發(fā)言（演講稿）【試題探究】你校將舉辦英語演講比賽。請(qǐng)你以Besmartonlinelearners為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿參賽,內(nèi)容包括:1.分析優(yōu)勢(shì)與不足;2.提出學(xué)習(xí)建議。Step1:審題布局類型發(fā)言稿人稱第一人稱(I)時(shí)態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí);現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)要點(diǎn)1.網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)的優(yōu)勢(shì)2.網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)的不足3.網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)的建議Step2:巧飾亮點(diǎn)要點(diǎn)1:網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)可以讓我們隨時(shí)隨地學(xué)習(xí)。一般表達(dá):Onlinelearningallowsustolearnanytimeandanywhere.→網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)可以讓我們隨時(shí)隨地學(xué)習(xí)。此外,我們可以吸收各種資源,從而更有效地學(xué)習(xí)。(補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié))Onlinelearningallowsustolearnanytimeandanywhere.Besides,wecanabsorballkindsofresourcestolearnmoreefficiently.要點(diǎn)2:長(zhǎng)時(shí)間盯著屏幕對(duì)我們的眼睛有害。一般表達(dá):Staringatthescreenforlongtimeisharmfultooureyes.→長(zhǎng)時(shí)間盯著屏幕對(duì)我們的眼睛有害。更糟糕的是,我們沒有很多機(jī)會(huì)與我們的老師和同學(xué)互動(dòng)。(補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié))Staringatthescreenforlongtimeisharmfultooureyes.Worsestill,wedon’thavemanyopportunitiestointeractwithourteachersandclassmates.要點(diǎn)3:我們應(yīng)該勇敢地與他人討論我們的問題。其次,學(xué)習(xí)30分鐘后休息一下是明智的。Weshouldbebravetodiscussourproblemswithothers.Second,itiswisetotakeashortbreakafterlearningfor30minutes.Step3:銜接成篇BesmartonlinelearnersOnlinelearninghasbecomeanimportantwaytolearnrecently.However,onlinelearninghasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.Itsadvantagesareobvious.Onlinelearningallowsustolearnanytimeandanywhere.Besides,wecanabsorballkindsofresourcestolearnmoreefficiently.However,itsdisadvantagescannotbeignored.Staringatthescreenforlongtimeisharmfultooureyes.Worsestill,wedon’thavemanyopportunitiestointeractwithourteachersandclassmates.Thenhowtobesmartonlinelearners?First,weshouldbebravetodiscussourproblemswithothers.Second,itiswisetotakeashortbreakafterlearningfor30minutes.Inconclusion,onlybybeingsmartonlinelearnerscanwetrulyenjoythebenefitsofmoderntechnology.【句式儲(chǔ)備】1.篇頭——開場(chǎng)白①Thankyoufromthebottomofmyheartforgivingmethischancetospeaktoyoutoday.我從心底感謝你們今天給我這個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)在你們面前演講。②Ireallyappreciateyourmakingtimeinyourschedulestoattendthemeetingtoday.我非常感謝你們今天抽空來參加這個(gè)會(huì)議。2.篇中——拓展話題,論證觀點(diǎn)①Inasense,readingprovidesmewithasafeharborwhereIcanescapefromworriesinreallife,restmysoulandimmediatelygetrecharged.從某種意義上說,閱讀給我提供了一個(gè)安全的港灣,在那里我可以逃避現(xiàn)實(shí)生活中的煩惱,讓我的靈魂得到休息,并立即得到恢復(fù)。②Musiccanmakeusfeelrelaxedbothmentallyandphysically,thushelpingreduceourpressureatworkandinlife.音樂可以使我們身心放松,從而幫助我們減少工作和生活中的壓力。3.結(jié)尾——發(fā)出號(hào)召、呼吁或祝福①Wesincerelyhopethatyouwillhaveawonderfultimetonight.我們衷心希望你們今晚過得開心。②Bestwishesforaverysuccessfulexhibition!祝賀展覽會(huì)圓滿成功!【拓展儲(chǔ)備】勞動(dòng)是我國的傳統(tǒng)美德。假定你是李華,你校將舉辦勞動(dòng)教育活動(dòng)周,請(qǐng)以“Labor—ATraditionalVirtue”為題,寫一篇演講稿,內(nèi)容包括:1.一次勞動(dòng)體驗(yàn);2.你對(duì)勞動(dòng)的理解。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】Labor—ATraditionalVirtueGoodmorning,everyone.Today,Iwouldliketotalkaboutthetheme“Labor—ATraditionalVirtue”inthecontextoftheupcomingLaborEducationWeekatourschool.Recently,Ihadtheopportunitytoparticipateinalaborexperienceprogramorganizedbyourschool.Wespentawholedayworkingatalocalfarm,plantingvegetables,anddoingvariousphysicaltasks.Althoughitwastiring,Ifeltagreatsenseofaccomplishmentattheendoftheday.Throughthisexperience,Igainedadeeperunderstandingofthevalueoflabor.Labornotonlyhelpsusdevelopastrongworkethicbutalsoteachesussomethingessentialsuchasteamwork,responsibility,andperseverance.Thankyouforyourattention.【要點(diǎn)精練】1．