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閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。SuddenlyIfeltmyfaceturnredwithembarrassment..HowcouldIhavenevernoticed?EveryChristmasmymotherenjoyedcreatingspecialmemoriesandtraditionsforherfamily.MomlovedChristmas-theshopping,cooking,decorating,music,giftseventhehustleandbustle(擁擠喧器)theseasonbrings.Herenthusiasmencouragedmybrother,sister,andmetoexperiencethejoyandwonderoftheseason.Althoughwecouldreceivevariousgifts,weweretaughtthattherealreasonfortheseasonwastocelebratethegettingtogetherofthewholefamily.ManyyearshavepassedsinceIwasachild.YetIcanstillsmellthearoma(香味)ofMom’ssugarcookiesasshepreparedaspecialtreatforherfamily.ThesesweetswereasuresignthatChristmasDaywasnear.OnChristmasEvemymotherlaidallourstockingsunderthebeautifullydecoratedpinetreemyfatherhadpickedoutandcutdownintheforest.Later,inthemiddleofthenight,shesecretlyfilledthestockings.Thenextmorningweexcitedlyopenedourgifts,leavingourChristmasstockingsforlast.Ourstockingswerealwaysfulloftinytoys,trinkets,nuts,oranges,apples,andcolorfulhardcandiesinvariousshapesandsizesInmytwenties,IwentChristmasshoppingwithafriend.Shebeganlookingforasmallgifttoplaceinhermother’sstocking.“YoufixaChristmasstockingforyourmother?”Iasked.“Yes,"shereplied.“EveryyearIfillastockingwithlittletreatsandhaveitwaitingforheronChristmasmorning.Icouldn’tbearformymothertonothaveaChristmasstocking,especiallysinceshepreparesoneforeveryoneelse.That’swhenIfeltmyfaceturnredwithembarrassment.IrealizedmymotherhadnothadaChristmasstockingforaslongasIremembered.And,evenworse,noonehadnoticedherstockingwasmissing.注意:1.續寫詞數應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在相應位置作答。MysisterandIweredeterminedtostartatraditionofourownthatyear.Lookingatthestocking,mymotherseyesfilledwithtears.續寫中需要回答的問題Whatdidtheauthorandhersisterdotostartthenewtradition?
TheauthorandhersistersecretlypreparedaChristmasstockingfortheirmother,fillingitwithvarioussmallgiftsandtreats.Howdidtheygettheitemsforthestocking?
Theywentshoppingtogether,carefullychoosingtinytoys,trinkets,nuts,fruits,andcolorfulcandies,justliketheirmotherusedtodoforthem.Whendidtheypresentthestockingtotheirmother?
TheypresentedthestockingtotheirmotheronChristmasmorning,aftershehadopenedothergifts.Whatdidthemothersayordowhenshesawthestocking?
Themotherwasspeechlessatfirst,thenhereyesfilledwithtearsofjoy.Shehuggedtheauthorandhersistertightly,expressinghergratitude.Whatdidtheexperienceteachtheauthor?
Theexperiencetaughttheauthortheimportanceofreciprocatingloveandthoughtfulness,andthatsmallgesturescanbringgreathappiness.故事主旨Thestoryemphasizesthesignificanceoffamilytraditions,theselflessloveofamother,andtherealizationoftheneedtoreciprocatethatlovethroughsimpleyetmeaningfulactions.Itshowshowalong-overlookeddetailcanbecomeaturningpointforanewandcherishedfamilytradition.故事山Beginning:TheauthorrecallsthewonderfulChristmastraditionscreatedbyhermother,includingmakingsugarcookies,decoratingthetree,andfillingstockingsforthefamily.Middle:Theauthor,inhertwenties,issurprisedtolearnthatherfriendfillsastockingforhermother.SherealizesthatherownmotherhasneverhadaChristmasstocking.End:Theauthorandhersisterstartanewtraditionbypreparingastockingfortheirmother,whichdeeplytouchesher.故事發展線索ChildhoodChristmasmemories→Adultrealizationofmother'smissingstocking→Decisiontostartanewtradition→Preparationofthestocking→Mother'sreaction情感線索JoyandnostalgiaforchildhoodChristmas→Embarrassmentattherealization→Determinationtomakeachange→Anticipationwhilepreparingthestocking→Happinessandemotionalconnectionwhenmotherreceivesthestocking續寫布局與框架Paragraph1:Startwiththedeterminationoftheauthorandhersister.Describetheirshoppingprocess,choosingitemssimilartothoseintheirownchildhoodstockings.EndwiththemsecretlyplacingthestockingunderthetreeonChristmasEve.Paragraph2:Beginwiththemother'sinitialreactionwhensheseesthestocking.Includeheremotionalresponse,suchascryingandhuggingthesisters.Endwiththeauthorreflectingonthenewtraditionanditssignificance.