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易錯點27讀后續寫(5大陷阱)-備戰2024年高考英語考試易錯題(原卷版)易錯點27讀后續寫(5大陷阱)-備戰2024年高考英語考試易錯題(原卷版)/易錯點27讀后續寫(5大陷阱)-備戰2024年高考英語考試易錯題(原卷版)易錯點27讀后續寫目錄01易錯陷阱(5大陷阱)02舉一反三【易錯點提醒一】審題不清、文本內容易混易錯點【易錯點提醒二】段首句推理銜接易混易錯點【易錯點提醒三】情節發展易混易錯點【易錯點提醒四】詞句易混易錯點【易錯點提醒五】卷面易混易錯點03易錯題通關易錯陷阱1:審題不清、文本內容易混易錯點。【分析】只有把材料讀透,才能明確故事主線,把握續寫方向,為續寫奠定基礎。很多考生因為詞匯匱乏、時間不夠等種種原因沒有讀透文本信息,導致續寫嚴重偏離所給素材、跑題等錯誤。為了表現角色的成長或事件的發展,文中會出現影響角色成長和事件發展的關鍵線索,而這些線索之間的邏輯關系,構成事件發生的經過,就是文章的主線。易錯陷阱2:段首句推理銜接易混易錯點。【分析】續寫部分的內容,無論是時間的先后還是情節的發展,都以第一段和第二段首句這兩句話為內在聯系的連接點。它們直接決定了情節的發展方向。考生容易忽略這兩句的作用,或是第二段首句與第一段結尾之間的聯系。應當根據第二段首句逆推第一段尾句,即過渡句。易錯陷阱3:情節發展和結局易混易錯點。【分析】續寫必須與原文內容故事銜接自然、連貫。語言風格與所給材料應當保持一致.要緊扣原文主題、預設核心沖突、推動故事發展。所給材料中可能會有很多伏筆,并且可能較為零星的分布在所給材料中,考生不必分別進行回應,只選取有助于推動情節發展或凸顯故事主線的伏筆來設置情節。一般來說,文章的第一段會介紹故事發生的背景、人物的性格特點等,為可能出現的矛盾沖突做好鋪墊,考生應當善于發現和利用這些伏筆。結局設置巧妙,可以對續寫起到畫龍點睛的作用。一般選擇“首尾呼應”或“情感升華”來傳遞作者的思想感情和感悟,凸顯作者的變化.具體讀后續寫升華句和寫作要領詳見本作者編撰的專輯《2023年新高考英語滿分作文讀后續寫高分突破+萬能金句》.易錯陷阱4:詞句易混易錯點。【分析】為豐富故事的情節,充實續寫的內容和升級語言,考生會用到多樣化的詞匯或句型.而匱乏的詞匯量和薄弱的基礎知識則會造成高級句型和詞匯的錯用。易錯陷阱5:卷面易混易錯點。【分析】整潔優美的卷面會成為加分的一個因素。有點考生不注意規范書寫,字母大小隨意,字跡潦草不清,亂涂亂畫,書寫馬虎等都會給閱卷者留下“臟、亂、差”等印象。讀后續寫不同于第一部分寫作,其分值更高,故優美的卷面留下的印象分占比更大。【易錯點提醒一】詞句(籠統詞與高級詞)易混易錯點【例1】一天晚上,一個小偷走進了她家.【變式1】當我們要離開時,他哭起來.【變式2】他笑得合不攏嘴。【變式3】她不敢一個人外出。【易錯點提醒二】句式結構之非謂語動詞易混易錯點【例2】Seeingfromthetopofthemountain,thevillagelooksmorebeautiful.【正確】【變式1】Havingexperiencedsomanyfailuresoneafteranother,shefinallypickedherselfup。【易錯】【變式2】Devotedtohisresearchwork,theprofessorcaredlittleaboutanyotherthings.【易錯】【變式3】Shewasterrifiedatthethoughtofbeingalone.【易錯】【易錯點提醒三】句式結構之獨立主格易混易錯點【例3】Shelaughed,hereyesshining.【易錯】【變式1】Shefroze,hermouthhangingopen.【易錯】【變式2】Jessicasighingwithrelief,thepairhuggedeachotherandshedtearsofexcitement.【易錯】【變式3】shesattherestill,tearsrollingdownhercheeks。【易錯】【易錯點提醒四】句式結構之形容詞與副詞易混易錯點【例4】Mickfrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch.【易錯】【變式1】Herheartleapedwithjoy.【易錯】【變式2】Thedaywascoldbutclear.【易錯】【變式3】Jack’sfaceflushed/burnedwithembarrassment.【易錯】【易錯點提醒五】句式結構之從句和特殊句式易混易錯點【例5】Whenfacedwiththegreatchallenge,hehadafrownonhisface.【易錯】【變式1】Notonlydidweseeitbutalsowetouchedit。【易錯】【變式2】HonestyisthemostimportantqualitythatIwanthimtopossess.【易錯】【變式3】Notaworddidhesaythatday。【易錯】(2023·浙江臺州·統考一模)閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。GreenThumbAllIdidwasshowmylittlesisterhowtogrowplants。Digahole.Putinaseed.Coveritwithdirt.Waterit。Wait。“See,Laynie,”Iexplained,“awholeplantwillgrowfromthistinyseed。Allwehavetodoiswaterit。"Layniehadherownwateringcansoshecould“help”meinthegarden.Oneday,aftereverythingwaswatered,sherantothefenceandstartedsprinklingwateronanotherspot。Iwalkedoverandsawafreshpatchofdirtnearthefence。“Didyouplantsomethingthere?"Iasked.“Yes,"shesaid.“I’mgrowingapencil.Mypurplepencilgottoosmall,soIplantedit。”“What?But,Laynie—”Ishouldhaveexplainedthingsrightthen,butIjustmuttered,“Uh…Inevergrewonebefore.”LaterIgotwhatseemedlikeagreatidea.IdugupLaynie’spenciland“planted"abrand-newpurplepencil。Layniewasreallyexcitedwhenshesawit.