為提高青少年合理使用互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的意識(shí)，你校將舉辦一場(chǎng)英語演講比賽。請(qǐng)你以“BeWiseInternetUsers”為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿參賽，內(nèi)容包括:1.明智上網(wǎng)的重要性；2.提出具體建議（兩到三條）。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。BeWiseInternetUsers____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．你校英語社團(tuán)的外教Ryan任教期滿，即將回國，學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備舉辦一場(chǎng)歡送會(huì)為他送行，你將代表社團(tuán)致辭，請(qǐng)你寫一篇英文發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示感謝；2.回顧相處時(shí)光；3.表達(dá)視圖祝愿。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearRyan，Howtimeflies!___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．你們學(xué)校英語俱樂部打算進(jìn)行以“MyFavouriteBook”為題的分享交流活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要求寫一篇發(fā)言稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.介紹這本書；2.分享這本書的理由。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dearfellowstudents,Ifeelhonoredtosharewithyoumyfavouritebookcalled____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua4．假定你是李華，你校將舉辦以“ProtectWildAnimals”為主題的英語演講比賽。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語演講稿。內(nèi)容包括：1.野生動(dòng)物的現(xiàn)狀；2.保護(hù)建議(如建立自然保護(hù)區(qū)、提高環(huán)保意識(shí)等)；3.發(fā)出倡議。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；（提示詞：naturalreserve自然保護(hù)區(qū)）2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假定你是李華，你校將于下周舉辦“中國傳統(tǒng)文化周”（TraditionalChineseCultureWeek）活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你代表學(xué)校準(zhǔn)備一篇發(fā)言稿，在明天的交換生歡迎會(huì)上發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)，希望他們也參加。內(nèi)容包括：1.活動(dòng)的目的；2.內(nèi)容安排。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Dearfriends,Welcometoourschool.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．你們學(xué)校正舉辦主題為“用英語講好中國故事”的英語演講活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你以古今中國一位令人尊敬的人物為題寫一篇演講稿，內(nèi)容包括：1.人物簡(jiǎn)介及事跡；2.對(duì)你的啟示。要求：1.詞數(shù)不少于80詞；2.開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不算入詞數(shù)內(nèi)。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的發(fā)展與普及，網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物變得越來越普遍了，甚至已經(jīng)成為我們?nèi)粘Ｉ钪械囊徊糠帧５蔷W(wǎng)絡(luò)購物有何利弊呢？你校英語社將開展關(guān)于“網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物利弊”的英語演講比賽。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)寫一篇演講稿參加比賽。內(nèi)容包括：1.網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物的好處

2.網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物的壞處

3.你的建議注意：寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．學(xué)校計(jì)劃開設(shè)電子閱覽室，大家很是興奮和期待，為此Mr.Black安排大家在英語課分組進(jìn)行討論，現(xiàn)請(qǐng)你代表小組發(fā)言，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：1.電子閱覽室的具體用途；2.能給你們帶來的好處。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。Hi,everyone!___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou!9．假定你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，負(fù)責(zé)接待到你校參觀的英國交換生。請(qǐng)為你校學(xué)生自主創(chuàng)設(shè)的校園文化長(zhǎng)廊(corridor)準(zhǔn)備一份解說詞。內(nèi)容包括：1.表示歡迎；2.長(zhǎng)廊簡(jiǎn)介。

注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearfriendsfromtheUK,I’mLiHua,PresidentoftheStudentUnion.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyou!10．在口語課上，外教Leo組織同學(xué)們討論是否使用電子翻譯筆(electronictranslationpen)來輔助英語學(xué)習(xí)。請(qǐng)你代表小組發(fā)言，內(nèi)容包括：1.小組觀點(diǎn)；2.陳述理由。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Hello,everyone!____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouforlistening!參考答案1．BeWiseInternetUsersItgoeswithoutsayingthattheInternetplaysanincreasinglyimportantroleinourlives.However,tomakethebestuseoftheInternet,wemustbewiseInternetusers.Inthefirstplace,wemustusetheInternetfortherightpurposes.Besideshavingonlineclasses,wecansearchforsomeusefulinformationontheInternetinsteadofplayingcomputergames.What’smore,weneedtolimitourtimeontheInternet.It’scommonknowledgethatlongscreentimedoesgreatharmtoourmentalhealthaswellaseyes.Nevershouldweenjoytheconvenienceoftechnologyatthecostofourhealth.Let’susetheInternetwiselyandimproveourstudieseffectively!