高級句式升級修辭手法PARTONE用like作喻詞simile1.Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.（情感描寫）她臉上的笑容像鉆石一樣閃閃發(fā)光。2.IfeellikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadness.（情感描寫）我感覺自己像漂浮在悲傷的海洋中。3.Thesceneryalongthejourneyisjustlikeabreath-takinglandscapepainting.(景物描寫)沿路的風景就像一幅美麗的山水畫卷。4.Theicywindstartedhowling,cuttingmyfacelikeasharpknife.(景物描寫)寒風開始咆哮，像鋒利的小刀一樣刺痛了我的臉。5.Clustersofstarsdecoratedthevastskylikesparklingjewels.(景物描寫)繁星像珊珊發(fā)光的珠寶一樣裝飾了浩瀚的天空。1.這本書陪伴了我很久就像一位我的老朋友似的。（用like作喻詞）Thebookhasaccompaniedmeforquitealongtimelikeanoldfriend.陪伴

：很久：一位我的老朋友：accompaniedforquitealongtimeanoldfriend2.他茫然地看著我就像一個傻子。（用like作喻詞）Helookedatmeblanklylikeafool.茫然地：看著：一個傻子：blanklylookedatafool3.他就像一頭瘋牛一樣沖我吼。（用like作喻詞）Heshoutedatmelikeamadcow.一頭瘋牛：沖我吼：amadcowshoutedatme4.他非常著急就像熱鍋上的螞蟻一樣。（用like作喻詞）Heisanxiouslikeanantonahotpan.著急：熱鍋上的：anxiousonahotpan5.他僵在那里一動不動就像一塊石頭。（用like作喻詞）Hestoodstilllikeastone.僵在那里：一塊石頭：stoodstillastonePARTONE用as..as作喻詞simile1.Thesmileonherfacewasasvibrantasthesunonasummerday（情感描寫）她臉上的笑容和夏天的太陽一樣充滿活力。2.Fatherrushedtohisson'sschool,onlytodiscoverthebuildingwasasflataspancake.(景物描寫)父親沖到兒子的學校后，才發(fā)現(xiàn)這座建筑已經(jīng)變成一片廢墟。3.Ireachedouttotouchherface,whichwasascoldastheice.(人物描寫)我伸手去摸她的臉，發(fā)現(xiàn)她的臉像冰一樣冰冷。更多搭配：asbusyasabee忙忙碌碌ashungryasawolf饑腸轆轆asproudasapeacock傲如孔雀asbraveasalion勇猛如獅asprettyasapicture美如畫1.我的心和蜂蜜一樣甜。（用as..as作喻詞）Myheartisassweetashoney.蜂蜜：甜：honeysweet2.他的心和石頭一樣硬。（用as..as作喻詞）Hisheartisashardasastone.石頭：硬：astonehard3.他的身體和牛一樣壯實。（用as..as作喻詞）Hisbodyisasstrongasacow.牛：壯實：acowstrong4.我們面前的景色美如一幅畫。（用as..as作喻詞）Thescenerybeforeusisasbeautifulasapicture.一幅畫：我們面前的：apicturebeforeus5.這輛公交車走的像蝸牛一樣慢。（用as..as作喻詞）Thebuswentasslowlyasasnail.蝸牛：慢：asnailslowlyPARTONE用asif作喻詞simile1.MrsSatherlookedatmyeyesasif(shewere)seeingmyinnerselflockedawayinside.（動作描寫）Sather老師看著我的眼睛，仿佛看到了我靈魂深處封閉的自我。2.Sheswepthersonintoherarmswithhereyeswetasifshewantedtosqueezethebreathoutofhim.（動作描寫）她眼睛濕潤，把兒子擁進懷里，仿佛想把他的呼吸擠出來。3.Herhairgrewgreyerandgreyer,asif(itwere)coveredwithsnowandfrost.（肖像描寫）他的頭發(fā)越來越白了，簡直像蓋了一頭皚皚的霜雪。4.Shefeltasifherhearthadbeenrippedfromherbody.（情感描寫）她感覺自己心好像從她的身體里被撕開了。1.他感覺彷佛整個世界都崩塌了。（用asif作喻詞）Hefeltasifthewholeworldhadfallenapartonhim.整個世界：崩塌：thewholeworldfallenapart2.他在操場上自由地奔跑彷佛他是一只快樂的小鳥。（用asif作喻詞）Hewasrunningonthesoprtsfieldasifhewasahappybird.在操場上：一只快樂的小鳥：onthesoprtsfieldahappybird3.他無辜地看著我好像他什么都不知道似的。（用asif作喻詞）Helookedatmeinnocentlyasifhedidn'tknowanything.無辜地：什么都不知道：innocentlydidn'tknowanything4.他感覺他的心臟被刀子捅了一刀。（用asif作喻詞）Hefeltasifhishearthadbeenstabbedbyaknife.刀子：捅了一刀：aknifestabbedbyPARTTWO通過be動詞聯(lián)系metaphor1.她的頭發(fā)像是一條流淌在她肩上的金色河流。（通過be動詞聯(lián)系）Herhairwasaflowinggoldenriverstreamingdownhershoulders.流淌在：金色河流：streamingdownaflowinggoldenriver2.美麗的公園就是一個芬芳的彩色地毯。（通過be動詞聯(lián)系）Thebeatutifulparkwasascentedcarpetofcolor.芬芳的：彩色地毯：scentedcarpetofcolor3.別這么幼稚好不好。（通過be動詞聯(lián)系）Stopbeingsuchababy.幼稚：beingsuchababy4.