“Mypencilgrew!"sheshouted.Afewdayslater,Layniewaswateringonthesamespot。Twodayslater,newcrayonsstickingtheirpointylittleheadsout,thankstome。Layniejumpedupanddownandyelled,“Theylooklikeflowers!"She“picked"themandranintothehouse.Next,Layniegrewanadultbeardollfromatinyone,asoupspoonfromateaspoon,andahandmirrorfromapieceofglass.Whensheclaimedthatshehadgrownthesethings,Ijustkeptmymouthshut!Actually,itwasfuntryingtothinkofwhatshouldgrowfromLaynie’sseeds。Anditwascooltoseehergetexcited.OnedayIsawherpattingdownsomedirtnearthefenceagain,soIknewshe'djustplantedsomething.Myheartdroppedtomyfeetwhensheasked,“Howlongdoesittaketogrowagoldfish,Brad?”Icouldn’tspeak.“Notlong,Ibet!”saidLaynie.Shekneltdowntowhisper“Grow,Molly.Grow!”beforesheskippedbacktothehouse.注意:1。續寫詞數應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Isatdownwithmybacktothefenceandthoughtforalongtime。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LaterIfoundLayniesittingbythespotwhereMollywasburied.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(2024·浙江杭州·統考一模)閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。MydadandIhadbeenlookingforwardtotheStalecross-countryraceofmysenioryearofhighschool,whichwouldbetheclimax(頂點)ofmyexistence.Iwasthefastestrunneronmyteam,andIwassupposedtomakeitintothetopfifteen。Wehadbeenworkingtowardsthisraceforthreeyears.Itwaseverythingtome,anditwaseverythingtomydad.Hewasarunnerandwaswildwithjoybymysuccessinrunning.Hemadeittoeveryrace,evenflyinghomeearlyfrombusinesstripstoseemerun。Ialwayslistenedforhisvoice,whichrangabovethecrowd-tellingmetorelaxmyarms,callingoutmytime.Hepushedme.Hecheeredforme。Hebelievedinme。WespentcountlesshoursonthesandycanalsofArizona.Breathinginthedustofthedesert,theblossomsoftheorangetrees,andtheterriblesmellofthedairyfarm,wemadeourwayacrossthecity.Wepoundedmilesandmilesintoourrunningshoes,markingwitheverystepthepathtogreatness.Itwasajourneythatwasjustours.Adreampassedonfromonegenerationtothenext.Thenthebigdaycame。Itwashotterthannormal—toohot。Mythroatfeltlikeafieldofcotton,crackedwiththesummerheat,asIwaitedfortheguntofire。Igazedoutatthecrowd;dozensoffamiliarfacesfromchurchandschoolflickeredacrossmyview。Theyhadcomeforme.Theywerecountingonme.Isawmydadsethiswatch,worryandexcitementetchedacrosshisface。Withthesoundofagunshot,theracebegan。Forthefirsttwoandhalfmiles,Ifeltgreat.Ihadneverbeforebeensoreadyforsomething.Theweeksleadinguptotheracewerefilledwithhardpracticesandastrictdiet.Thescorchingsunbeatuponmyback,blindingmewithitsbrilliance。Nothingwasgoingtostopme,though.注意:1.所續寫短文的詞數應為150左右;2。請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。However,withoutwarning,mystrengthwasrunningout.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwhispered,“I'msosorryIdisappointedyou,Dad."___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(2023·廣西玉林·階段練習)閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。Wesatonthebuswaitingwhileotherpassengerspiledon.Ablond-hairedgirl,aboutnineteenyearsold,tooktheseatinfrontofus.Thebusdriverfollowedbehindher。