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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Thesoundofthestartinggunechoed(回蕩)throughtheair,andMia’sheartwasracing.Shewasonthestartinglineofthestatetrackchampionship,holdingherbreath.Theotherrunnersaroundherwerefocused,theireyesonthetrackahead.ThiswasthemomentMiahadworkedforherentirelife—adefiningmoment,onethatcouldchangeeverything.However,thejourneyleadinguptothismomentwasfarfromeasy.Miahadstartedrunningwhenshewaseightyearsold.Fromtheverybeginning,shedreamedofwinningastatechampionship.Foryears,shetrainedharderthananyone,pushingherbodytothelimit,alwaysaimingforabiggerimprovement.Buttwomonthsago,shefacedtheworstsetbackofherlife——shepulledherhamstring(腘繩肌)duringtrainingforthebiggame.Theinjuryforcedhertostoprunningpletelyforweeks.Thepainanddisappointmentwereunbearable.Everytimeshetriedtogetbackonthetrack,herbodyfeltweak.Shecouldn’tshakethefeelingofuncertainty.WhatifIcouldneverrunagain?WhatifImissedmyoneshotatthechampionship?Hercoachbelievedinherabilities,though.“Thejourneytosuccessisn’tjustabouttalent,”hetoldheroneeveningastheyreviewedherrecoveryplan.“It’saboutbelievinginyourselfevenwhentimesgethard.Focusongettingbetterstepbystep.”Miakeptthosewordsinmindasshestartedherslow,painfulrecovery.Shefocusedonherphysicaltherapy(理療),rebuildingstrengthwitheachpassingday.Slowly,shestartedtotrustherbodyagain.Everyworkoutwasachallenge.Hermusclesburned,andherlegsshook,butMianevergaveup.Now,standingatthestartingline,herjourneyfeltbothunrealandachievable.Shehadtrainedthroughpain,throughselfdoubt,andthroughtears.Today,shewouldprovethatalltheeffortsshehadmadewereworthwhile.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。ThesoundofthestartinggunpulledMiaawayfromherthoughts.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Finally,Miacrossedthefinishline,withthecrowdcheering.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意Mia從八歲起就懷揣贏得州田徑錦標(biāo)賽冠軍的夢想,多年來刻苦訓(xùn)練。然而,在大賽前兩個月的訓(xùn)練中,她拉傷了腘繩肌,這使她被迫停訓(xùn)數(shù)周,期間痛苦又失望,還不斷自我懷疑。但教練的鼓勵讓她堅定信念,專注于物理治療,慢慢恢復(fù)。如今,她站在了州田徑錦標(biāo)賽的起跑線上,過往的艱辛與此刻的期待交織,她渴望證明自己的努力是值得的。故事山分析開端:Mia八歲開始跑步,夢想贏得州冠軍,多年來刻苦訓(xùn)練。發(fā)展:大賽前兩個月訓(xùn)練時拉傷腘繩肌,被迫停訓(xùn),陷入痛苦與自我懷疑。高潮:站在州田徑錦標(biāo)賽起跑線上,回憶過往,準(zhǔn)備迎接挑戰(zhàn)。結(jié)局(待續(xù)寫):Mia在比賽中奮力奔跑,克服困難,完成比賽。尾聲(待續(xù)寫):Mia沖過終點線,收獲成功的喜悅,領(lǐng)悟堅持的意義。伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)Mia多年的刻苦訓(xùn)練和對冠軍的渴望,暗示她在比賽中會全力以赴,續(xù)寫中可體現(xiàn)她在比賽中頑強拼搏的精神。教練的鼓勵話語“相信自己,一步步變好”,在續(xù)寫中可回應(yīng)為Mia在比賽中遇到困難時,回憶起教練的話,重新振作。受傷后的痛苦和自我懷疑,可在續(xù)寫中體現(xiàn)為比賽中傷痛的陰影短暫出現(xiàn),但Mia克服了心理障礙。緩慢又痛苦的恢復(fù)過程,暗示比賽中她的身體可能仍有不適,續(xù)寫時可描述她在比賽中如何克服身體的疲憊和傷痛。