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讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Onewarm,sunnymorning,Marshajumpedrightoutofbed.Todaywasthefirstdayofsummervacationandalsothelastdayshe’dbespendingwithTanya,herverybestfriend.Tanyawasgoingtocampinanotherstate.She’dbegoneallsummer.MarshaandTanyaalwaysspenttheirsummerstogether.Thisonewouldbenofunwithouther!Marsha’smomcamein.“What’sthematter,Rabbit?”shesaid.“ImissTanyaalready.Isn’tthatsilly?”Marshasaid.“No,”hermothersaidsoftly.“Missingabestfriendisn’tsillyatall.”Marsha’seyeswerewet.“Iknowhowyoufeel.”“Youdo?”askedMarsha.Marsha’smomnodded.“IhadabestfriendwhenIwasyourage.Andshewentawaytocamp,too.”“Ifeltprettysad,”Marsha’smomsaid.“Iwantedmybestfriendtothinkaboutme.SoIgavehersomething.”“What?”askedMarsha.“Igavehermybestnecklace,”hermomsaid.“Youdid?”askedMarsha.“Well,Iwantedhertohaveit,”Marsha’smomsaid,“MaybeyoucouldgiveTanyaoneofyourfavoritethingstotaketocamp.Howaboutadoll?Thenshewillneverforgetthatyouareherbestfriend.”Marshawipedhereyes.“Mom,that’sagreatidea!”shesaid.“AreyougoingtogiveTanyayourGlendaGlitterdoll?”saidMarsha’smom.“Yes,Mom,”shesaid.“ThisistheoneIwanthertohave.ButnowI’mgoingtogetGlendaallniceandclean.”Soon,GlendaGlitterlookedjustlikenew.Nextitwastimetodressthedoll.Marsharantoherroom.Inaflashshewasback.Herhandswerefullofdoll’sdresses.“ThisistheoneIlikebest,”shesaid.“AndIknowTanyalikesitbest,too.”“Let’ssee.IthinkIcanfixthislittlerip(口子).”Marsha’smomwasgoodatfixingthings.Thedolldresssoonlookedgoodasnew.“Look,Mom!”shesaid.“Glendalooksbeautiful.”“Youknow,Kitten,”saidMarsha’smom,“Tanyawilllikethispresentsomuch.”“Tanyawillbeleavingsoon,”shesaid.“Webetterhurryup.”MarshaandhermomwalkedovertoTanya’shouse.Theyrangthebell.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Marshahidthedollbehindherback.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________TanyaandMarshaputtheirpresentsineachother’shands.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________續(xù)寫Marsha與Tanya的故事續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)第一段:重點(diǎn)描寫Marsha將藏在背后的娃娃送出時(shí)的細(xì)節(jié),包括她的表情、動(dòng)作、心理活動(dòng),以及Tanya看到禮物瞬間的反應(yīng),如驚訝、感動(dòng)等。第二段:著重刻畫兩人交換禮物后的互動(dòng),如交流對(duì)禮物的感受,表達(dá)對(duì)彼此的不舍,以及對(duì)未來(lái)相聚的期待等。情感線起初,Marsha因好友Tanya即將遠(yuǎn)行而滿心不舍,在送禮物時(shí)緊張又忐忑,擔(dān)心Tanya不喜歡。Tanya收到禮物后,驚喜與感動(dòng)溢于言表,Marsha的緊張瞬間消散。當(dāng)Tanya回贈(zèng)禮物時(shí),Marsha心中滿是溫暖,兩人都為這份真摯的友誼動(dòng)容,從不舍到堅(jiān)定對(duì)友誼長(zhǎng)存的信念。故事線Marsha帶著藏在背后的娃娃來(lái)到Tanya家,準(zhǔn)備送出禮物。Tanya開門見到Marsha十分興奮,Marsha緊張地拿出娃娃。Tanya看到娃娃后,驚喜不已,對(duì)Marsha表示感謝并緊緊擁抱娃娃。Tanya回贈(zèng)Marsha一個(gè)裝有自制友誼手鏈的小盒子。Marsha打開盒子看到手鏈,立刻戴上,兩人緊緊相擁。盡管即將分離,她們堅(jiān)信友誼會(huì)在這個(gè)夏天及未來(lái)持續(xù)深厚。