Hedemandedherfare。“Youpay$40orgetoffthebus!"thedriversaid.“Ipaidalready。Yesterday,online,”thegirlinsisted。“No,norecordofit!"thebusdriverpointedtothepaperinhishandandwaveditinherface.“See.Nopay!Youpay,oryoumustgetoff.”Heangrilypointedtotheexitdoor.“ButIdon'thavemoney.AndIpaidalready。Please.”Thebusdriverpickeduphismobilephoneandmadeacalltofindoutiftherehadbeenanerrorwiththepaperwork.Afterfailingtogetthrough,hewasgettingangrierwiththegirl.Sohecutthecallanddidn’ttry.“No,youhavenotpaid.Youmustpay。”“Butplease,Idon’thaveanymoneyonme。ImustgettoLAtoday.Please。”Tearsstreameddownherface。IhadboardedabusheadedtoLosAngeles.IwasveryexcitedaboutexperiencingLA.MydreamofvisitingDisneyLandwasabouttocometrue。ButwhileIsattherecomfortablyinmyseat,thinkingaboutmynextadventure,thisyounggirlwasintears,withamanstandingoverher,demandingmoney。Iwasn’tsurewhatIshoulddo。Wasshetellingthetruth?Itwouldn’tbethefirsttimesomeonehadextractedmoneybytellingasadstorythatturnedoutuntrue.Didshereallynothaveanymoney?Maybethebusdriverwouldshowsomesympathyandallowhertosortthepaymentoutlater?Butno,thebusdrivercontinuedtodemandshepay$40orgetoffthebus.Theyounggirlinsistedthatshedidn'thaveenoughmoneyforthefareandhadnooneshecouldcontactforhelp。Itseemedthedriverwouldthrowheroffthebus。注意:1.續寫詞數應為150個左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答.Suddenly,amessygrey-hairedwomanwithaweatheredfacestoodup._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Atthenextreststop,Inoticedthatwomanhadnomoneyforfood。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(2023·湖南·湖南師大附中校聯考一模)閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。ToactwithintegritywasahabitwithSusanwhoalwaysfollowstheGoldenRule:“Donotdotootherswhatyoudonotwantotherstodotoyou。”Butwhenshethoughtoverherpastconduct,ablushofshamecrepttohercheeks,asmanylittleactsofselfishnessandunkindnesscamebacktohermemory。Sheresolvedthatforthefuture,bothingreatthingsandsmall.shewouldrememberandfollowtheGoldenRule。Itwasnotlongafterthisthatanopportunityoccurred,whichtriedSusan’sprinciples。OneSaturdayeveningwhenshewent,asusual,toMr.Thompson’sinn,toreceivethemoneyofhermother’swashingforhim,whichamountedtofivedollars,shefoundMr。Thompsonapparentlyinaterribleragewithsomehorsedealerswithwhomhehadbeenbargaining.Heheldinhishandanopenpocketbook(錢袋子),fullofbillsandscarcelynoticingSusanasshemadeherrequest,excepttoswearatherfortroublinghimwhenhewasbusy,hehandedherabanknote.Gladtoescapesoeasily,Susanhurriedoutofthegate.Pausingtoputthemoneysafelyinherpurse,shediscoveredthathehadgivenhertwobillsinsteadofone.Shelookedaround;nobodywasnearandherfirstimpulsewasjoyattheunexpectedprize。“Itisallmine,"saidshetoherself.“Iwillbuymymotheranewcoatwithit,andshecangiveheroldonetomysisterMary,andthenMarycangototheSundayschoolwithmenextwinter.IwonderifIcanbuyapairofshoesformybrotherTom,too.”Atthatmomentsherememberedthathemusthavegivenittoherbymistake。