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讀后續寫閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。Oncestrangers,DavidWhitsonandAllieReimoldarenowlifelongfriendsbondedbyalife-savinggift.Fouryearsearlier,asan18-year-oldbehavioralsciencesundergraduate.AlliehadhelpedorganizethePurdueUniversityDanceMarathontoraisemoneyforanIndianachildren'shospital.Duringthe16-hourevent,she'djoinedtheNationalMarrowDonorProgram,aglobalnonprofitassistingbonemarrow(骨髓)andstemcelltransplantsforpatientswithlife-threateningbloodcancers.Allieknowsit'sofgreatsignificance.Some18,000Americansarediagnosedeachyearwithalife-threateningillness—includingleukemia(白血病),lymphoma,sicklecelldiseaseandmorethan70others-thatcouldbetreatedwithamarroworbloodcelltransplant,accordingtotheHealthResourcesandServicesAdministration.Butsomepatients.thefederalagencysays,willneverfindamatch.Davidwasjust44whenhewentfromincrediblyhealthytobeingonaventilator(呼吸機)。Whenhiscoldturnedintoafever,Davidrushedtoanemergencyroom.Heexplainedtothedoctorthat“somethingwasseriouslywrong”becausetheleftsideofhisbodywasinpain.ACTscanandothertestsrevealedhispoorphysicalcondition.Acutemyeloidleukemia-arare.fast-growingbloodandbonemarrowcanceroriginatingfromabnormalbloodstemcells-tendstoaffectolderadults,accordingtoYaleMedicine.Hebrokedownwhentwomoreroundsofchemotherapy(化療)failedtofighttheillness.Butifhefoundtherightmatch.David'scancerous.TypeB-positivebloodcouldbereplaced.Itcouldreturnhimtohealth.Butfindingadonormatchcanbechallenging:Onlyabout30%ofpatientshavearelativewhocandonate;fortherest,doctorssearchnationalandinternationaldonorregistries,accordingtotheClevelandClinic.Siblings(兄弟姐妹)areoftenthebestmatchesbecausetheyhavethesamebiologicalparents.ButDavid'sbrotherwasn'tanidealmatch.So,hisdoctorstriedtheregistries.Alliegotthecall.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ThebonemarrowwasquicklytransportedtoDavid'shospitalandtheoperationwassuccessful.____________________________________________________________________________________________大衛與艾麗骨髓捐贈故事續寫續寫要點(兩段)?第一段:?接到電話反應:細致描述Allie接到電話時的具體神態,如瞬間瞪大的眼睛、微微張開的嘴巴,以及身體的下意識緊繃,“Allie'seyeswidenedinstantly,hermouthfallingslightlyopen.Shesatupstraight,herbodytensingasshelistenedintentlytothevoiceontheotherendoftheline.”。?同意捐贈過程:深入刻畫她內心從緊張到堅定的轉變,包括腦海中閃過的各種念頭,以及與醫生交流時語氣的變化,“Atfirst,awaveofnervousnesswashedoverher,butthen,thethoughtofsavingalifefloodedhermind.Shetookadeepbreathandrepliedfirmly,hervoicesteadyassheagreedtothedonation.Sheaskedthedoctorforeverydetail,hereyesfocusedanddetermined.”。?準備捐贈細節:全面展現她在后續準備過程中的行動,如積極配合每一項體檢,認真記錄醫生的每一條叮囑,以及與家人朋友溝通時的溫馨場景,“Allieunderwentaseriesofmedicalexaminationswithgreatpatience.Shecarefullynoteddowneveryinstructionfromthedoctor,makingsurenottomissasingledetail.Herfriendsandfamilysurroundedher,offeringwordsofencouragementandhugs.Theytalkedabouttheamazingthingshewasabouttodo,andAlliefeltasenseofwarmthandsupport.”。?第二段:?手術成功反應:生動描繪David手術后逐漸蘇醒時的神情,眼中重新燃起的希望之光,以及對醫護人員表達感謝時的激動情緒,“Davidslowlyopenedhiseyes,aglimmerofhopeshiningbrightlyinthem.Helookedaround,realizingthattheoperationhadbeensuccessful.Hisfacebrokeintoahugesmile,andhegraspedthedoctor'shandtightly,hisvoicechokedwithgratitudeasheexpressedhisthanks.”。?知曉捐贈者后行動:具體描述他得知Allie是捐贈者后的反應,如迫不及待地想要聯系她,以及在聯系過程中的緊張與期待,“OncehewastoldaboutAllie,Davidcouldn'twaittoreachouttoher.Hefidgetedwithhisphone,hishandsshakingslightlyashetypedoutthefirstmessage.Hewasbothnervousandexcited,wonderingwhattosaytothepersonwhohadgivenhimasecondchanceatlife.”。?建立友誼過程:深入闡述他們在交流過程中情感的逐漸加深,分享彼此生活點滴時的歡樂,以及對未來的展望,“Astheystartedcommunicating,theysharedtheirstories,laughingandcryingtogether.DavidtoldAllieabouthispastandhisnewplansforthefuture.Allielistenedintently,feelingadeepconnectionwithDavid.Theybothknewthatthislife-changingeventhadboundthemtogetherforever,andtheylookedforwardtoalong-lastingfriendship.”。?情感線(150字)?Allie從接到捐贈電話時的緊張不安,到意識到能拯救生命后的堅定,在準備捐贈過程中得到家人朋友支持,內心充滿溫暖。