandandledheroutofthecafequickly.

Oncebackhome,Keithlockedhishousedoorwithtremblinghands.Insidehisroom,hetook

outthepieceofbeauty.Oh,helikeditsomuch.Nowhehadhisownhandphone.Soon,hewas

polishingithappily.

ButMarytoldhim,“Keith,youcannotkeepthehandphone.WhatwillyoutellFatherabout

this?Hewillaskyouhowyougotthehandphone.^^

Keithsaidquickly,UIwillsayafriendlentittome.”

Marysaid,“Nowyouarelyingtoo."Ohdear!WhenhadKeithturnedsodishonest?

ThenMarysawahousephonenumberontheplasticcoverofthehandphone."Thisisthe

girFsphonenumber.Whydon'twejustcallthisnumber?Wewilltalktoherandaskhertocome

andtakebackherhandphone.^^Shewastryingtotalksomesenseintohim.

注意：1.續寫詞數應為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

Thatnight,Keithturnedoverinbedfromtimetotime.

Marywasveryhappytohearthat.

【答案】Thatnight,Keithturnedoverinbedfromtimetotime.Hehaddifficultysleeping,

uncertainaboutwhatheshoulddo.Ofcourse,helikedthenewhandphone.However,hewas

feelingsorryfortheowner.Whenhethoughthowsadtheyoungladywouldbeatthelossofher

handphone,hewasfullofguiltandshame.Thenextmorning,afteralongandrestlessnight,he

wasdeterminedtoreturnthehandphonetotheowner.Afterschool,hetoldMary,“Iamgoingto

phonetheowner.9,

Marywasveryhappytohearthat.Backhome,theyphonedtheowner'shousephone.Agirl

answeredthephone.Kevinasked,“Areyoutheownerofthehandphone?I'mKeith.Ihaveyour

handphone.Canyoucomeandgetit?”Thegirlreplied'Yes'excitedly,expressinghergratitude

repeatedly.Tenminuteslater,shewasatthesamecafetomeetKeith.Handingbackthe

handphonetoherandseeinghersmilehappily,Keithrealizedthathonestywasindeedthebest

policy.

【解析】

本文以瑪麗和她的弟弟基思撿到一部手機為線索展開，講述了瑪麗和她她的弟弟在咖啡館

吃飯時，無意中撿到了一個女孩落在桌上的手機。基思非常喜歡這部最新型號的手機，盡

管瑪麗阻止，他還是把手機帶回家了。瑪麗發現手機塑料蓋上有一個電話號碼，她勸說基

思打這個電話聯系女孩。基思經過思想斗爭，意識到誠實才是最重要的，終于打了那個電

話，他們相約在那個餐館見面，把手機還給那個女孩。

【詳解】

1.段落續寫

①由第一段首句內容“那天晚上，基思不時在床上翻身。”可知，第一段可描寫基思經過思

想斗爭，意識到自己把別人的手機據為己有是不正確的行為，決定給女孩打電話。

②由第二段首句內容“瑪麗聽到這個消息很高興。”可知，第二段可描寫瑪麗聽說基思歸還

手機非常高興，他們通過電話聯系女孩，約在了同一家咖啡館見面，歸還了手機。

2.續寫線索：基思經過思想斗爭——打電話給女孩——相約在咖啡館——歸還手機一

感悟到誠實才是最好的策略

3.詞匯激活

行為類

①猶豫不決：uncertain/hesitate

②充滿:befullof?befilledwith

③決心做某事：bedeterminedtodo/decidetodo

情緒類

①羞恥：shame/abashment

②高興地：happily/delightedly

【點睛】

[高分句型1]

Hehaddifficultysleeping,uncertainaboutwhatheshould

do.（運用了連接代詞what引導的賓語從句）

[高分句型2]

Handingbackthehandphonetoherandseeinghersmilehappily,Keithrealizedthathonestywas

indeedthebestpolicy.（運用了that引導的賓語從句）

02

WhenthelastcustomerleftKFC,itwasalready10:30pm.Adam,an18-year-oldcollege

student,draggedhimselfhome.HehadbeenworkingatKFCforoveramonththatsummer

vacation.

Enteringhisroom,AdamfoundhisyoungerbrotherBillsittingontheedgeofhisbedwith

anuneasyexpressiononhisface.

“Sorry,Adam.I...Ididsomethingwrong,9,Billsprangupandsaidnervously.

“Whatisit?”

“ThisafternoonIsneaked（溜）outforarideonyourmotorcycleandaccidentallyhitour

neighborOsmanBrook'scar.IwassoscaredandI...Ihurriedhomeinpanic.^^

“Isthecarseriouslydamaged?”

“Theleftheadlightgotbroken.^^

“It'strulyyourfaultandifsreallydangeroustorideamotorcycleatyourage.Besides,ifs

illegal/Adamraisedhisvoice,obviouslyannoyed.Hearingthis,Billloweredhisheadandbithis

lipshard.

“Anyway,it'snousecryingoverspiltmilk.Iwilldealwithittomorrow.Nowyougotobed

andhaveagoodsleep.^^

ThenextmorningwhenAdamgotup,Billwasstillsleepingsoundly.Adamwasmore

determinedaboutwhatheoughttodoasanelderbrother.

Afterbreakfast,Adamtookoutallthemoneyhehadearnedandwentoutofthehousewith

it.Intheyardhesawhismotorcycle,onwhosesidethescratches（戈U痕）wereclearlyvisible.

Adamshookhisheadandsighedslightly.Thenhesquaredhisshouldersandquickenedhispace

toOsman'shouse.

Whenhearrived,hewaswelcomedbyOsman'swifeMary,whotoldhimthatOsmanhad

gonetothegaragetohavehiscarrepaired.

“Ihavesomethingimportanttotellhim.CanIwaituntilhecomesback?”Adamrequested

eagerly.

“Ofcourse.Heshouldbehomesoon,^^MaryinvitedAdamin,servedhimacupofcoffeeand

beganchattingwithhim.

Afterhalfanhour,thedooropenedandincameOsman.Havingsaidhellotoeachother,

OsmanandAdambothsatdownonthesofa.

注意：

1.續寫詞數應為150左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

Adamclearedhisthroatandbegantospeak.

Justthen,therecameaknockatthedoor.

【答案】

Adamclearedhisthroatandbegantospeak."Mr.Brook,I'mheretomakeanapology.

YesterdayafternoonmybrotherBilldamagedyourca