Butagainthevoiceofthetempterwhispered,“Hegaveit,andhowdoyouknowthathedidnotintendtomakeyouapresentofit?Keepit!Hewillneverknowit,forhehadtoomanysuchbillsinthatgreatpocketbook.”注意:1.續寫詞數應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Thisconflictwasgoingoninhermindbetweengoodandevil。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“Sir,youpaidmetwobillsinsteadofone,”shehandedhimtheextranote.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(2023·安徽·高三校考階段練習)閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。Duringthesummervacation,amotherplannedanexcitingtripwithhertwochildren.Theyweresettoexploreafamoustouristspot,famousforitsbreath—takinglandscapesandattractions.Littledidtheyknowthattheiradventurewouldtakeanunexpectedturn.Astheyarrivedatthedestination,theyweregreetedbyaseaofpeople.Theplacewasoverflowingwithtouristsfromallovertheglobe.Excitementfilledtheairasfamiliesbegantheirsightseeingadventures,creatingalivelyandvibrantatmosphere。Eagertobegintheirownadventure,themother,holdingthehandsofhertwochildren,doveintothecrowd。However,amongthecrowdedarmyoftourists,fatehaditsownplansinstore。Inthechaosofthemassivecrowd,theyoungerson,unawareofthechaosunfoldingaroundhim,somehowmanagedtowanderoff,unknowinglyleavinghisfamilybehind。Suddenly,themotherrealizedthatheryoungerchildwasnolongerbesideher.Panicseizedherheart,andasenseofhelplessnessoccupiedher.Shedesperatelycalledoutherson'sname,hervoicetremblingwithfear.Tearsstreameddownherfaceasshescannedthevastseaofpeopleforherson,buttherewasnosignofhim。Inastateofdespair,themothersoughtassistancefromfellowtourists.Compassionatemindsinstantlyjoinedinthesearch,spreadingwordaboutthelostchildthroughoutthearea.Strangersjoinedinthesearch,theirheartsfilledwithempathyfortheanxiousmother.注意:1.續寫詞數應為150個左右;2。請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Threeagonizing(令人焦慮不安的)hourspassed,eachfeelinglikeyears。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Asthemothertightlyfoldedhersoninherarms,awaveofdelightwashedoverher._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(2023·吉林長春·高三東北師大附中練習)閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。TheneighborhoodkidsnicknamedthestrangeoldcoupleCrazyJackandRubyRednose.Rumorwasthattheysatinsideanddrankteaallday.Theonlywordsweeverheardfromthemwere“Keepoutofourrosebushes!”Therosebushesservedasafencebetweenourhouseandtheirs.Iwaselevenatthetimeandtheoldestofsixactivegirls。Weshouldhaveplayedoursoftballgameselsewheretoavoidhurtingtheroses,butwesecretlyenjoyedannoyingCrazyJackandRubyRednose。Oneday,wehadaneighborhoodsoftballgameinouryard.Marywastryingtocatchaflyball。Shestumbled(絆倒)overoneofRubyRednose’srosebushesandfellontopofseveralmore.Justatthatmoment,RubyRednosesprangoutandrantowardMary.Shescreamedangrily,“Lookatwhatyou’vedonetoourfamily'sroses!You'vealwaysbeenatrouble.Youhavenoideawhatthisrosebushmeanstome!”Hearingthis,mysistersandIranintoourhouse。Breathlessly,wetoldMomwhathadhappened。“Girls,Ihavetoldyounottoplaysoftballnearthosebushes.Comeoutsiderightnowandhelpmefixthem.”