讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Thispastsummer,Ijoinedmysister'sfamilyfortheirannualAdirondackvacationinarentedcottageonalake,thesameplacemyfamilyhasstayedsinceIwasalittlekid.Thereareplentyofactivitiestokeepeveryonebusy:swimming,fishingandsandcastlebuildingonthebeach.Bythethirdday,Ihadnoticedthatmyten-year-oldniece,Jannie,hadspentmostofhertimewatchingcableTVandbrowsingthroughthegiftshopsintown.NotexactlythewildernessexperienceIrememberedfrommyyouth.So,atdinner,ItoldJannieweshouldhiketothetopofthemountainacrossthelakethefollowingmorning,whichwascalledRockyPointbecausethepeakisbareandrock-covered."Well."repliedJannie,"TomorrowtherearesomeshowsontheDisneyChannel,soI'mgoingtobeprettybusy.""WhenyourmotherandIusedtocomeherewhenwewereyourage,weweretoobusyswimmingandhikingupmountains.""Soundsmorelikepunishmentthanavacation."Sheshruggedhershoulders."Besides,Idon'tthinkIcanwalkthatfar."WhenIsaiditonlytookahalf-hourofsteadywalkingtogettothetop.Shegrumbled,"Fine,I'llgo."Iknewshewasagreeingjusttoshutmeup,butIwouldtakeanythingIcouldget.Thenextmorningwasaperfectdayforahike,withsunshineandclearskies.Igotupearlyandtooksomesandwichesandwaterbottles,whichItuckedintomybackpackalongwiththebugsprayandthecamera.Janniecameshufflingdownstairs,sigheddramatically,rolledhereyesandannouncedinaveryunenthusiastic,robot-likevoice."I'mreadytogohiking,UncleDavid."Anyway,weclimbedintomycaranddrovetothetrailheadabouttenminutesaway.Aswestoodattheedgeoftheparkinglotandlookeddowntheshadedtrailthatledintothewoods."Iamstillnotsurethisisagoodidea,butifyouandMomcoulddoit,Icantoo,Iguess."注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Paragraphl:Forthemomentshewasdeterminedtostartourjourney.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Awhilelaterwedidittothetop.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________珍妮的徒步之旅續(xù)寫續(xù)寫要點第一段：重點描述徒步過程中Jannie的狀態(tài)變化。開始可能還會有些不情愿，但隨著在森林中看到更多有趣的事物，如各種小動物、獨特的植物等，她會逐漸被大自然吸引，變得越來越興奮和好奇，與“我”的交流也增多，不再抵觸徒步。第二段：到達山頂后，著重描寫Jannie看到景色時的震撼與喜悅，她可能會興奮地歡呼、四處張望，盡情享受美景。然后可以寫我們在山頂休息、吃東西，她向“我”表達對這次徒步的喜愛和感激，最后以她表示以后會更愿意參與戶外活動結(jié)尾，體現(xiàn)她的轉(zhuǎn)變。情感線開始Jannie對徒步充滿抵觸和不情愿，在徒步過程中，她逐漸被自然吸引，從無聊、無奈轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)楹闷妗⑴d奮，到達山頂看到美景后，內(nèi)心充滿震撼與喜悅，最后對“我”帶她來徒步充滿感激，并且對戶外活動有了新的認識和喜愛，情感從消極抵觸轉(zhuǎn)為積極熱愛。故事線Jannie最初不情愿地答應去徒步。我們出發(fā)前往徒步地點，開始走在林間小道上。徒步過程中Jannie看到森林里的動植物，逐漸產(chǎn)生興趣。我們繼續(xù)前行，克服一些小困難，如爬坡、過小溪等。最終到達山頂，Jannie被美景震撼。Jannie表示以后會更愿意參與戶外活動，我們的關(guān)系也更加親近。主旨升華句Fromthisexperience,Jannielearnedthatnatureholdsendlesswondersthatarewaitingtobediscoveredifwearewillingtostepoutofourcomfortzones.（從這次經(jīng)歷中，Jannie學到了如果我們愿意走出舒適區(qū)，大自然有著無盡的奇跡等待我們?nèi)グl(fā)現(xiàn)。）ThishikenotonlyshowedJanniethebeautyoftheoutdoorsbutalsotaughtherthatchallengescanleadtowonderfulrewards.（這次徒步不僅向Jannie展示了戶外的美麗，還教會了她挑戰(zhàn)能帶來美妙的回報。）