【寫作解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生以“BeWiseInternetUsers”為題寫一篇發(fā)言稿，參加學(xué)校將舉辦的英語演講比賽。【要點(diǎn)分析】1.詞匯積累重要的：important→significant/vital/crucial目的：purpose→aim/goal/intention/objective尋找：searchfor→lookfor/seekfor2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：However,tomakethebestuseoftheInternet,wemustbewiseInternetusers.拓展句：However,wemustbewiseInternetusersinorderthatwemakethebestuseoftheInternet.【高分句型1】 ItgoeswithoutsayingthattheInternetplaysanincreasinglyimportantroleinourlives.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)同位語從句)【高分句型2】It’scommonknowledgethatlongscreentimedoesgreatharmtoourmentalhealthaswellaseyes.(運(yùn)用了it作形式主語，that引導(dǎo)的真正的主語從句)2．DearRyan,Howtimeflies!Thenewsofyourdeparturehasstirredamixofemotionswithinustoday—sadness,yetoverwhelminggratitude.Yourpresenceamongushasbeentrulyremarkable.It’snotjustyourwealthofknowledgethatwe’llmiss,butalsoyourkindness,patience,andenthusiasmthatbrightenedeachday.Themomentswe’veshared,brimmingwithlaughter,discovery,andpersonaldevelopment,aretreasuresweholddear.Yourimpactonallofusisprofoundandenduring.Withoutyourinvaluableguidance,theEnglishClubwouldn’thavebeenasenjoyableandenriching.Yourselflessdedicationisdeeplyappreciated.Wishyouallthebestonyourjourneyahead!【寫作解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一篇英文發(fā)言稿，在為外教Ryan回國舉行的歡送會(huì)上代表英語社團(tuán)致辭，為他送行?！疽c(diǎn)分析】1.詞匯積累熱情：enthusiasm→passion持久的：enduring→everlasting令人愉快的：enjoyable→pleasant奉獻(xiàn)：dedication→devotion2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：Themomentswe’veshared,brimmingwithlaughter,discovery,andpersonaldevelopment,aretreasuresweholddear.拓展句：Themomentswe’veshared,whichbrimmedwithlaughter,discovery,andpersonaldevelopment,aretreasuresweholddear.【高分句型1】It’snotjustyourwealthofknowledgethatwe’llmiss,butalsoyourkindness,patience,andenthusiasmthatbrightenedeachday.（運(yùn)用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句型）【高分句型2】Withoutyourinvaluableguidance,theEnglishClubwouldn’thavebeenasenjoyableandenriching.（運(yùn)用了含without的含蓄條件句的虛擬語氣）3．Dearfellowstudents,IfeelhonoredtosharewithyoumyfavouritebookcalledGonewiththewindwrittenbyMargaretMitchell.Scarlett,theheroine,usedtoliveacozylifeinTwelveOaksbeforetheoutbreakoftheAmericanCivilWar.Thoughshewentthroughalotofupsanddowns/trialsandtroubles,shenevergaveuphopeandcouragetocarryonwithwhatwasleftforher.Thelastlineofthebook“Afterall,tomorrowisanotherday”hasbecomemymotto.WheneverIamshortwithmyparentsorfeelfrustrated,Ireflectonmyself,realizinghowluckyIamcomparedwithScarlett.Theguttyandgrittytoneofthebookappealstomeinparticular.ItisGonewiththewindthatteachesmegumption,whichmostoftheyouthlacktoday.IdoexpectmysharingmayinspireyouandIamwillingtohearyourrecommendationofthebooksyoulove.Yours,LiHua【寫作解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一篇發(fā)言稿，介紹自己喜愛的書籍。【要點(diǎn)分析】1.詞匯積累榮幸的：honored→privileged舒適的：cozy→comfortable沮喪：frustrated→discouraged幸運(yùn)：lucky→fortunate2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：Theguttyandgrittytoneofthebookappealstomeinparticular.拓展句：Itistheguttyandgrittytoneofthebookthatappealstomeinparticular.[高分句型1]Thoughshewentthroughalotofupsanddowns/trialsandtroubles,shenevergaveuphopeandcouragetocarryonwithwhatwasleftforher.(運(yùn)用了though引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句和what引導(dǎo)賓語從句)[高分句型2]ItisGonewiththewindthatteachesmegumption,whichmostoftheyouthlacktoday.(運(yùn)用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句)4．