“Mom,wethoughtyoudidn’tlikethecouple,”weprotested.“They’remeantous。"Momjustglaredatus。Wefollowedheroutsidetohelprepairtherosefence.WhileMomwasexaminingthedamagedroses,Rubyslowlywalkedout。Shelookedsad.Anditwasn’thernosethatwasred—itwashereyes。注意:1.續寫詞數應為150左右;2。請按如下格式在相應位置作答。Rubywalkedovertomymother,wegirlsholdingourbreath.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Afewweekslater,theplantsallcamebacktolife.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(2023·江蘇連云港·高三統考期中)閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。Imaginesittingatyourbreakfasttablehavingacupofcoffeewhenallofasuddenyouseesomeoneabouttodie.Whatwouldyoudo?LastChristmas,JohnGelinnefoundout.OnDec。26,Gelinne,60,waswatchingoutthebackwindowsofhishomeinEdgewater,Maryland,atfrozenBeardsCreek(河流)。Childrenandgrandchildrenwererunningaroundthehouse.That’swhenGelinnelookedupjustintimetoseeasmallplaneafewhundredyardsaway,losingaltitude(海拔高度).Astheplanedisappearedbehindthetrees,Gelinne,aformerNavycommander,realizeditwasgoingtolandinthecreek。Heflashedonamomentfrommorethan20yearsearlier:Sept.11,2001。GelinnewasatworkinthePentagoninWashington,D.C.,whenterrorists(恐怖分子)crashedaplaneintothebuilding.Heescapedbuthasalwayswonderedifhecouldhavestayedinsideand“Totherightwasthecrisis,andtotheleftwasescape。Idon’tevenknowifIcouldhavegoneright,butIwentleft,”herecalled.“Ialwayssecond—guessedmyselfaboutthatdecision。"Onthisday,Gelinnedidn’thesitate.Herandowntothewaterfront。Theplanehadslippedtoastoponthebroad,frozencreek,farfromtheshore.Itwasnowsinking.Thepilotwasstandingonthewing。GelinneknewfromhisNavytrainingthatevenafewminutesintheicywatercouldkillthepilot。Gelinnetestedtheicewithhisfootanddecidednottotakeanychanceswalkingonit。Soheandhisson,JohnIr。,37,pulledtwokayaks(皮艇)out.“Ifigured,ifitcanfloatonthewater,itcanslideontheice,”Gelinnesays.Thekayaks’paddles(槳)provedeasilybroken,sothepairtriedusingshovels(鐵鏟)topushtheboatsalong。Theirfirstattemptsleftthemmovingincircles。Butwithsomemuscle,theymadeprogress.注意:1.詞數150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答.Thetwomensetoff,pushingtheirboatsacrosstheice。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Theyfinallyarrivedattheshorewithgreatefforts。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(2023·吉林白城·高三校考期中)閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。PositiveActionFuelsHope“I’mnotgoingbacktogrouptherapy(治療).Irefusetobetreatedlikethat.”ThevoicewassoloudthatIhadtoholdthephoneawayfrommyear.AliciaGonzalezsufferedfromdepression.Thiswashersecondmonthatthehomelessshelter,whereIworkasacasemanager.Aliciahadbeenanursefor10years.Herworkwasintenseanddemanding,andshelovedit。Toher,thetrauma(精神創傷)she’dsufferedwasthathersonlosthislifeinacarcrash。Withherbrainoverloadedbythetrauma,shecouldn’tfocusonherwork.Finally,shehadtoquitherjob.Withnoincome,shecouldn’tpayherrent。Foralmostthreeyears,Alicialivedinhertruck.Aliciatoldmeallthisatourfirstmeeting.“Iwanttohelpyou,”Isaid.“Therearelotsofresourceshere.AllIaskisthatyoutellmewhat’sgoingonwithyou。