David在手術成功前瀕臨絕望,成功后重燃希望,得知Allie是捐贈者后滿懷感激,在與Allie交流過程中,兩人情感不斷加深,從陌生走向親密,Allie因捐贈成功而自豪,David則因重獲新生且結識恩人而對未來充滿期待。?故事線(6條)?18歲的Allie在大學期間協助組織舞蹈馬拉松活動,并加入國家骨髓捐贈計劃。?David44歲時因急性髓系白血病,兩輪化療失敗,急需骨髓移植,其兄弟并非理想匹配者,醫生轉而求助捐贈登記庫。?Allie接到捐贈通知,克服緊張同意捐贈,隨后積極配合體檢,做好身心準備。?骨髓成功運輸至David所在醫院,手術順利完成。?David術后恢復,從醫生處得知Allie是捐贈者,主動聯系她。?David和Allie交流互動,分享故事,情感升溫,成為摯友,共同展望未來。主旨升華句5句英文?Thisheart-warmingstoryvividlyillustratesthatinthefaceoflife-threateningillnesses,theselflessactofastrangercanbeabeaconofhope,lightingupthedarkestcornersofdespair.?這個溫馨的故事生動地表明,在面對危及生命的疾病時,陌生人的無私之舉可以成為希望的燈塔,照亮絕望的最黑暗角落。?ThroughAllie'scourageousdecisiontodonateandDavid'snew-foundleaseonlife,weareremindedthatthepowerofhumankindnessknowsnoboundsandcanbridgethegapbetweenstrangers,creatingalastingbond.?通過Allie勇敢的捐贈決定和David重獲新生,我們被提醒,人類善良的力量是無限的,它可以跨越陌生人之間的鴻溝,創造出持久的聯系。?ThejourneyfromAllie'sinitialnervousnesstoherunwaveringdetermination,andDavid'stransformationfromthebrinkofhopelessnesstoalifefilledwithhope,showcasestheresilienceofthehumanspiritandtheprofoundimpactofaltruism.?從Allie最初的緊張到她堅定不移的決心,以及David從絕望邊緣到充滿希望的生活的轉變,展示了人類精神的韌性和利他主義的深遠影響。?Thisnarrativeservesasapoignantreminderthateverysmallactofkindness,likeAllie'sdecisiontojointhedonorprogram,canhavearippleeffect,culminatinginalife-savingeventthatchangeslivesforever.?這個故事有力地提醒我們,每一個小小的善舉,比如Allie決定加入捐贈計劃,都可以產生連鎖反應,最終促成一個拯救生命的事件,永遠改變人們的生活。FromthemomentAllieansweredthecalltothedeep-seatedfriendshipthatblossomedbetweenherandDavid,weseethatinthemostunexpectedways,lifecanbringpeopletogether,andkindnesscanbethecatalystforabeautifulnewbeginning.?從Allie接起電話的那一刻,到她與David之間綻放出深厚的友誼,我們看到,生活可以以最意想不到的方式將人們聚集在一起,而善良可以成為美好新開始的催化劑。?寫作示范一?Alliegotthecall.Herheartracedassheheardthenews.Atfirst,ashiverofnervousnessrandownherspine.Butthen,shethoughtaboutthelifehanginginthebalance.Shetookadeepbreathand,withouthesitation,agreedtothedonation.Inthedaysthatfollowed,shewentthroughabatteryofmedicaltests.Thedoctorsexplainedeverythingindetail,andAllielistenedintently,askingquestionswhenevershewasunsure.Herfriendsandfamilywereherpillarsofsupport,constantlyreassuringher.Shepreparedherselfmentally,imaginingthejoyshewouldbringtotherecipient.?ThebonemarrowwasquicklytransportedtoDavid'shospitalandtheoperationwassuccessful.David,whohadbeenteeteringontheedgeofdespair,nowfeltanewsenseofvitality.Asherecovered,histhoughtswerefilledwithgratitudeforhisunknowndonor.Whenhewaswellenough,hisdoctortoldhimaboutAllie.Eagerly,hereachedouttoher.Theybegantoexchangemessages,sharingtheirstories.Davidexpressedhisheartfeltthanks,andAlliewasoverjoyedtoseethepositiveimpactofherdonation.Theirconnectiongrewstronger,andtheyknewthatthisexperiencehadboundthemtogetherforlife.?寫作示范二?Alliegotthecall.Hereyeswidenedinsurprise,andherhandstrembledslightly.Butasthedoctorexplainedthesituation,asenseofpurposefilledher.Sheimmediatelysaidyestothedonation.Inthefollowingdays,sheunderwentvariousmedicalexaminations.Thedoctorswereimpressedbyhercalmnessanddetermination.Shespenttimewithherfamily,sharingherdecision.Theywereproudofherandofferedwordsofencouragement.Alliealsostartedtothinkaboutthepersonwhoselifeshewasabouttosave,prayingforasuccessfulprocedure.?ThebonemarrowwasquicklytransportedtoDavid'shospitalandtheoperationwassuccessful.David,whohadalmostlostallhope,nowhadanewleaseonlife.Asherecuperated,hewasfilledwithcuriosityabouthisdonor.Oncehewasstrongenough,hisdoctortoldhimaboutAllie.Hewastednotimeincontactingher.Theystartedtalkingonthephone,andtheirconversationswerefilledwithlaughterandemotion.DavidthankedAllieprofusely,andAlliewastouchedbyhisgratitude.Theirfriendshipblossomed,andtheylookedforwardtomeetingeachotherinperson,excitedtobuildonthisspecialconnection.?參考答案Alliegotthecall.Whenshelearnedherbloodmatchedsomeoneinneed,shewasexcited.Despitethepotentialdiscomfortanddangersduringthebonemarrowdonationprocess,sheknewsh
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