參考范文：Goodmorningeveryone!Itismygreathonortogiveaspeechhere.Thetopicofmyspeechis“ProtectWildAnimals’’.Asweallknow,wildanimalsplayapartinkeepingthebalanceofnature.Unfortunately,theyareindanger,someofwhicharedyingout.Soitisurgenttotakesomemeasurestoprotectthem.Firstofall,weshouldestablishnaturalreserves.Secondly,weshouldraiseourawarenessofanimalprotection.Therefore,let’staketheresponsibilityanddowhatwecantoprotectthem.Ihopeinthefuturewecanliveharmoniouslyandandhappilytogetherwithwildanimals.Thankyou!【寫作解析】本篇是應(yīng)用文寫作。要求考生根據(jù)提示寫一篇以“ProtectWildAnimals”為主題的英語演講稿。【要點(diǎn)分析】1.詞匯積累主題：topic→theme采取行動(dòng)：takemeasures→takeaction首先：firstofall→tobeginwith因此：therefore→thus2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Firstofall,weshouldestablishnaturalreserves.拓展句：Firstofall,weshouldestablishnaturalreservesinordertoprovideaprotectedenvironmentwherewildanimalscanthrivewithoutthethreatofhumanencroachment.[高分句型1]Asweallknow,wildanimalsplayapartinkeepingthebalanceofnature.(as引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)[高分句型2]Unfortunately,theyareindanger,someofwhicharedyingout.(which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)5．Dearfriends,Welcometoourschool.NextweekwillwitnessourTraditionalChineseCultureWeek,whichaimstohelpyoubetterunderstandChinesetraditionalculture.Therearevariousactivitiesduringtheweek-longevent.First,aChinesepaintingexhibitionwillbearrangedwhereyoucanadmiretheartisticessenceanddevelopmentofChinesepainting.Also,ifyouarefondofmusic,theChinesefolkconcertwillbeyourcupoftea.Forcalligraphylovers,IrecommendChinesecalligraphylectures,inwhichyoucanlearnonthespothowtowrite.Isincerelyinviteallofyoutojoinus!【寫作解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一篇發(fā)言稿，在交換生歡迎會(huì)上邀請(qǐng)他們參加學(xué)校下周舉辦的“中國傳統(tǒng)文化周”（TraditionalChineseCultureWeek）活動(dòng)。【要點(diǎn)分析】1.詞匯積累各種各樣的：various→allsortsof/avarietyof欣賞：admire→appreciate喜歡：befondof→beafanof誠摯地：sincerely→genuinely2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：NextweekwillwitnessourTraditionalChineseCultureWeek,whichaimstohelpyoubetterunderstandChinesetraditionalculture.拓展句：NextweekwillwitnessourTraditionalChineseCultureWeek,aimingtohelpyoubetterunderstandChinesetraditionalculture.【高分句型1】First,aChinesepaintingexhibitionwillbearrangedwhereyoucanadmiretheartisticessenceanddevelopmentofChinesepainting.（運(yùn)用了where引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句）【高分句型2】Also,ifyouarefondofmusic,theChinesefolkconcertwillbeyourcupoftea.（運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）6．ApersonIadmiremostConfuciusisapersonwhoIadmiremost.Confuciusisawell-knownfigureinChinesehistory.Histeachingsemphasizedtheimportanceofmoralvalues,respectforelders,andsocialharmony.Confucius’thoughtsleftaprofoundimpactonChinesesociety.ThesignificanceofConfuciuscannotbeoverstated.HisteachingsshapedthemoralandethicalfoundationofChineseculture,fosteringrespectforauthority,harmoniousrelationships,andthepursuitofknowledge.Eventoday,hisideascontinuetoguideindividualsandcommunitiesinChinaandbeyond.Hestressedtheself-cultivation,respectforelders,andthepursuitofknowledge,whichservesasaguidinglightformeinourfast-pacedandinterconnectedworld.【寫作解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生以古今中國一位令人尊敬的人物為題寫一篇演講稿，參加學(xué)校正在舉辦的主題為“用英語講好中國故事”的英語演講活動(dòng)?！疽c(diǎn)分析】1.詞匯積累欽佩，尊重：admire→respect著名的：well-known→famous人物：figure→person重要性：significance→importance2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：HisteachingsshapedthemoralandethicalfoundationofChineseculture,fosteringrespectforauthority,harmoniousrelationships,andthepursuitofknowledge.拓展句：HisteachingsshapedthemoralandethicalfoundationofChineseculture,whichfosteredrespectforauthority,harmoniousrelationships,andthepursuitofknowledge.【高分句型1】ConfuciusisapersonwhoIadmiremost.(運(yùn)用了who引導(dǎo)的限制性定語從句)【高分句型2】Hestressedtheself-cultivation,respectforelders,andthepursuitofknowledge,whichservesasaguidinglightformeinourfast-pacedandinterconnectedworld.

