學(xué)必求其心得，業(yè)必貴于專精學(xué)必求其心得，業(yè)必貴于專精學(xué)必求其心得，業(yè)必貴于專精Module6OldandNewSectionⅣWriting假設(shè)你是某中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，最近收到美國朋友Jim的電子郵件。他在三年前參觀過你校，聽說你校現(xiàn)在變化很大，希望了解你校發(fā)生了哪些具體的變化。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表提示，給他回一封電子郵件。三年前一座教學(xué)樓，一個(gè)操場(chǎng)，學(xué)生1500多人現(xiàn)在1．校園擴(kuò)建：新建了一座教學(xué)樓（內(nèi)有音樂室、美術(shù)室、微機(jī)房等）和一座圖書館2．學(xué)生人數(shù)：增加到2500多人3．體育、音樂器材配備齊全4．綠化校園注意:1．詞數(shù)：120左右，開頭已經(jīng)給出,但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。3．參考詞匯：裝備equipDearJim，IwaspleasedtohearfromyouandIamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutthechangesinmyschool。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion:Dear_Jim，I_was_pleased_to_hear_from_you_and_I_am_writing_to_tell_you_something_about_the_changes_in_my_school。Youareright.Greatchangeshavetakenplaceinmyschool。Itisnolongerwhatitusedtobethreeyearsago,whentherewasonlyoneteachingbuildingandaplayground.Iamhappytotellyoutwonewbuildingshavebeenbuiltandareinuse。Oneofthemisanewclassroombuilding，inwhichthereareroomsformusic，artandcomputerteaching.Theotheristhelibrary，wherethereareallkindsofbooks，newspapersandmagazines.Besides，myschooliswellequippedwithsportsfacilitiesandmusicalinstruments.Thenumberofstudentshasalsogrownfrom1，500to2，500.What’smore,wehaveplantedalotoftreesandflowersinandaroundtheschool.Ibelievemyschoolwillbecomebetterandbetter，andIhopeyouwillvisitmyschoolagain。Yours，Li_Hua1．本文屬于電子郵件，郵件正文為描述一個(gè)地方的變化，屬于對(duì)比性說明文，描寫過去用過去時(shí)態(tài)，描寫現(xiàn)在用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)或現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。2．正文部分可分為三段：第一段：表明寫郵件的目的。（已經(jīng)給出）第二段:對(duì)比學(xué)校過去和現(xiàn)在的變化。第三段：對(duì)學(xué)校的美好祝愿及對(duì)對(duì)方的誠摯邀請(qǐng).3．常用表達(dá)(句型）：Greatchangeshavetakenplacein.。..。。takeonadifferent/newlook.。。。isnolongerwhatitusedtobe。..。isnotso/as.。.as。.。Itispossible/clear/truethat。.。1．Itisnolongerwhatitusedtobethreeyearsago，whentherewasonlyoneteachingbuildingandaplayground。what引導(dǎo)的從句作is的表語，when引導(dǎo)的是定語從句。復(fù)合句的運(yùn)用是高考寫作得高分的關(guān)鍵。2．Oneofthemisanewclassroombuilding，inwhichthereareroomsformusic,artandcomputerteaching。inwhich引導(dǎo)的是非限制性定語從句，其先行詞是anewclassroombuilding。3．What’smore，wehaveplantedalotoftreesandflowe