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讀后續寫閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。Neesha,an8-year-oldgoldenretriever,isaluckydog.Afterspendingafortnightonherownwithoutfoodorrealshelter,thetoughdogwasaccidentallyspottedbyacouple,whoinspiteofthecoldweather,werehikingtherangeandhappenedonher.Twoweeksearlier,Neesha’sownershadtakenherandtheirotherdog,aGermanshepherdnamedHarley,forsomeoutdoorexercise.Terrifiedbyadeer,bothdogstookoff.Harleyfoundhiswaybacktotheparkinglotthenextday,butNeeshadidnot.Thefamilymadeathoroughsearch.Theyleftalaundrybasketofunwashedclothingnearthespotwherethey’dlastseenNeeshaontheoffchancethatshe’dhomeinonthefamiliarsmellmarker.TheyeventurnedtotheInternetforhelpinfindingNeesha-buttherewasstillnosignofher.“Wepostedourexperienceonsocialmedia.Thenaweekendlater,wewerestilllookingforher.Wewerestartingtogiveuphope,”thepet’sownersMaryandherhusbandDavidtoldTheIrishTimes.Eventually,thefamilybegantoacceptthatNeeshamightnotbecominghome.“Wejustthoughtsheis8,andit’sbeentwoweeks.Therewasnowayshecouldsurvive.”DoctorsCiaraNolanandJeanFrancoisBonnetmustbetrulydedicatedhikers.TheybravedtheelementsonthefreezingdaywhenthecoupledecidedtoreachoneofWicklow’speaks.Astheynearedthetop,Nolanwasshockedtoseeadogtremblinginthesnow.“Shewasfrightened,freezingcold.Shedidn’thaveenoughenergytobarkorstand,”Bonnetsaidinaninterview.“Wetriedtogethertowalk,butshecouldn’tstand.Sowecoveredherwithourspareclothesandgavehersomefood.”注意1.續寫詞數應為150左右;2.續寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好。BonnetliftedNeeshaontohisbackforthelongpathdownthemountain.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________MaryandDavidcouldscarcelybelieveitwhentheylearnedtheirdoghadbeenfoundalive.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________妮莎救援故事續寫續寫要點第一段:著重描寫下山途中的艱難,如惡劣天氣加劇行走困難,Bonnet體力不支但仍堅持。到達山下后,豐富救助細節,如描述Neesha在獸醫處的治療過程,醫生的囑咐等。第二段:深入刻畫主人與狗狗團聚時的互動,如主人回憶尋找時的艱辛,表達對狗狗的思念。以及狗狗回家后的生活,像與家中另一只狗狗Harley的重逢,展現家庭的溫暖。情感線起初,狗狗Neesha獨自在山中時恐懼、絕望。Bonnet和Nolan發現它時,它害怕又虛弱。救助過程中,隨著人們的關愛,它逐漸安心。主人Mary和David在尋找無果時,從滿懷希望到近乎絕望。得知Neesha被找到,他們驚喜、激動,團聚時滿是喜悅與感恩,最后一家人因這次經歷更加珍惜彼此。故事線Bonnet背著Neesha下山時,狂風大作,山路愈發難行,但他咬牙堅持。到達山下,獸醫為Neesha輸液、檢查凍傷情況,囑咐保暖和營養補充。Bonnet和Nolan聯系主人,告知Neesha的情況,主人激動得語無倫次。主人趕到獸醫處,與Neesha相擁,回憶起尋找時的日夜煎熬。Neesha回家后,與Harley歡快玩耍,逐漸恢復往日活力。一家人將Neesha的照片和救援故事制作成相冊,紀念這段難忘經歷。主旨升華句ThisheartwarmingrescueofNeesharemindsusthatinthefaceofharshnature,thepowerofhumankindnesscanbringhopeandwarmth,bridgingthegapbetweenhumansandanimals.(妮莎這次溫暖人心的救援提醒我們,在惡劣的自然面前,人類善良的力量能帶來希望和溫暖,拉近人與動物之間的距離。)ThestoryofNeeshanotonlyshowcasestheunwaveringbondbetweenpetsandtheirownersbutalsohighlightstheselflessdedicationofstrangerswhoarewillingtogotogreatlengthstosavealife.(妮莎的故事不僅展示了寵物與主人之間堅定不移的紐帶,還凸顯了陌生人無私奉獻,愿意竭盡全力拯救生命的精神。)ThroughNeesha'sjourneyfrombeinglosttobeingfound,welearnthathopeneverfades,andeveninthedarkestmoments,thereisalwaysachanceforahappyending.(通過妮莎從迷路到被找到的經歷,我們明白希望永不磨滅,即使在最黑暗的時刻,也總有迎來美好結局的可能。)