主旨升華句Truefriendshiptranscendsdistance,justlikethebondbetweenMarshaandTanyathatremainsunbreakabledespitethesummerapart.Theirexchangeofgiftssymbolizestheeternalconnectionoftheirhearts,provingthatfriendshipisapreciousgiftthatlastsforever.Theloveandcaretheyshowthroughthesesimplepresentsremindusthattruefriendsarealwaysthere,inspirit,evenwhenphysicallyseparated.AsMarshaandTanyapartwaysforthesummer,theirfriendship,strengthenedbythisgift-givingmoment,becomesabeaconofhope,showingthatdistanceisnoobstacletoalastingfriendship.Thisheart-warmingexchangebetweenMarshaandTanyaisatestamenttothepoweroffriendship,whichcanwithstandthetestoftimeanddistance,bringingwarmthandcomforttotheirhearts.寫作示范示范一Marshahidthedollbehindherback.AsTanyaswungthedooropen,herfacebrightenedwithjoy.“Marsha!You’rehere!”shecheered.Marsha,withaslightlytremblingvoice,said,“Tanya,Ihaveapresentforyou.”ShecarefullypulledoutGlendaGlitter.“Thisismydearestdoll.Ihopeitcankeepyoucompanyatcampandmakeyouthinkofme.”Tanya’seyeswidenedinastonishment,andherlipscurvedintoabigsmile.“Marsha,it’samazing!Iloveitsomuch!”TanyaandMarshaputtheirpresentsineachother’shands.Afterexpressinghergratitude,TanyahandedMarshaasmall,delicatelywrappedbox.“Foryou,Marsha.It’saphotoalbumfilledwithourmemories.Soyouwon’tforgetallthefunwehad.”Marshaopenedit,hereyesmistingupasshesawtheirpictures.“Tanya,thisisperfect.I’llcherishitalways.”Theyembracedtightly,knowingthatthoughmileswouldseparatethem,theirfriendship,likethememoriesinthealbum,wouldbeforeverengravedintheirhearts.示范二Marshahidthedollbehindherback.WhenTanyaopenedthedoor,Marshacouldbarelycontainheremotions.“Tanya,”shebegan,hervoicesoft,“Ibroughtyousomething.”Slowly,sherevealedGlendaGlitter.“Thisdollmeanstheworldtome,andIwantyoutohaveitforthesummer.”Tanyawasspeechlessforamoment,thensheexclaimed,“Marsha,thisisthemostwonderfulgiftever!Thankyou!”Shehuggedthedollclose,asifitwereaprecioustreasure.TanyaandMarshaputtheirpresentsineachother’shands.Then,TanyashylypresentedMarshawithahand-paintedwoodenbox.“Imadethisforyou.InsidearelittlenoteswithallthethingsIloveaboutyou.”Marshaopenedthebox,herfingersgentlytouchingthenotes.“Tanya,thisissosweet.I’llreadthemwheneverImissyou.”Theystoodthere,holdingtheirgifts,realizingthatthesetokensweremorethanjustitems;theyweresymbolsoftheirunbreakablefriendshipthatwouldbridgethegapduringtheirtimeapart.【答案】Onepossibleversion:Paragraph1:Marshahidthedollbehindherback.Marshaandhermomwentinside.TheysaidhellotoTanyaandhermom.“We’restillpacking,”Tanya’smomsaid.MarshawentovertoTanya.“Ihavesomethingforyou,”saidMarsha.“Wait!”Tanyasaid.“Ihavesomethingforyou,too.”Sheturnedandranoutoftheroom.Tanyawasbackinaflash.Shewasholdingsomethingbehindherback.Marshasti
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