生活就像一條未被涉足的河流，有各種曲折。（通過be動詞聯(lián)系）Lifeisanunexploredriver.fulloftwistsandturns.未被涉足的：曲折：unexploredtwistsandturnsPARTTWO通過動詞聯(lián)系metaphor1.我如鯁在喉，淚水濕潤了眼眶。（通過動詞聯(lián)系）Ifeltalumpinmythroat,tearingwellingupinmyeyes.如鯁在喉：濕潤了眼眶：alumpinmythroatwellingupinmyeyes.2.他沒有自己的觀點，只會鸚鵡學舌。（通過動詞聯(lián)系）Hedoesn'thaveanideaofhisown.Hejustparrotswhatotherpeoplesay.自己的觀點：鸚鵡學舌：anideaofhisownparrotswhatotherpeoplesay.3.整個房子沉浸在一片寂寞中。（通過動詞聯(lián)系）Aheavysilenceblanketedtheroom.沉浸在：一片寂寞：blanketedAheavysilence4.小男孩狼吞虎咽。（通過動詞聯(lián)系）Theboywolfeddownthefood.狼吞虎咽：wolfeddownthefoodPARTTHREE把自然現(xiàn)象當作人來描寫personification1.大風凜冽，發(fā)出怒吼。（自然現(xiàn)象）Thewindstoodupandgaveashout.凜冽：發(fā)出怒吼：stoodupgaveashout2.微風輕柔地親吻著她的臉龐。（自然現(xiàn)象）Thebreezegentlykissedhercheeks.微風：輕柔地親吻：Thebreezegentlykissed3.鵝毛般的雪花在空中飛舞，像一幅美麗的圖畫。（自然現(xiàn)象）Thefeatherysnowflakesdancedinthenightair,makingabeautifulpicture.鵝毛般的雪花：在空中飛舞：Thefeatherysnowflakesdancedinthenightair4.薄霧把他包圍起來。（自然現(xiàn)象）Themistswallowedhimup.薄霧：包圍：Themistswallowed5.寒風開始咆哮，刺痛了我的臉。（自然現(xiàn)象）Theicywindstartedhowling,stingingmyface.寒風：刺痛了我的臉：Theicywindstingingmyface6.夜空中星星向我眨眼睛。（自然現(xiàn)象）Starswinkedatmeinadarkeningsky.眨眼睛：夜空中：winkedatmeinadarkeningsky7.頃刻間，黑暗統(tǒng)治了森林。（自然現(xiàn)象）Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.頃刻間：統(tǒng)治：ImmediatelyruledPARTTHREE把含蓄抽象的概念當作人來描寫personification1.恐懼把他吞噬了。（含蓄抽象的概念）Fearseized/swallowedhim.恐懼：吞噬：Fearseized/swallowed2.我氣得說不出話來。（含蓄抽象的概念）Angerchokedmywords.說不出話來：chokedmywords.3.我突然想到一個好主意。（含蓄抽象的概念）Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.突然想到：struck4.他笑容滿面。（含蓄抽象的概念）Smiletookholdofhim.滿面：tookholdof5.她焦慮不安，十分崩潰。（含蓄抽象的概念）Anxietytornhimintopieces.焦慮：Anxiety6.他沒信心了。（含蓄抽象的概念）Courage/Confidencedesertedhim.沒：deserted7.我興奮的啥也說不出來了。（含蓄抽象的概念）Excitementdeprivedmeofallpowerofspeech.啥也說不出來：deprivedmeofallpowerofspeechPARTTHREE把動物當作人來描寫personification1.Inthedeadofnight,thecricketsplayedontheterraceofthehouse.寂靜的夜，蟋蟀旁若無人地在房子的陽臺上玩。(景物描寫)2.Birdsonthetreearesingingabeatifulsong.(景物描寫)樹上的小鳥在樹上唱著美妙的歌曲。3.Thefrogsaregivingaconcert---mixedchorus.(景物描寫)青蛙在舉辦音樂會---混聲大合唱。4.Firefliespatrolthegrasswithsmalllanterns(景物描寫)螢火蟲提著小燈籠在草叢中巡邏。1.夏天的微風輕輕地撫摸著我的臉。（動物）Thesummerbreezetouchedmyfacegently.撫摸著：touched2.細雨輕輕地親吻著我的臉頰。（動物）Thedrizzlekissedmeonmycheekgently.細雨：Thedrizzle3.我能聽到到處都是鳥兒在歌唱。（動物）Icouldhearbirdssingingeverywhere.到處：everywhere4.這個教堂目睹了這個城市20年的變化。（動物）Thechurchhaswitnessedthecity'schangesinthepast20years.目睹：witnessedPARTFOUR使用數(shù)詞或量詞hyperbole1.我的心成了碎片。（使用數(shù)詞或量詞）Myheartbrokeinaboutamillionpieces.碎片：amillionpieces2.她嚇得半死。（使用數(shù)詞或量詞）Shewashalfdeadwithfear.半死：halfdead3.非常感謝你。（使用數(shù)詞或量詞）Thanksamillion.非常：amillion4.我都告訴你多少次了。（使用數(shù)詞或量詞）I‘vetoldyouamilliontimes.多少次：amilliontimes5.背包很重。（使用數(shù)詞或量詞）Thebackpackweighsaton.重：weighsatonPARTFOUR使用動詞hyperbole1.這位年輕姑娘的表演博得了滿堂喝彩。（使用動詞）Theyounggirlbroughtthehousedownwithherperfomance.博得了滿堂喝彩：broughtthehousedown2.嚇得我魂不附體。（使用動詞）Itmademejumpout