(運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句)7．Hello,ladiesandgentlemen.MynameisLiHuaandI’mhonoredtotalkabouttheadvantagesanddisadvantagesofonlineshopping.WiththedevelopmentoftheInternet,shoppingonlinehasbecomeincreasinglycommoninourlife.Shoppingonlinehasalotofadvantages,ofwhichthemostimportantisperhapsitsconvenience.Peopledon’thavetowastealotoftheirenergyandprecioustimetogofromoneshoptoanothertochoosethegoodstheylike.Thisisespeciallydesirabletotheold,thesickandthebusypeoplewhocannotgototheshopsinperson.However,shoppingontheInternetalsohasitsdisadvantages.Onlineshoppingrequiressharingpersonalandfinancialinformation,whichcanbeaconcernforprivacyandsecurity.Oncecheated,youwillfindthatyouhavenowheretogotocomplain.Therefore,whileenjoyingthegreatbenefitsonlineshoppingoffers,weshouldalsobeawareofthepotentialrisksandtakestepstoprotectourselves.Thankyouforlistening.【寫作解析】本篇書面表達(dá)是一篇應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一篇演講稿，參加“網(wǎng)絡(luò)購物利弊”的英語演講比賽?！疽c(diǎn)分析】1.詞匯積累普遍的：common→widespread重要的：important→significant選擇：choose→select應(yīng)該：should→besupposedto2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：WiththedevelopmentoftheInternet,shoppingonlinehasbecomeincreasinglycommoninourlife.拓展句：AstheInternetdevelops,shoppingonlinehasbecomeincreasinglycommoninourlife.[高分句型1]Shoppingonlinehasalotofadvantages,ofwhichthemostimportantisperhapsitsconvenience.(運(yùn)用了“介詞+關(guān)系代詞”引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句)[高分句型2]Oncecheated,youwillfindthatyouhavenowheretogotocomplain.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)賓語從句)8．Hi,everyone!Thesedays,weallseemtobetalkingaboutthenewsthatanelectronicreadingroomwillbeopened.Itisexcitingindeed!AnE-readingroom,inourgroupview,isundoubtedlymulti-functional.Itiswherewecankeepourselvesinformedofthelatestnews,wherewecanhaveaccesstovariouslearningresourcesandwherewecansolveproblemsusingmoderntechnology,ChatGPT,forexample.SoanE-readingroom,intoday’sinformationage,canconvenientlyandefficientlymeetourgrowingthirstformoreinformationandknowledge.HopethattheE-readingroomwillbeavailablesoon!That’sall.Thankyou!【寫作解析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。學(xué)校計(jì)劃開設(shè)電子閱覽室，大家很是興奮和期待，要求考生寫一篇發(fā)言稿，討論學(xué)校開設(shè)電子閱覽室的具體用途和能給學(xué)生帶來的好處?！疽c(diǎn)分析】1.詞匯積累令人激動(dòng)的：exciting→thrilling各種各樣的：various→avarietyof解決：solve→tackle舉個(gè)例子：forexample→forinstance2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：Thesedays,weallseemtobetalkingaboutthenewsthatanelectronicreadingroomwillbeopened.Itisexcitingindeed!拓展句：Thesedays,weallseemtobetalkingaboutthenewsthatanelectronicreadingroomwillbeopened,whichisexcitingindeed!【高分句型1】Thesedays,weallseemtobetalkingaboutthenewsthatanelectronicreadingroomwillbeopened.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的同位語從句）【高分句型2】Itiswherewecankeepourselvesinformedofthelatestnews,wherewecanhaveaccesstovariouslearningresourcesandwherewecansolveproblemsusingmoderntechnology,ChatGPT,forexample.（運(yùn)用了三個(gè)where引導(dǎo)的并列的表語從句）9．DearfriendsfromtheUK,I’mLiHua,PresidentoftheStudentUnionandI’dliketoextendmywarmestwelcometoyou!Asyouwalkdownourcampusculturalcorridor,youwillbeimmersedintherichculturesofourschool.Thecorridorisadornedwithpaintings,sculptures,andotherartformsthatarecreatedbyourstudents.Itservesasaplatformtoshowcasetheirartisti