ThejourneyupthemountainwasnotjustaphysicalwalkbutaspiritualadventureforJannie,openinghereyestoaworldshehadpreviouslyoverlooked.（對Jannie來說，爬山的旅程不僅僅是一次身體上的行走，更是一次精神上的冒險，讓她看到了一個她以前忽略的世界。）Throughthishike,Jannierealizedthatthebestthingsinlifeoftencomewhenweembracetheunknownandstepintothegreatoutdoors.（通過這次徒步，Jannie意識到生活中最美好的事情往往在我們擁抱未知、走進大自然時到來。）ThisexperiencewithJanniemademeunderstandthatsharingthebeautyofnaturewithotherscanbringaboutpositivechangesandcreatelastingmemories.（和Jannie的這次經(jīng)歷讓我明白，與他人分享大自然的美麗能帶來積極的改變，創(chuàng)造永恒的記憶。）寫作示范示范一Paragraph1:Forthemomentshewasdeterminedtostartourjourney.Janniewalkedslowlyatfirst,butaswewentdeeperintotheforest,hereyeswerecaughtbyasquirreljumpingamongthetrees.Shechasedafteritcuriously,herfacefullofexcitement.Then,weheardtheclearsongofabird.Shestoppedtolistencarefully,asmilespreadingacrossherface."UncleDavid,it'ssonicehere,"shesaidhappily.Wewalkedon,andshefoundabeautifulwildflower.Shebentdowntosmellit,hereyesshiningwithjoy.Paragraph2:Awhilelaterwedidittothetop.Janniewascompletelyamazedbytheview.Thelakelookedlikeabluegeminthesunlight,andthemountainsinthedistancewerecoveredwithgreenforests."Thisisamazing!I'veneverseensuchabeautifulscene,"sheshoutedexcitedly.Wesatonastoneandateoursandwiches,enjoyingthepeacefulmoment."Thankyou,UncleDavid.I'msogladIcame,"shesaid,huggingme.Ismiledandsaid,"You'rewelcome.Ihopeyou'lllovenaturemorefromnowon."Shenoddedfirmly,hereyesfullofdetermination.示范二Paragraph1:Forthemomentshewasdeterminedtostartourjourney.Aswewalkedalongthetrail,Jannie'smoodgraduallychanged.Shewasattractedbyasmallstreambesidethepath.Theclearwaterwasflowinghappily,andthereweresomecolorfulpebblesatthebottom.Shesquatteddownandreachedoutherhandtotouchthewater,giggling."It'ssocool!"sheexclaimed.Then,abutterflyflewby,andshechaseditforawhile.Sheseemedtohaveforgottenthatshedidn'twanttocomeatfirst.Witheachnewdiscovery,herstepsbecamelighterandmoreenergetic.Paragraph2:Awhilelaterwedidittothetop.Janniegaspedinastonishmentwhenshesawthepanoramicview.Thevastskywasclearandblue,andthewhitecloudswerelikecottoncandy.Thewholelakeandthesurroundingscenerywerelikeabeautifulpainting."Ican'tbelievehowbeautifulitis,"shemurmured.Wetooksomepicturestorecordthismoment.Janniesaid,"ThishikeisthebestthingI'veeverdone.I'lldefinitelycomeagain."Iwasgladtoseeherchangeandsaid,"Natureisfullofsurprises.Wejustneedtoexploreit."Shelookedatmeandnodded,herfacefullofsmiles.【參考答案】Forthemomentshewasdeterminedtostartourjourney.About200yardsintotheforest,thetrailbegantoclimbasteepslope.Ipointedoutsomerarely-seentreesandfloweringplants,whichIexplainedwereendangeredspecies.Shedidn’tsharemyenthusiasm.Shewasthirsty,tired,sweatyandbored.Ihandedherthewaterbottleasshesatonafallenlogandtookabreak.“Youknow,Ithinkwe’realmosttothetop,”Itoldher.“Youalreadysaidthatthreetimes,andwe’renotthereyet.”shereplied.Shegrumbledanothercomplainaswecontinuedon.Shemightnot