站在起跑線的期待和決心,在續(xù)寫中可回應(yīng)為她在比賽中始終保持堅定的信念,向著終點沖刺。續(xù)寫要點(兩段)第一段:著重描寫比賽開始后Mia的狀態(tài),如起跑時的爆發(fā)力、比賽過程中遇到的困難(如傷痛復(fù)發(fā)、體力不支、對手強勁等),以及她如何憑借堅定的信念和頑強的毅力去克服。第二段:描述Mia沖過終點線后的場景,包括她的表情、動作,周圍觀眾的反應(yīng),以及她內(nèi)心的感受,突出成功后的喜悅和對自己堅持的感慨。情感線從受傷后的痛苦、失望和自我懷疑,到恢復(fù)過程中的堅持與努力,再到站在起跑線的緊張與期待,比賽中的拼搏與堅定,最后沖過終點線的喜悅與自豪,展現(xiàn)Mia在整個過程中的情感變化。故事線比賽槍響,Mia起跑。比賽中Mia遇到困難,如傷痛復(fù)發(fā)。Mia回憶教練的話,堅定信念。Mia克服困難,繼續(xù)加速沖刺。Mia沖過終點線。Mia享受成功的喜悅,領(lǐng)悟堅持的意義。主旨升華句Successisnotjustaboutcrossingthefinishline;it'sabouttheunwaveringdeterminationandperseveranceduringthejourney.Thegreatestvictoriesarenotonlymeasuredbytheresultsbutalsobytheobstaclesweoverealongtheway.Inthefaceofadversity,it'sourbeliefinourselvesandourdreamsthatcanleadustoachievetheseeminglyimpossible.Thepathtosuccessisoftenpavedwithpainanddoubt,butit'sourabilitytoriseabovethemthatdefinesourtruestrength.Truechampionsarenotthosewhoneverfall,butthosewhoalwaysgetupandkeeprunningtowardstheirgoals.寫作示范示范一ThesoundofthestartinggunpulledMiaawayfromherthoughts.Withaburstofenergy,sheshotforwardlikeanarrow.However,halfwaythroughtherace,asharppainshotthroughherhamstring.Foramoment,fearanddoubtcloudedhermind.Butthen,sherememberedhercoach'swords.Summoningallherstrength,shegrittedherteethandpushedon.Herlegsburned,andherbreathwasragged,butsherefusedtoslowdown.Finally,Miacrossedthefinishline,withthecrowdcheering.Shecollapsedtotheground,exhaustedbutelated.Tearsofjoystreameddownherfaceassherealizedthatallherhardworkhadpaidoff.Lookingaroundatthecheeringcrowd,shefeltadeepsenseofprideandacplishment.Thisvictorywasnotjustaboutwinningarace;itwasaboutprovingtoherselfthatshecouldovereanyobstacle.示范二ThesoundofthestartinggunpulledMiaawayfromherthoughts.Shedashedoff,hereyesfixedonthefinishline.Astheraceprogressed,shefoundherselffallingbehindatoughpetitor.Panicstartedtosetin,andherselfdoubtresurfaced.Butthen,shethoughtaboutthecountlesshoursoftrainingandthepainshehadendured.Gatheringhercourage,shedugdeepandincreasedherspeed.Hermusclesscreamedinprotest,butsheignoredthepain.Finally,Miacrossedthefinishline,withthecrowdcheering.Shestoodthere,gaspingforbreath,ahugesmileonherface.Theaudiencerushedtowardsher,congratulatingher.Atthatmoment,sheunderstoodthatthejourneyhadbeenmoreimportantthanthedestination.Herperseverancehadnotonlymadeherawinnerbutalsoastrongerperson.【答案】ThesoundofthestartinggunpulledMiaawayfromherthoughts.Miabegantorun,keepinganevenandcontrolledbreath.Thefirstlapwenteffortlessly.AsMianearedthehalfwaypoint,herlegsweretired,butsherefusedtostop.“Youcandothis,”shethought.“Onelapatatime.”Thelastlapcame,an
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