Thisincrediblerescueisatestamenttothefactthateverylife,nomatterhowsmallorseeminglyinsignificant,isprecious,andourcompassioncanmakeaprofounddifference.(這次令人難以置信的救援證明,每一個生命,無論多么渺小或看似微不足道,都是珍貴的,我們的同情心能產生深遠的影響。)Neesha'sstoryservesasabeautifulreminderthattheloveandcareweextendtoanimalscancreatelastingmemoriesandstrengthenthespecialconnectionwesharewiththem.(妮莎的故事美好地提醒我們,我們給予動物的愛與關懷能創造永恒的回憶,加強我們與它們之間特殊的聯系。)寫作示范一第一段BonnetliftedNeeshaontohisbackforthelongpathdownthemountain.Thewindhowled,andthesnow-coveredtrailwastreacherous.Bonnet'slegsached,buthisdeterminationtosaveNeeshaneverwavered.Nolanheldaflashlight,lightingthewayandconstantlyencouragingBonnet.Whentheyfinallyreachedthefootofthemountain,theyrushedNeeshatothevet.Thevet,withaworriedlook,immediatelystartedanIVdriptowarmherupandexaminedherfrost-bittenpaws.Hecarefullybandagedthewoundsandprescribedspecialfoodtohelpherregainstrength.第二段MaryandDavidcouldscarcelybelieveitwhentheylearnedtheirdoghadbeenfoundalive.Theyspedtothevet's,theirheartspoundingwithexcitement.AssoonastheysawNeeshalyingonthetable,Maryrushedforwardandhuggedhergently,tearsstreamingdownherface.DavidthankedBonnetandNolanoverandoveragain.Neesha,thoughweak,lickedMary'shandaffectionately.Backhome,NeeshawasgreetedbyHarleywithenthusiasticbarksandtail-wagging.Inthefollowingdays,Neesharecoveredquickly,andthefamilyoftenlookedbackonthisexperience,gratefulforthekindnessofstrangersandthehappyreunion.寫作示范二第一段BonnetliftedNeeshaontohisbackforthelongpathdownthemountain.Thesnowwasgettingheavier,andBonnet'sstepsbecameunsteady.Nolansupportedhimfromtheside,makingsuretheydidn'tslip.TheytalkedtoNeeshaalltheway,tryingtokeepherspiritsup.Onceatthevet's,thevetcleanedNeesha'smattedfur,removedthethornsfromherpaws,andgaveherathoroughcheck-up.HetoldBonnetandNolanthatNeeshawasluckytohavebeenfoundintime.BonnetthencalledMaryandDavid,hisvoicefilledwithexcitementashesharedthegoodnews.第二段MaryandDavidcouldscarcelybelieveitwhentheylearnedtheirdoghadbeenfoundalive.Theyarrivedatthevet'sinahurry.MarykneltdownbesideNeesha,strokingherheadandsayinghowmuchtheyhadmissedher.DavidshookBonnetandNolan'shandsfirmly,expressinghisgratitude.Neesha'seyessparkledwithhappiness.Athome,Neeshasoonregainedherenergy.SheplayedwithHarleyinthebackyardeveryday,andthefamilydecidedtoorganizeasmallpartytothankBonnetandNolan.Thisrescuestorybecameasourceofwarmthandinspirationforeveryoneinvolved.【參考答案】BonnetliftedNeeshaontohisbackforthelongpathdownthemountain.Intheslipperyandicyconditions,theystumbledandfellseveraltimes,yetBonnetneverthoughtofgivingup.Instead,hecameupwithacleverideaandwrappedNeeshatightlyinascarftomakesureshewouldn’tslipoff.Oncetheyfinallyreachedthelevelground,NolanandBonnetwastednotimeintakingthepoordogstraighttothenearestanimalrescuestation.Despitebeingextremelyweak,asidefromafewminorcutsandscrapes,Neeshawasinrelativelygoodcon
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