續寫注意事項承接原文:Continuouslyreferbacktothemother'spastChristmaspreparationsforthefamily,likethetypesofitemsinthestockingsandtheoverallfestiveatmosphere.Usephraseslike“justlikethestockingsMomfilledforus”or“thesamekindofcandiesweusedtofind”.整體設計:Keepthetonewarmandfamily-centered.Ensurethattheactionsoftheauthorandhersisterareinlinewiththefamily-orientedChristmasspiritestablishedintheoriginalstory.巧妙設計:Addsomesmalldetails,suchasaspecificmemoryassociatedwithoneoftheitemsinthestockingorauniquewaythesistersdecoratedthestockingtomakeitmorepersonal.高分語句呼應原文:“JustasMomhadalwaysfilledourstockingswithlove,wenowfilledherswithtokensofourappreciation,emulatingthetraditionsshehadsolovinglycreatedforus.”高級句型:“Itwasnotuntilthatmoment,whenwesawthetearsofjoyinMom'seyes,thatwetrulyunderstoodtheprofoundimpactofthissimpleyetmeaningfulgesture.”(強調句)主題表達&意義延伸直接引語點明主旨:“Thisisforyou,Mom,”wesaid.“You'vealwaysmadeChristmasspecialforus.Nowit'sourturntomakeitspecialforyou.”促成轉變,引發感悟:Theexperiencenotonlybroughtjoytothemotherbutalsomadetheauthorandhersistermoreawareoftheimportanceofshowinggratitude.Ittaughtthemthattraditionsarenotjustaboutrepetitionbutalsoaboutevolvingandadaptingtoexpresslove.借象征物點明主旨:Thestocking,nowfilledwithloveforthemother,becameasymbolofthecycleofloveinthefamily,passingfromonegenerationtothenext.學生寫作示范學生寫作示范一MysisterandIweredeterminedtostartatraditionofourownthatyear.Wewentshoppingtogether,carefullyselectingabeautifulstockingforMom.Wepickedouttinytoysthatremindedusofourchildhood,trinketsthatwethoughtshewouldlike,andavarietyofnuts,oranges,andapples.JustlikeMomusedtodo,wealsoboughtcolorfulhardcandiesindifferentshapes.OnChristmasEve,afterMomhadgonetobed,wequietlyplacedthestockingunderthetree,filledwithourcarefullychosengifts.
Lookingatthestocking,mymother'seyesfilledwithtears.Shewasspeechlessforamoment,overcomewithemotion.Thenshepulledusintoatighthug,saying,“Ineverexpectedthis.Itmeanstheworldtome.”Wespentthemorningtogether,laughingandsharingstoriesaswewatchedMomexploreeachiteminherstocking.ThisnewtraditionnotonlybroughtjoytoMombutalsomadeourbondasafamilyevenstronger.Ittaughtustheimportanceofgivingbackthelovethatwehadreceivedalltheseyears.學生寫作示范二MysisterandIweredeterminedtostartatraditionofourownthatyear.Weplannedeverythinginsecret.Wevisitedseveralstores,searchingfortheperfectitemsforMom'sstocking.Wefoundasmall,hand-carvedwoodenornamentthatweknewshewouldlove.Wealsoboughtsomeofherfavoritenutsandaboxofhigh-qualitychocolates.Afterfillingthestocking,wecarefullyhungitnexttotheonesshehadpreparedforus.
Lookingatthestocking,mymother'seyesfilledwithtears.Shelookedupatus,herfacebeamingwithhappiness.“Yougirlsaresothoughtful,”shesaid,hervoicechokedwithemotion.Wesataroundthetree,chattingandenjoyingthemomentasMomtookouteachitemonebyone.ThissimpleactoflovehadtransformedourChristmas.ItmadeusrealizethatthetrueessenceofChristmasliesinthesmall,unexpectedgesturesofkindnessandlovewithinthefamily.學生寫作示范三MysisterandIweredeterminedtostartatraditionofourownthatyear.WepooledourmoneyandwentonamissiontocreatethemostspecialstockingforMom.Wefoundavintage-stylestockingwithbeautifulembroidery.Thenwewenttoalocalmarketforfreshfruitsandnuts.Wealsoboughtsomescentedcandlesandacutekeychain.OnChristmasEve,weplacedthestockinginaprominentplaceunderthetree.
Lookingatthestocking,mymother'seyesfilledwithtears.Shewasvisiblymoved.Shewalkedovertous,huggingustightly.“ThisisthemostwonderfulChristmasgiftever,”shesaid.Aswesattogether,Mom'sexcitementasshediscoveredeachiteminthestockingwaspalpable.ThisnewtraditionhadaddedanewlayerofwarmthtoourChristmas.Ittaughtusthatfamilytraditionsarenotjustaboutthepastbutalsoaboutcreatingnewmemoriesandshowingloveineverypossibleway.參考答案續寫第一段MysisterandIweredeterminedtostartatraditionofourownthatyear.Weimmediatelysetouttobuyastockingf
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