—basedonthepassageAMOTHER’SDAYSURPRISEMaketheConflictaGoodStory將“事故”變為“故事”JourneytotheWestConflictAMother’sDaySurpriseCharactersAMOTHER’SDAYSURPRISE

ThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother’sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.

Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.

ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff’shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.lovetheirmotherlackexperienceloveherchildrenbusywithhouseworkDevelopmentTherewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknowexactlywhattodo.confident/excitedthebreadturnedblacktheporridgeboiledoverthestovethehandConflictpanicked/worriedThepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.Climaxdisappointed/nervousHowistheconflictsolved?Para1Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.

Para2Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.

thebreakfastwasfinishedWhatdidtheirfatherdo?gottoknowwhathadhappenedofferedtohelpthetwinsdobreakfastcleanedupthemessykichenhelpedJeffwiththeburntskinWhatdidthetwinsdo?gavetheirmotherthebreakfastsaid“Happymother’sDay”Whatdidmotherdo?feltsurprised/movedate/cried/hugged/thanked/saidshowedconcernforJeff’shandactionsPara1Dadofferedtohelpthetwins.Theymadethebreakfasttogetheragain.Thetwinsmadebreakfasttogether.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.Actionsthechainofactionssbdid…did…anddid…Havingdone…,sbdid…anddid…sbdid…,doing…anddoing…Dadofferedtohelpthetwins.1.He____________,_________themontheshouldersand_____________helpthemtotryitagain.2.Having_________theirplan,he________themontheshouldersand______________givethemahand.bentdownpatteddecidedtolearnedpattedofferedto

Theymadethebreakfasttogetheragain.1.They_________thestove,_____________theburnerand___________tocooktherestoftheporridgecarefully.2.Undertheirfather’sguidance,Jeff_________thepotand_______theporridgefromtimetotimewhileJennacarefully________thetoast.cleanedturnedoncontinuedstoodbystirredfriedActionsThemanlookedathisphone.facialexpressionbodylanguagementalstatemulti-perspectiveDadofferedtohelpthetwins.deeplymovedbytheirloveforMomsaying,“Let’smakeittogether!”withasmileofunderstandingflashingacrosshisfacesurprisedandmovedwithoutasecondthought非謂語動詞with復合結構形容詞副詞/短語wheninformedoftheirintention從句facialexpressionmentalstatebodylanguageconversation…Thetwinssaid,“HappyMother’sDay!”

.facialexpressionmentalstatebodylanguageconversation…非謂語動詞with復合結構形容詞副詞/短語從句Thetwinssaid,“HappyMother’sDay!”1.“HappyMother’sDay!”thetwinsyelledinadelightedvoicewiththeireyestwinklingwithexcitement.2.Holdingthewell-preparedbreakfastinhand,thetwinssaid,“HappyMother’sDay!”tooexcitedtoconcealtheexcitementwellingupintheirhearts.Whatcanwelearn?1.ahappy/thought-provokingending2.ameaningfullesson3.anunforgettablememoryAboveall,itislovethatmakesthismotherpleasedandproud.ItisalsolovethatmakeshisMother’sDaysweetandunforgettable!“Thankyou,myhoney.YourloveisthebestgiftI’veeverhad.”thehappiestmotherintheworldkeptrepeatingthewords.Finally.JeffandJennacametorealizethatlovecanreallymakethemesswonderful.OptionalHomework1.Polishthesentencesbyusingthechainofactionand