ThatwayIcanmakesureyou’regettingtheservicesyouneed。”“I’lltry,”shesaid.“It’sjusthard.IusedtofeelasthoughwhatIdidmattered。Now.。。”Hervoicebecamequiet.BeforeIcouldsaysomething,shestoodandwalkedoutoftheroom.Twomonthslater,IstillfeltasifIhadn’tgottenthroughtoAlicia.Sometimesthethingssendingherintoaviolentangerweresominor—apieceofrubbishsomeonehaddroppedonthefloor—itwashardformetothinkofcopingskillsthatdidn'tsoundlikeIwascriticizingher。Maybethislatesttalkingrouptherapywasthelaststraw(稻草)。“Findingsomethingsmallyoucanfeelgoodaboutcanhelpyoucopewithanger,"Isuggested.“Itdoesn’tneedtobesomehugething.”EvenasIsaidit,Iwondered,“WasthatreallythebestadviceIcouldcomeupwith?”Aliciatookalongdeepbreath.“Iknow,”shesaid.注意:1.續寫詞數應為150個左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Afewweekslater,Isawherinthehallwaywitharubbishbag.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________InMarch,Aliciawasofferedajobdoinghousekeepingattheshelter.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(2023·廣東·高三廣州市第一中學校聯考)閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。EveryJune,werenewanannualtraditionatourhouseinalovelyneighbourhood.Ourchildrenaregivenbowlsandaskedtocollectpiecesofnaturethatremindthemofthesummer.Theyleavethosebowlsonthefrontdoorstepandwegoforawalk.Whenwereturn,wefindfairies(仙子)havetransformedthebowls’contentsintoicecreamsundaes(圣代冰淇淋)。I'mnotcertainhowthistraditionevolved。IthinkIwasmakingupsomethingaboutfairiesyearsago,anditalljustsortofhappened。Buteversince,ithasbeenoneofourfavouriteroutineactivities,fascinatedwithitsmagic.“Whenarethefairiescoming?”six—year—oldAnnahadbeenaskingalllastJune,eagerwithexpectation.Meanwhile,John,nine,wasgettingwisetofairiesandFatherChristmasandsuchsillythings.Sohewasprettysureabouthowallthe“magic"cameaboutastheeveningapproached。“Youknow,Ihadeverythingworkedout!”Hesaidhewouldunderstandif,duringourwalk,MumorDadshouldforgetsomethingandreturnhomeorduringthewalkaparentmighthavetofetchsomethinginthecar.Manytimes,wewereeventhinkingoftellinghimthetruthbutwedidn’t。Annashouldenjoythemagic.Theeveningarrivedasexpected。Thechildrencollectedleavesandbladesofgrass,pebbles,twigs(樹枝)anddeadinsects.Weputtheirbowlsonthefrontdoorstepandwentoffonourwalkasusual.Butafterawhile,IpretendedtocomplainthatIhadforgottenmykeysandneededtogoback.Johnsmiledwithaknowingexpression.“Ohwait,"Iadded.“I’vefoundthem!Idon’thavetogoback.”Aswecontinuedonourway,Johnwasbeginningtogetabitconfused。Nearourhouse,afterexchangingaglancewithmyhusband,Ianxiouslywarnedthatthefairiesmightnothavearrivedyet—wemightneedtowalkforabitlonger。HearingwhatIsaid,Johnseemedrelieved。“Yes,"hesaid,“theyprobablyhadn’tcome!”Yetwhenwereachedthefrontdoor,thebowlswereinthesameplacewehadleftthem—filledexactlywithicecreamsundaes。注意:1.續寫詞數應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Seeingthis,thetwokidsgavequitedifferentresponses。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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